GKS (KGSP) | Personal Statement Feedback Day 1
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- Опубліковано 1 жов 2024
- GKS (KGSP) | Personal Statement Feedback Day 1
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Thank you so much for reviewing my personal statement!!! Your personal statement video was very helpful with writing it and I glad you enjoyed reading it!!
You must be Ada! I surely did! Best of luck to you! 🤞
Good evening please may I ask how you got his feedback. Like did you just send the personal statement to him. 😁😁 I am also Nigerian. Sorry for the disturbance and thank you in advance
@@faridamusabadaru2818 He asked us to email our personal statements sometime ago so I sent in mine. Subscribe and look out to see if he asks for submissions again!! Good luck with your application!!
@@shebanigans thank you so much
Hello! I am really amazed by your statement of purpose, I sincerely loved it! It made me realized that mine is garbage hahaha. But thank you for motivating me to improve it. :)
I absolutely love this channel. I had been trying to look up a proper guide for KGSP for years until I found this channel sometime last year. The instructions that he provides are very on point and thorough. 고생 많으셨습니다. Cannot wait for the video!
Glad you found me! Stay tuned! :)
Sir...is this scolorship available for mbbs pls tell sir pls
Hello sir actually I wanted to ask I have scored 76% in my 12th this year and I wish to apply for the scholarship I have all my documents complete are there any chances that I will be called for the interview
How did you compute your grade?
Hello sir, I wanna send my sop for feedback too, where can I send it
I'm applying for this year's GKS undergraduate program. Hope to see you Mr. Daniel 🙏🏻
Hi! Can you please tell me what is the last date to apply?
What's the last date to apply??
It depends on your Embassy and the University you are applying for. For now, application is still close. Expected to open this mid September
Hii can you please tell me do i have to be 18+ to apply because I'm currently 17 and going to be 18 in december so can i apply for this undergraduate scholarship
@@nikita3091 you have to have your 13th grade degree or masters degree,, the age doesnt matter
Hello sir! Our school didn't have a ranking system so, is it compulsory to fill tge ranking column?
Finally! Welcome back from the vacation, I hope you spent some good time and had the required rest 😊 waiting eagerly for this video, going to help me a lot 💕
I did! See you soon! 👍
Hi. I'm from Turkmenistan(similar to north korea). During pandemi my parents gave bribery to university in Turkmenistan. I realized at first day that there is no good education. If I just leave officials will take me to 2 years military service. It hurts me and I got depressed. I'm trying to escape and want to study in a good university. Should I write about that in my personal statement?
Thankyou so much sir....I'm so grateful to you for your efforts for making these videos for us....these are very helpful for me and so informative too...I will give my 100% to get the scholarship 😊
Of course, you will! 🤞
Dp you know the dates to apply???
Please sir, I want but apply for GKS-U degrees 2024, can I use a transcript that doesn't contain my SSS 3 academic grade?
thanks😊,your video helped a lot.and, can't I work there after completing my studies.
Thankyou for your reviews my personal statement and i am really try hard to get this scholarship.. currently iam in 12 th but i keep searching for this scholarship and your channel really helpful for me .... again thankyou very much 😊
B.A hons(Geography) course available in this scholarship ???
Hlo sir, I am going to apply for GKS undergraduate degree this year, please tell me sir, are they provide scholarship for business management major??
Daniel Sir,
Can I notarize one document and then make copies of it? Rather than notarizing all copies and original documents
I know you answered that in your previous videos but I can't find it
Sir, Does SNU need Ielts? If I don't give this exam.. Will I be selected as a GKS scholar?
I want to apply to a korean grad school to my masters in clinical psychology but I have no idea what to do or what I need. I'm currently doing my undergraduate (bachelors) degree
Sir,is it a must to have done the topik exam before applying for the scholarship.actually I got to know about this scholarship recently but the topik exam is in September so I have no time to prepare so can't I apply for this scholarship
I wanted to do kgsp in Korea I can come Korea after completing my school directly or I have to do master, PhD, bachelor then only I can come Korea
Hello sir
I had one question
I study korean from Sejong institute
So is it possible to ask my korean language teacher to write recommendation letter for me ?
Sir I do not know if this is a silly question but how I talk about my family background?🥺
How many paragraphs should my essay be?? Should it be 5 or 3
can a person apply for medicine for the undergraduate scholarship program
Thank you a lot, sir!
It was so good to see that you read my personal statement and give feedback. It was really sweet and I learned a lot from you. Absolutely love this channel^^
No problem! Wish you the best! :)
Hey nina! where do yoy send your personal statment to the sir ?
How could you send him your personal statement? Is he accepting people to send him their personal statements? and how can I do it?
Sir a matric pass student ( 10th class passed ) student can apply for scholarship ?
I'm going to apply for the year 2023 and I claim it already that I will passed and get the KGSP SCHOLARSHIP!
Who are the majors except for Commerce for Master's Ticli sir please help
sir should i start my personal statement by my and my family brief intro ? i found it on gogle
Sir
What if there are only one r two universities to choose from embassy track that too only from type A
In addition to it there is no university suitable for my major in university track
Please can I still send my personal statement for reviewing?
