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  • @clairpods8496
    @clairpods8496 5 років тому +156

    i’m 13 right now, but when i grow up, i want to make a graphic novel. I’ve already started drawing and have been writing more 🤠🤠

    • @filmfelineadmin
      @filmfelineadmin 4 роки тому +9

      can I see your art? contact me via youtube, pref. with a parent :)

    • @L337Koala
      @L337Koala 4 роки тому +11

      Keep it up if you enjoy it! Never let other people stop you with negativity. Try to use criticism as a constructive outlet to learn about how to make things more appealing. But if its just for you do your thing and do it big.

    • @rises889
      @rises889 4 роки тому +2

      @@filmfelineadmin yummy

    • @massonman9099
      @massonman9099 4 роки тому +3

      Good luck. Keep at it, and you cannot fail.

    • @K0IBEE
      @K0IBEE 4 роки тому +10

      I'm about to be 12 in like 2 weeks, and i'm doing a writing project. I'm actually starting my first graphic novel now!! There is no way in the history of time that it will ever be published, but right now I'm a one-man-army. I wish us both good luck lol.
      edit: LMAO LOSER I WAS A SMALL CHILD HAHAHAHA OKAY SO I DID OKAY NOW IM MAKING A WHOLE FREAKING WEBTOON IT ISNT PUBLISHED YET AND LIKE DGFHGJHHKJLJK

  • @Al_Bx
    @Al_Bx 6 років тому +90

    Next time you make a video about the books you've been reading you should include a graphic novel recommendation. I am now dead curious about the authors you like and the novels you've read and enjoyed. Nice of you to share your work.

  • @jaydreamz6601
    @jaydreamz6601 5 років тому +14

    I know it's an older one but thanks so much for making this video. I currently have a graphic novel project in progress (about to start the scripting phase) and it was really nice to see that I'm not the only one who does present-tense chapter descriptions before getting into the real writing. I always get weird looks for having what I consider just a very detailed outline, and I've never heard of it being called a "treatment" before. I always just called it my outline or "pre-writing". Anyway, thanks for sharing your methods and advice! I hope to have my own graphic novel ready to go in the near future.

  • @floordenil
    @floordenil 5 років тому +18

    I’m SO curious about how you write dialogues, how you keep them interesting and fresh. Maybe that’s an idea for a new video? I would rewatch it several times for sure :)!

  • @anthonyt219
    @anthonyt219 Рік тому

    Cool old school keyboard 😎
    I love it when i see writers use one of those. It shows character.
    It tells me you enjoy typing enough to get those.

  • @Fedbo
    @Fedbo 6 років тому +8

    Super interesting! I'd love to see more about your writing process and also more specifically to other aspects of the making of this graphic novel!

  • @ludouglas1
    @ludouglas1 4 роки тому +1

    Oh man, this is fantastic. you have covered so many aspects of the process, the background and so much more. Loved it so much

  • @aleiscreating
    @aleiscreating 6 років тому +3

    Estuve esperando esta clase de vídeos Ed! Muchas gracias por compartirnos esta parte de ti. Ojala continúes con esta "sección" porque se que puedo y podemos aprender un montón de cosas ;3

  • @node547
    @node547 6 років тому +42

    You don’t believe in inspiration... That’s worth an episode on itself :). Many other things you said as well by the way. Very interesting.

    • @Verdoux007
      @Verdoux007 6 років тому +8

      Professional writers rarely wait for inspiration because they have bills to pay.

    • @PHX-576
      @PHX-576 4 роки тому +1

      I look at everything as inspiration.

    • @spongebob03
      @spongebob03 4 роки тому

      BboyHaqThePhoenix Right! I have a dead in job that I realized is rich with inspiration.

    • @gabbar51ngh
      @gabbar51ngh 2 роки тому

      @@Verdoux007 some of the best work was written that way.
      Jack Reacher novels came into existence cause he needed money & Robert e Howard kept on writing & publishing so much. He had no time for inspiration.

  • @ODarlio
    @ODarlio 6 років тому

    Love hearing about your process Ed! Such a great vid :D

  • @monastorm
    @monastorm 5 років тому

    Great video. I was trying to figure out how to jump from novel format to graphic novel format. You have been extremely helpful. Thanks

  • @margaritab9587
    @margaritab9587 6 років тому

    Great video! Thanks for sharing your process!

