GR8 Space Adventure! Just right amount of snark! One thing to remember-there is no “Shockwave” in vacuum-a blast of debris, but no atmosphere to propagate a shockwave!
It is a good story.. the details needed to be explained a little better especially when jumping back to the command deck and suddenly ended up in space. That's a pretty big gap in the story.
I thought the main character had already fully explored the ship? Oh! And why did he have to study the display showing a map for the ship, if he had a wrist display? Also! Just which pronunciation for the AI is correct (Arkos/Archos)?
I guarantee you that this story is unique and there is no story of it before this was posted... I'm already trying to create new things and not copy others...
Awesome story. No repetitive statements. Good plot. It's worthy of a sequel. 😊
Outstanding! this story is worthy of a series of follow on works, and would be greatly appreciated.
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Good story! Please write a sequel. 😊
GR8 Space Adventure! Just right amount of snark!
One thing to remember-there is no “Shockwave” in vacuum-a blast of debris, but no atmosphere to propagate a shockwave!
Fine story; We need a sequel.
Pretty good story, too many inconsistencies, leaps in events, but better than most.
Good story, thanks
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ONE OF THE BEST I HAVE LISTENED TO. THANK YOU.
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Didn't Archos say there was 72 hr before the fleet got there? That was a real quick 72 hr.
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Good.
It is a good story.. the details needed to be explained a little better especially when jumping back to the command deck and suddenly ended up in space. That's a pretty big gap in the story.
I thought the main character had already fully explored the ship? Oh! And why did he have to study the display showing a map for the ship, if he had a wrist display? Also! Just which pronunciation for the AI is correct (Arkos/Archos)?
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Good ,but i think i just heard this story a couple days ago. But information says only 4 hours ago it was posted.
I guarantee you that this story is unique and there is no story of it before this was posted... I'm already trying to create new things and not copy others...
The narrator's voice is uninspiring.
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