Please how can i contact you sir so that i can send my personal statement to you sir. thanks.
If anyone doesn't have any achievements what can he/she do then
Sir, If i apply for GKS scholarship then can i get the courses in english for masters program?
Thank you for information.
And try to study in Korean
finally, trust me many people miss you sir, they're always waiting for your video,
you realy help us alot. I always find something to repair in my essay after watch your video sir, Thank You very much
Good to hear that! Now I'm here for you!
Sir how can I send my personal statement?
Hello Sir, how can I send my personal statement to you to review and are there any charges for the service, thankyou in advance
Please email me at mrcollegeconcierge@gmail.com for the service details 🙏🏻
Does anyone know if GKS 2022 for Undergraduated degree will open this year?
It has just begun!
Pity I don't have 25 anymore 😔
Sir I sent an email can you please reply to my email 🌟
Where can I send my personal statement??
Thank you so much!!! but I'd like to ask is it bad if the personal statement is only one page??
One for GKS-G and two for GKS-U!
sir my result is coming at end of September so can i submit my application along with documents at end of September
plz sir reply me
Is embessy track give associate degree
Sir can you do 2022 undergraduate scholarship details videos
I already did.
Alot of love from Pakistan
Can I apply for architecture through gks scholarship??
Hi! I'd like to help answer! As long as it is included in the available departments later, you can surely apply!
Sir is there also need to apply online in university or just send documents to university !
You should ask the university you are applying to!
I have improved my essays greatly just by watching your videos sir! I would like to ask if IELTS indicator is accepted by the NIIED?
Hi, Can I write a Personal Statement on a single page? or it must be within two pages?
Both quality and quantity are important.
can we start PS with phares
Sir please can you tell me when kgsp undergraduate 2022 application will release???
Sometime this month! I will make a notice when it opens!
@@MrCollegeConcierge oh thank you so much sir❣️
Hi,
I'm applying for undergraduate,
and I'm just a little confused about the "Highschool grade transcript", like what grades should this document include?
10th grade, 11th, 12th, or should I also give 9th grade?
and as for the CGPA, could you please make a video to explain it?
I have separate transcripts for each grade, and they all have a score of 100%. I don't understand if I still have to convert that?
Do you know the date to apply for this year????
@@nasavideosbynasa the registration hasn't open yet
Please can you review my personal statement too
Yes.
Sir I have completed my bachelor degree in psychology(india) can I apply again for bachelor degree in Korean literature in Korea for GKS scholarship?
No, you can't.
@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you sir💜
Hi sir! Thank you for the video! I would like to ask regarding the application form, is it acceptable to write our CGPA in a 100 point scale?
Yes, absolutely.
@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank goodness, thank you sir!
Thanks so much for your videos. Could you tell me what's your e-mail please? I want to send my PS too. Thank you
Check out my community tab!
@@MrCollegeConcierge thank you
how many words are proper? my PS is 1900 words
There is only a page limit!
Hello sir. Thank you for making this video it was very helpful. I'm going to apply this year and I've got a question will please help me solve it?
It is important to provide our transcript. I have got my state board certificate but I haven't got a transcript because our college or our board doesn't provide one. So what should I do?
Hello sir,
I've sent in my personal statement, SOP and Future plan. Please evaluate mine too, it would be really helpful
Sir, can you help me by giving feedback for my personal statement?
I hope you had a wonderful vacation. I really wish if you can analyze my personal statement.
I have a scenario for example i took graduate program gks scholarship for my masters and got it now after my masters i wanna do phd so can i re apply gks for phd program or not, if yes then what are the conditions??
Yes, you can. Please refer to the GKS guidelines.
@@MrCollegeConcierge thank you so much for answering my query also am i eligible for scholarships if I've done my bachelors from distance/ open learning and not a regular college ...
Sir, if i wanna mention my major in personal statement, do i need to capitalise the first letter? For example Computer Engineering? Economics or economics?
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Thanks a lot Sir . Sir I have a question , Can I type my personal statement on computer? And then I can get the printout out of it and send it?
sir i want to ask if it there is any exption can happen about the GPA if we are having anew system of learning and most of the GPA.S are low
Hi sir, I am going to apply gks-u on 2022 but I will give my 12th exam on march 2022 and I will get my results on June or July 2022. The form shows "expect graduation by march 1" am I eligible to apply? Please reply sir....I don't understand this part 😭
currently you are not eligible to apply, you can apply for gks-u program in september next year (gks-u 2023).
@@eviagrasista6107 you mean I can't apply on 2022?
@@itsmeserina oh no, you can apply in next year, on 2022 for gks-u 2023
I thought I can't apply next year. Thank you so much 🥺💗
Sir, we GKS-U also wanted to share our personal statement with so so you can guide us. So, please allow us to send you our's.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Btw, today's vedio helped me a lot thankyou so much Sir.
Sir maybe I will get selected because of your suggestions thanku sir 🙇🙇
Good day. I have a question regarding the acceptance rate. A lot of former applicants said that most of the students who are accepted are those in privileged institutions, and those who have experience abroad. How is that sir?
