Avoid these for your great statement of purpose ft. GKS/KGSP 2024
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- Опубліковано 30 чер 2024
- Avoid these for your great statement of purpose ft. GKS/KGSP
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I’m going to tell you three things you should avoid in your statements of purpose for you to be selected as GKS scholars. So please watch this video until the end, and don't miss anything!
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Time Stamps:
0:00 Intro
2:02 1. Don't be vague
4:37 2. Don’t plagiarize
6:34 3. Don't be selfish
7:47 Closing
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0:00 Intro
2:02 1. Don't be vague
4:37 2. Don’t plagiarize
6:34 3. Don't be selfish
7:47 Closing
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Yes, I'm an AI. 🤖
Dude .. I see how much you are obsessed with his voice you are literally in every videos comment section 😶
@@Yurii911 well this is the obsession that doesn't hurt anyone •̀ᴗ•̀
@@winter9849 haaan that's true btw are you preparing for gks ?
@@Yurii911 yeah ! you too ?
Hii,
I am one of the 2019 scholarship recipients. To be honest,I wish I got to see your videos during my application time, and it would have been so helpful to me back then. As a recipient who experienced the scholarship process myself, I would recommend this channel for I found the information provided in the video to be on-point and useful for those looking to apply for this particular schoarship.
Kudos to you, 수고많으셨습니다.
Thanks for your endorsement! I'm sure I'm a spokesperson for active GKS scholars. I hope Korea has treated you well so far!
How can I contact with you?pleasei need to ask you some questions if you don't mind
Thank you so much for the time that you give to these videos!
It's been almost a month for me trying to reach perfection for these documents so I'm really taking all your advice, I think my Statment of Purpose and my Motivation Letter have gotten really better. So thank you again.
Thanks Mr. Daniel
I am so much grateful for your guidance in this application process shown in your videos. So thoughtful of u🙏
Happy to hear that! Stay tuned for more informative videos!
This was such a helpful video!!! Thank you so much for doing it, it cleared a lot of my doubts!
Glad to hear that! My pleasure! Stay tuned for more informative videos!
Thanksss you help me a lot!!! :)
Thank you for useful advice Master.🙏
Most awaited video.😊Thankyou so much...🙂
My pleasure! Thanks for watching!
I really appreciate your personal statement video and has been waiting for this video to be released. I have clear goals and your tips are similar to what my friends and other GKS scholars has pointed out. Thank you for giving more clear information. My only problem is im not good with bombastic words.
Glad to hear that! Don't worry, just be yourself! Wish you the best!
Thanks Mr college. this is so helpful when I am writing my statement of purpose.
My pleasure! Wish you the best!
감사합니다!
😊
Thankyou so much sir, you're very helpful 😊🙏
Thank you so much for this! I want to apply for next year since my documents are not ready yet ㅠㅠ I'm really worried because my grades are not that high and the master's program I want to apply for is different from my major. I learned so much from your video! Sub-ed :)
My pleasure! As I said in the video, there is nothing to worry about! Show your strong suits in other criteria! You should review my videos! ;)
I wish this could have been uploaded a few weeks earlier since it's approaching the deadline for my country. But thank you anyways for providing value.
Sorry to hear that...But good luck!
@@MrCollegeConcierge I'm working on my 2nd draft and you just saved me from making some big mistakes!
Thank you so much, for this video. Help me a lot ^^
Happy to hear that! I need your continuous support!
Haii Mr. Daniel, you're so gorgeous and very kind person Thank you so much ✨
Thank you so much for such detailed advice :)
You're so welcome! :)
Thank you very much Daniel. This helps a lot. New Subscriber. Please do a video on possible interview questions and how to answer properly. Love this video
Thanks for your support! And stay tuned!
I have seen your whole videos and I really like your video
Glad to hear that!
I really couldn’t thank you enough:(( I was searching all around facebook groups if it was okay to seek and study a different major (like business administration) for master’s program, and I just found my answer, thank you :((
☺
I LOVE your videos. You are very simple yet clear. It's so useful for us.
