"Broken Messiah" | CreepyPasta Storytime
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Damn, this one started at 100 MPH.
Seriously though
Real quick lol 😈😎😇
I said the SAME THING JUST NOW 😂😂😂😂
Broken Messiah sounds like a metal band.
Hold on- making a metal band now.🤭
a rlly bad one
Boutta make death metal band outta that one
Definitely lol
It really does
I want to dedicate this series to my wife Becky. She edits all my work God bless her the constant litany of for the love of God please use a full stop is a source of constant amusement.
Great work, Dale!! Hope to hear more soon!
@@cincylaw14 Thanks should be ready with something else by the end of the month. God knows what lol.
@@daledrakewriter4912 more of this story? (If so, the “God knows what” line was a great pun! haha)
@@cincylaw14 Christianity and God run through most of my stories so a great pun indeed lol.
Is there more to this story????
That random mention of a Land Rover around the 20:30 mark totally broken the tension for me, lol. I kept thinking this was olden-time story stuff, lol.
Yeah I legit thought this was a medieval story until that point
@@imborahey7568 Timeless, sort of.
He mentions a shower in the first 3 minutes though
@@theakspud People could take showers in Ye Olde Olden Tymes.
Same here too
Johnny Masterson is the great, great, great grandson of Jacob from Hell's Creek.
Should have kept that for a big reveal !
This is heller good
ENCORE, ENCORE!!!
Dale your stories are crazy good!
Your stories are fantastic sir, just wanted to express my praises.
The quality of the stories the past few weeks has been fanFUCKINGtastic!! The narration is always amazing but the quality is top notch!
later while johnny is living with his uncle under the staircase
Hagrid: "johnny, your a wizard"
Johnny: "I'm a what?"
werewolf*
Hate is a seed that grows. We will cultivate it together you and I.
They taught me this in law school, too. 😈
@@cincylaw14 Ha, ha brilliant lol.
"Hatred is a seed that's easy to sow
And buckets of blood will help it to grow"
- GWAR "War is all we know"
This is one of the better monster hunter stories, good shit
Facts, doesn’t start with “I hUnT cRyPtIDs”
Quick question, Mr Creepy Pasta...
:U would you do a collab with Dark Somnium? Both of your voice acting is amazing and I think I would die from a collab :3
Omg me too
Aggggrreeeeedddd
Yesssssssirrr
Look up im a criminal profiler story on ds' channel, they already did. But yeah i wish they did way more together.
Um, it's the same person. The voices are identical. It's just a different type of content.
Dale Drake has captivated me recently with how good his stories are. Have not been this impressed with an author since I first discovered Mr_Outlaw. Can't wait for hellbound and hells creek to finish and see if there's an overarching universe here.
Captivated. Nice you have my thanks. More on the way.
This series is a great serious one. Dale Drake is cool. Jack Townsend is great a recommendation I’d make if you like long form content (Tales From The Gas Station, the fourth book is coming out in just a few days). If you’re into serious scares without eccentricities and general extreme weirdness, though, Dale Drake is the way to go!
This is by far the best creepypasta I've ever heard. The narration of this story unmatched and Mr drakes writing is scary and emotional. Long it continues
Holy damn just finished an overnight shift was gonna turn this on to fall asleep to but ended up staying awake through the whole thing didn’t wanna miss what happened next. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories hope to hear more in the future it’s damn good!!!!
The Masterson story is yoga for the mind. Thanks MCP.!
At first thought, I had enough creepypasta narrators. But you honestly blew me away with only a few minutes in. Well done. Can't wait to hear more from you.
Lol he is the og, can't believe people have never heard mcp, he was seriously THE original lol he's the reason it blew up so much and others started narrating
This story is very well written. Im not particularly fond of religious stories but this one isnt preachy like others and was so enjoyable that i was 20 minutes in before i even realized how long id been listening. Very captivating storytelling
Part 2? Loved this!
I can't wait for part 2
You won't be waiting much longer.
Now that was a HELL of a story! Thanks for the great time, Mr. Creepypasta!
All those words you said go together so well! I would like to hear more of these words in the future... Ah, yes, future words...
I'm so excited to hear an hour long creepypasta again
Thanks MCP, and author, I had fun listening to this one.
mcp?
@@cloverassassinscreed sorry, fixed it. I listen to so many different creepypasta channels that I get confused.
The monster on the thumbnail is from Resident Evil Village❤ I love it
You Mr Dale Drake are the Bees knees. I'm back to Re listen for like the 10th time. Awesomeness as always MrCreepy Voice.
Thought village werewolves would be actual wolves not weird things
That kicked more ass than a herd of donkeys!!❤❤❤
This story is sick bro. Shit's scary, action packed, and there's a hint of mystery even though it's about the book of revelations.
did u listen to all these stories starting with the masterson chronicles?
