How to write a great personal statement ft. GKS/KGSP 2024

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  • Опубліковано 30 чер 2024
  • How to write a great personal statement ft. GKS/KGSP
    #kgsp #gks #globalkoreascholarship #studyinkorea #mrcollegeconcierge
    I'm going to tell you 5 dos for your incredible personal statements! So please watch this video until the end, and don't miss anything!
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    - Spelling mistakes + typos
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    *Our experienced native speakers of English and Korean will provide you with this service.
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    - Sentence clarity
    - Relevance of context
    - Mr. College Concierge’s insight & advice
    3. Proofreading (1. Grammar Check ➕ 2. Feedback)
    4. Document Screening*
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    - Our goal is to make your GKS (KGSP) application documents organized neatly, ready for submission after the service, and ultimately desired by the GKS (KGSP) selection committee.
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    Time Stamps:
    0:00 Intro
    1:54 1. Do follow the instructions
    2:56 2. Do take your time
    3:59 3. Do start with a killer sentence
    5:18 4. Do be honest
    6:52 5. Do make your own stories
    8:23 Closing
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 353

  • @winter9849
    @winter9849 3 роки тому +176

    DO NOT and I mean DO NOT STOP MAKING THESE VIDEOS! I've seen so many people talk about the "obvious stuff" which you can easily find in the guidelines. I found your channel 2 days ago and I don't know why I felt like you actually have experience on a higher level (like maybe you've been in the judging committee or something). Thank you so much!

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +69

      Thanks for the compliment! I've taught students how to write a good resume, cover letter, personal statement, and statement of purpose on/off campus. And I have interviewed a variety of people and have also been interviewed in life! Therefore, I know what they should improve in speaking and writing.
      I will do my best to keep making informative videos! To do so, I need your support!

    • @opeyemi7761
      @opeyemi7761 3 роки тому +9

      @@MrCollegeConcierge thanks for the video, highly anticipating the next one

    • @richardamadin6346
      @richardamadin6346 Рік тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you very much sir

    • @shaaaru
      @shaaaru 3 місяці тому

      Can this also apply for undergrad program?

  • @MrCollegeConcierge
    @MrCollegeConcierge  2 роки тому +17

    0:00 Intro
    1:54 1. Do follow the instructions
    2:56 2. Do take your time
    3:59 3. Do start with a killer sentence
    5:18 4. Do be honest
    6:52 5. Do make your own stories
    8:23 Closing

  • @nodymeow
    @nodymeow 3 роки тому +42

    Thank you so much for the tips Mr. Daniel! I got in 😭😭😭😭
    Your tips work like a charms! I will upload a video of my experience after I arrive in korea to ensure its all real 😭😭😭 Thank you so much for providing this content.

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +10

      Congratulations! So happy to hear that you got accepted! 😊👏👍

    • @anil7973
      @anil7973 3 роки тому

      Can you provide your any kind of contact I have some concerns if you don't mind.

    • @roqueeguillos2048
      @roqueeguillos2048 2 роки тому

      Hi. Can you provide some tips please. :(( Thank youuu!

  • @vidushibaghel9573
    @vidushibaghel9573 2 роки тому

    Thank you so much for these videos. I was kind off lost what to do and what no to do before . But thanks to you I am much more confident about writing my SOP . I am really grateful.

  • @kalyanimenon460
    @kalyanimenon460 3 роки тому +14

    binge watching all of ur videos !and i am already feeling like i have got to know loads more in these few minutes than the days i spent trying to find information related to kgsp on the internet !!! thank u so much ! i would have been a mess if u wouldnt have been there to provide this info !!!

  • @tostadora2983
    @tostadora2983 2 роки тому

    thank you so much Mr. daniel, hopefully, I'll make it!

  • @shiprachaudhary7805
    @shiprachaudhary7805 2 роки тому

    Okay so this was the best like LEGIT BEST content on personal statement. I have seen people making videos that you should be honest blah blah but nobody tells how actually it should be ...it was really the most helpful video and all the videos as i have literally watched all of em.. thankyou so much.👍👍👍

  • @jeremyutama2092
    @jeremyutama2092 Рік тому +2

    This information is useful not only for GKS, but also for other scholarship programs. Bravo🔥

  • @maeganfruto2874
    @maeganfruto2874 2 роки тому

    This is really helpful as I am preparing for GKS-G 2022 applications. Thank yoy so much, Sir😊

  • @alycewangari
    @alycewangari 2 роки тому

    Thank you. This is very
    informative and to the point. It will go a long way. Thanks again.