What do you think could be significant to point out for someone who speaks Korean about Topik 3-4 level and already lived&studied in Korea?
Glad you loved it! It's definitely imperative that you share your experiences about how you obtained a TOPIK level 3-4 and studying & living in South Korea.
@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you!
Sir your video are very helpful for us keep it up,👍🏼
Thanks for the compliment. I need your continuous support!
Thank you so much!!!
You're welcome!
Thank you, Sir. Your videos are really helpful
No sweat! I'm going to upload a new video about the GKS interviews this Thursday, so don't miss it!
Thank you for sharing! Wish I had watched this before applying, but I hope my application is strong enough to be a successful candidate!
Sharing is caring! Wish you the best!
how did it go?
@@sanasubhani5812 LOL i was rejected 😅. Maybe I will try again in next year!
Really helpful as usual 🤗
Thanks for watching! :)
Lots of ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ for your valuable information and for that adorable robotic voiceee🥰
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Thank you Daniel :) I wish I be able to be one of the awardees this year. Wish me luck. Happy and health always for you :)
Good luck
Thanks for watching! Try next year! And stay tuned for more informative videos!
@@opeyemi7761 thank you, good luck for you too :)
@@MrCollegeConcierge this time the third I’m trying :’) I’ll be waiting for your more videos
@@temanday6595 thank you🤗
Now I am preparing for 2022 intake by watching your videos
That was very informative. Thank you for making the video. I'll keep your three points in mind as I prepare my SOP. Thanks again. 🙂
No problem! Now, go start writing! ;)
I am impressed how there are no music at all in this video but I am still watching it seriously. Thanks Daniel for the insightful vid! ✨
I am looking for a music director. Haha! I appreciate your compliment. I will always do my best to meet your expectations!
@@MrCollegeConcierge Daniel, I want to ask, is it OK to write study plan in bullet or point? I found some people write it like an essay (within the paragraph)? I am looking forward to hear it from you soon ^^
@@tatabercerita I recommend you write your study plan in paragraphs!
@@MrCollegeConcierge Thanks!
I'm currently a sophomore and doing my bachelor's degree in entrepreneurship and after knowing about the KGSP scholarship I've been binge-watching all KGSP related videos even though I still have a few years before I would finish my bachelor's degree. Another concern is that I also want to change path and study media arts or mass communication for my master's(tho I think it doesn't make sense) which is my first choice in bachelor's degree but things happened and your video just helped me to have hopes again to study in Korea with the major that I want. Thank you! I hope you'll still make videos when it's my time to apply^^
That's not a problem at all changing majors for graduate studies! Just make sure to persuade the admissions officers in writing and speaking!
And I'll always be right here for you!
@@MrCollegeConcierge omg this means a lot will surely work hard for other aspect that I should improve on to be a KGSP scholar 2 or 3 years from now^^
Thank you so much, all your devices are so helpful, but I have a question, how large have to be each part, one page or less?
Thankyou 💜❤
How I wish you have uploaded it earlier. As of now, I already submitted my applications. I was confident with my papers not until I watched you videos. Anyways, thank you for the videos and please wish me luck ☺️
Good luck
I hope I didn't discourage you! I'll keep my fingers crossed!
@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you so much ☺️ keep making these kind of videos. I will keep watching ☺️✔️
It is helpful video
Thank you!
sir, please specify what to write in future plans. you are really an amazing person... love and respect from Pakistan
When it comes to KGSP/GKS I only believe in this channel...!!
You won't regret!
Hi Daniel, thank you for your good videos. What is the difference between SOP and study plan? I just confused... Both of them are same right?
Hi, I'm currently writing my statement of purpose and I was wondering if we should write everything in one essay or should we write every goal on its own as essays per one or should we literally write it as bullet points as you showed in the video. Thanks for the videos btw they're very helpful!
Thanks for watching! Depending on the situation, you can use all of them. I will make a video about it later!
Thank you for your great information.
I wanna ask you my transcript should be in CGPA or GPA?
I wish I had watched this before applying. Hoping for next year
I'll be right here for you!