@@docop8926 no but I'll have to check it out.
@@gabemesa3921did u listen yet?
@@docop8926 definitely
@@docop8926
I have to re listen. I keep hearing it in my sleep.
I love all your narrations Mr. Creepypasta. You are my favorite narrator 🖤🖤🖤
I kept thinking this was set like 200 some odd years ago until I kept hearing cell phone. Lol. Damn my brain
THANK YOU for this speedball! Listening to you is the only thing that has kept me from rage quitting at work tonight.
😘😘😘😘
Well in that case my story did its job. Keep pushing through my friend.
@@daledrakewriter4912 Excellent! You have a writing great style. I hope there will be a part two soon♡
@@barkingbunny2928 already written lol
Bro i always love ur stuff, but this one hit different today and it was absolutely awesome
This is absolutely bloody awesome. Wow man. Wow wow wow. I cannot wait for the next installment . I'm off to check out the back story. Thank you, one for doing such an awesome job of it and two, for letting me know of how much more there is to this. Too good , too damn good!
Loving the enthusiasm lol.
One of the best I've heard! Kudos to the writer and narrator!
Right when I heard his last name was Masterson I knew what time it was! Epic😊
Listened to The Masterson Chronicles, Hellbound and now Broken Messiah its been a good night. Master Storytelling Thank You.
I just love doing something, listening to some good sh*t, making me stop and listen, can’t stop listening - must finish story-, man that was a ride and never actually finishing anything!!!!!
Love the longer stories!!!!
I just finished hellbound which I believe is the first one. Absolutely fabulous. I can't wait to get into the rest of the series in chronological order. So I guess what that means is I pretty much have my day planned out thank you for this Mr Dale❤
This is a whole anime plot right here. W story!!!
Can't wait for part 2!!
Mrcreepypasta is hands down the best channel on UA-cam..... My favourite is Tales from the gas station. But I don't recall hearing a bad story on here....
Brilliant, just brilliant!
Thank you Mrcreepypasta.
Who says I wrote one lol
@@daledrakewriter4912 you just did 😜
@@P4T5H4RPify Ha ha you got me it's already done and much bigger in scale than this one.
@@daledrakewriter4912 Bigger!! Yikes it's gonna be good!
@@P4T5H4RPify oh vastly bigger Demons, Angels and everything inbetween lol.
Dang this kid almost reminds of my grand daughter.
Out of the hundreds of no sleep/ Creepypasta's I've listened to I've never hear hot piss running down his leg until now
I am not a member of the no/sleep community and this isn't a no/sleep story.
@@daledrakewriter4912 sorry hard to keep track of story's and channels with autoplay on and I'm in another world painting and while listening to the beautiful world's like yours .
@@lincolnhodge2371 Thank you. I would love to paint or draw but I only seem to have this one skill. I am however very grateful for it.
Oh my god that was the bloodiest werewolf transformation I’ve ever heard. Jesus Christ people love revamping werewolves. And I’m down.
That was a damn good story. Can’t wait for the next part!!!
Excellently done gory violent 💯💯💯
Please do the whole book. This is so good
This story and the narration are crazy good, major chills, I could see it in my head. Can’t wait for the next instalment, thank you so much for sharing!
I need more of this story please! IT is absolutely awesome!💓🖤
Already written.
Hey the thump nail is from resident evil 8
One of my favorite monsters too
We need a sequel for this story :O
Great story and great narration! Love this series!
Finally a long one thanks mcp! I hope there’s More!
Kinda sus when the devil kid grabbed bro by the balls on the boat
JOHNNY MASTERSON!? LIKE THE MASTERSON CHRONICLES. OMGGGGGGG
This is very Bloodborne and I love it
Great upload brother.
This is one of the best stories I’ve ever heard and you’ve narrated perfectly thank you great great great
Wow that's a big compliment thank you.
Thank you ❤
Definitely waiting for this to continue
Farmer Brown: Hey Johnny! When was the first time you heard a naughty word?
Johnny: Well, a man killed my father and did bad things to my mother and used a lot of bad words when he told me what he was going to do with her.
Farmer Brown: 😯
Is this the 1st Episode of a long time series? Because I'm already hooked. Basically are there any earlier episodes?? Fantastic job please give up the good work.
My goodness. I’m not even kidding, DAMN this would make an awesome-ass anime. Again, my mom’s maiden last name used to be Masterson. I think that’s cool as hell, our poor Johnny boy has the same last name as my grandpa.
Maybe I have a long-lost grandpa who fights demons and werwolves?? That’d be awesome.
Mrcreepypasta never disappoints.
Hey! Don’t knock us knitters! I will knit you so hard your socks will fly off!🤪
I'm already fascinated.
Need more from this series I've listened to the 3 stories like 5 times each amazing work
This author is amazing!!!! Hear a few of his narrated now!
