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КОМЕНТАРІ • 411

  • @NeoDarkling
    @NeoDarkling 3 роки тому +168

    Damn, this one started at 100 MPH.

  • @jakemerchant950
    @jakemerchant950 3 роки тому +177

    Broken Messiah sounds like a metal band.

  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +627

    I want to dedicate this series to my wife Becky. She edits all my work God bless her the constant litany of for the love of God please use a full stop is a source of constant amusement.

    • @cincylaw14
      @cincylaw14 3 роки тому +23

      Great work, Dale!! Hope to hear more soon!

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +28

      @@cincylaw14 Thanks should be ready with something else by the end of the month. God knows what lol.

    • @cincylaw14
      @cincylaw14 3 роки тому +10

      @@daledrakewriter4912 more of this story? (If so, the “God knows what” line was a great pun! haha)

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +16

      @@cincylaw14 Christianity and God run through most of my stories so a great pun indeed lol.

    • @Legendary____
      @Legendary____ 3 роки тому +6

      Is there more to this story????

  • @nauscakes1868
    @nauscakes1868 3 роки тому +34

    That random mention of a Land Rover around the 20:30 mark totally broken the tension for me, lol. I kept thinking this was olden-time story stuff, lol.

    • @imborahey7568
      @imborahey7568 3 роки тому +4

      Yeah I legit thought this was a medieval story until that point

    • @SiiriCressey
      @SiiriCressey 3 роки тому

      @@imborahey7568 Timeless, sort of.

    • @theakspud
      @theakspud 2 роки тому +5

      He mentions a shower in the first 3 minutes though

    • @SiiriCressey
      @SiiriCressey 2 роки тому +3

      @@theakspud People could take showers in Ye Olde Olden Tymes.

    • @Rup869
      @Rup869 2 роки тому

      Same here too

  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +168

    Johnny Masterson is the great, great, great grandson of Jacob from Hell's Creek.

  • @m.f.8273
    @m.f.8273 3 роки тому +43

    The quality of the stories the past few weeks has been fanFUCKINGtastic!! The narration is always amazing but the quality is top notch!

  • @TheDeath7ofsb
    @TheDeath7ofsb 3 роки тому +37

    later while johnny is living with his uncle under the staircase
    Hagrid: "johnny, your a wizard"
    Johnny: "I'm a what?"

  • @daledrakewriter4912
    @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +36

    Hate is a seed that grows. We will cultivate it together you and I.

    • @cincylaw14
      @cincylaw14 3 роки тому +6

      They taught me this in law school, too. 😈

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +4

      @@cincylaw14 Ha, ha brilliant lol.

    • @Wolffur
      @Wolffur 2 місяці тому

      "Hatred is a seed that's easy to sow
      And buckets of blood will help it to grow"
      - GWAR "War is all we know"

  • @A_Cool_Tunafish
    @A_Cool_Tunafish 3 роки тому +29

    This is one of the better monster hunter stories, good shit

    • @andybaker8775
      @andybaker8775 2 роки тому +3

      Facts, doesn’t start with “I hUnT cRyPtIDs”

  • @TheSkittleKing
    @TheSkittleKing 3 роки тому +109

    Quick question, Mr Creepy Pasta...
    :U would you do a collab with Dark Somnium? Both of your voice acting is amazing and I think I would die from a collab :3

    • @cleverusername2721
      @cleverusername2721 3 роки тому +3

      Omg me too

    • @darkwolf9244
      @darkwolf9244 3 роки тому +2

      Aggggrreeeeedddd

    • @ghostivy7222
      @ghostivy7222 3 роки тому +1

      Yesssssssirrr

    • @borko3fkovixAC
      @borko3fkovixAC 3 роки тому +12

      Look up im a criminal profiler story on ds' channel, they already did. But yeah i wish they did way more together.

    • @MathewSteeleAtheology
      @MathewSteeleAtheology 3 роки тому +1

      Um, it's the same person. The voices are identical. It's just a different type of content.