  • @sana._.3171
    @sana._.3171 2 роки тому +6

    Respected Sir, it feels like I have found a great Mentor! I was so worried about few things and you've solved all of my problems! I am so glad I found your channel and I am watching all of your videos, and it is soooo good to listen such great tips and you've explained everything so well, if everyone gonna start following your instructions it'd be heaven! In a world full of hardships, thanks for bringing ease in our lives! I am so thankful to you for your kindness and sincerity!❤️🙏

  • @withoutanamegirl97
    @withoutanamegirl97 2 роки тому

    Thank u sir ,I am really grateful to have you u guide all step very purely and I liked it u just amazing first time j see a person who just explain everything in detail and very well Thank u again hope I would select in gks with your guidance by the way u are doing great job

  • @alayamashal7563
    @alayamashal7563 2 роки тому

    Thank you so much for this useful information.

  • @AriesLugo
    @AriesLugo 2 роки тому +1

    I'm so glad I found your channel 😭 This year will be my second and last chance to apply for the GKS Scholarship because of my age, and I wanted to do it perfectly to finally have a good ending. With your videos I'm way more confident to write all the essays and forms needed in the process. Thank you to bring us all this tips that will make us capable to show the best of ourselves. Greetings from Venezuela 🖤

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  2 роки тому

      Glad to hear that! Best of luck to you from South Korea! 🇰🇷

  • @peachb6154
    @peachb6154 3 роки тому +3

    Thank you for the information! this was a big help :D

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      Good to hear that! Then it's time for you to work on your great personal statement! ;)

  • @asyc8262
    @asyc8262 3 роки тому +1

    Your videos are not too long that's great. I get all the important stuff that I want at very short time. Thank you so much sir.

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      Glad you liked it! Stay tuned for more informative videos!

  • @anujzoremit286
    @anujzoremit286 3 роки тому +3

    Real helpful content ! Thanks for your inputs

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      Thanks for watching! And stay tuned for more informative videos!

  • @sharmashatakshi-vv4wx
    @sharmashatakshi-vv4wx 2 місяці тому

    THANK YOU SIR....Your content is not too long n so good!....Please Please don't stop making these videos...these are so so helpful for us students...these contents mean a lot to us!🙏👏

  • @elziqraannisa375
    @elziqraannisa375 2 роки тому

    its help me so much, thank you sir

  • @khantmyoaung8885
    @khantmyoaung8885 2 роки тому

    I am glad that it's two page space for 2022

  • @hansinipallegama8033
    @hansinipallegama8033 3 роки тому +2

    Please please continue to make these videos. I sadly came across your videos after I applied for the 2021 GKS program and didn't get selected from the first round itself. I was super sad. I only realised my fault after watching your videos. Preparing myself to apply next year. So this is SUPER HELPFUL ❤️

  • @yelinatan
    @yelinatan 3 роки тому +8

    You should open class for writing personal statement & statement purpose. We need it.... I really need it .

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +7

      I'd love to...But my hands are full working full time and making videos for you at the moment. I will end up making online classes as well as publishing e-books about how to write a good personal statement & statement of purpose and how to prepare for interviews, though!

  •  2 роки тому

    I've just found your channel and I'm really enjoying your content, these tips are very important. I'm taking TOPIK this weekend to make my application stronger for next year's KGSP. I'm Brazilian but, even though I can write very well in English, I can write very well in Korean as well, so I was wondering if writing my Personal Statement in Korean, but my Study Plan in English, would be a good idea.

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  2 роки тому

      Welcome aboard! And if you are fluent in both languages, of course!

  • @drazqa
    @drazqa Рік тому

    I just wrote my PS & this video popped up in my feed. Im glad I spared sometime to watch it because now I know what changes I need to make!!

  • @khelyachumi4240
    @khelyachumi4240 2 роки тому

    Thankyou I really needed this tips 👍

  • @kabear
    @kabear 3 роки тому +5

    Thank you so much for making these!!!! They are very helpful!
    For a future video, or answer here? would you talk about what counts as "awards" for that section of the application? Are you expected to include certificates of awards, and if so, where should they go in the order of documents?
    (Also, do you think it is better to have letters of recommendation from people with higher positions/titles, or letters of recommendation that are more enthusiastic and detailed about the student? For example, is it better to have an excellent letter from a regular professor, or an average/not-detailed letter from someone who is the head of a department?)

