How to Write A Short Film Script

Поділитися
Вставка
  • Опубліковано 19 лис 2020
  • This is the second video in the How to Make a Short Film mini series. This one focuses on how to write your short film script. Here are a couple beginner tips on the process for writing your first short film! We'll talk about loglines, film treatments, three act structure, Dan Harmons story circle and the importance of reading scripts.
    Download Scripts
    www.studiobinder.com/blog/bes...
    www.simplyscripts.com/
    sfy.ru/
    Treatments/Outlines
    screencraft.org/2019/10/14/21...
    industrialscripts.com/film-tr...
    nofilmschool.com/film-treatment
    / rianspaulding
    Instagram: / rianspauldi. .
    Twitter: / rianspaulding
    Facebook: / rian.spaulding
    MY GEAR (affiliate links below)
    CAMERA- Sony A7Siii
    MAIN LENS - Sigma 24-70mm f2.8
    WIDE LENS - Sony 10-18mm f4 - amzn.to/2LNQ7Vt
    PRIME LENS - Sony 35mm f1.8 - amzn.to/358mLse
    ZOOM LENS - Sigma 24-70 f2.8
    DRONE - Mavic Pro 2 Zoom - amzn.to/2tb49cL
    MICROPHONE - Deity V-Mic D3 Pro - amzn.to/2neMluy
    TRIPOD - Sachtler Ace XL
    KEY LIGHT - Aputure 120D - amzn.to/30J14fb
    BACKLIGHT - Yongnuo YN360 - amzn.to/358mPZ0
    SMALL LIGHT - Aputure AL-M9 -amzn.to/31LYOVC

КОМЕНТАРІ • 205

  • @thewellvideoproductions8244
    @thewellvideoproductions8244 Рік тому +96

    True, having an outline to explain what the film is about and keep you on track is invaluable. I really like David Lynch's approach of writing. He starts with 50 to 60 index cards for the beats of the film, then write rearranges them accordingly, then fleshes the scenes out and begins his dialog.

  • @e2renity
    @e2renity 8 днів тому +2

    i'm just a middle schooler trying to write a short film for graduation and this video helped me so much! the quality is just impeccable and the tips are so helpful for me. thank you so much!

  • @shopwornbear1171
    @shopwornbear1171 Місяць тому +6

    I am, at the ripe old age of 58, writing my first draft for my first short subject film. I appreciated learning about that "log line". It actually gave me the perfect road map to developing the idea. Thank you for this series, it'll be put to very good use when I have my final draft ready to storyboard and shoot (a no budget film, this ought to be interesting).

    • @Noe_
      @Noe_ 13 днів тому

      How is it going?

    • @shopwornbear1171
      @shopwornbear1171 13 днів тому

      @@Noe_ Slowly.. very very slowly...LOL. I'm trying to write in the character, divided into 3 other characters in order to get the concept working. So far, nothing is landing as well as I think it should be.

    • @Noe_
      @Noe_ 13 днів тому

      @@shopwornbear1171 That's ok. Don't rush it. I will wait...

  • @melissamokhtari
    @melissamokhtari 3 роки тому +275

    first of all, your acting in those short bits is impeccable. second, i'm tryin to make my next videos a little more well-planned so your series is helping me out a lot!!

    • @RianSpaulding
      @RianSpaulding  3 роки тому +15

      You're too kind! Thanks for checking it out!

  • @tiagoloureiro3302
    @tiagoloureiro3302 3 роки тому +114

    Man this is an underrated video, Such good quality :U

  • @half.cooked.noodle8781
    @half.cooked.noodle8781 2 роки тому +127

    The video isn’t just informative but so creative as well. Loved it

  • @EmmaLangdon
    @EmmaLangdon 2 роки тому +57

    I did media studies this semester so I’ve been getting into writing and outlining short films so thank you this was really helpful and I like how you acted scenes out ahah

  • @rhysmckernan9476
    @rhysmckernan9476 2 роки тому +23

    This is my personal view, I do moving image/film in high-school. I've found that its helpful to find inspiration and learn from many people. Obviously dont copy them but have a style that is your own but also comfortable and unique it'll take sometime. But listening to professional advice especially in schools might not often be very helpful when it comes to creativity. They expect too much in a short time at times.

  • @apex305THC
    @apex305THC 8 місяців тому +3

    Absolutely CRUSHED IT with this one, bro! Straight facts, to the point, concise and super entertaining! Thank you, Rian!

  • @gxdpictures
    @gxdpictures 3 роки тому +57

    Bro, I be binge-watching screen writing tips on youtube now for about weeks and this was the best video I saw so far! Some how I got so much chills and trust just by the way you‘re smiling and telling what you gotta tell us... love that positive energy! Keep your work on🤝🔥

    • @RianSpaulding
      @RianSpaulding  3 роки тому +5

      🙏 Appreciate you!

