Forgive Me │Spoken Word Poetry
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- Опубліковано 10 тра 2018
- I'm sorry doesn't seem like enough sometimes after we've hurt someone and denied that we were in the wrong. I wrote this about one of my closest friends and dedicate this poem to him, but to others I have hurt too.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
Background music from freesound.org by the user cheesepuff
Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx
Your spoken words relate to my life so much. I love your videos, I listen to them all the time.
katie silva Aww thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that you can relate to them and enjoy them! It means a lot!
Mel's Thoughts and whoever made u feel like this. I promise this feeling will pass it always does.
katie silva Thank you for the words of encouragement! 😊 I appreciate it so much! ❤
Cheers for the Video! Apologies for the intrusion, I am interested in your opinion. Have you researched - Reyvery Monrayden Release (search on google)? It is a smashing one off guide for using the secrets of ho oponopono to master gratitude and forgivness without the headache. Ive heard some great things about it and my m8 at last got great success with it.
Kudos for the video content! Sorry for chiming in, I am interested in your thoughts. Have you heard about - Reyvery Monrayden Release (do a google search)? It is an awesome exclusive product for using the secrets of ho oponopono to master gratitude and forgivness without the normal expense. Ive heard some super things about it and my m8 finally got cool success with it.
Forgiveness is a beautifull word in itself.no matter how hard is is forgive, forgive from your heart.
"Squeeze out all of the love I could get." I loved that line. This was a really nice piece and the way you performed it was on point. I loved the energy and passion you put into this. Well done
Thank you very much!
I have tears in my eyes with your touching poems Mel i love it it just like of taste of spiritual tea
So sad but so real. I like the music. It fits to what you wrote. Thank you for sharing this writing. It gave me inspiration for my next writing.
today i wronged a friend and the bond we had went up in flames, i relate to your poem so much
im sure the one you speak of has been waiting for you to return and everything go back to how it was. friends are friends cant push them away no matter what! stay strong melissa
Tyler Fulwood Thank you for your words. I'll try and keep them in mind
Mel's Thoughts said my whole name lol just be alright. Giving advice to people is who I am and what I enjoy about me
Yeah the reply automatically puts the name unless I erase it. But I understand, I've been in a weird place mentally. Just trying to figure stuff out
Mel's Thoughts well do you thats all you could be and all you ever will be. Yourself
Yeah and that's the tough part. I'll see what happens
Really touch my heart.
Absolutely beautiful❤️
So related to my life, I lost my love and best friend.. I miss her.. I wish, I got a chance to asked for forgiveness.. 🙂
Sometimes life hits you hard💔
Thanks for this heart touching lines.
I have a feeling this message was from my husband he passed away in November we were not on good times when he passed away and I feel this message is coming through thank you for posting this I really needed to hear these words
I'm sorry to hear that I'm trying to win my wife's love back from all the things I have done in the past I really hope I can get everything done before I pass.
You won everything .
I have lost battle in love .
I feel like no matter how much forgiveness someone gives you, you still truly feel lost. I hurt the one I love and I want to make it up to him so badly, but the fact that I hurt him echoes in my brain like a bell that has been rung and is still ringing out despite the blow already been taken to it. I feel like it is eating me up like a buffet of guilt and I don't know why I did it or why I didn't stop myself, but seeing him cry those tears made me hate myself. I don't know what possessed me or what he done to deserve it, god knows that I'm not worth it. I don't deserve his smiles or his tears, he gave me one more chance but it is that I fear. I love him so much but what if that isn't enough, I feel like I've lost him, even though he's tough. I don't want to keep him and be selfish and needy, because he has a heart of gold that should be let go of freely, I don't deserve his touch or his voice or his kindness, how could I be so horrible, turned to the dark side with my blindness.
i feel the same way 😪, do you want to talk about it?, i'm going through the same, if you want to, here is my instagram: cbarn_14
You poetry is like
So warm,real and magical.
Just beautiful crafted.
Love from India.
I have forgiveness in my heart...I feel that my love for this person was used for a punch line in a joke with her friends at social gatherings...authentic love is sometimes not cherished as it should 😢
We’re good ( growth is the best part of this journey )
Great Mel....I just stumbled on this awesome video as i was researching on the topic "Forgiveness". What happened in a moment of weakness cant translate that you are wicked. I hope you get your NEWSTART real fast.
Thank you for checking out my poem video :) It means a lot! I hope so too! Thank you very much!
I'd love to make amends.but you'll have to show me you 2ant 5hat..just that.its up to you completely.
I forgive you and I apologize for my mistakes 💯
Melissa am so grateful to have a name sake like u and am healing from depression coz of u
Grateful for friendships that get better with time. Somebody has forgiven you. God bless you.