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      Good to hear that! Stay tuned for more informative videos!
      1. You should refer to no. 25 on the 2021 GKS-G Application Checklist for your questions.
      2. From my perspective, it is better to receive letters of recommendation from those who know you well. The professor title is high enough to me!

  • @nurulnuyu8201
    @nurulnuyu8201 2 роки тому +1

    Hi Mr. Daniel 👋🏻
    Thank you for creating all of the videos for the essays. It helped me a lot while writing for my GKS-G application this year and I got accepted! 🥰
    Hopefully you will continue to make videos as it will be super helpful to future applicants! Have a great day ahead ✨

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  2 роки тому +2

      Congratulations! So proud of you! Can we do an interview about GKS? Please send me a DM!

    • @arwa5950
      @arwa5950 2 роки тому

      Hi 👋
      Congratulations 🎊 , please can you tell me which course had you accepted to ? Graduate or undergraduate? And also to what university . Thanks

  • @Reyals_inamdahs
    @Reyals_inamdahs 2 роки тому

    You are doing an amazing Job. Your information is knowledgeable and precise

  • @eleanoredits4911
    @eleanoredits4911 3 роки тому +6

    One dislike is from the applicant who didn't get in 😂

  • @urmi1484
    @urmi1484 2 роки тому +2

    It has been a week and I have still written only half of the personal statement (as he said it would take), I need to work harder. But thanks Mr Daniel, your videos are AMAZING!

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  2 роки тому +1

      Thank you! And I'm rooting for you!

    • @urmi1484
      @urmi1484 2 роки тому

      @@MrCollegeConcierge that's so sweet of you, thank you 😊

  • @stephenayivor8591
    @stephenayivor8591 3 роки тому +1

    Very insightful. Thank u so much

  • @marygracebito7752
    @marygracebito7752 3 роки тому

    This is so helpful sir. Thank You sooo much ❣️

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      My pleasure! I'm going to upload a new video about the GKS interviews this Thursday, so don't miss it! 😊

  • @hazi4359
    @hazi4359 3 роки тому +7

    Thank you for your efforts that you're making for us to study in korea. I hope you will start a series for undergraduate as well. 💞💞

  • @Decker97
    @Decker97 3 роки тому

    it was great ... thanks a lot ❤️

  • @sobiarehman297
    @sobiarehman297 2 роки тому

    Sir..thank you so much for making it very clear..your videos are helping us how to be a good candidate for GKSP..

  • @ikramwibisanamaulana
    @ikramwibisanamaulana 3 роки тому +4

    Great Video, Mr. Daniel! I've got a question if its okay. From all of the examples, it seems like it's better to emphasize and connect our "stories" to our personal experiences about Korea. But what if the applicants have little to no real experiences related to Korea itself? what should we do to make the personal statement interesting?
    (Ps* What i meant was in a case where the applicants are very interested in Korea and obviously to pursue a degree there, but all he/she know about korea is just textbook / digital knowledges. Never been there and rarely interacted with Korean either.)

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      Show the admissions committee what made you be interested in South Korea and decide to study in the country. I'm sure you have something you can connect (what you have/know/pursue) to Korea!

    • @ikramwibisanamaulana
      @ikramwibisanamaulana 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge Alright, I'll take note on that! Thanks for the tips Mr. Daniel

  • @VaishnaviCShivankar
    @VaishnaviCShivankar 2 роки тому

    Hello sir,
    I am vaishnavi.
    From INDIA.
    Your UA-cam videos are literally so informative & very helpful for me.
    I am going to apply for GKS program in the year 2023. For FINANCE MBA.
    THANK YOU! For sharing very informative videos!.

  • @soumilychakraborty5045
    @soumilychakraborty5045 2 роки тому

    Thank you so much... ❤

  • @francesca654
    @francesca654 3 роки тому +6

    Hello! Thank you for this video it was really helpful. I have a question about the content we need to write about (ex: motivations with which you apply, family, significant experience...): does it matter in what order you discuss those topics and do they need to be divided in paragraphs based on the topic discussed? I am just wondering how strict they are in that part in general. Thank you!

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +3

      Glad to hear that! I would answer them in the order they listed. And it looks better to write in a paragraph for each topic!

