I think the edits to the text make them much more legible when quickly scanning. If I could suggest one more thing I would say to cut down on the descriptive language. "Use fake smoke to reposition to screens safely" could be simplified to "fake smoke to cross" or "fake smoke to go screens". It will help the viewer not split their attention, as well as widen the audience beyond native English viewers. I know it's a balancing act of delivering as much pertinent information to the viewer as possible, but if a moment can ever speak for itself with gameplay then let it, or use text before or after the moment to give context. At 2:18 the text walks us through what's happening on screen with each swing, but what if instead there was a single text box saying, "Time to isolate fights :)" before the fights then a red X or a green checkmark depending on the fight's success. The descriptive text worked very well for the Sova/Reyna 2v1 due to the slow pace of the clip and how cerebral the fight was. Overall this was a major improvement to the first run and a great video series. Sorry if any of my critiques come off as non-constructive, but you seem like the type of editor that's always looking for 2% better so I wanted to give my thoughts.
Bro finally someone I can watch who consistently plays astra.. I've been playing so much astra lately bc I think her kit is so under rated and way more impactful then it's credited for but I've been stuck between a rock and a hard place cause I'm only Plat and not much content I can watch for astra to improve cause not many are main her hope to learn a lot here
Thank you for this video. I recently started getting into Astra and though my aim isn't that good, I enjoy watching your breakdowns on decision-making. I also notice that you seem to have a level of humility that rare for Valorant. Thank you for keeping the toxicity out of the community.
I'll be honest Flow, I have a peanut brain. I love the setup vids but if you post things like this, my gorilla brain will binge watch this alongside other ~10 min Val content creator videos until 1am. The vid with Ethos' reaction to your plays was what got me to sub, would love more of this sort of thing and I think it'll get you more traffic! Love the stuff and hope to see more!
the commentary, the subtitles, the gameplay, the logicality...
you're AMAZING
:) Thanks for the kind words! Glad you enjoyed :D
I think the edits to the text make them much more legible when quickly scanning. If I could suggest one more thing I would say to cut down on the descriptive language.
"Use fake smoke to reposition to screens safely" could be simplified to "fake smoke to cross" or "fake smoke to go screens". It will help the viewer not split their attention, as well as widen the audience beyond native English viewers.
I know it's a balancing act of delivering as much pertinent information to the viewer as possible, but if a moment can ever speak for itself with gameplay then let it, or use text before or after the moment to give context. At 2:18 the text walks us through what's happening on screen with each swing, but what if instead there was a single text box saying, "Time to isolate fights :)" before the fights then a red X or a green checkmark depending on the fight's success.
The descriptive text worked very well for the Sova/Reyna 2v1 due to the slow pace of the clip and how cerebral the fight was.
Overall this was a major improvement to the first run and a great video series. Sorry if any of my critiques come off as non-constructive, but you seem like the type of editor that's always looking for 2% better so I wanted to give my thoughts.
I agree with this but it’s still a Very good video flow
Logic + Astra = Flowwwwww......
That flick on Reyna at 5:37 ooooooffffffff
Bro finally someone I can watch who consistently plays astra.. I've been playing so much astra lately bc I think her kit is so under rated and way more impactful then it's credited for but I've been stuck between a rock and a hard place cause I'm only Plat and not much content I can watch for astra to improve cause not many are main her hope to learn a lot here
Istg you're so underrated! Love everything about this video. Keep it up xx
Remember to like the video so these bangers get out to more people!
THISSSS
pls more videos like this, we can learn so much from this
more is on the way! :D
Damn boy, youre clean with it! Daaam
All about reposition
I was just thinking about learning astra and then this video showed up in my recommended. Great content!
just pure brain diff
always a fan of these vids with commentary thanks Flow!!
Thank you for this video. I recently started getting into Astra and though my aim isn't that good, I enjoy watching your breakdowns on decision-making. I also notice that you seem to have a level of humility that rare for Valorant. Thank you for keeping the toxicity out of the community.
need more of these waow
I gotchu
The ace steal 0:10
so informative, thanks for the great video
Thanks for watching :DDD
I love your game sense. I often get your next move. maybe its astra mains instict. Keep on doing this kind of content. Love from Ph 💙
I'll be honest Flow, I have a peanut brain. I love the setup vids but if you post things like this, my gorilla brain will binge watch this alongside other ~10 min Val content creator videos until 1am. The vid with Ethos' reaction to your plays was what got me to sub, would love more of this sort of thing and I think it'll get you more traffic! Love the stuff and hope to see more!
love this guy
Holy sht when did you get this good 😮❤
Great video as always. What is your edpi btw?
Not sure what my edpi is but my sens and dpi is .3 and 800dpi :)
Praying that I'll be this smart some days amen 🤲🏼
You got it :D I believe!
5:17 “Permission to to do something stupid”
*”granted”*
Gotta love valo competitive
These are the best comms 😤
100/100 gameplay
There is no way people don't agree
Thats my controller main ❤
YOU DON'T WALK FASTER WITH THE KNIFE OUT ! DO NOT PULL IT OUT UNLESS YOU ARE ALREADY RUNNING AND ENNEMIES HEAR YOU !!
i sub and liked, love you vid
nice and i love the explanation
I pack a bag
best astraa
nice
Noice
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