Damsel In Distress Part 1. Warrior Princess Sequel (Marichat. Marinette in danger) Miraculous Fanfic

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  • Cat was beyond happy, his princess loved him... his princess knew he was Adrien and now they could be together. But as he bid goodnight to his love after a rollacoaster of a day, he hadn't realised that someone else was waiting... someone else had been watching how much Marinette had meant to Cat Noir and what he might be willing to do in aid to save her.
    This is an epic sequel to Warrior Princess and picks up directly after the last scene in the previous story. Check out Warrior Princess here first: • Warrior Princess. Mari...
    Background music is provided by Tune Tank and can be found at www.tunetank.com
    Massive shout out to Crusanite over on Tumblr for the use of this gorgeous art work in the thumbnail.
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    This oneshot is written by: Jheqia over on Deviant Art and Archive of our own; part of Jheqia Wednesday. Go and send loads of love to Jheqia and check out her other pieces of writing:
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    Instagram: Dawn Chorus Writes: / dawnchoruswrites
    You can get an advance copy of this over on my Patreon page:
    www.patreon.com/dawnchoruswrites
    Thank you and if you enjoyed, don't forget to support by hitting the like button, subscribe and comment down below. I love to read through what you think and join the conversation.
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    Instagram: Dawn Chorus Writes: / dawnchoruswrites
    Thank you and if you enjoyed, don't forget to support by hitting the like button, subscribe and comment down below. I love to read through what you think and join the conversation.

КОМЕНТАРІ • 125

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 роки тому +8

    Omgg this is...wowow
    "I left around midnight"...wow Adrien...so subtle...I'm dying

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 роки тому +12

    This is insane...lk wow, the fact that mr. hawkie straight up had ladybug n his hands...and missed the chance 👏lk wow

  • @sophiaengstrom7907
    @sophiaengstrom7907 2 роки тому +28

    Dude- there’s nothing I wouldn’t give to see this story animated!!!

    • @simpllyfin3702
      @simpllyfin3702 2 роки тому +5

      GIRL SAME T-T, Dawn Jheqia for real if there is anything we can do to make yalls storys animated or like actully published we would LITERLLY DO ANYTHING IN OUR POWER

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +4

      @@simpllyfin3702 Well, the problem with getting these publish is that we don't own the rights to the characters. Companies like Zag allow stuff like this because 1. they know they really can't stop people from doing it, and 2. because any money we might make only increases interest in their own version and gets them more money in the long run. So publishing them as books wouldn't work. Maybe, someday, we can find an animator to work with us on a story, but that takes a lot of time and/or money. Time which I think you guys would rather we spend writing more stories!
      Either way, your enthusiasm is what keeps us writing and creating! You are an important part of this too!😊

    • @corinacardenas3305
      @corinacardenas3305 Рік тому +2

      same dude

    • @sethcarlow8363
      @sethcarlow8363 3 місяці тому +1

      same bro.

  • @sargok29
    @sargok29 2 роки тому +11

    This is really insane writing. Wow. Gives vibes of first kiss. But i guess this post season 4. Cant wait enough to read what happens next.

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +1

      Well, I wrote First Kiss as well and it made sense for her to be kidnapped and held for ransom once Shadowmoth knew about her and Cat, so I reused the concept. Just this time it is going to be more intense... and epic!

  • @valeriarodriguez-cadillavi6841
    @valeriarodriguez-cadillavi6841 2 роки тому +8

    Oh my god, how can you leave us like this??????!!!!! What an amazing story! I really loved the darker tone and omg I can’t wait for the next part.

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 роки тому +7

    I'm being serious I just screamed when I saw this

  • @axuatix
    @axuatix 2 роки тому +12

    OMG I JUST READ THIS LIKE A MONTH AGO, I'M SO EXCITED!!!!!!!!!!
    edit: just read the tag "marinette in danger" and HOLY CRAP I'M SO SO SO EXCITED!!!!