  • @mahidahiral9065
    @mahidahiral9065 3 роки тому +2

    This video is very important for me!!! Tqsm for making this videos and sir i hv 1 request to uhh!!..can uh plz make video for best or good engineering colleges for master's degree!!!.. I hope you will make it!!!... Lots of love from INDIA 🇮🇳 💜

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      Pleased to hear that! I will definitely take your request into consideration. I will always be with you for your Study-in-Korea Dreams!

  • @sarahb7786
    @sarahb7786 3 роки тому +3

    Wish you could give us some tips regarding the interview! Great videos btw

  • @shafaqbhatti2778
    @shafaqbhatti2778 2 роки тому

    I think I am in luck today that I found your channel. Thankyou so much for such great ,detailed guidance .I was so much worried about the process but now I'm getting courage to apply for GKS'22 Fall .I hope to ace this great chance to study in Korea .
    Stay blessed Sir Daniel 🙏

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  2 роки тому +1

      My pleasure! I'm always right here for you! 😊

    • @shafaqbhatti2778
      @shafaqbhatti2778 2 роки тому

      @@MrCollegeConcierge Sir I have one more question.Do I need to apply separately in universities (Send them documents by post) ? OR GKS will itself send my documents to respective universities for which I will be eligible?

  • @sliceoflife3517
    @sliceoflife3517 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you so so much sir. it's very important guideline for us... i will follow this content....

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      No problem! Don't forget to keep editing your personal statement and show it to people who you trust and get some feedback!

    • @sliceoflife3517
      @sliceoflife3517 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you sir...yes sir... i will try my best...

  • @gel5181
    @gel5181 2 роки тому

    Hi Daniel, i would want to ask something very technical but I might just be overthinking my essay.
    For the Personal Statement, since there are guide questions, do you think it would be best to answer them in order or would it be alright to write it in a way where I create a smooth flow but answering all the guide questions provided. The first guide question is about the motivation but my essay started off as introducing myself then slowly building it to how i learned about the program and my motivations, etc.
    Thanks in advance for the feedback! 😊

  • @ayazouaghi4656
    @ayazouaghi4656 2 роки тому

    Hello Mr.Daniel, first of all I would like to thank you for uploading these videos, it's very helpful.
    I had a question concerning in which language should I write my personal statement and statement of purpose. I am French, and I attended an international university in France to do my Bachelor which is the reason why I have a good commend of English. I have also been learning Korean by myself for the past 2 years, but I haven't passed the TOPIK exam yet. I feel more comfortable with expressing myself in English but I was wondering if it could be more advantageous for me to write the statements in Korean in order to prove where my Korean language skills stand as I do not have any certificate to show it or in contrary writing them in Korean may represent a disadvantage if it's not the language I am the most comfortable with no matter how nicely it could be done.
    I would like to thank you in advance for your answer.
    Have a nice day.

  • @riffatbatool
    @riffatbatool 3 роки тому +2

    very informative video Daniel😍😍

  • @hijoeyhere2410
    @hijoeyhere2410 3 роки тому +4

    Ohh my god that the essay just took me 6 months to complete, the study plan took 5 months and other documents are 2-3 months. It’s a log and harsh process but meaningful and lot of fun. I got accepted. Thanks very much your videos

  • @tomso3535
    @tomso3535 2 роки тому +1

    안녕하세요 다니엘님. 이러한 유용한 영상들을 잘 만들어 주셔서 정말 감사합니다. 저는 모든 영상들을 몇 번 즐겨 보고 있습니다.
    저는 지금 이번 GKS-U를 위한 응모를 준비 중입니다. 근데 물어보고 싶은 것이 있습니다. 다니엘님께서는 제 질문을 답해 주시면 좋겠습니다.
    1. 저는 Personal Statement하고 SoP를 한국어로 쓰고 싶은데 어떤 폰트를 사용하면 좋습니까? 가이드라인에서는 영어로 쓰면 Times New Roman라는 폰트를 사용하라고 했는데 한국어로 쓰는 경우에는 아무것도 없습니다.
    2. 한국어로 Personal Statement하고 SoP를 쓰려면 문이체이나 구어체를 사용해야 합니까? 아니면 무엇이든지 사용해도 됩니까?
    좋은 하루 보내세요!