  • @mitzirebel5750
    @mitzirebel5750 4 роки тому

    This was very helpful, I'm less confused how I start and structure the whole process thanks!

  • @dimiutube
    @dimiutube 6 років тому +1

    Thanks for all the explanations. It's very helpfull. I love graphic novels and I'm really courious to read it.

  • @saramcmican
    @saramcmican 6 років тому

    Brilliant! Thank you for sharing. I'm super interested in your writing.

  • @johnmiller5171
    @johnmiller5171 4 роки тому

    This is exactly the direction I needed man, thank you

  • @junefouryou
    @junefouryou 6 років тому

    I absolutely love the art style!

  • @ehideldecervantes
    @ehideldecervantes 4 роки тому

    This was really helpful. I've been trying to write this graphic novel for years. The story is burned in my mind, I have just been having trouble organizing it on paper. Thank you for giving me the hints i needed to move forward.

  • @sophynixon
    @sophynixon 6 років тому

    Awesome, thanks Ed! 🙌

  • @Diego_Borda
    @Diego_Borda 6 років тому

    Mil y mil gracias Eduardo!!...esperé algo así por mucho tiempo---trataré de organizarme de igual manera en mis proyectos!!! Eres lo mejor Edo y un gran ejemplo a seguir, de nuevo Mil gracias!!!! :DDD

  • @niidiimii
    @niidiimii 6 років тому

    Fantastic video! I'm actually working on a writing project now so this was helpful and relatable. :D

  • @BushidoGriot
    @BushidoGriot 5 років тому

    This was hella insightful. I appreciate it man.

  • @thesetruths1404
    @thesetruths1404 3 роки тому

    Excellent. Thank you!

  • @garymckay2929
    @garymckay2929 5 років тому

    This is your first video I’ve watched and this was so helpful that I’m subbing now.

  • @JoninPrime
    @JoninPrime 3 роки тому

    That keyboard is dope. So nostalgic.

  • @DM-sv6jb
    @DM-sv6jb 2 роки тому

    Very helpful, thank you.

  • @seabud6408
    @seabud6408 4 роки тому

    Thanks that was really clear and helpful.

  • @frangallo
    @frangallo 6 років тому +1

    Me acabas de motivar para ponerme a escribir. Estoy intentando escribir una novela, pero me falta disciplina. Gracias por el impulso!

  • @Ewancamal
    @Ewancamal 4 роки тому

    Thank you, you and Fran are great and this was helpful :)

  • @AleX_StarO
    @AleX_StarO 2 роки тому

    Love your old school typing keyboard 😃

  • @miki58308
    @miki58308 6 років тому

    Very useful and interesting video!! Thank you)

  • @TheRocio003
    @TheRocio003 6 років тому

    Gran video Ed. No tenía ni idea de como era el proceso creativo de realizar una novela. Para mi es un mundo totalmente desconocido pero interesante. Sigue mostrandonos tus procesos, Ed y tal vez nos muestres xq no crees en la inspiración 👌 Saludos desde antofa 🤘

  • @missdokidoki
    @missdokidoki 6 років тому

    Son buenísimos tus videos y este me encantó. Es muy bueno conocer el proceso de trabajo. Y si estoy de acuerdo con un comentario anterior, sería lindo que hicieras un video recomendando libros y alguna novela gráfica. Gracias por compartir

  • @CapachitosdeColores
    @CapachitosdeColores 4 роки тому

    This was so useful, thank u very much.

  • @FranciscoLagos
    @FranciscoLagos 6 років тому

    Hola Edo! Quizás en un próximo vídeo puedes contar el proceso de los documentales que has realizado. Desde el proceso de idea, escritura y la realización.
    Son súper bacanes tus vídeos!!! Saludos y abrazos :D

  • @toeto2690
    @toeto2690 6 років тому

    Me encantó saber como trabajas y organizas tu tiempo. En mis proyectos, siempre me cuesta distribuir bien cuanto rato le dedicaré a cada cosa. Igual me pasa que me distraigo fácil, así que encontré muy útil que enseñaras tu forma de trabajo, para así obtener ideas. Mucho éxito en este nuevo proyecto :)

  • @DeathChronx
    @DeathChronx 4 роки тому

    Thanks so much! This was very enlightening and eye opening especially the treatment. How do you usually approach the process of making dialogue more interesting?