  • @sikkander6341
    @sikkander6341 2 роки тому +10

    I am so excited 😆😀😘😍💓

  • @kitabootforever
    @kitabootforever 2 роки тому +14

    Dawn.....Jheqia........whew. Everyone needs to join patreon to get these gems early because they are absolutely worth it!! I hope I don't have any clients while this is live so I can wig out in the premiere. It's so good!! If I could like this more than once I would!

    • @sandicliff1172
      @sandicliff1172 2 роки тому +1

      The premiers are in Patreon! Cool!

    • @kitabootforever
      @kitabootforever 2 роки тому +1

      @@jheqiawrites4985 really? I didn't realize! Thank you!

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +2

      @@kitabootforever You're welcome!

  • @meganrosenberg6966
    @meganrosenberg6966 2 роки тому +6

    I can’t wait for part 2

  • @dbmoomoo1838
    @dbmoomoo1838 Рік тому +7

    This is epic....no words....the details... the emotions.... I'm really speechless 😭❤️
    This has definitely taken my top favorite dawn fanfic spot...what a masterpiece! 👏👏👏

  • @lupine4001
    @lupine4001 2 роки тому +6

    This is going to be awesome

  • @donnasutton5417
    @donnasutton5417 2 роки тому +4

    I don't want to wait for marichat Mondays for the conclusion. It is too good to wait for.

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +2

      Well, it took me all last week to finish part 2, I got it done Saturday evening, and it came out just under 11k words, so that puts it over an hour of narration. Dawn wants to get everything right for you guys so it is taking time. But I promise you an epic ending!

  • @sethcarlow8363
    @sethcarlow8363 3 місяці тому +1

    loved part one and looking forward to part two,amazing,awesome,wow,epic,cool,great,excellent,wonderful,fun-fun-fun.

  • @VilmaSantos-pd5hl
    @VilmaSantos-pd5hl 2 роки тому +5

    I love it!! It got dark and serious fast!! it's so exciting!! I wonder what will happen next!!

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      Well, when you are faced with writing a sequel to something you expected to be a one-shot, you kind of have to work with what you already did. I couldn't just leave them safe, sound, and snuggling after Marinette lit into Shadowmoth, could I? "Touch one hair on MY Cat's head"? Talk about waving a red flag in front of a bull! So yeah, it kind of went down hill pretty quickly. But there will be a happy ending, never fear!

  • @dawnhultgren983
    @dawnhultgren983 2 роки тому +3

    All I can say is WOW, just wow. Looking forward to part 2

  • @MS-vu6fh
    @MS-vu6fh 2 роки тому +8

    Im so excited for this one! The cover is so eye catching 😍😍😆💞

  • @johnam1234
    @johnam1234 2 роки тому +4

    Hopefully all the classmate help even Queen Bee. I hope to get to read the next chapter soon

  • @zanettamodeste1321
    @zanettamodeste1321 2 роки тому +1

    The emotional rollercoaster was crazy! and it hasn't even ended yet!

  • @Princesstwilight17
    @Princesstwilight17 2 роки тому +9

    I can’t wait to see it 😬🤩😌

  • @oliviawilson2561
    @oliviawilson2561 2 роки тому +4

    dawn’s content never fail to impress me ☺️

  • @robertthompson3447
    @robertthompson3447 2 роки тому +2

    I'm still kind of new to your channel, I'm not used to stories that haven't been completed yet 😍🤞🥰 I just assumed part 2 was already ready for me 😭😭😭.

  • @Will-mk5pj
    @Will-mk5pj 2 роки тому +7

    That was amazing! The background music, the voices! The emotion!!!

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      I know! I was going mental when I heard it the first time! Dawn did such an amazing job!

  • @saramichael3837
    @saramichael3837 2 роки тому +8

    This was so cute aaaa! I can't wait for part 2! 😃😃😃 Also Dawn and Jheqia, I've noticed that two fanfiction series called, 'Seven Stages of Life' and 'Secrets Under the Moon' were never finished. I was just wondering if they will ever be completed, cause i actually really liked them!

