The lack of detail and personality, and reuse of phrases, makes me think that you had some good ideas and used an LLM to write the story. While passable for short stories and fleshing out ideas, the current LLMs are not able to write intricate and engaging stories. (I've tried it myself, it takes about 20-25, repeats of the same scene or scenario to have enough substance to create a patchwork for a single storey scene that is passable)
Lost it right at the start, whole human fleet dealt to, earth on the edge of destruction, suddenly stealth ships smashed the attacking fleet but then it was one ship not many. And what happens next some political piggy bends becuase of a threat of total war, they are at the human home world now, we would have destroyed that fleet the next one that turned up, and glassed the enermy home worlds in a grand tour.
Did whoever wrote this just forget when they got to the illuminati part that their own ship was a stealth ship? Why did they need another cloaking device
this story has some great ideas, but lots of AI errors in the storyline itself. AI a great tool for a writer at this point, but its still a very immature technology with its limits.
Always nice when the hunters become the hunted.
Loved it lot's,, gonna be staying up l8 again goiñg through Ur stuff,lol. .K..
I like the video it seems the earth and the Galaxy have the same problem
The lack of detail and personality, and reuse of phrases, makes me think that you had some good ideas and used an LLM to write the story. While passable for short stories and fleshing out ideas, the current LLMs are not able to write intricate and engaging stories. (I've tried it myself, it takes about 20-25, repeats of the same scene or scenario to have enough substance to create a patchwork for a single storey scene that is passable)
You'd think that essentially having God on their side would have simplied their quest a bit more.
Lost it right at the start, whole human fleet dealt to, earth on the edge of destruction, suddenly stealth ships smashed the attacking fleet but then it was one ship not many.
And what happens next some political piggy bends becuase of a threat of total war, they are at the human home world now, we would have destroyed that fleet the next one that turned up, and glassed the enermy home worlds in a grand tour.
Did whoever wrote this just forget when they got to the illuminati part that their own ship was a stealth ship? Why did they need another cloaking device
i have watched a few of your videos and I find it hard to follow as certain parts seem to loop replaying already played sections
I am lost after the dark force. I am confused.
This is starting to sound like a knockoff The Eternals.
this story has some great ideas, but lots of AI errors in the storyline itself. AI a great tool for a writer at this point, but its still a very immature technology with its limits.
why do they repeat them selves ?
AI bots suck
the only thing more boring than reading an action story is listening to somebody else reading one
Then this is not for you. Bye, let people enjoy things