  • @OerstedFGC
    @OerstedFGC 3 роки тому +76

    Dale Drake has captivated me recently with how good his stories are. Have not been this impressed with an author since I first discovered Mr_Outlaw. Can't wait for hellbound and hells creek to finish and see if there's an overarching universe here.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +10

      Captivated. Nice you have my thanks. More on the way.

    • @GreenAndGoth
      @GreenAndGoth 2 роки тому

      This series is a great serious one. Dale Drake is cool. Jack Townsend is great a recommendation I’d make if you like long form content (Tales From The Gas Station, the fourth book is coming out in just a few days). If you’re into serious scares without eccentricities and general extreme weirdness, though, Dale Drake is the way to go!

  • @ravivirk4674
    @ravivirk4674 2 роки тому +21

    This is by far the best creepypasta I've ever heard. The narration of this story unmatched and Mr drakes writing is scary and emotional. Long it continues

  • @mattmatt4608
    @mattmatt4608 3 роки тому +13

    Holy damn just finished an overnight shift was gonna turn this on to fall asleep to but ended up staying awake through the whole thing didn’t wanna miss what happened next. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories hope to hear more in the future it’s damn good!!!!

  • @THEPAGEBURNER1979
    @THEPAGEBURNER1979 10 місяців тому +2

    The Masterson story is yoga for the mind. Thanks MCP.!

  • @dominikwilliams1703
    @dominikwilliams1703 3 роки тому +4

    At first thought, I had enough creepypasta narrators. But you honestly blew me away with only a few minutes in. Well done. Can't wait to hear more from you.

    • @brocowsci
      @brocowsci 9 місяців тому

      Lol he is the og, can't believe people have never heard mcp, he was seriously THE original lol he's the reason it blew up so much and others started narrating

  • @AleignaJC
    @AleignaJC 10 місяців тому +2

    This story is very well written. Im not particularly fond of religious stories but this one isnt preachy like others and was so enjoyable that i was 20 minutes in before i even realized how long id been listening. Very captivating storytelling

  • @PixiePrincess501
    @PixiePrincess501 3 роки тому +10

    Part 2? Loved this!

  • @fuckedworlds4326
    @fuckedworlds4326 3 роки тому +16

    I can't wait for part 2

  • @KingdomKali
    @KingdomKali 3 роки тому +3

    Now that was a HELL of a story! Thanks for the great time, Mr. Creepypasta!

  • @lilrbigjohn1301
    @lilrbigjohn1301 3 роки тому +4

    All those words you said go together so well! I would like to hear more of these words in the future... Ah, yes, future words...

  • @toastmane1697
    @toastmane1697 3 роки тому +6

    I'm so excited to hear an hour long creepypasta again

  • @pieceless224
    @pieceless224 3 роки тому +6

    Thanks MCP, and author, I had fun listening to this one.

    • @cloverassassinscreed
      @cloverassassinscreed 3 роки тому +1

      mcp?

    • @pieceless224
      @pieceless224 3 роки тому

      @@cloverassassinscreed sorry, fixed it. I listen to so many different creepypasta channels that I get confused.

  • @Digital_Happiness
    @Digital_Happiness 3 роки тому +5

    The monster on the thumbnail is from Resident Evil Village❤ I love it

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby Рік тому +1

    You Mr Dale Drake are the Bees knees. I'm back to Re listen for like the 10th time. Awesomeness as always MrCreepy Voice.

  • @greatgallade
    @greatgallade 3 роки тому +10

    Thought village werewolves would be actual wolves not weird things

  • @KingBaboonTarantula
    @KingBaboonTarantula 11 місяців тому +1

    That kicked more ass than a herd of donkeys!!❤❤❤

  • @gabemesa3921
    @gabemesa3921 3 роки тому +12

    This story is sick bro. Shit's scary, action packed, and there's a hint of mystery even though it's about the book of revelations.

    • @docop8926
      @docop8926 Рік тому +2

      did u listen to all these stories starting with the masterson chronicles?

    • @gabemesa3921
      @gabemesa3921 Рік тому

      @@docop8926 no but I'll have to check it out.

    • @docop8926
      @docop8926 7 місяців тому +1

      ​@@gabemesa3921did u listen yet?