  • @strwbrry112
    @strwbrry112 2 роки тому +6

    AAHHHH!!!! this is crazy!!! this is by far my favorite series so far ahhh! thank you for this!! ❤️❤️❤️

  • @simpllyfin3702
    @simpllyfin3702 2 роки тому +2

    OK OK OK OK.... GURL FIRST YOU POST THE AMZING FIC YESTERDAY THAT IS MY NEW FAV AND NOW THIS SEQUAL TO YOUR OTHER ONE OF MEH FAVS, HOW ARE YOU AND JHEIQA SO AMAZING! LIKE FR! YALL SOULD DO THIS PROFESSINALLY YALL WOULD BE BILLIONAIRES! i feel blessd to be seeing this thank yall sm yall are amazing

  • @veratomlinson2199
    @veratomlinson2199 2 роки тому +2

    I am literally shaking from excitement for part 2!!!!!!!

  • @tikiloves7609
    @tikiloves7609 2 роки тому +19

    So upset I missed this premiere!!! So many emotions right now and I definitely can't wait for part 2!!! awesome job Jheqia and Dawn!!! 😡😬😭❤️🤯 Waiting patiently for part 2❤️

  • @cdraeger4106
    @cdraeger4106 2 роки тому +7

    OMG! I have never been so excited for another one to come out! 🤩 You did so amazing Dawn! ❤️❤️❤️

  • @theschmi5021
    @theschmi5021 2 роки тому +7

    Jheqia did an amazing job! Dawn did amazing narration! It's such a rollercoaster of a story! I am not lying when I winced along with Marinette at the removal of the blind fold thinking she would wince at light, but she was wincing at it rubbing her cut (Plot Twist I guess?) Also, "Nino and Alya jumped at his scream." Same so excellent voice acting/narration for that part! I actually jumped. Lol! I will certainly be rewatching this another 20 times as I have done with all the videos here. :)

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +1

      Thank you so much! It always makes my day when people notice the little details in my stories. Dawn did such an amazing job on the narration! I was torn between squealing like a total fangirl and crying over how good she made my story sound!

  • @myladynoir00
    @myladynoir00 Рік тому +1

    "His smile was so wide it hurt"
    ...and it was at that moment that I realized my face hurt from smiling so hard 😅🥰

  • @johnam1234
    @johnam1234 2 роки тому +5

    I really enjoyed the story and can’t wait for the next part

  • @maryshashaw2895
    @maryshashaw2895 2 роки тому +2

    That was amazing I’m scared she’s going to give in and be akkumatized but I love akkumatized mari I nearly thought adrien was going to be akkumatized untill plagg calmed him down so much going on I’m screaming

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      To akumatize Marinette or not to akumatize Marinette? That is the question...🤔

  • @kasi0109
    @kasi0109 2 роки тому +10

    This is absolutely amazing...I'm speechless...👏👏👏👏 Can't wait for next one 🙈 You both are amazing ❤️

  • @nikisha1791
    @nikisha1791 2 роки тому +1

    Wow! What a cliffhanger. I hope I will be able to sleep tonight after this.😱😱

  • @AllyBubblesSpriggs
    @AllyBubblesSpriggs 2 роки тому +3

    SIGH!!!! I MISSED IT!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
    I'LL MAKE PART 2!!!!!!

  • @yooyoyy1044
    @yooyoyy1044 2 роки тому +2

    Wooaaah !!! Amazing 👏 🙀 .
    Can't wait for part 2

  • @eleishadolbey6889
    @eleishadolbey6889 2 роки тому +1

    Ooohhh!!! Looking forward to this one but it'll have to be my post study reward for the day.... if I listen now I'll never get anything done, going to have to find another story I've listened to before to put on in the background instead!
    Hmmm.. sweet treats? Romeo and his marinette? Home? As your heart betrays you? 🤔 what am I in the mood for today....

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 роки тому

      Oh man I felt that sigh at the end..... 😅
      Sooner please!!!!!!!!!!
      Definitely an epic instalment!!!
      Gabe is about to get his butt kicked!!!

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +1

      @@eleishadolbey6889 Oh yes! He will!

