HE VISITED AN ANCIENT SHIP EVERY WEEK UNTIL ONE DAY SHE REACTIVATED HIM WITH A SHOCKING MESSAGE! HFY

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  • Опубліковано 13 січ 2025

КОМЕНТАРІ • 21

  • @Myneckofthewoods7
    @Myneckofthewoods7 3 години тому +2

    Awesome story. No repetitive statements. Good plot. It's worthy of a sequel. 😊

  • @frankscovill7539
    @frankscovill7539 3 години тому +2

    Outstanding! this story is worthy of a series of follow on works, and would be greatly appreciated.

  • @damonhill4909
    @damonhill4909 3 години тому +2

    Good story! Please write a sequel. 😊

  • @drcovell
    @drcovell 19 годин тому +4

    GR8 Space Adventure! Just right amount of snark!
    One thing to remember-there is no “Shockwave” in vacuum-a blast of debris, but no atmosphere to propagate a shockwave!

  • @roberthodge2771
    @roberthodge2771 21 годину тому +6

    Fine story; We need a sequel.

  • @murphymmc
    @murphymmc 6 годин тому +1

    Pretty good story, too many inconsistencies, leaps in events, but better than most.

  • @stephenhess406
    @stephenhess406 23 години тому +5

    Good story, thanks

  • @uuufffttaa
    @uuufffttaa 21 годину тому +3

    ONE OF THE BEST I HAVE LISTENED TO. THANK YOU.

  • @lynneclark5313
    @lynneclark5313 16 годин тому +4

    Didn't Archos say there was 72 hr before the fleet got there? That was a real quick 72 hr.

  • @danwetherington5096
    @danwetherington5096 17 годин тому +2

    Good.

  • @aaronschultz2126
    @aaronschultz2126 23 години тому +3

    It is a good story.. the details needed to be explained a little better especially when jumping back to the command deck and suddenly ended up in space. That's a pretty big gap in the story.

  • @stuartodell1709
    @stuartodell1709 21 годину тому +3

    I thought the main character had already fully explored the ship? Oh! And why did he have to study the display showing a map for the ship, if he had a wrist display? Also! Just which pronunciation for the AI is correct (Arkos/Archos)?

  • @davidcliatt1314
    @davidcliatt1314 21 годину тому +1

    Good ,but i think i just heard this story a couple days ago. But information says only 4 hours ago it was posted.

    • @FictionalReimagined
      @FictionalReimagined  11 годин тому

      I guarantee you that this story is unique and there is no story of it before this was posted... I'm already trying to create new things and not copy others...

  • @Ackattack100
    @Ackattack100 12 годин тому

    The narrator's voice is uninspiring.