    • @gabemesa3921
      @gabemesa3921 7 місяців тому

      @@docop8926 definitely

    • @gabemesa3921
      @gabemesa3921 7 місяців тому

      @@docop8926
      I have to re listen. I keep hearing it in my sleep.

  • @melissaansell9454
    @melissaansell9454 3 роки тому +2

    I love all your narrations Mr. Creepypasta. You are my favorite narrator 🖤🖤🖤

  • @C1nderfire
    @C1nderfire 3 роки тому +4

    I kept thinking this was set like 200 some odd years ago until I kept hearing cell phone. Lol. Damn my brain

  • @barkingbunny2928
    @barkingbunny2928 3 роки тому +2

    THANK YOU for this speedball! Listening to you is the only thing that has kept me from rage quitting at work tonight.
    😘😘😘😘

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +2

      Well in that case my story did its job. Keep pushing through my friend.

    • @barkingbunny2928
      @barkingbunny2928 3 роки тому +1

      @@daledrakewriter4912 Excellent! You have a writing great style. I hope there will be a part two soon♡

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому

      @@barkingbunny2928 already written lol

  • @charlesmcpe8464
    @charlesmcpe8464 3 роки тому +3

    Bro i always love ur stuff, but this one hit different today and it was absolutely awesome

  • @leekendall7155
    @leekendall7155 3 роки тому +2

    This is absolutely bloody awesome. Wow man. Wow wow wow. I cannot wait for the next installment . I'm off to check out the back story. Thank you, one for doing such an awesome job of it and two, for letting me know of how much more there is to this. Too good , too damn good!

  • @bertiebaxter4709
    @bertiebaxter4709 2 роки тому +2

    One of the best I've heard! Kudos to the writer and narrator!

  • @JoyBoy0530
    @JoyBoy0530 6 місяців тому +1

    Right when I heard his last name was Masterson I knew what time it was! Epic😊

  • @williamstanley866
    @williamstanley866 Рік тому +1

    Listened to The Masterson Chronicles, Hellbound and now Broken Messiah its been a good night. Master Storytelling Thank You.

  • @johnarade
    @johnarade 3 роки тому +2

    I just love doing something, listening to some good sh*t, making me stop and listen, can’t stop listening - must finish story-, man that was a ride and never actually finishing anything!!!!!
    Love the longer stories!!!!

  • @Scottymo-pj7iw
    @Scottymo-pj7iw 21 день тому +1

    I just finished hellbound which I believe is the first one. Absolutely fabulous. I can't wait to get into the rest of the series in chronological order. So I guess what that means is I pretty much have my day planned out thank you for this Mr Dale❤

  • @Some_Shmuck
    @Some_Shmuck Рік тому +1

    This is a whole anime plot right here. W story!!!

  • @P4T5H4RPify
    @P4T5H4RPify 3 роки тому +1

    Can't wait for part 2!!
    Mrcreepypasta is hands down the best channel on UA-cam..... My favourite is Tales from the gas station. But I don't recall hearing a bad story on here....
    Brilliant, just brilliant!
    Thank you Mrcreepypasta.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      Who says I wrote one lol

    • @P4T5H4RPify
      @P4T5H4RPify 3 роки тому

      @@daledrakewriter4912 you just did 😜

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      @@P4T5H4RPify Ha ha you got me it's already done and much bigger in scale than this one.

    • @P4T5H4RPify
      @P4T5H4RPify 3 роки тому

      @@daledrakewriter4912 Bigger!! Yikes it's gonna be good!

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      @@P4T5H4RPify oh vastly bigger Demons, Angels and everything inbetween lol.

  • @diannshowers9129
    @diannshowers9129 Рік тому +1

    Dang this kid almost reminds of my grand daughter.

  • @lincolnhodge2371
    @lincolnhodge2371 Рік тому +1

    Out of the hundreds of no sleep/ Creepypasta's I've listened to I've never hear hot piss running down his leg until now

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Рік тому

      I am not a member of the no/sleep community and this isn't a no/sleep story.

    • @lincolnhodge2371
      @lincolnhodge2371 Рік тому +1

      @@daledrakewriter4912 sorry hard to keep track of story's and channels with autoplay on and I'm in another world painting and while listening to the beautiful world's like yours .