Whoa! I hope this is a long series, good stuff 👍
Ohhhhh Myyyy….WOW!!
…and this is only the beginning?!?!!
HOT DAMN! This is gonna be one heck of a good time!! 🙇🏻♀️ 🙌🙇🏻♀️🙌🙇🏻♀️
I ended up watching this series out of order and I feel like it added a very unique story for me.
I know what Johnny will become already. Now I get to watch him grow.
I like it.
In what order are you supposed to watch this series in
@@ssuuhhdduuddee7354 unfortunately I do not remember, however I do believe this is a fine place to start.
Sorry I can't really be of help.
Mrcreepypasta has it in a 5 video playlist, it's in order
I love westerns hells creek is the icing on the cake for me. More please 😁😁😁
Lol the first 20 mins my brain was imagining swords and people clothed in animal furs haha
I was kinda thinking that too! Until he mentioned the Thomas the Train pajamas. 😂
This series and hells creek blew my mind gave me Constantine vibes . This would be great as a Netflix series or something.
i already love this series
Normally not too much into werewolf stuff but I really liked this one. Although, it came to be about much more than werewolves. Really hope to hear more. Soon. Along with Hellbound which is my favorite one that is currently in progress, aside from Lilly Madwhip of course.
I listened to both hellbound and Masterson chronicles complete in order, just don't know what order to listen to these in.
They're not meant to have a listening order, but chronologically it's Masterson, Hellbound, then this one
There has been an outbreak of above average stories right across the Creepy pasta world recently and this story is among them! - without a doubt!
Thank you.
@@daledrakewriter4912 👍👌🇬🇧
7:54 sounds like the author has been reading a clockwork orange.
Need more of this!!
This was fantastic to listen to, looking forward to the rest of the series!
This sounds like a job for… the Doom Slayer.
Yes more Dale Drake been waiting on these! 😁
I hope you enjoyed it Lee. I have another one of these already to go and Just started another Hell's Creek last week.
@@daledrakewriter4912 Hey mate, I finally got to listen to it all uninterrupted. Amazing stuff yet again, really looking forward to how that shit storm is going to play out. 😁 Also this Protagonist hasn't quite yet awed us with his badassary yet. I'll be looking forward to that development. Absolute lad!
@@leeh1395 wait lol.
Love it!!!😁👻💜
Thank you. This is going to be a Novel so was nervous about releasing this prequel.
This story is great so far, I wonder why I didn't get notified about it. I love it, it's like Alexander Anderson's backstory
Loving these stories tbh, when I first got into stories I hated 3rd person tales. But now I kinda like them. Who ever has created these I love you 😂
Thanks. Third person done correctly is always better. A lot of people who write creepypasta are just starting out and first person is easiest for them and suits audio more. I personally don't like it but I have done it more than once for this channel.
Great story!!
So, is this after the Masterson chronicles? I'm so confused on the placement of these..
I would think so as they were set back in the 1800's where as this is more recent. As soon as I heard the boy's surname I stopped it to see if anyone else was thinking if this and the Masterson Chronicles were linked.
Masterson hellbound then this
Nice
Oh snap, that thumbnail is Vârcolac from RE8.
4 catholic priests in a room with a small boy sounds like the beginning of a bad joke
My, my Ⓜ️©️🅿️ !!!
I must say... it's as if you were recalling a memory 🆒 calm & collected yet, grippingly captivating🎭..
And to the author....I gatta say....wow just wow...your a fantastic writer and I'd say you were made for this. Absolutely outstanding and thought provoking! It had everything a great story -must have- to be great.
And I really enjoyed the rawness of the emotional trauma in the story, for the protagonist's (Johnny) & (Father Mathew). lastly but, most important, it was On point. but, kept me guessing. I appreciated the fact that I couldn't predict what was gonna happen next.
Fantastic job, well done. 😎🤟❤️🍀
Thank you very much this is a prequel to a book I am writing also called Broken Messiah.
It is overwhelming the amount of love my stories have been getting lately. You guys will never know the gratitude I feel. For someone like me with absolutely no qualifications who struggled in school and was told how stupid I was for most of my childhood. Reading your kind compliments gives me hope for myself. Lol.
@@cloverassassinscreed That would be awesome lol
"Gonna do ur mum, tf u gonna do about it"
Wow!!!
The title sounds like a metal band from the early 2000s
1980's
@@triplejjj6633 lol or that too!
Make a movie out of these!
When I heard the name masterson I was like oh shit here we go!!!
Great stuff
Awesome bro 💯💪
beautifully brutal, just the way i like it. niiicce
Fuck me, normally I just somewhat enjoy these, but jesus christ, this one is fucking amazing. There are very few of these that I could see becoming a movie, but this one could definitely do it. Absolutely FANTASTIC story.
Should try tales from the gas station. He’s done a narration on this channel it’s honest to god the best.
Great story