  • @mtalkuwari1
    @mtalkuwari1 6 років тому +2

    Can you make a video about “how do you shoot fast without a light meter” i saw it when u shoot with your M3 .. i can’t really trust the sunny16 rule , i wish u can give as advise .. i use my phone but its not fast
    Thank you for the amazing videos you made

  • @babyyodel3738
    @babyyodel3738 3 роки тому

    This helps a lot ty

  • @betsyconejins1438
    @betsyconejins1438 6 років тому

    2 : 44 am tenía tantas ganas de ver cómo es una organización para una novela, cuento, lo que sea. Si bien, una tesis tiene toda una estructura y aún así te puedes perder en el tiempo-espacio de algo ya establecido, dicho y repetido por otros tantos; sin embargo, en mi opinión una novela o cuento es mucho más complicado, anticipado sólo mentalmente. Siento que me explota el cerebro y siempre renuncio a obligarme a pensar. Aprecio las imágenes de este video, tus aportaciones y el tiempo para enseñarnos tu trabajo, lo atesoro y valoro mucho.
    Gracias

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez 6 років тому

      Gracias a ti por pasar y apreciar! :D

  • @saorirf7222
    @saorirf7222 6 років тому

    i'm definitely not a writer, however i found this process' explanation really interesting! Hope to see your work soon and... still waiting for the Friendship book to be available here in UK! (either in Spanish or in English) :D

  • @babs3971
    @babs3971 6 років тому

    Hola ed. Love this vedio.. Ma new to your channel. M not a writer but you inspire me to write a story...Hehe!

  • @insomnia242
    @insomnia242 6 років тому

    Un vídeo genial. Deberías hacer más sobre escritura, por ejemplo uno hablando sobre cómo te enfrentas a los diálogos o sobre tu carrera como escritor. Me parecen muy interesantes.

  • @argusink562
    @argusink562 5 років тому

    Great video.

  • @jeanesterperez570
    @jeanesterperez570 3 роки тому

    I would lije to make a graphic novelll thanks Ed!

  • @xr7t7
    @xr7t7 5 років тому +7

    If only I could just jump through the screen and kiss you on the cheek! This was very helpful to me and my process. Thank you.

  • @jessicatriana
    @jessicatriana 6 років тому

    You should talk more about writing, it's super interesting!!

  • @AbuGrabIt
    @AbuGrabIt 6 років тому

    Great video. BTW I love the accent.

  • @hahalol1452
    @hahalol1452 4 роки тому

    im going to college for graphic design and illustration next year.. not sure what I want to do after that but I definitely want to try making a graphic novel.

  • @jukerdanz
    @jukerdanz 3 роки тому

    Very interesting, I wish I could get a writer like you to come and talk to some of the classes I teach. I am going to look for Erinyes.

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez 3 роки тому

      Erinyes is now in the process of being drawn and put together. It will take at least a year until it's ready. Where do you teach?

  • @CabblowStudios
    @CabblowStudios 6 років тому +4

    Hi Ed, so I did script writing in university, but they never taught me about index cards. What exactly are they for and how do you use them? I'm creating my first graphic novel and I'm glad to see that you approach graphic novels like a film script. I had no idea where to start, but now I know I can approach it like I would a screenplay.

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez 6 років тому +2

      That’s really strange. Index cards are an industry standard. You write a short description of your scene and that way you can reorganize your scenes and see them in perspective. Do a google search. There are tons of examples. :)

    • @CabblowStudios
      @CabblowStudios 6 років тому

      Thanks Ed! Yeah, Creative Arts institutions in my country can be really dodgy in terms of the quality of the teaching. *Sigh*

  • @gengar2600
    @gengar2600 3 роки тому +1

    Step 1 take a pen
    Step 2 write a graphic novel

  • @ang.giselle2024
    @ang.giselle2024 5 років тому

    I watch Frans channel😁. I didn’t know you were a writer 👍

  • @flipjupiter1
    @flipjupiter1 6 років тому +1

    In your 2 page outline, do you have the end? Whether or not it's the complete and/or final version of the end?
    Thank you.

  • @martinorona
    @martinorona 2 роки тому

    Muy bueno Ed. Es interesante ver cómo funciona el proceso. Hay una idea cinematográfica de cómo se escribe, cómo se pinta, se toca música que poco tiene que ver con la realidad... que es menos "divertida". Saludos!