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 Рік тому

      ​@@lincolnhodge2371 Thank you. I would love to paint or draw but I only seem to have this one skill. I am however very grateful for it.

  • @umbramlectorem3999
    @umbramlectorem3999 2 роки тому +1

    Oh my god that was the bloodiest werewolf transformation I’ve ever heard. Jesus Christ people love revamping werewolves. And I’m down.

  • @damienhughes7228
    @damienhughes7228 3 роки тому +2

    That was a damn good story. Can’t wait for the next part!!!

  • @geebee6395
    @geebee6395 Рік тому +1

    Excellently done gory violent 💯💯💯

  • @sageh.5228
    @sageh.5228 3 роки тому +3

    Please do the whole book. This is so good

  • @michelechadwick3808
    @michelechadwick3808 3 роки тому +4

    This story and the narration are crazy good, major chills, I could see it in my head. Can’t wait for the next instalment, thank you so much for sharing!

  • @jamiebaker7066
    @jamiebaker7066 3 роки тому +2

    I need more of this story please! IT is absolutely awesome!💓🖤

  • @glocktaivious8825
    @glocktaivious8825 3 роки тому +6

    Hey the thump nail is from resident evil 8

  • @PaulosTheGamer
    @PaulosTheGamer Рік тому +3

    We need a sequel for this story :O

  • @jimkimbrell4878
    @jimkimbrell4878 Рік тому +1

    Great story and great narration! Love this series!

  • @Legendary____
    @Legendary____ 3 роки тому +1

    Finally a long one thanks mcp! I hope there’s More!

  • @dahomie8206
    @dahomie8206 8 місяців тому +1

    Kinda sus when the devil kid grabbed bro by the balls on the boat

  • @maxbyrne8062
    @maxbyrne8062 Рік тому +1

    JOHNNY MASTERSON!? LIKE THE MASTERSON CHRONICLES. OMGGGGGGG

  • @Nosraceroom
    @Nosraceroom 3 роки тому +3

    This is very Bloodborne and I love it

  • @joeybowen2347
    @joeybowen2347 3 роки тому +2

    Great upload brother.

  • @richarddreyer9310
    @richarddreyer9310 3 роки тому +1

    This is one of the best stories I’ve ever heard and you’ve narrated perfectly thank you great great great

  • @rewatteefroimchuk8589
    @rewatteefroimchuk8589 Рік тому +1

    Thank you ❤

  • @bromptoncocktail6788
    @bromptoncocktail6788 3 роки тому +1

    Definitely waiting for this to continue

  • @randomosity6878
    @randomosity6878 3 роки тому +2

    Farmer Brown: Hey Johnny! When was the first time you heard a naughty word?
    Johnny: Well, a man killed my father and did bad things to my mother and used a lot of bad words when he told me what he was going to do with her.
    Farmer Brown: 😯

  • @blackwaterna8799
    @blackwaterna8799 3 роки тому +2

    Is this the 1st Episode of a long time series? Because I'm already hooked. Basically are there any earlier episodes?? Fantastic job please give up the good work.

  • @lavenderotaku2481
    @lavenderotaku2481 3 роки тому +3

    My goodness. I’m not even kidding, DAMN this would make an awesome-ass anime. Again, my mom’s maiden last name used to be Masterson. I think that’s cool as hell, our poor Johnny boy has the same last name as my grandpa.
    Maybe I have a long-lost grandpa who fights demons and werwolves?? That’d be awesome.

  • @paulshreve3792
    @paulshreve3792 3 роки тому +1

    Mrcreepypasta never disappoints.

  • @melvis0803
    @melvis0803 3 роки тому +2

    Hey! Don’t knock us knitters! I will knit you so hard your socks will fly off!🤪

  • @friendlycryptid6797
    @friendlycryptid6797 3 роки тому +2

    I'm already fascinated.

  • @travisweaver3959
    @travisweaver3959 2 роки тому +1

    Need more from this series I've listened to the 3 stories like 5 times each amazing work

  • @morriganravenmist5539
    @morriganravenmist5539 2 роки тому +2

    This author is amazing!!!! Hear a few of his narrated now!