That’s so helpful ! Thank you
I want to study architectural design is there any Korean architecture company that I should mention to bond my specialist with Korea !?
Thanks for the compliment! I can't name certain companies, but I'm sure you can find it on the Internet!
Good thing that all those don't s are not in my statement of purpose. My SOP is very specific from language study plan up to the future plan. I researched for a week for the subjects I want to take and the graduation requirements of the major I want to take. I also stated the name of the thesis advisor I want to collaborate with.
Kudos to you!
I loved this video at minute 6:22 you literally answered my question that has been going through my mind all this time. 🥺
By the way, could you tell me if this apply to both University and Embassy track ?
This is sooooo helpful. Thank you so much !
@@rodsalomon6524 Yes, it applies to both tracks!
@@MrCollegeConciergeThank you ! I have heard from many people the opposite. Many agreed that it was better to stick to the major. Even one Q&A video of the admission staff in my country once said that they do not accept it. However, they also replied my email saying that it is possible if I correlate my studies.
Hello, thank you for your informative videos, they've been very helpful in the application process! However, I do have a question. The personal medical assessment requires you to mention if you're suffering from depression/anxiety and I was wondering if my chances for getting the scholarship will decrease if I'm currently taking medication for both of these.
I wish I could tell you the answer, but I'm not in the position...The guidelines say all applicants who pass the 2nd round of selection must receive a comprehensive medical checkup and submit the results. I hope your symptoms are not serious!
@@MrCollegeConcierge Ah I see, thank you for the reply!
Please make video on "future plan" too.
I already did!
Thank you so much for this useful video Sir...sir can you please help us on how can we make our SOP and statement of purpose effective if we want to pursue Masters in English through GKS!
My pleasure. You should review my videos and ask someone you trust to proofread your sop! Wish you the best!
Hello Mr. College Concierge
Can I write about how I learnt Korean and English since I was young in my Language plan?
And thank you very much for all this information!!!
Thankyou so much for this video! I am planning to apply through embassy track to the undergrad program. I have a question. If I am not sure weather I want to stay in korea or return to my home country after the program (It all depends on the oportunities that might come up once I am there), can I write that? Or does it make it sound vague and like I dont have a plan?
My pleasure! Then you should write both of your plan A & B.
Hello sir your video's are really very helpful, I'm Willing to apply for undergraduate but my school doesn't provide any transcript certificate only main marksheet, so what should I do about it? And the mentioned English proficiency certificate is the only certificate they accept? Thank you for sharing such good videos,
There’s a bit difference in the goal of study and detailed plan part for gks-u so can you make another video about study plan for gks-u ? Thank you so muchhh
Noted!
can you please give an update about the national health insurance that you mentioned in one of your previous videos? thanks
I will make a video about it later!
Thank you for your helpful video. I have a question. My major that I will apply to is different form my current major. So should I have to mention my current major/ current university in personal statement?
It's good to explain why you would like to do a different major.
Hello Sir, (1) can you make a video focusing on the study plan for Embassy Track? (2) Is it okay to mention the professor we would like to work with for each university in the study plan ? Or is it weird since I don't know where I might be accepted or even in the professor will accept me since I did not contact any professor yet for my master degree..
Thank you.
Sir I would like to know about study pattern for TOPIK EXAMINATION as well and the book which I should refer
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Good day Sir,
I want to apply for a Master's Degree in Tourism Management. I am curious about writing the research paper. If given a chance should we write the dissertation in English or Korean?
Hello Thankyou so much for this video. I have applied for the GKS 2021 graduate program for masters degree. I have just finished my masters degree in my home country but in a different major and but this time I want to study the major that I took during my bachelor's degree and have opted to study that in South Korea. Therefore I wanted to ask will my current masters degree have any kind of effect during the process of application checking?
If you would like to do your master's in South Korea, you should apply with your BA degree only!
Do korean government provide scholorships for mbbs to international students?Please do make a video about it
I really can't find any information regarding this
I would like to know what's the difference between the SOP ( study plan) and study plan.
