As usual, writing translyrics for Aqua Timez songs is beyond difficult. Hardest part in this song was definitely the second verse, but I'm really happy about how well it (and the rest of the song) turned out.
I think you do a good job lyrically with rather tough songs. If I could critique, I think the only thing that's holding you back is you're a bit too attached to the original metaphors. It's always nice to get something flowing from the original that sits well, but it can also overcomplicate the lyrics to the point that it's hard for the average viewer not pouring over them to understand the message, if that makes sense. ala... These lonely feelings are welling up inside me. In the night, a candle's light is burning brightly and differs so starkly from the sharply decorated chandelier above the party. This makes sense when reading over it, and the rhyme scheme is great! But there's a lot of words that don't flow very well in here imo, so it could use a bit of cleaning up. Sorry if this is distressing though, cause I don't have any intention of like, bashing your work. I only comment cause your lyrics are much closer to spot on than most others on youtube. The majority don't even try to run rhyming schemes like yours, and instead go the tired format of aa, bb, cc, dd. "In the night, a candle's light" is such a good line, and this lyric job is littered with fantastic transitions like that! Keep it up, you're doing very well.
Don't worry, KilkClax. I'm not offended or distressed. I'll take a well-thought out critique over an anger driven outburst any day. My speed rapping ability allows me to pronounce even some of the more difficult English words at a fairly quick pace and I'll admit that I did abuse this ability as I wrote the lyrics for this song. Velonica was a more blatant example, but Velonica was just a monster overall (lol). However, I couldn't bring myself to skip over or combine any syllables in Alones. I've especially learned not to mess with the syllable count when asking someone else to sing my lyrics because, unless I make a guide, the singer is forced to guess at the flow and he/she usually guesses wrong. As for my adherence to the original metaphors, the debate over whether one should simplify the metaphors and deviate from the translation or stay faithful to it regardless of the complicated lyrics/culturally specific metaphors is a bloody and violent war that will continue for all of eternity. LOL. I've simply chosen to stick to the translations as closely as possible when I write my lyrics. I do this partially because I enjoy the challenge (like getting to use the words "sharply" and "starkly") and because I want to preserve as much of the author's original message as possible. There were times where I took liberties with the translations or changed the meaning in some way or another (Great Escape, for example) and though it's not like I lose sleep over doing so, I just feel like it runs in on contrast to the act of translating the lyrics. However, that's just my view on the matter right now since I go back and forth on which approach to take every time I start working on a new song. ANYWAY, I could ramble on and on about this for hours, so before I do, I'll say thank you for watching and for your critique, KlikClak. I enjoyed reading what you had to say.
No problem! I enjoyed hearing your work, and I think it's a positive trend for lyric writing on youtube for english fancovers that you continue to make content. :3 I'll be sure to put my own money where my mouth is and start posting my own content to attempt to do much the same.
This is a good cover, I've been looking for this song in english for months and with this one there is finally a good quality one to listen to/download. Keep up the good work, you just gained a sub today.
What happens when Kon becomes Ichigo body and weilding Zangetsu. Wont it be the same coz I think would be useful if Kon was able to become a soul reaper when he enter Ichigo's body its like borrowing his power a bit helping him when Ichigo is hurt. I dont think Kon can use Zangetsu to shoot a Getsuga Tenshou but atleast he could borrow Zangetsu's power to help Ichigo would Zangetsu allow that?
To this day, it still cracks me up that the opening animation did Aqua Timez dirty like that in the first few seconds. XD I may have tried to mimic his tone a bit in this cover for that reason. lol
This was so great work, since. Perfect timing and lyrics. BTW, I love this song since first listened to. Just curiuos that the song sound so nice. So I searched for the english version and thanks for this.
This brings back memories~ As much as I want to talk a lot, I've got all these responsibilities in real life that keep me feeling like I should focus on that instead of clicking through all my discord servers and skype groups trying to socialize...
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One of my favorite Bleach openings. Thanks for the full english cover XD
You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
As usual, writing translyrics for Aqua Timez songs is beyond difficult. Hardest part in this song was definitely the second verse, but I'm really happy about how well it (and the rest of the song) turned out.
mfw this got more views in a day than Mozaik Role got in a month
I think you do a good job lyrically with rather tough songs. If I could critique, I think the only thing that's holding you back is you're a bit too attached to the original metaphors. It's always nice to get something flowing from the original that sits well, but it can also overcomplicate the lyrics to the point that it's hard for the average viewer not pouring over them to understand the message, if that makes sense.
ala...
These lonely feelings are welling up inside me.
In the night, a candle's light is burning brightly and differs so starkly from the sharply decorated chandelier above the party.
This makes sense when reading over it, and the rhyme scheme is great! But there's a lot of words that don't flow very well in here imo, so it could use a bit of cleaning up.
Sorry if this is distressing though, cause I don't have any intention of like, bashing your work. I only comment cause your lyrics are much closer to spot on than most others on youtube. The majority don't even try to run rhyming schemes like yours, and instead go the tired format of aa, bb, cc, dd. "In the night, a candle's light" is such a good line, and this lyric job is littered with fantastic transitions like that! Keep it up, you're doing very well.
Don't worry, KilkClax. I'm not offended or distressed. I'll take a well-thought out critique over an anger driven outburst any day.
My speed rapping ability allows me to pronounce even some of the more difficult English words at a fairly quick pace and I'll admit that I did abuse this ability as I wrote the lyrics for this song. Velonica was a more blatant example, but Velonica was just a monster overall (lol). However, I couldn't bring myself to skip over or combine any syllables in Alones. I've especially learned not to mess with the syllable count when asking someone else to sing my lyrics because, unless I make a guide, the singer is forced to guess at the flow and he/she usually guesses wrong.