  • @emilyvlogs4002
    @emilyvlogs4002 4 роки тому +5

    The only thing I do is rip 20 pages from my notebook and start drawing ;-;

  • @valasafantastic1055
    @valasafantastic1055 3 роки тому

    It seems more like you don't believe in 'waiting for' inspiration and instead insist on making/finding your own. Depends on the definition of inspiration I suppose. Interesting methods and tips. I wrote out some notes and think some of the key points here are really VERY useful, thanks.

  • @WWS322
    @WWS322 3 роки тому

    I write hand written letters to a relative. When I rewrite it several times I get the whole story out. I have tried to write about my life because writing fiction is impossible to me, and worked hard at it for long hours. Then I stopped completely. I'm always amazed that there is a story within me when I write letters. Another thing, writing by hand involves my body and it is very cathartic.

  • @spinozatrack
    @spinozatrack 6 років тому +4

    Me encanta que la traducción al español sea tan honesta, sea tan chilena jajsjjajja

  • @tylerlogan289
    @tylerlogan289 5 років тому +1

    Hey man. You are doing what my dream is. I’m 20, I’m an aspiring writer who wants to do everything you do. Any advice you could give me on what direction to go? It would mean so much to me.

  • @Paosland
    @Paosland 6 років тому

    Más vídeos así, por favor. Saludos.

  • @Tania_Doodlezilla_Vincent
    @Tania_Doodlezilla_Vincent 6 років тому +2

    Ed, this video is fantastic! I've scoured the internet for something just like this. Thank you , you've just gained a writing padwan.

  • @Dyp100
    @Dyp100 6 років тому +10

    I've been writing a book. I finished an initial draft which ended up about 80k words. The problem is, when I was writing the book I had no idea where it would go, or even what the themes were. As time went on I started to discover what the book was about through writing it, (a normal problem for me) but as I finished this first rough draft I already had ideas about how to go back and change things, add new scenes, or totally change the context to better suit this refined vision. The last few months I've been taking a break due to entering university, but I still get ideas of what I need to change in the book to emphasis the right ideas. Do you think it's worth it to go back and make a treatment for the next draft, even though I've already written so much of the story?

    • @Dyp100
      @Dyp100 6 років тому

      Also I want to say, I'd love to hear more about your writing!

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez 6 років тому +6

      It's hard to tell, since I have not read it, but books written "on the fly" tend to heavily lack an interesting structure and rely on stuff you think as you go, therefore, the reader can think them too. Maybe leave it like it is and start a new one. Write a short treatment to get a grasp of your main characters, structure and goal. If you like it, develop it. :)

    • @Dyp100
      @Dyp100 6 років тому +1

      Thanks Ed! :D

  • @Rampagex
    @Rampagex 6 років тому

    can u link the website to view ur graphic novel? i want to see it

  • @williamb8091
    @williamb8091 6 років тому +9

    Can you share more about the graphic novel manuscript format?

  • @hey-zel
    @hey-zel 3 роки тому

    Hey I know this was in 2018 but could you make a video on how to write an outline and treatment?

  • @PrizAmezcua
    @PrizAmezcua 5 років тому

    Where can I get a keyboard like yours?

  • @josedehoux1588
    @josedehoux1588 2 роки тому

    What movies and tv shows you have written because now I really want to watch them now

  • @marianaknoo
    @marianaknoo 6 років тому +1

    Hola Ed! Me encantaría comprar las graphic novels que han hecho hasta ahora pero vivo en Texas y no tengo idea en donde comprarlas, sabes donde las puedo conseguir en línea o en alguna otra parte? Thank you! Love your video btw, super interesting!

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez 6 років тому

      "Personas Favoritas" está en buscalibre pero estoy haciendo la traducción al inglés ahora mismo. "Morder el Cielo" se puede encontrar en la página de Facebook con el mismo nombre, escribiéndole un mensaje a la página, el editor siempre responde. :)

  • @williampowell3378
    @williampowell3378 Рік тому +1

    Cool

  • @alyssathompson3767
    @alyssathompson3767 4 роки тому

    wehre can I buy your book? personas favoritas?

  • @mixedmedia_artist
    @mixedmedia_artist Рік тому

    So is a treatment a summary of the what's in the script? Like synopsis to a book?

  • @taylorscreativecreations5582
    @taylorscreativecreations5582 2 роки тому

    How do you come up with ideas

  • @randomrants148
    @randomrants148 2 роки тому

    I was wondering I have two pen name and one pen I will be writing hentai graphic novels to get it out my system before writing other things because I try that but my thoughts are filled with these thoughts any advise?