Hello sir
Thankyou for the information
I have a question
If I want to do my masters' in Korean literature but it wasn't in my graduation subjects do I still eligible for that major ,And which topik level is required for this course
This is a very useful video! I've just re-read the SOP I've already put together and now I'm confident that I can greatly improve its structure. I'm an Architect going into Media and Communications. Overall, even now I believe my SOP covered all the recommended points very well. Soon I will update it with information about all the progress I made in my Korean studies this year! ^^
Yes update us please!! I’m thinking of applying next year but kinda scared of choosing another major since I’m a pharmacist going into media or digital marketing, wishing you all the luck
how did it go?
@@sanasubhani5812 I’m writing this comment from a lecture room at KAIST :)
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Hello there, Thank you for these videos they're really helpful. I have one question, I am applying through the embassy track and was wondering If I'm choosing different majors for the 3 universities I'm applying for, do I make an SOP for each university? Or should I be general and make 3 copies?
My pleasure! It seems you are doing your master's through the GKS-G Program. I personally don't recommend you choose three majors that are not related to one another. You might look you don't really know what you want to study, and the admissions committee might think you are not serious about this problem.
@@MrCollegeConcierge Dear sir, thank you for your reply to Haya's interesting question. I am going to apply through embassy track, but what if my interest is Film and Video and this is available only in one university?
Sir i have taken some korean classes via the platforms like coursera and udemy that are provided by korean universities.....can i put their certificates does that gives any points?
Dear Sir. I have watched this video before completing my SOP. It helped me a lot. Thanks for Your work🤗... But may I ask as I'm participating in this program first time: may I add some photos of achievements, which wrote in personal statement about??
Thank You in advance...
Thanks for watching! As long as the photos are related to the application documents in the checklist, you may!
@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank You so much 👋
very very motivational and supportive vedio ......
sir i want to ask that through embassy track we have to choose 3 uni but you said we should write why we chose that uni then how can we write that ?
hope so you reply my stupid... question
If you apply through the Embassy Track, you may focus on why you want to study the certain field when writing an sop.
@@MrCollegeConcierge Noted sir thank you Soo much 😃
Sir,
Can you please make a video on how to prepare a good SOP also? Especially the 2nd and 3rd part. Goal and study plan and Future goals. Mostly, the difference between Personal statement and Statement of Purpose. There is a chance of confusion between the two especially related to the study matter. For eg: where to include the reason to choose South Korea and the major that we choose, in PS or SOP.
Noted!
@@MrCollegeConcierge Thank you. Awaiting the video.
Please make video for
GKS- undergraduate program
I will! Stay tuned!
Please make a video for undergraduate too🙏🙏
I sure will! Stay tuned! 😉
Sir..can u pls pls pls make a video on how to apply for kgsp via university track step by step? Like what we have to do first to the last step...i shall be highly obliged😊.
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Good luck! Haha
Thank you for the video sir.
Please I have some questions.
1. What if our course would be taken in Korean and my country's language is English, do we still need to include that we would improve our English then?
2. For our study plan, could we talk about courses that we found in the universities' course outline?
I am applying through the embassy track, so I can't mention some lecturers' names since I don't know which university might pick me?l
Hello sir
No problem!
1. If you are a native speaker of English, you don't have to.
2. You could! But be specific!
@@MrCollegeConcierge thanks for your reply
Is it ok if we want to be there in south korea and want to work there after the program?......Is it necessary to write that we'll comeback to our country and will pay back to korea there?
I know that most of the people are armys or kdrama lover . 💜🇰🇷
is it ok to say frankly that after graduation. I wish to stay back in korea to the admission committe
Can you please tell me that which fields are available for GKS? 🥺🥺
I've noticed that you use bullet point formatting for the first part of the statement of purpose. Is this formatting recommended throughout the entire Statement of purpose?
No, just the first one! You should write in paragraphs for the others.
Can we submit any extra curricular activities certificate outside from school. Please tell me about that sir 🙏🏻
Yes, you can!
Sir, your videos are helpful but I have a question, what if I'm an undergraduate, like just finished and done with high school, can I apply through the embassy track too and will all these information you taught us be needed too during the application?