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 роки тому +4

    As soon as I here part 2 I sound lk a 2 yr old getting candy
    Nino legit called him a giant butterfly 🦋

  • @pancakeswithjay3584
    @pancakeswithjay3584 2 роки тому +1

    Him this is amazingggg. WOW, I was wondering though if pt2 would be comming any time soon?

  • @georgejcox9241
    @georgejcox9241 2 роки тому +1

    CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY????????? Why have you done A Shadowmooth on us. Why did you done it ? And why did you hit us with The Gut Punch 👊 from HELL!!!! Right in the feels.

  • @christiewells2140
    @christiewells2140 2 роки тому +1

    Oh so good!! I love how you narrate this story!!

  • @mladysamantha1332
    @mladysamantha1332 2 роки тому +1

    Oh my goodness! This was insane I’m so overwhelmed aha.

  • @sheripshannon
    @sheripshannon 2 роки тому +2

    This is EEEEEEEPPPPPPIIIIICCCC!!!!!! Much love ❤️

  • @leavemealone6380
    @leavemealone6380 2 роки тому +1

    I’m not trying to rush you but I really need to see a part two to this ASAP

  • @katherinesaenz455
    @katherinesaenz455 2 роки тому +1

    Dang it... Too many emotions and thoughts on my head right now 😭

  • @MariaRodriguez-on5sf
    @MariaRodriguez-on5sf 2 роки тому +2

    This good it’s so intense love it !!

  • @Honor-tt3hs
    @Honor-tt3hs 3 місяці тому

    What a comic I have ever listened to I love it ❤

  • @karinenoelle
    @karinenoelle 2 роки тому +1

    I need the next part, this is so good omg

  • @IceClancy-jc2co
    @IceClancy-jc2co 5 місяців тому +1

    I will now boost the algorithm by casting a spell… ALGORITHILUMOFUCIDOR EXPELLACCIOMAGNIDUCTOR!
    (The longer and more complicated the spell is, the stronger it is! :D)

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 роки тому +4

    Just realized it was sequel

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 роки тому +2

    I finally reach on time😅👋🏾👋🏾

  • @KodyaxDerschrecken
    @KodyaxDerschrecken 2 роки тому +1

    Adrien is pissed and that's not a good thing. Daddy has no idea of the monster he created. Gabriel is going to regret his actions.

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      Oh, you better believe it! Shadowdaddy is going down!

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 роки тому +2

    Oh crap Hawkmoore found out where she lives😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 роки тому +3

    Hurry up with part twoooooooooo😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      Part two is complete, but it is just shy of 11k words, so it is going to be a doozy and its taking Dawn time to get it perfect for you guys!

  • @diamondradio3333
    @diamondradio3333 2 роки тому +2

    this is epic!

  • @sandicliff1172
    @sandicliff1172 2 роки тому +1

    I can't wait!!!!!

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 роки тому +2

    Apple tax would be useful so at least Marinette parents know where she is when she goes missing in the situation and get the police involved and take down hawk Daddy aggress down I wouldn’t mind seeing Adrian kitty noir cataclysm his father all he wanted was his father’s love but no

  • @robertthompson3447
    @robertthompson3447 2 роки тому +1

    Part 2! ... Part 2! .... Part 2!.... 🤞
    Please 🥺!

  • @rori..2191
    @rori..2191 2 роки тому +1

    Immediately went to watch this after finishing Warrior Princess- I loved it so much
    I've always hated Gabriel so much- always, but ESPECIALLY after Chat Blanc
    And even though this is just a fanfiction and not actually real in the show, it makes me hate him way more

  • @mariskalefeber
    @mariskalefeber 2 роки тому +1

    This is epic

  • @rondastone7572
    @rondastone7572 2 роки тому +1

    Love it ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

  • @potatokitty5270
    @potatokitty5270 2 роки тому +5

    How many parts are their🙃🙃

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 роки тому +1

    Where is the superheroes from New York when you need them😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