  • @kiba4479
    @kiba4479 5 років тому +1

    This is a really interesting and informative video! I really like this description of your job and what you do on projects. As a Professional Writing major at my college who really wants to get into writing for movies and graphic novels, this is a great video to see. I was wondering, how did you manage to get a job working on TV shows and films? My goal is to become a writer in the movie industry, but it seems like such a difficult industry to get into, and I was just wondering if you had any tips for an up-and-coming writer about how to get a job writing for the movie industry. Thanks for your time!

  • @josecabre1
    @josecabre1 4 роки тому

    ¿De donde sos Eduardo? Tu video me sirvio mucho.

  • @plain_laney7219
    @plain_laney7219 5 років тому

    Good video, but I wish you used screen share so we can view the examples clearly.

  • @rathemoor5712
    @rathemoor5712 4 роки тому

    @ 0:58, "How I Wrote A Graphic Novel"
    I typed it. Thank you and I hope you enjoyed this video.

  • @juniorsmith3508
    @juniorsmith3508 4 роки тому

    Is your graphic novel out now?

  • @HeyAaHeyAa
    @HeyAaHeyAa 6 років тому +1

    Do you have a Goodreads account? :)

  • @DaisyKraft87
    @DaisyKraft87 3 місяці тому

    Hey past Ed! Did this graphic novel ever get translated to english? Favorite People? Any links to the ebook also?

    • @DaisyKraft87
      @DaisyKraft87 3 місяці тому

      Oh and I loved this video! Thank you for sharing this insight!

  • @thecartooncynic
    @thecartooncynic 4 роки тому

    Simple question, how different is writing for a novel vs a graphic novel/webcomic?
    Minute the obvious “one has pictures, the other has prose”

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez 4 роки тому +1

      A graphic novel is written in script format. A novel is written in prose. They are as distant between them as a poem is from a short story.

  • @rafaelmmh766
    @rafaelmmh766 6 років тому +1

    Como un maldito Samurai... Salgo corriendo a comprar una Katana, ¡Ho espera! no se refería a eso :(
    Gracias por los consejos :D

  • @spinozatrack
    @spinozatrack 6 років тому +2

    Keep writing

  • @dinosaurfilms7425
    @dinosaurfilms7425 6 років тому

    Literally had no idea you were a writer lol

  • @arunfernandez1999
    @arunfernandez1999 5 років тому

    Tell me more how mich money do you make out of this like net profit

  • @mixedmedia_artist
    @mixedmedia_artist Рік тому

    What program are you using? I'm starting out. I wrote a book and I want create a comic.

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez Рік тому +1

      I use Final Draft, but if you’re starting, just use CeltiX. It’s free.

    • @mixedmedia_artist
      @mixedmedia_artist Рік тому

      Thanks!

  • @samkatte7595
    @samkatte7595 4 роки тому

    I'm busy with a graphic novel. If anyone knows a way I can scan my drawings, please tell me

    • @samkatte7595
      @samkatte7595 3 роки тому

      @@mariarzyt_3D Thanks for the help😀😁. I'll look for one

  • @jessikawallace1259
    @jessikawallace1259 6 років тому

    What Podcasts do you listen to?

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez 6 років тому

      I find it's impossible to write, read or edit videos and listen to podcasts at the same time. Since those are the three things I do, I don't listen to any. :(

  • @ayyakrishnanmanian3703
    @ayyakrishnanmanian3703 6 років тому

    wow

  • @eduardovillalobos2507
    @eduardovillalobos2507 6 років тому

    Hey nice name

  • @BorisNjegic
    @BorisNjegic 6 років тому

    Eduardo, is that old IBM keyboard?

    • @edpavez
      @edpavez 6 років тому +1

      Yes!

    • @BorisNjegic
      @BorisNjegic 6 років тому

      Great one!!! I had that mechanical with my first server in 90's ... BTW following you for quite some time and thank you for extra videos you produce.. keep good work.

  • @coni2d
    @coni2d 6 років тому

    aprendí más que en mi clase de guión :P

  • @channelofstuff6662
    @channelofstuff6662 5 років тому

    i like story touch software

  • @stuartwinton7033
    @stuartwinton7033 6 років тому +1

    I make graphic novel

  • @latoletole18
    @latoletole18 6 років тому

    que shori este video

  • @KnifeStar
    @KnifeStar 5 років тому

    This guy looks & sounds Chilean.