Thank you for your videos, they are very helpful! Could you please answer my question: I want to apply to KGS for the undergraduate program, but I will quit school in May 2022. So does it mean I should apply in Sep 2022 and arrive in Korea in February 2023? Is there a way to apply in the time when graduate students are applying?
Sir I plan to apply for next year in Feb, can I send it to you for your valuable feedback.
You can use our feedback services!
@@MrCollegeConcierge thank you Sir. I would do that
Sir why are there many spaces in paragraph is it right idea to write personal statement !
Just one space between paragraphs!
@@MrCollegeConcierge Thanks so much sir
Thank you so much, this is exactly what I was waiting for!!! Hope you had fun on your vacation, sir! Thank you for your hard work again :)
If any one is from india please help ...can you tell what is the address where we are suppose to submit our documents please
Sir in india we has not get our marksheet and graduation certificate yet. What should we do sir? please help
Hallo Sir, thank you so much for all the video. It’s really helpful. I am from Indonesia and now I’m in the middle of preparing my GKS 2022 Graduate documents. On the GKS Application form, I must state my Previously Achieved Degrees. Actually when I am in my Bachelor Program, I went to two university (one as an exchange student). So, I got two degree (Indonesian & English degree). My English degree is B.Ba (Bachelor of Business Administration), meanwhile my Indonesian degree is S.A.B (Sarjana Administrasi Bisnis = which also means Bachelor of Business Administration). So if I translate my Indonesian degree to English, it will be the same. So if it is translated it becomes Abigail Swanee B.Ba, B.Ba or should I keep the degree in Indonesian (Abigail Swanee S.A.B, B.Ba)? Thank you so much 🙏🏻
I am applying for undergraduate this year and thankyou for this helpful video . 😊😊😊
sir i want to know that is it possible for a student with 3-4years of gap to get into top universities in Korea???
This video was so helpful..I was confused about the personal statement part. But I've a question. The form for 2022 undergraduate hasn't yet been released right?
Hi, I'd like to help answer! It hasn't been released yet!
You’re literally saving my life with these videos
If I'll send you my SOP ..will you check my sop sir??
Please send us a service request!
@@MrCollegeConcierge service request means ..your mail.....but i don't know your email address sir ..please let me know how can I find your mail address
@@Divya9 Please check out the community post.
@@MrCollegeConcierge ok Thankyou
Sir can you please tell me how to and where to submit the form?
Thank you for such a helpful video!! Sir, I have a guestion. Will it be a plus if I write my ps and sop in korean? I have topik6, but dont have any english proficiency certificate, so I also thought about writing my sop in english to show my english skills. Would it be better for me to write sop in english or korean?
Hello sir. Hope you are doing well and in good health. As I am planning to apply for the GKS program graduate next year so may I know like if some of the courses are being taught in Korean language so during our exams do we need to give our papers in Korean or English language.
Thank you for guiding us to pursue our dreams. Your videos give us hope and also pushes us to work harder...
When will the gks applications for Undergrad start for 2022? Like the exact date?
I will make a notice when it starts.
Thank you so much for working so hard for us 💓😍. Can you guide me that which universities should we select for embassy track . Plzzz I am asking this because I don't have any idea about Korean universities???? Plzzz reply I will wait for you suggestion.........
You should search and figure it out!
I am writing my personal statement and I decided to watch your videos first before writing more.. I'm glad I did. After watching, I feel like my personal statement was too personal though and it was like I am telling my life story/history. Should I change how I wrote it?/Should I change my style of writing?
Your personal statement should be concise and in detail. Keep watching my videos and make an awesome one!
Hi Sir, I’m from Brazil and I’ll be applying for a scholarship in Korea next year. I want to do my master’s in international relations studies and I’m aware that is very important to talk about how can I contribute to my country and Korea after graduating but I don’t know exactly how could I say it or what would be a good answer (my future plan is working at ONU/UNICEF/ INTERNATIONAL SECURITY AND DEFENSE AREA) can you please help me with some tips? Thanks for your videos, they’re extremely helpful 😊
Please watch carefully my videos and you will find out!
Guys let's help everyone in this process by commenting. This will be great for everyone
Thanku so much sir..I’ll make sure not to miss a single step during applying for scholarship. Your videos helps me alot.
Sir should we only follow an essay format for our personal statement or can we include our activities and achievements in points
Ex. Activities:
•Cultural club member: Performed this/that task as a member.
Or
I was a member of cultural club in my school. I performed several tasks in the club like this/that.
The latter looks better.
Welcome back sir💞Ok All the points noted📝 Thank You for this I didn’t send any personal statement so I didn’t had any idea about it like how to write now I know what must be included and how to write the personal statement ♥️💯
when kgsp 2022 open?
Not yet. I will make a notice when it starts.
Sir, can we apply for signing and DANCING 🙏🙏
현기증난단 말이에요 영상 빨리올려주세요
Thank you so much! but when we will be able to apply for GKS ( undergraduate program)?
I will make a notice when it starts.