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  2 роки тому +1

      안녕하세요? 반갑습니다.
      1. 바탕체로 쓰시면 됩니다.
      2. 아무래도 문어체가 낫겠죠?
      행운을 빕니다!

    • @tomso3535
      @tomso3535 2 роки тому

      @@MrCollegeConcierge 제 질문에 답변해주셔서 정말 감사합니다 선생님!

  • @madrishmadrish5074
    @madrishmadrish5074 3 роки тому +2

    Thank you 🙏🏼Should we add information about Korea on the personal statement? There is no more prompt ‘Reasons to study in Korea’ . I am confused.

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      My pleasure! I think you can use Motivations with Which You Apply for This Program instead!

  • @namjoon_angel5372
    @namjoon_angel5372 2 роки тому

    You are so handsome sir. Thank you so much for this video

  • @aramidetechs
    @aramidetechs 11 місяців тому

    Thank you so much for all you do sir, how do i send my personal statement and study plan to you for correction sir??

  • @helayounsi7136
    @helayounsi7136 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you sir for your super amazing video. It is very helpful. I am writing my personal statement, I answered all the questions mentioned but not in the order provided. Does this way my paragraph can be noticed as not following the instructions?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      My pleasure! As long as you answered everything in the personal statement, you're totally fine! Job well done!

  • @maneehahassan9521
    @maneehahassan9521 2 роки тому +1

    What kind of awards are impactful ?

  • @shamsahayunan7070
    @shamsahayunan7070 3 роки тому

    Hello, Mr. Daniel! I am actually start studying right now as a grade 12 and end our school year next year in the month of march. Obviously, my grade transcript is not yet done as well as my graduation certificate. What should i do? Please answer. Thankyou!

  • @c.k_girls4008
    @c.k_girls4008 2 роки тому

    Can u make a video on how to make our application attractive for concil officers so that they choose our application

  • @ceekay7_
    @ceekay7_ 2 роки тому

    Hello. Is it okay to contact professors from the university I wish to apply to directly? And/or mention their names on the personal statement stating that I’d like to learn more on the topics that they teach and how it has peaked my interest?

  • @emelydorothea8979
    @emelydorothea8979 2 роки тому

    Mr. Daniel, you said that we shouldn't use jargon in essays. If i use jargon about the organization in Korea (HIRA, NCC, etc) is it okay? thank you in advance

  • @kaoutardergaoui9204
    @kaoutardergaoui9204 2 роки тому

    Sir , I have a question please .Should I follow the instructions in order ? Or I can start with my family and education background for example? Thank you so much for your efforts Sir ❤️

  • @fredericsookahet2517
    @fredericsookahet2517 2 роки тому +2

    Hi. I have a question. In the case where I want to choose two different majors, how would you advice to write the personal statement?

  • @minhanhnguyenngoc9622
    @minhanhnguyenngoc9622 3 роки тому +1

    Your videos are very helpful, Sir. Could I ask you some questions:
    1. In the personal statement, Can I write different order with one they provide in the instructions, can't I? However, my ps still contains enough information they want.
    2. In section: Family and Education background. I want to detail every member in my family or just tell about family generally?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      1. No.
      2. Writing it in general should be fine unless you want to emphasize some facts about your family.

  • @sophyjoseph56
    @sophyjoseph56 Рік тому

    Hey Mr Daniel
    Thanks for all the informations you provided here it was very useful
    Now I'm preparing with my gks applications and i've got my doubts
    Can I add “if u give an admsn I'll promote the Korean cultures and scholarships,mainly many people are not willing to take this opportunity bcoz they are misunderstanding north Korea and south Korea bcoz of their lack of knowledge and I'll make sure to make them understand the necessary"

  • @simran_suryavanshi
    @simran_suryavanshi 2 роки тому

    Sir please make videos for AMA+ SCHOLARSHIP

  • @afrin9243
    @afrin9243 3 роки тому

    Increaseing audio quality will be very helpfull for us

  • @bs22691
    @bs22691 3 роки тому +1

    Most students are introduced to South Korea through Kpop and Kdrama . And later on they explore the educational possibilities there and will decide on pursuing their higher studies there and the original reason for their interest is given a backseat. So can they include about their introduction to Korea in their personal statement, afterall it's their honest opinion. May I know your thoughts regarding this?

  • @prachikabirpanthi
    @prachikabirpanthi 3 роки тому +2

    Sir, when will you upload the next video?🤔😊

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      I'm planning to upload it by next Friday! So stay tuned!

