TOEFL Writing Academic Discussion Test #3

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  • Опубліковано 8 січ 2025

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  • @Dhtpdus-q5v
    @Dhtpdus-q5v 11 днів тому

    I understand why Emma thinks that it is clearly an unfair policy since the length of time someone has been working at a particular place does not accurately reflect their value.
    However, in my opinion I think that it is a great policy. To add up to what Tom mentioned about their colleges who got paid more than him due to having more work than him, individuals should be compensated depending on how long they worked for that company. Their efforts that they have made for a long period of time for the company to be successful deserves to get a higher raise than those who haven’t worked for so long.
    For instance, my aunt has been a Flight attendant for more than 8 years. Now she gets more salary than people who worked for a short period. This policy is totally fair since they sacrificed their free time for that company for many years to stabilize the company.
    For these reasons, I believe that it is a great policy to determine by the length of time with the amount of money they receive.
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    • @ahmedbinbasri
      @ahmedbinbasri  11 днів тому +1

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