As for my adherence to the original metaphors, the debate over whether one should simplify the metaphors and deviate from the translation or stay faithful to it regardless of the complicated lyrics/culturally specific metaphors is a bloody and violent war that will continue for all of eternity. LOL. I've simply chosen to stick to the translations as closely as possible when I write my lyrics. I do this partially because I enjoy the challenge (like getting to use the words "sharply" and "starkly") and because I want to preserve as much of the author's original message as possible.
There were times where I took liberties with the translations or changed the meaning in some way or another (Great Escape, for example) and though it's not like I lose sleep over doing so, I just feel like it runs in on contrast to the act of translating the lyrics. However, that's just my view on the matter right now since I go back and forth on which approach to take every time I start working on a new song.
ANYWAY, I could ramble on and on about this for hours, so before I do, I'll say thank you for watching and for your critique, KlikClak. I enjoyed reading what you had to say.
No problem! I enjoyed hearing your work, and I think it's a positive trend for lyric writing on youtube for english fancovers that you continue to make content. :3 I'll be sure to put my own money where my mouth is and start posting my own content to attempt to do much the same.
YES FINALLY! Fantastic cover
that moment when you find one of your favorite youtubers watching other youtuber's vidoes
Would you cover it aswell? Would love it and even buy it on iTunes.
Make one
Please make one too
You have no idea how long I've waited for someone to do the full version of this song!
smile for yourself 🥲
Kon cher up man your shows coming back
I love how you pronounciate "Blue", it's got a pop to it that really leads well into the next verse.
So good
Such a lovely voice dude!! I'm so glad you sang this! ❤️
I haven’t watched bleach yet.
But this.opening makes me.cry.
Personally, one of the best english translations of this song
Name is Black Rage Infinity, sounds adorable.
One of my favorite songs, done by a awesome person (and we cant lie, that guitar part in that song was the best part)
i´ve lost count on how many times i´ve looked for a full cover finally found one
Finally! A full English cover!!!!!!
This is a good cover, I've been looking for this song in english for months and with this one there is finally a good quality one to listen to/download. Keep up the good work, you just gained a sub today.
great work, love it
'm crying. Thank you.
Yesssss this is life right now! Great job!
This is my favorite version I have found.
What happens when Kon becomes Ichigo body and weilding Zangetsu. Wont it be the same coz I think would be useful if Kon was able to become a soul reaper when he enter Ichigo's body its like borrowing his power a bit helping him when Ichigo is hurt. I dont think Kon can use Zangetsu to shoot a Getsuga Tenshou but atleast he could borrow Zangetsu's power to help Ichigo would Zangetsu allow that?
AWESOMENESS TO THE FULLEST!!! ALWAYS LOVED THIS SONG!!! THANK YOU FOR THE TRANSLATION!!!!
>the only pleasant april fools
feelsgoodman
AIN'T NOBODY GOT TIME FO DAT! WE SINGIN' BLEACH SONGS, SON!
Yessss~ This is amazing, Rage!! 💕
WHO ELSE CANT WAIT FOR OCTOBER?!?!?!??!?!!?
Here i am again with broken wings 😢
Simply amazing!
Amazing my guy keep going strong
Damn you're good. You got my sub!
My black wings grows heavy but my love will not be gone being alone is not fun but friends will always love me for who i am
Sounds like kon singing it which makes me happy
To this day, it still cracks me up that the opening animation did Aqua Timez dirty like that in the first few seconds. XD
I may have tried to mimic his tone a bit in this cover for that reason. lol
This was so great work, since. Perfect timing and lyrics. BTW, I love this song since first listened to. Just curiuos that the song sound so nice. So I searched for the english version and thanks for this.
GJ Bro :'D !! i love it
The feelings in my heart
It is 4:20 long
Nice
Ï'm crying. Thank you.
this is good stuff keep it up buddy ;Dd
It's a good translation and a good matching to rhyme; I like it!
Song is the perfect
love your songs! 😊 your voice is amazing 😍👍✌👌💖❤
This brings back memories~
As much as I want to talk a lot, I've got all these responsibilities in real life that keep me feeling like I should focus on that instead of clicking through all my discord servers and skype groups trying to socialize...
I like it
nice dude
awesome
Avuuuu Bravo Vivat Coolest.
and now kon can sing English version
nice
Me and my brother said Why does it look like rin rin witnessed a murder.😂
It's funny I actually related to this
I want to wear the same outfit, clothes as Sephiroth from Final Fantasy 7
Are you going to do Asterisk or D-Technolife?
I'll do D-Tecnolife next week.
Why does Kon comes to my mind whenever I hear this song lol
He's the one singing in the beginning
Cause he's the one who sang it
Is there a way I can find this in Spotify
can you do a gintama op?
Black Rage InfinityThank you. love love
👌👌👌
😂 perfect
Do ending 30 please!!
Can you make all of Gintama's and Bleach openings and endings,well please?
Is there anyway to download this version of the song? Can you send me the mp3 file?
Justin Raphael There are download links in the description.
This is awesome keep up the good work!!! :)
if you can, could you do Zetsu Zetsu by swimmy the last Naruto ending?
kidimae cancer l2 anime
Do opening 9
Already on it. :)
Whats really good is that kon isn't singing
That thumbnail really turns me off from this song
Your name turns off every one though Omar such a 9 11 name
@@shahirkhan69 I'm black not arabic that's just my name in arabic though I am muslim
HELP ME DUBBED IS SO BAD
Terrible Singing, Sub Par Lyrics. Points For Doing An Extended Version Tho. 3/5
great work, I love it