  • @opeyemi7761
    @opeyemi7761 3 роки тому +2

    Please for the study plan and goals of study, is it advised to highlight the points or put it in an essay format?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      Depending on the situation, you can use both. Just to make sure to be specific!

    • @opeyemi7761
      @opeyemi7761 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge thank you

  • @nishthalath2879
    @nishthalath2879 2 роки тому

    Sir i have taken classes from online platform like coursera and udemy...so does there paid certificates have value? Can it give me some points?

  • @roselynstanley1520
    @roselynstanley1520 3 роки тому

    Sir Daniel ..your personal statement should content one page

  • @economistusama6697
    @economistusama6697 2 роки тому

    In personal statement we have to follow the order of questions or we can do it randomly? For example if I write my introduction first then movtiation . Is it okay?

  • @bubbleclosetfilm1610
    @bubbleclosetfilm1610 3 роки тому +1

    Sir, Is it a good idea to add my degree thesis in the award section ?

  • @korea6883
    @korea6883 3 роки тому +1

    So informative. No one tells about these 😍

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      Thank you! I'm sure this video definitely helps you prepare for the 2022 GKS Application for Undergraduate Program! ;)

    • @korea6883
      @korea6883 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge Yes it is.. I am so glad because I found you. 🙇‍♀️
      Thank you so much for your effort to give these informations

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      My pleasure! But how did you find me? Haha

    • @korea6883
      @korea6883 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge last night I was searching in youtube about KGSP and just YT recommend you to me

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      @@korea6883 Awesome! What a small world! And as I mentioned in the video, it takes so much time to perfect your personal statement. So you should start working on it now to get selected for the 2022 GKS Program for Undergraduates!

  • @aarziajuned4465
    @aarziajuned4465 2 роки тому

    Sir ,in India the final results are usually given in march or april .
    So , do we should apply for next year?

  • @divyasree.s5064
    @divyasree.s5064 2 роки тому

    Which is best to take pg program in Korean university sir MBA or international business

  • @arunkumartalawar8738
    @arunkumartalawar8738 2 роки тому

    I am so confused that how they read a tons of applications of U-graduates forms and select candidates.So,can you make a video on that I think it will help us to know how to write and one more step to be a GKS scholar.

  • @LisnaFathima-gs1us
    @LisnaFathima-gs1us Рік тому

    Hi sir, first of all thank you so mcuh for the information. But I have a doubt, can I apply for gks, if am pursuing mbbs in Korea?? Please help sir!

  • @maryamary7484
    @maryamary7484 Рік тому

    Hello i will be glad if you've seen my comment answer my question...for embssay we should select 3 universities but 95% of departments and majors from the "Natural sciences" division, are only offered by one university...also we can't select diferrent departments of this division for each university. it makes our chance less and we would have weak study plan and self statment...
    Please tell us what should we do if we want to study Dental hygiene but there is just one university offering it...what should we do about 2other universities?

  • @aditimeshram7174
    @aditimeshram7174 3 роки тому

    Hii!! Sir , i want some help from u that i am 12th now and i wanna study there.. so can u pls tell me that how should i apply and what should i do and some further process , i saw vdos but they are lil confusing and i am whole blank now!!and i saw ur vdos this are very good. ❤
    I hope u will reply and u will help me

  • @NaturalBeauty-yq2sg
    @NaturalBeauty-yq2sg 2 роки тому

    Respectfully Sir,
    I have a question.!!!
    In Embassy track, we can apply three different universities, in three different programmes.In that case,how can i write personal statement and statement of purpose for three different programmes in one form.
    Please reply Sir
    Comment from Bangladesh 🇧🇩.

  • @lhakiithegreatt2848
    @lhakiithegreatt2848 Рік тому

    Hello sir , mother's document are also necessary for gks (undergraduate) ?
    My mother left us behind without a word and I don't have any document of her so

  • @shwetanamdeo6281
    @shwetanamdeo6281 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you sir Daniel

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      My pleasure! Stay tuned for more informative videos!

    • @shwetanamdeo6281
      @shwetanamdeo6281 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge sir,
      Can i apply for the other major which is not mentioned in available field list? Or is it mandatory to apply only for available fields?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      @@shwetanamdeo6281 You can only apply for the available fields of study.