  • @piggiebabe
    @piggiebabe 3 роки тому +1

    Whoa! I hope this is a long series, good stuff 👍

  • @H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ
    @H0RR0R_HANG0VERZ Рік тому +1

    Ohhhhh Myyyy….WOW!!
    …and this is only the beginning?!?!!
    HOT DAMN! This is gonna be one heck of a good time!! 🙇🏻‍♀️ 🙌🙇🏻‍♀️🙌🙇🏻‍♀️

  • @IsaacClodfelter
    @IsaacClodfelter 3 роки тому +11

    I ended up watching this series out of order and I feel like it added a very unique story for me.
    I know what Johnny will become already. Now I get to watch him grow.
    I like it.

    • @ssuuhhdduuddee7354
      @ssuuhhdduuddee7354 Рік тому

      In what order are you supposed to watch this series in

    • @IsaacClodfelter
      @IsaacClodfelter Рік тому

      @@ssuuhhdduuddee7354 unfortunately I do not remember, however I do believe this is a fine place to start.
      Sorry I can't really be of help.

    • @xpyroxassasinx
      @xpyroxassasinx 9 місяців тому +1

      Mrcreepypasta has it in a 5 video playlist, it's in order

  • @houstonshannon7661
    @houstonshannon7661 3 роки тому +1

    I love westerns hells creek is the icing on the cake for me. More please 😁😁😁

  • @marksullivan6319
    @marksullivan6319 3 роки тому

    Lol the first 20 mins my brain was imagining swords and people clothed in animal furs haha

    • @danielj5481
      @danielj5481 3 роки тому

      I was kinda thinking that too! Until he mentioned the Thomas the Train pajamas. 😂

  • @draztiktunez7104
    @draztiktunez7104 3 роки тому +1

    This series and hells creek blew my mind gave me Constantine vibes . This would be great as a Netflix series or something.

  • @SlReTTV
    @SlReTTV 3 роки тому +1

    i already love this series

  • @winstonwins1096
    @winstonwins1096 3 роки тому +2

    Normally not too much into werewolf stuff but I really liked this one. Although, it came to be about much more than werewolves. Really hope to hear more. Soon. Along with Hellbound which is my favorite one that is currently in progress, aside from Lilly Madwhip of course.

  • @kentworch
    @kentworch Рік тому +2

    I listened to both hellbound and Masterson chronicles complete in order, just don't know what order to listen to these in.

    • @shadic971
      @shadic971 Рік тому +1

      They're not meant to have a listening order, but chronologically it's Masterson, Hellbound, then this one

  • @paulross225
    @paulross225 3 роки тому

    There has been an outbreak of above average stories right across the Creepy pasta world recently and this story is among them! - without a doubt!

  • @irony373
    @irony373 2 роки тому

    7:54 sounds like the author has been reading a clockwork orange.

  • @modest8927
    @modest8927 3 роки тому +1

    Need more of this!!

  • @joshquivey6990
    @joshquivey6990 3 роки тому

    This was fantastic to listen to, looking forward to the rest of the series!

  • @EndersonOmega25000
    @EndersonOmega25000 Рік тому +1

    This sounds like a job for… the Doom Slayer.

  • @leeh1395
    @leeh1395 3 роки тому +1

    Yes more Dale Drake been waiting on these! 😁

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      I hope you enjoyed it Lee. I have another one of these already to go and Just started another Hell's Creek last week.

    • @leeh1395
      @leeh1395 3 роки тому

      @@daledrakewriter4912 Hey mate, I finally got to listen to it all uninterrupted. Amazing stuff yet again, really looking forward to how that shit storm is going to play out. 😁 Also this Protagonist hasn't quite yet awed us with his badassary yet. I'll be looking forward to that development. Absolute lad!

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому

      @@leeh1395 wait lol.

  • @Wendy-ou1jz
    @Wendy-ou1jz 3 роки тому +2

    Love it!!!😁👻💜

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      Thank you. This is going to be a Novel so was nervous about releasing this prequel.

