In fact you don't even need to mention Professor names, use the names of their research projects and/or labs. Connect with the projects, not the people, and show passion for it.
No it’s just generic. It’s insincere sounding when you go dr or mr blah or prof. Z. It’s blatant and cold. Maybe taking a creative writing class or lit would help you understand what I mean a little better. Things begin to stand out the better your base ELA skills are 😊
@@miscellanysreprieve5464 No, but I meant using it ironically. As in, writing all that was written at the start of the video, even the questions like “Do I know what they do? No,”, and then turning around and basically stating that your essay isn’t generic like all the others.
@@fluffydragon1525 ohh ok I see. Yeah honestly that sounds fair enough. Was just thinking of the beginning. Even then it’s still dangerous but it could work out lol 😆
I’m addicted to watching these videos but I’m in year 8 so it’s kinda useless since I don’t write essays here in the UK, we just have a homework book to do and if we don’t do it we get detention for 20 mins and miss the time to get lunch. :/ I WANNA WRITE AN ESSAY JUST ONCE! WE CANT EVEN USE COMPUTER FOR ANYTHING EXCEPT TO MATHS HOMEWORK :(
I’ve always wanted to be a real estate lister it’s my dream job I want to go to college to succeed this dream but my family thinks that I have no chance😔 What classes do u recommend I take to become a real estate lister? Ik ur not a lister but please help
In fact you don't even need to mention Professor names, use the names of their research projects and/or labs. Connect with the projects, not the people, and show passion for it.
Dr. Pepper lmao
“And Dr. Pepper.”
What's the name of the song?
Ahh. I'm Australian and trying to see if I can find tips for uni, or if if move one day, I can save these. And it feels illegal!
Goodluck ! I'm planning to go to australia for my uni, still 4 years left
Sooo what exactly does any of this have to do with you being australian?
Is it only me who read this in an Australian accent?
@@lia.6408 yep, just you.
@@usr1996 that’s like half of the point
I would be enthralled to work alongside Dr. Pepsi, Dr hulk and Dr Amstel because they are not mentioned, but right up my alley.
makes sense, people generally prefer getting to know people interested in the actual things they're interested in
I would absolutely love to work alongside DrPepper
Dr. Pepper
😂😂
From a 10th grader who knows nothing about writing college essays, I think that first joke essay would be a damn good opener
I too am a 10th grader who knows nothing about writing college essays, and I completely agree.
No it’s just generic. It’s insincere sounding when you go dr or mr blah or prof. Z. It’s blatant and cold. Maybe taking a creative writing class or lit would help you understand what I mean a little better. Things begin to stand out the better your base ELA skills are 😊
@@miscellanysreprieve5464 No, but I meant using it ironically. As in, writing all that was written at the start of the video, even the questions like “Do I know what they do? No,”, and then turning around and basically stating that your essay isn’t generic like all the others.
@@fluffydragon1525 ohh ok I see. Yeah honestly that sounds fair enough. Was just thinking of the beginning. Even then it’s still dangerous but it could work out lol 😆
Thank you so much! Using this for Georgia tech
I’m addicted to watching these videos but I’m in year 8 so it’s kinda useless since I don’t write essays here in the UK, we just have a homework book to do and if we don’t do it we get detention for 20 mins and miss the time to get lunch. :/
I WANNA WRITE AN ESSAY JUST ONCE! WE CANT EVEN USE COMPUTER FOR ANYTHING EXCEPT TO MATHS HOMEWORK :(
Bruh I'm in year 9 and they be giving us 2 essay questions in 1 hour and 45 minute for an exam (Religion & English)
All these likes and only 4 comments, what
Neat
“Here’s an example of a terrible college essay”
Uhhh no duh it’s just a bunch of horizontal lines
My man owns youtube shorts. He popping up everywhere
Why is nobody talking abt Professor Clarkson being a hacker????
Can you once show a GOOD essay?
I'm not even near university or college,but I watched your vids and I think they will help me alot😁
I'm over here in middle school looking at college essays 😂
Imagine being American and having to write an essay to get into university.
I have been writing my college essay but on some point it looked like my diary.What should I do???
I dont even know why ik watching these videos. We dont write college essays in my country so i dont even need them but i keep watching them.
Ayo wtf are you doing with SQL injection??!!!!!
Yeah, lines on a paper _is_ a really terrible essay
Can I send you my essay and can you edit it for me? 😏
Yeah no shit that essay is bad it is just lines smh
Yooo my last name is burdick
Yes, the al famous Dr. Pepper
Sql injectiom and fuzzing huh? Glad to see another pentester😉
I don’t think I would have graduated without Dr. Pepper!
Yes just lines is a terrible essay
SQL injection….
This guy is obsessed with essays man
The most important part of your college application
Why do I keep getting recommended these I already wrote my essay and am already in college
Gonna get rejected because you didn't indent your paragraph
POV your Canadian and don’t have to write a college essay 😎
You also forgot to indent
I’ve always wanted to be a real estate lister it’s my dream job I want to go to college to succeed this dream but my family thinks that I have no chance😔 What classes do u recommend I take to become a real estate lister? Ik ur not a lister but please help
can i know the name of the background music?
I’m a freaking middle schoolers 😭
Question, do you have to do an essay like this in the UK? just wondering for the future
Thank you this will probably help in the future
At this point i feel like everything i write is garbage
That's exactly what I wrote now im a business man
I'm not even in college and I'm getting this. UA-cam wants me to prepare for the future
Yes cos it has lines
It was the day of the competition, I had 8 fights that day. I lost all of them. The end.
I’m waiting till I’m in college for u to help me
Dr.Pepper
I don’t even know half of these words 😂
And Dr. Pepper.
How do I stydy
Nice video!
Dr. Pepper 😏
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It is so nice of you to edit people's essay's
SQL injection research LOL
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His voice is like Mike Shake
Commenting for later
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Bruh why do I get These videos recommended all the time.
Im an art student
Dr Pepper seems like a good teacher
"guys I passed college, notice me"