  • @marichat99
    @marichat99 2 роки тому +1

    Love it

  • @liannoakes248
    @liannoakes248 10 місяців тому

    I really love 😂so very much it is the best èveŕ I love all of them so much

  • @jmvanzalinge5023
    @jmvanzalinge5023 2 роки тому +1

    Aaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!! 😫😫😫
    And can we just say how gross it is that Gabriel stuck around for hours watching them make out, waiting for Cat to leave Marinette? 🤮

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      He invades the minds of hurting teenagers and crying infants and that grosses you out? 😅

    • @jmvanzalinge5023
      @jmvanzalinge5023 2 роки тому

      @@jheqiawrites4985 well, I always expect a level of evilness from a villain but creepiness isn't something I always expect. But when you're not right in the mind, it can show in all different kinds of ways.

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому

      @@jmvanzalinge5023 True enough!

  • @mamabear2649
    @mamabear2649 Рік тому

    Omg this was sooo good!!

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 роки тому +3

    Noooooooooo its...nu uh I can't a waut

  • @stelerElk
    @stelerElk 2 роки тому +3

    I WILL KILL THAT DAMNED GABRIEL AGRESTE/HAWKMOTH/SHADOWMOTH/MONARCH WITH MY OWN TWO HANDS!!

  • @millieloves2
    @millieloves2 2 роки тому +1

    please more

  • @rosilvapeterson262
    @rosilvapeterson262 Рік тому

    ❤❤😅this is epic

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 роки тому +1

    Could’ve been worse his father could’ve came Etai’s shadow from sonic the hedgehog oh good luck controlling that guy haematite victim😈🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣

  • @joybowe1956
    @joybowe1956 2 роки тому +2

    sugar and cookies no just nooooooooooooooooooo

  • @SweetSpotPA
    @SweetSpotPA 2 роки тому +1

    NO. NOT TRUTH BEHIND RHE LIES AND DAMSEL IN DISTRESS. COME ON!!!!!

  • @alicelarsson5884
    @alicelarsson5884 Рік тому

    Omg😮

  • @tutkile8808
    @tutkile8808 2 роки тому +1

    No no no no no no no no no no not fair more 🙂👍🙂👍☺️😊😁.

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 роки тому +1

    Course I didn’t do it at her parents house they will hear her or you kidding me Alia and Nino why why would you even think that Marinette and buttercup doing the deed other parents house what if they walk in on her since that’s not the keys wow so smooth A grass very smooth🤦🏾‍♀️🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂

  • @lupine4001
    @lupine4001 2 роки тому +2

    THIS IS WAR 😤😤😡😡 WHO'S WITH ME 😤😤😌

    • @tikiloves7609
      @tikiloves7609 2 роки тому +1

      I finally got to listen!! I'm totally with you!! So many friggin emotions... 😡😭❤️🤯

    • @lupine4001
      @lupine4001 2 роки тому +2

      *hugs tight* breath tiki, we'll get our chance 😈

    • @simpllyfin3702
      @simpllyfin3702 2 роки тому +1

      GIRL.ALL.THE.WAY! I GOT THE: sandels, belt, slippers, gun, the fandoms rath, and all of the hands of the poeple who want to take him down!...... did i miss anything or r we good to go? >:)

    • @lupine4001
      @lupine4001 2 роки тому

      @@simpllyfin3702hmmmmm 😏 (walks over to my playstation and opens a small hidden compartment underneath it) miraculous 😏

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +1

      @@lupine4001 Lol! If its a war you want, then hopefully you won't be disappointed!

  • @zackbell2403
    @zackbell2403 Рік тому

    No matter how many times I listen to this fic it still makes me cry. It’s sooo emotional

  • @sandicliff1172
    @sandicliff1172 2 роки тому +1

    No!!!!!

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 роки тому +1

    If she’s present it David Adrian‘s girlfriend you using that to miraculous bring your wife back man that will be out of the question she won’t exist to be in Adrian‘s life why can’t you just go after that I don’t know the rabbit miraculous hello🤦🏾‍♀️😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬😡😡😡

  • @mladysamantha1332
    @mladysamantha1332 2 роки тому +1

    Oh my goodness! This was insane I’m so overwhelmed aha.