  • @hiromitsumoonblossom8682
    @hiromitsumoonblossom8682 3 роки тому

    This story is great so far, I wonder why I didn't get notified about it. I love it, it's like Alexander Anderson's backstory

  • @jordandabbs9805
    @jordandabbs9805 3 роки тому

    Loving these stories tbh, when I first got into stories I hated 3rd person tales. But now I kinda like them. Who ever has created these I love you 😂

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      Thanks. Third person done correctly is always better. A lot of people who write creepypasta are just starting out and first person is easiest for them and suits audio more. I personally don't like it but I have done it more than once for this channel.

  • @dawnhughes1707
    @dawnhughes1707 3 роки тому +1

    Great story!!

  • @armaslanney8854
    @armaslanney8854 2 роки тому +3

    So, is this after the Masterson chronicles? I'm so confused on the placement of these..

    • @user-PuppyDan
      @user-PuppyDan Рік тому

      I would think so as they were set back in the 1800's where as this is more recent. As soon as I heard the boy's surname I stopped it to see if anyone else was thinking if this and the Masterson Chronicles were linked.

    • @garrettsegura7849
      @garrettsegura7849 Рік тому

      Masterson hellbound then this

  • @Darkshade_01
    @Darkshade_01 3 роки тому +2

    Nice

  • @amirgarcia547
    @amirgarcia547 3 роки тому +2

    Oh snap, that thumbnail is Vârcolac from RE8.

  • @brotherjew1
    @brotherjew1 2 роки тому

    4 catholic priests in a room with a small boy sounds like the beginning of a bad joke

  • @cloverassassinscreed
    @cloverassassinscreed 3 роки тому +3

    My, my Ⓜ️©️🅿️ !!!
    I must say... it's as if you were recalling a memory 🆒 calm & collected yet, grippingly captivating🎭..
    And to the author....I gatta say....wow just wow...your a fantastic writer and I'd say you were made for this. Absolutely outstanding and thought provoking! It had everything a great story -must have- to be great.
    And I really enjoyed the rawness of the emotional trauma in the story, for the protagonist's (Johnny) & (Father Mathew). lastly but, most important, it was On point. but, kept me guessing. I appreciated the fact that I couldn't predict what was gonna happen next.
    Fantastic job, well done. 😎🤟❤️🍀

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      Thank you very much this is a prequel to a book I am writing also called Broken Messiah.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      It is overwhelming the amount of love my stories have been getting lately. You guys will never know the gratitude I feel. For someone like me with absolutely no qualifications who struggled in school and was told how stupid I was for most of my childhood. Reading your kind compliments gives me hope for myself. Lol.

    • @daledrakewriter4912
      @daledrakewriter4912 3 роки тому +1

      @@cloverassassinscreed That would be awesome lol

  • @theoverlander4579
    @theoverlander4579 3 роки тому +1

    "Gonna do ur mum, tf u gonna do about it"

  • @carola7893
    @carola7893 3 роки тому +3

    Wow!!!

  • @horchatabomb5232
    @horchatabomb5232 3 роки тому +3

    The title sounds like a metal band from the early 2000s

  • @nickdalton948
    @nickdalton948 3 роки тому +1

    Make a movie out of these!

  • @zeekary
    @zeekary 9 місяців тому +1

    When I heard the name masterson I was like oh shit here we go!!!

  • @megazega5017
    @megazega5017 2 роки тому

    Great stuff

  • @alvinoclincy1809
    @alvinoclincy1809 3 роки тому +1

    Awesome bro 💯💪

  • @welcometoluxaria5363
    @welcometoluxaria5363 3 роки тому +1

    beautifully brutal, just the way i like it. niiicce

  • @jakobbailey
    @jakobbailey 3 роки тому +1

    Fuck me, normally I just somewhat enjoy these, but jesus christ, this one is fucking amazing. There are very few of these that I could see becoming a movie, but this one could definitely do it. Absolutely FANTASTIC story.

    • @monkeyd6716
      @monkeyd6716 3 роки тому

      Should try tales from the gas station. He’s done a narration on this channel it’s honest to god the best.

  • @AG-en5y
    @AG-en5y 3 роки тому +1

    Great story