    • @agnesnyarkoaeshun2451
      @agnesnyarkoaeshun2451 Рік тому +1

      Definitely the best and informative video. This is just what I needed. God bless you🙏🙏

  • @intellectualtheta9321
    @intellectualtheta9321 2 роки тому +5

    Usually I don't like any video but this video forced me to like it because it is so underrated and hard worked

  • @SoCreate
    @SoCreate 3 роки тому +48

    Great content! Love that you mentioned the importance of planning.

  • @amourie
    @amourie 2 роки тому +2

    Thank you very much! I've done it before but I like watching videos like these at the beginning of the process to refresh me :)

  • @djwatson
    @djwatson 3 роки тому +7

    Love the production quality of this video Rian - we'll done!

  • @thomascrow1975
    @thomascrow1975 3 роки тому +5

    this seems like a high subscriber channel, shocked that you only have 2k. great great quality keep up the good work!

  • @user-ls6wx5wf1e
    @user-ls6wx5wf1e 7 місяців тому +1

    The young man there give me what I need this year. He also advised to push goals. God bless you

  • @mainlinetruth
    @mainlinetruth 2 роки тому

    You are right about the best tip.
    Take action! Set goals and move forward. Great video thank you.

  • @XxSEETH3RxX
    @XxSEETH3RxX 11 місяців тому

    I wrote features before going to short scripts. Now I'm hooked on writing short scripts because it helps you get into the story quicker which I had a problem with while writing features. I'm also learning to make short films. And your videos are helpful

  • @MrKclark1989
    @MrKclark1989 Рік тому

    Thank you sharing this. This honestly help me to figure out how to get started and stay on top of it. Now gotta hold myself accountable.

  • @surajbinawade195
    @surajbinawade195 2 роки тому +1

    It's not about the video has so views and we should go for it but u have proven that the clear content and planning is so important for writing thanks a lot sir!

  • @yvonnejemutai9786
    @yvonnejemutai9786 Рік тому

    You know how to have us glued, love it, very helpful

  • @FilmQi
    @FilmQi 2 роки тому

    Great video and tips Rian! thanks for sharing

  • @Anth740
    @Anth740 7 днів тому

    Excellent video, love your vibe mate really engaging video 🙌

  • @thewellvideoproductions8244
    @thewellvideoproductions8244 Рік тому +1

    Excellent production and tips!

  • @lowiss3804
    @lowiss3804 7 місяців тому +2

    I LOVE how great is your video! Creative, informative, perfectly done !

  • @sarathputhiyedath
    @sarathputhiyedath 3 місяці тому +1

    Man u have a lot of knowledge😍 I think I need to watch your video twice 😍🙏

  • @chefbrittan84
    @chefbrittan84 9 місяців тому +3

    Final Draft is a must have tool for writing.

  • @arshiabasit434
    @arshiabasit434 2 роки тому +2

    I love when he said "and you are finally ready to sit down, and open up that laptop and start writing...... (smile) DONT DO IT."

  • @taylorsmithmedia
    @taylorsmithmedia 6 місяців тому

    This is really awesome man. Thank you for the genuine guidance.

  • @noahdaubevalois
    @noahdaubevalois Рік тому +1

    This video is amazing. I see you haven't posted in a few years. You definitely have the talent to be posting often on youtube!

  • @benbenson6533
    @benbenson6533 5 місяців тому

    great video, very helpful tips. Hope to see more videos from you sir!

  • @bhargavaboddeti2488
    @bhargavaboddeti2488 2 роки тому

    This channel deserves to be big!

  • @no1cares403
    @no1cares403 2 роки тому +3

    I WANT TO WRITE A SCRIPT JUST FOR FUN BUT I DONT KNOW HOW TO START WRITING IT SO I SEARCH IT SO IT WILL HELP ME
    THANKS MAN!

  • @PP-rm6oe
    @PP-rm6oe 3 роки тому +4

    Many thanks! Just what I needed. Crystal clear!

  • @AftonLin
    @AftonLin 2 роки тому +1

    Great video! I'm working on writing a short film for my junior thesis and this really helped :]

  • @Sticks
    @Sticks 2 роки тому +6

    Great video man! Love the effort you put into making this entertaining to watch 🙌🏼

  • @itsavannahsunshine1721
    @itsavannahsunshine1721 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you for this video, I am in my MFA film and we are wrting our first script. I appreciate your humor and creative expression! thank you

  • @elyheard685
    @elyheard685 9 місяців тому +1

    this is what I wanted. Thank you

  • @thorpism
    @thorpism 3 роки тому +10

    Great video! Perfect balance of just getting right to the point but also entertaining. Every tip was like a clear action step, very helpful. New sub here, thank you.