I've been searching for a Kgsp but it seems like they're for graduate programs, what about undergraduates too?
By the way sir, your video is really friendly and so much useful
I want to say a very big thank you!!:)
I already answered in my other videos! And thank you!
@@MrCollegeConcierge I should be thanking you most sir💜
Please give some tips for undergraduate degree
I will make videos about the 2022 GKS Program for Undergrads later!
Hello Sir,
They said to write study plan within three page.
So maximum 3 pages
Or minimum 3 pages ??
Am a bit confused about where must I connect between my major and Korea, in the personal statement or SOP!?
SOP!
please make one for undergraduate program, if you don;t mind! thank you :)
I sure will! Stay tuned!
@@MrCollegeConcierge thank you so much! I enjoy watching your video a lot ❤️
@@marsya7648 Thanks a lot! I'm going to upload a new video about the GKS interviews this Thursday, so don't miss it! 😉
Is it better to make the statement of purpose in point or descriptive or paragraph ?
Depending on the situation, you can use all of them. I will make a video about it later!
@@MrCollegeConcierge thank you :))
Hi goodday. I hope you read this and advance sorry and thankyou for I have a lot of questions to ask. Is there any way we can know what kind of courses does a university offer for kgsp? And about recommendation letter in your past school is it madly needed? And I was wondering if there is only one chance application for graduate to apply this year . Thank you and Hope you read this.
1. You should refer to the 2021 GKS-G Available Universities & Fields of Study file.
2. Yes.
3. Yes.
Good luck!
Sir is kgsp offering Medicine.
Hmmm, so study plan includes language study plan as well. I thought study plan is more to studying at university instead of language. But this is a good and helpful information.
Sir can you explain me what is the one-on-one language exchange program
It's a program that you and a Korean student are paired and help each other (language exchange, on/off campus affairs, etc.).
@@MrCollegeConcierge oh thank u so much. It will be an amazing thing 😊
Hi sir, I wanted to ask if it is necessary to fill out the form in typing? Can I download the application form and fill it by myself I mean by writing.
You are required to "type"!
@@MrCollegeConcierge ohk sir but letter of recommendation by the professor can be in the written form or it also has to be in the typing
@@rgslife6976 Handwriting is fine.
Reviewing all videos again 😌 because the time is coming near 😌 GKS-U
Fighting! Haha
@@MrCollegeConcierge 감사합니다 선생님 😇😇
I hear a lot of people saying that they will come back to their own country. Is it okay to say that we would like to stay and pursue our career in Korea, or we shouldn't say that? I was always curious about that.
As I said in the video, write what you can do for your country and Korea as pursuing your career in Korea!
Can you please make a video on AMA+ Scholarship?
Yes, I can! That's an excellent scholarship for art majors offered by Korea National University of Arts.
@@MrCollegeConcierge thank you
I'm going to apply as undergraduate scholar can u help me how I send my documents to the department
Sir can you make for undergraduate program students .. plzz
I'm working on it!
I have a question about the language study plan. Do I have to mention how I will improve my English if it's my first language although my country isn't one of the recognised English speaking countries
If English is your mother tongue, then you don't have to. Just focus on how to improve your Korean.
@@MrCollegeConcierge thank you💜
mbbs is available in gks scholarship or not
Hello sir, I can't provide my bachelor degree till August is it ok not to submit it for the first round ? And is it ok to submit my ID and my parents ID as a citizenship proof ?
1. You can submit your official degree by August 31, 2021.
2. You must submit "either your notarized family register or birth certificate" issued by the government of your country for proof of citizenship. If your citizenship information cannot be found on either of the documents, passport copies of you and your parents (no need to be notarized) must be submitted as well.
Daneil, i have received email from univesity as they asked for graduate certificate, i haven't received it yet but they asked to send letter from university till 16 but my country curior service is not able to send my documents in due date as covid19 pandemic. What should i reply? As in GKS application guidline, it is mention that we can submit our certificate till August.
You also need to follow the university's requirements as well. And it is mandatory to submit a certificate of expected gradation if you can't submit your original degree yet.