    • @shwetanamdeo6281
      @shwetanamdeo6281 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge ok thank you sir Daniel

    • @shwetanamdeo6281
      @shwetanamdeo6281 3 роки тому +1

      Sir Daniel..
      Pls suggest, how to choose universities for embassy track, so that chances of selection of my application will increase? what's the difference between type A and type B University

  • @opeyemi7761
    @opeyemi7761 3 роки тому +1

    Please is it advised to mention that one wants to stay in South Korea for some years before going back to one's country?

  • @dinamhd6508
    @dinamhd6508 3 роки тому +2

    Thank u a lot ~^^
    Can I ask u abt the top korean universities in Architecture !?
    I got band 6.5 in the IELTS exam , didi I have the opportunity to be accepted in SNU or Yonsei !

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      I can't name it here, but I will make videos about Korean universities later!
      And it's not just about your English proficiency to be accepted to those prestigious universities. You should show why you are qualified to study there!

    • @dinamhd6508
      @dinamhd6508 3 роки тому

      Thank you again ^^

  • @batyrmedia-cn5lg
    @batyrmedia-cn5lg 11 місяців тому

    Hi. I'm from Turkmenistan(similar to north korea). During pandemi my parents gave bribery to university in Turkmenistan. I realized at first day that there is no good education. If I just leave officials will take me to 2 years military service. It hurts me and I got depressed. I'm trying to escape and want to study in a good university. Should I write about that in my personal statement?

  • @nazrie942
    @nazrie942 2 роки тому +2

    Thank you sir to help us. In 2022 GKS personal statement it is said that we should write two pages. Is it the maximum requirement or minimum?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  2 роки тому +1

      Maximum!

    • @nazrie942
      @nazrie942 2 роки тому

      Thanks a lot sir!

    • @nazrie942
      @nazrie942 2 роки тому

      And I have another question. I'm sorry to ask you again but in my 3rd year results there is no second semester result because of the pandemic. So shall I add my results in my 1st, 2nd , 4th and only first semester of 3rd year the divide it to 7 in order to calculate my GPA?

  • @Purplegarima99
    @Purplegarima99 3 роки тому +2

    I saw your Video just now!
    Sir will you review my SOP and PS..it'll be really helpful!? I have already written it!

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +2

      Thanks for watching! I'm sorry. I don't review personally on UA-cam. But I'm thinking to make online classes since I've got so many related requests.

    • @Purplegarima99
      @Purplegarima99 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge sir.. Actually I will send my documents soon within February..I don't have much time left.. that's Why I asked!

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      @@Purplegarima99 Uh oh...Then as I mentioned in the video, I recommend you show it to someone you trust such as your close friends, professors, and academic advisors at your university!

  • @random-zc1zm
    @random-zc1zm 3 роки тому

    Please how can i get the link to apply for the scholarship

  • @deepanshi3937
    @deepanshi3937 3 роки тому +2

    Very informative video.
    Sir, I'm doing my bachelor's in Food Technology (medium of studying- English).
    I want to do Master's in Food Science in South Korea.
    So, how can I know about the course medium.... like the lectures will be in English or Korean?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      Thanks for the compliment! Please click the link: www.studyinkorea.go.kr/en/sub/gks/selectBoardList.do?bbsId=BBSMSTR_000000000461
      And on GKS Notice No. 222, you can find the course lists universities offer in English or Korean! And I recommend you contact admissions officers at the universities where you would like to apply for more information. Good luck!

    • @deepanshi3937
      @deepanshi3937 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge thank you so much sir.
      One more thing I want to ask..
      If I m submitting the notarized copy of documents then do I need to submit the original documents along with it??
      I'm confused because in 2021 GKS - G Guildlines on pg no. 15 point no. 4 it says that submit the original documents along with notarized copy...

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      @@deepanshi3937 If your documents are written in either English or Korean, you can only submit notarized copies!

    • @deepanshi3937
      @deepanshi3937 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge Ohh that's really helpful. Thank you so much

  • @ojasvi9007
    @ojasvi9007 2 роки тому

    Can we fill different majors ???

  • @kdrama_person
    @kdrama_person 2 роки тому

    Sir, can I do my master's in agricultural biotechnology after completing biotechnology

  • @Kleptomaniac96
    @Kleptomaniac96 3 роки тому +1

    Do we have to write the response to the personal statement and the statement of purpose on FORM 2 and FORM 3 page within the application? Or should we write this in a separate document and attach it to our application?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      You are required use the forms!