  • @VioletEmerald
    @VioletEmerald 2 місяці тому

    Great video!

  • @waridikenya
    @waridikenya Рік тому +1

    Just subscribed to support your great work. Kudos . Am now ready to write my first script as I wanna make my first short film about Rethinking Tourism

  • @story_teacup
    @story_teacup 11 місяців тому +1

    I like your "I'll wait". Made me like, even though I was just looking for an alpha crash course on scriptwriting😂😂😂

  • @amanatbrar2203
    @amanatbrar2203 3 роки тому +2

    Loving it 😍

  • @michaelangelo3098
    @michaelangelo3098 2 роки тому +1

    This was a great video 👏👏👏

  • @creativejuicewithoutpulp
    @creativejuicewithoutpulp 2 роки тому +3

    Great video Rian! Loved this, thank you :D

  • @substancespace2380
    @substancespace2380 7 місяців тому +1

    Thankyou so much sir, ...I love this

  • @fggyleafexist1753
    @fggyleafexist1753 2 роки тому

    I'm being mentored to film and script-write a short film. This helped a lot

  • @i.s.5192
    @i.s.5192 2 роки тому

    This is really helpful thank you !

  • @nolanmolt
    @nolanmolt 2 роки тому +1

    Awesome video, I just subscribed! Make moreeee!

  • @bwoods245
    @bwoods245 2 місяці тому

    AMAZING VIDEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @JUSTINOMALINO
    @JUSTINOMALINO 2 роки тому

    Great video man!

  • @thethistleboy
    @thethistleboy 2 роки тому

    Gosh I love this aspect ratio

  • @sibahlezembe9196
    @sibahlezembe9196 2 роки тому +1

    This video is really helpful

  • @demondoll2001
    @demondoll2001 2 місяці тому

    This is very helpful!

  • @DiamondBeyblade
    @DiamondBeyblade 2 роки тому +4

    This is super good! You're a super underrated youtuber, hope you get a well-deserved 1M or more! :D

    • @RianSpaulding
      @RianSpaulding  2 роки тому +2

      🙏

    • @DiamondBeyblade
      @DiamondBeyblade 2 роки тому +2

      @@RianSpaulding Oh yeah, using this video's basic 'outline' I guess I can say, I've written 3 scripts for 3 different short films I am going to make. They turned out really great, so thanks for the information and help!!!

  • @RayAdamsCanada
    @RayAdamsCanada 2 роки тому +2

    Amazing high quality video. Thank you. It helped me alot.

  • @gabrielacanto1771
    @gabrielacanto1771 4 місяці тому

    Loved these tips. First, I agree with you, sitting down with your screenwriting software is not a good first step. Second, though my writing approach is very different, the flash card method definitively works! Third, Loglines, Synopsis and Treatments are a must, but I feel like at the beginning when you are still figuring out the story, you don't know all the key aspects to fill those out. What I do is set up a playlist or a specific source of inspiration that helps me get into the mood / universe of the story and I begin by writing the first ideas that come to mind in a notebook. I try to do this consistenly for a few days and then retype what I wrote on the screenwriting software without changing anything. I repeat this process until I have a decent rough draft. Last, asking for feedback from strangers and friends is very valuable to spot the necessary changes quickly.

  • @KimDaKreative
    @KimDaKreative 2 місяці тому +1

    Great video, the first thing I loved was your honesty. "I am not a professional writer" Helpful, Thank you.

  • @JoeHenkel
    @JoeHenkel 3 роки тому +1

    Fantastic!

  • @mariannedemirdji3082
    @mariannedemirdji3082 3 роки тому +33

    Really cinematic introduction, and quality info! I wish I could hit up a coffeeshop and write a script 😢

  • @louisgahide9840
    @louisgahide9840 Рік тому +1

    suuuper helpfull thanks!

  • @izyschuwi
    @izyschuwi 8 місяців тому +1

    very well explained, thank you so much

  • @dddlll1614
    @dddlll1614 3 роки тому +2

    Very very underrated video. This is very useful, informative.

  • @jengamoyo6559
    @jengamoyo6559 3 роки тому +1

    Really good stuff

  • @DannyNipProductions
    @DannyNipProductions 2 роки тому +1

    Thank u so much for sharing thi helpful video .❤

  • @zeyellowtiger4133
    @zeyellowtiger4133 Рік тому

    how do you only have 5000 subs. you deserve way more than that.

  • @Triflow
    @Triflow 3 роки тому +1

    Thanks for this video, it really helps me out!