Amazing, this was up to mark poem
This makes me cry it touches my heart because am feeling the same way
♥️ Beautiful words✨
Thank you! 🙂
Love it❤💯
I shared this with my friend rn we are arguing and this is my apologies to her
Nice poem ❤😢
thank you so much for this wornderfull words from the❤❤❤
she sent me this when we got in a fight in march, and since then i listen to this thinking she sent it to me again
Just a journey! And I am not alone!
Wonderful words
@0:26 hit me so hard. I lost the love battle but my ego doesn't allow me to speak!
These are all things dt I want to express to someone who luved me so deeply whom I luved & than bcz of my foolishness did wrong n caused him so much pain.m sorry m sorry m sorry..u were the best thing happened in my life u were u r so precious.i was a stupid.i didn't recognise your pure luv towards me in that time.plz pardon me.u r the only true luv in my life.god bless u jas.hope will be together again in this life time n than I will not let u go.❤️my hrt is aching..missing u evryday n praying for u everyday
I like this
Good work
I am unable to ease your pain but I still stand strongly beside you whether you sense me or not, not physically but mentally I propose to be your support now and always
those are very caring words
Damn💐
I love you too my sweetheart Angel KD 😘💘 ❤️......
I have already forgiven you bbcz you are my love😢
Bt You will have to apologise on the place you have given me so much dying pain and many hardships to my heart and soul💘💘💘💘💘💞💞💞💔💔💔
Stop worries about it. Is ok! Love 💕 u!
WHY CAN’T HE FORGIVE ME AM SORRY THAT I BROKE YOUR HEART 𝕒𝕞 𝕤𝕠𝕣𝕣𝕪
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It takes so much inner courage to ask for unconditional forgiveness to admit well maybe in my case who I truly love just wasn't ready for the unconditional love I will always have for her. Yes she and I have had quite a journey and yes no one has hurt me more caused tears of sadness of confusion. Maybe just for the sake of having a new beginning I accept the life lessons I learned in the hardest ways. Yes I sometimes do feel that I be happier struck me again with his arrow of bliss be with someone I have never met but that not my truth and the fact is I love you so much that my only issue is all the time maybe both of us have wasted.
I Hope so !!!
Wonderful
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Happiness and sorrow
Thank u thank u
INCHALLAH
I Don't think that you need to ask for forgiving.I know exactly who is respomsible for all my trouble.They are guilty and they Will see,one day,how big mistakes they have done.Many around us has made plan to do that what they have done.You and I are victim of their evil and our love was damaged.God can rebuild everything what is destroyed.God is with us and love Will winn❤❤❤❤You are my hero❤
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Did, Do and Done👍
God bless you I hope you find love somewhere else 💗
Forgiveness is give and take..not a game..🐎
😢💜💜
i wanna hug you sis 🥺
Yes we will move on as friends
and you don't want any treatment, it is good
Well, apology accepted ❤🌹😌
I know she has forgiven you 😮
Iam sorry... 🥺
Never say forgive me
Just love ❤️
I hold no grudges and have already forgiven, 🙏 may peace be with you.. 🙏
I was, am and will be a well wisher 🙏.
Equally I am sorry: if knowingly or unknowingly I have hurt anyone.. 🙏
I forgive you and I love you
I would like to dedicate this to my mother
The thief will run after seeing us.
I hate my self for not fixing my bad traits sooner
I am sorry
I will never leave you you know me better now ...I love you my sweetheart Angel KD 😘
It's only a disease, and I don't blame anybody, but the doctor taken me alive, and I am thankful to him
A promise...
If you (actually) love him then you will and would or it's manipulation and if that's ficked up...
More than words
It's time to love or pay karma‼️🌻🌙🌻😻
No matter but am not sure how to restart it
♥️🙃 no problem.. atleast and atlast you realise
I sent this as an apology and I hope he forgives me
There is nothing for sorrow forgiveness . where stay love sorrow forgiveness can not enter there . my all love and wishes for you . don't think about the past . Enjoy yourself .
Dear sister ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I forgive you. Don't kill your sleep. Good morning.