    • @Kleptomaniac96
      @Kleptomaniac96 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you for the timely response. Does this mean that the entirety of my response must fit within the space they provided?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      Of course, read the GKS guidelines carefully and follow the directions.

  • @Unrestricted_idol_Kangrouu
    @Unrestricted_idol_Kangrouu 2 роки тому

    Can my high CGPA help me with being accepted even though my personal statement and statement of purpose aren’t strong enough? .. I believe my skills of expressing myself and what i want is pretty low😭🙈 but I’m very efficient at studying

  • @Snow_12
    @Snow_12 3 роки тому

    does it applicable for AMA+ scholarship too?? because i prepare for this scholarship & i want to study in k arts,,can you suggest something for this scholarship too 🙏🙏

  • @roselynduan3905
    @roselynduan3905 2 роки тому

    Hello sir can ask a question if you submit your original copy and you fail to be accept do they give back your paper or not?

  • @abi4673
    @abi4673 3 роки тому +1

    Hello sir i am from india in tamilnadu i am now studying bsc for 3 years and my next plan m sc physice and next i will to study phd in korea this myown plan.sir you can replay with mee pls.I have another question to you indian garduation student there p hd to study in korea its easy or hard became my one of the dreams is i came to study to korea

  • @Smile-dp5hh
    @Smile-dp5hh 3 роки тому

    Hlo Sir, I have a question, actually I am doing UG in food technology and will apply for graduates next year, but I don't know whether I am eligible to apply via Embassy track or I can only apply via University track. I will be very grateful if you can help me with this. Thank you.

  • @saranshrj500
    @saranshrj500 3 роки тому +1

    Hello sir can you tell me how do i manage recommendation letter.
    When i will take 2 letters from 2 diff prof then have to do three copies of that and then put each of them in diff envolope to make it four along with original and then take sign on back of all of them?

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      One original and three photocopied ones (a total of four) in one sealed envelope!

    • @saranshrj500
      @saranshrj500 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge ohk thankyou sir

  • @saranshrj500
    @saranshrj500 3 роки тому +1

    선생님 어떻게 지냈어요 그리고 식사를 했습니까?
    1. Sir when i could expect the sop video?
    2. I have done diploma first in (electronics and comm engg) and because of diploma i directly got admission into 2nd year in bachelor degree by giving exam and got rank in that..
    So what should i fill in first two semester gpa section?
    3. From (electronics and communication) to ~ degree in(electrical and electronics) ~ now applying master in (electronics engg)
    So are they gonna ques why you are changing from a combination of electrical and electronics to only electronics .Like generally is it a big deal changing field there in S.korea although it is not that big change in terms of major.

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +1

      안녕하세요, 잘 지냈습니다. 잘 지내지요? 저는 식사를 했어요. 물어봐줘서 고맙습니다.
      1. I'm planning to upload it by next Friday!
      2. You should write the first two GPAS in the 1st year section.
      3. As long as you explain well in either your personal statement or statement of purpose, I don't think there is any issue about it.

  • @hijoeyhere2410
    @hijoeyhere2410 3 роки тому

    Can I ask about about some good universities in Korea offering Marketing major??

  • @andrekurniadinata1456
    @andrekurniadinata1456 3 роки тому

    Sir, what about the first paragraph doesn't answer the first line? Because I need to build them first. Does my personal statement become lower?

  • @saranshrj500
    @saranshrj500 3 роки тому +2

    Sir🧡you have'nt disscused pattern
    Plz look Am going to follow like this
    1.Start (as per your your tip something eye opener )
    2. Body( here all the points given in the guideline will be covered)
    3.Conclusion (?)

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому +2

      Heading: Start with catchy sentences. Don't just list quantitative elements.
      Body: Answer all given ideas for the personal statement. Start with a main point and explain after.
      Closing: Show the admissions committee why you should be selected and what is beneficial for them (e.g., students, faculty members, admin workers, the university you applied for, the NIIED, or even South Korea) if you are selected as a GKS scholar!

    • @saranshrj500
      @saranshrj500 3 роки тому +1

      @@MrCollegeConcierge i dont think thankyou is enough to say for the suggestion u have given to me ..🧡

    • @MrCollegeConcierge
      @MrCollegeConcierge  3 роки тому

      @@saranshrj500I need your continuous support in return! Haha