  • @abraamlincoln4098
    @abraamlincoln4098 2 роки тому +1

    hey man, as i see last video is 1 year ago, why did you stop. this video helped me so much thanks, carry on

  • @fearlessenglish1170
    @fearlessenglish1170 7 місяців тому

    excellent!!! Thank you

  • @doodlecatuwu7470
    @doodlecatuwu7470 2 роки тому +1

    This made more sense then any other video I’ve seen

  • @thewellvideoproductions8244
    @thewellvideoproductions8244 3 роки тому +1

    Very helpful, thank you!

  • @armonrichardson8402
    @armonrichardson8402 2 роки тому +1

    Great watch, i appreciate you

  • @mogmajor6880
    @mogmajor6880 2 роки тому +2

    Man your video as really helped me a lot

  • @Christian_Girl1214
    @Christian_Girl1214 3 місяці тому

    I love this! Also, don’t forget to draw a storyboard

  • @jaelvictoria5771
    @jaelvictoria5771 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you!

  • @NINEKEYZ
    @NINEKEYZ 3 роки тому

    This really helped me out!!

  • @bilalemin4125
    @bilalemin4125 8 місяців тому +1

    REALLY GODDAMN UNDERRATED CHANNEL

  • @fauzianalwoga1002
    @fauzianalwoga1002 Рік тому

    Thanks for this

  • @98nfp
    @98nfp Рік тому

    Nice one👍👍👍

  • @poorvikgowda5794
    @poorvikgowda5794 3 роки тому +2

    Man you're awesome!

  • @billpexal
    @billpexal 2 роки тому +1

    Nice insight man

  • @dominickrouser8124
    @dominickrouser8124 Рік тому +2

    I actually plan on writing a two-hour short film called "Garfield" which is based on the orange cat of the same name. It is a slow-burn horror short in the same vain of Hereditary, Midsommar, The Witch, The Lighthouse....
    You get the idea.
    I plan on selling the short film script to A24 films and getting it Shown at the Sundance Film Festival and I personally hope that the film will win and get produced by Sundance before getting a theatrical release and a UA-cam release too.

    • @nsungemakonda
      @nsungemakonda 9 місяців тому +4

      Two-hour short film?

    • @apex305THC
      @apex305THC 8 місяців тому

      I thought the same thing..@@nsungemakonda

  • @renahaswah7092
    @renahaswah7092 3 роки тому +2

    crazy how I started watching u for SF content, but now I happen to be trying to get started in writing a series. Do u have any advice on writing scripts for a whole series? Maybe with the goal of getting it in the hands of Netflix... Lofty goals are better than no goals lol

  • @gianthills
    @gianthills Рік тому +3

    I would advise making a short film as close to a silent film as possible, to design it so visuals alone tell the story. If you only have 5 minutes you don't want to clutter it up with dialogue.

  • @patin__
    @patin__ 2 місяці тому

    thanks!!

  • @francampbell4153
    @francampbell4153 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you 😊 💓 ☺ 💗 💛 💖 😊

  • @mohammadrezashafiei2898
    @mohammadrezashafiei2898 5 місяців тому

    Thanks bro❤

  • @storypathy
    @storypathy 2 роки тому +1

    Taking the time to outline or plan will always ease the anxiety of writing and life in general😆

  • @jdtarik
    @jdtarik 2 роки тому

    Great Video

  • @SerapioSergiovich
    @SerapioSergiovich 2 роки тому

    Movie with great components.

  • @happiekidonetwo2529
    @happiekidonetwo2529 Рік тому +2

    Thanks

  • @amasnow
    @amasnow Рік тому +1

    Thanks a lot

  • @crieverytim
    @crieverytim 2 роки тому +1

    Man, why hasnt your channel grown???? I came for the Honda element video and don't get it - 1st rate quality and you're likeable. Keep at it... hope it gets some well-deserved traction

  • @user-xo2sf4gy1o
    @user-xo2sf4gy1o 3 роки тому +4

    Can you do more San Francisco neighborhood tours or just SF related videos?

  • @ganeshrokaya5304
    @ganeshrokaya5304 2 роки тому

    Nice job

  • @TrophyCityFootball
    @TrophyCityFootball 9 місяців тому +1

    Well explained. I just subscribed 😊 and hit the bell 🔔 ding dong

  • @manunited7882
    @manunited7882 Рік тому

    Second of all, Im not a professional writer by any means - hahaha that had me in stitches 🤣

  • @jbthementor4905
    @jbthementor4905 3 роки тому +5

    Rian you do some amazing work. What lens do you use to film your videos.

    • @RianSpaulding
      @RianSpaulding  3 роки тому +3

      Thanks! Sigma 24-70 f2.8, Sony 35mm 1.8 primarily with a couple others thrown in there.

  • @haronwhere3485
    @haronwhere3485 Рік тому

    Thanks 🙏

  • @shamgates1253
    @shamgates1253 Рік тому +1

    Hello, you Said that this is the Second video of the series, please can you put a link for the first one?
    thanks