I still love you we mean for each other🤗💕💖💓
When people breakdown.. forgiveness I give .. I give it to me tooo. Mercy is we are human and cannot do what we wanted.. in sadness we deepen true honesty from the heart.. facts don’t make honesty.. knowledge of the human heart ❤️ it has more truer than..and or/ speaks loudest truth to us more than facts .. in needing forgiveness you give it better bcuz you yourself are in need of that... Matthew I love you too much .. though I’m hurting... can’t dwell .. you run... I don’t know how you can help it.. yes.. you went with my sisters house and then you told me that you didn’t know them. Break my heart WITH MY SISTER? I’ve had my fill.. killing me.. 🤧.. love no melancholy.. same human mercy grace frees you from the ONLY PERFECT LOVER WHO CAN .. JESUS and each other meekness not weakness.. let’s accept without condemning.. the foe condemning the brethren.. let’s not help that bastard. nasty pain he harbors . God... is careful to guide teach to show goodness too everyone... He loves humanity as family.. we decreases HE MUST INCREASE..& to love us gently as His children.. the way to go .. no fishing it’s done ✅ sea of forgetfulness... protect your heart the wellspring of life... give loving other people. Yourself first.. As you are too in Need. Share well..Truth not factual .. but your deeper.. understanding . Don’t pick apart or clobber/ judgement.. you have no idea what someone is going through.. they’re possibly in greater pain! / possibly within this ...hurting others being in pain.. ily Matthew.. I hope it makes you happy not sad .. and grateful moreover.. I hope to see you soon enough.. I’m tiredness a lot pray .. thanks hugs kindness Kim
Ek is nie vir jou bedoel nie. Jy soek iemand wat agter jou aanloop sodat jy niks nodig het om te doen nie want jy wil niks doen nie. In die eerste plek hou ek nie van n man wat jok nie en as dit my standaarde te hoog stel dan is dit maar so. Ek hou ook nie van n man wat nie opreg is nie en alleen met geleende woorde my probeer beindruk nie, met geen aksies nie. Niks het jy nog ooit bygedra om n vriendskap of n verhouding te bevorder nie. So of jy gaan of bly gaan geen verskil maak nie. Jou ego speel n te groot rol in jou lewe en jou preoriteite is beslis nie by my nie, hoegenaamd nie, jy weet waar dit is. So soek vir jou ander weivelfe wat nie jou en my tyd mors nie. Bly by jou familie en vriende en vriendin, dit is waar jy tuis en gelukkig is. Hierdie bds het nog niks opgelewer nie so stop dit.
Thank you all. I have enough bye.
😔😔😔
Baby, I'm here. Just do the step so we can be together.
I do share with you for the reason I'm alive I'm with you in spirit in your mind forever
.. 🎯🎯❤️❤️❤️😭😭😭
This is me I'm sorry
I dont know how to react to this message. The pain is still fesh. I still love you, but am afraid to show it any more for fear of being shot down again. I would hope we could try again, but that will be up to you. Dont send me messages saying you want me with you or things like that, when you dont really mean them. I was ready to give up my whole world for you. If that isnt love, what is!! Search yourself, find out your true feelings and what you really want. Let me know and we can see about trying again. You know how i feel about you, but it may be a while before i can tell you
I actually understand this for the fear of rejection is a very real one in my life too so much that this fear has held me back from accomplishing so much. Yeah it is also very difficult to say you are in love with someone directly to them especially after so much and so long. Now for myself let me ask you this please? What if you don't have to say anything? Just let yourself be in a position to see me let me hug you whisper what you really need to hear from me as a person so that way if you choose to hug me back or dare I say kiss me that means much more than words just some friendly advice.
If it's real it's worth a try..
Wht ever u say I know everthing
I wish my friend just forgived me what i have done to her i didn’t mean to hurt her 🥺🥺😔😔😢😢.
Now you pay the price.
Ouch
She maybe anrgy at my entire being. But maybe i still hope.. that we'll find each other right? No... forgiveness is hard and not a eazy thing to do.. it takes time... only leaving a scar that may bleed from time to time.. and people move on.. they leave u behind picking ur pieces up tryna fix urself 💯 they forgive you when it beneficial.. human are cruel creatures... like that star in the sky.. she faded into the night without looking back. Breaking my whole being
Leaving me questioning my action.
Questioning love and decent connection.. people are not looking for love these days.. they are looking for help.. because the cost of living is hard. But i finally do forgive her for leaving without reason or telling me why she left..
Idk anymore.. love is hard to find
In life everything is mixed up.
It's okay 😊😘💘
Thank you so much my sweetheart Angel KD 😘💘
I.love.......you
Me also really very sorry for make you jealous in unintentionally
😭
Iedereen maakt fouten
We leren van onze fouten
En we vergeven ze ,ookal verdienen ze het soms niet.
SAD😢 N BAD!😭!"
Me to myself
Your forgiven
Before you even apologize i already forgive you because i no you knew am nothing with you in this life so, don't worry darling am with you always until the end that much i vow on you for now in front of all this strange people. . .
4give me ..I m sorry..i dk what I hv done but sorry ..
What to say...jus I can ask u for forgiveness..you know rest of the things..