Can I be him? Lyrical oneshot (Marichat. half reveal. confession) Miraculous Ladybug fanfic/audiofic

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  • Опубліковано 1 лис 2024

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  • @katherinesaenz455
    @katherinesaenz455 2 роки тому +24

    Ok, now I really need a second part! I mean, have you thought about Adrien's reaction when he realize it was him all the time??? 😭❤️ He would be so happy!

    • @emmajones8594
      @emmajones8594 Рік тому

      I second we need a second part I know it's supposed to be a one shot but come on please

  • @jmvanzalinge5023
    @jmvanzalinge5023 2 роки тому +17

    I can just imagine Adrien getting increasingly excited when Marinette approaches him tomorrow. And he doesn't even let her finish what she's saying, just as soon as she says she likes him he picks her up and swings her around and plants a kiss. Maybe even yelling, "I'm Buttercup!" In any case, I feel like whatever reaction he could give would reveal his identity.

  • @lazynaruto1300
    @lazynaruto1300 Рік тому +4

    That was beautiful dawn! 🥲💖
    Our poor kitty lived in agony for a little a while, but something tells me he won't be anymore 😉
    And I can only imagine "buttercup's" reaction to Mari's confession, and realizing that "he was him"! 🥰😁

  • @Rosalina_Wolf
    @Rosalina_Wolf 2 роки тому +17

    Hiya Dawn! I just wanted to ask if you were alright. I bet this will be another interesting story that we will love. Thanks for posting again, it's been awhile, and I hope you have a Miraculous day!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +8

      Thank you for your kind words Piper and at the moment I'm ok. I hope you too have a miraculous day!

  • @sandicliff1172
    @sandicliff1172 2 роки тому +2

    That was so beautiful! I would love to read a bonus part! So sweet!

  • @VilmaSantos-pd5hl
    @VilmaSantos-pd5hl 2 роки тому +3

    Hi Dawn, I'm glad you're getting better. Take all the time you need to recover. Health comes first.😀 I really love this story. It makes me wish this one shot can be turned into a series, one day. I was imagining, when Marinette tries to confess her feelings to Adrien, but then a new student comes and Adrien starts to be jealous in his civilian form. Marinette starts to wonder why Adrien is behaving different all of a sudden, then CN comes and is jealous, but in this case Marinette knows CN has a crush on her. Maybe at the end Adrien can reveal his identity and defeat Monarch or Shadow Moth.

  • @alibali7184
    @alibali7184 Рік тому +1

    AhhhhhhhhhhhhhHHH now I need her confessing!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @simone_h
    @simone_h 2 роки тому +4

    Good you‘re back! I Hope you are good again. Missed you!

  • @Princess-yj7ko
    @Princess-yj7ko 2 роки тому +8

    Sabes…? Creo que hay un problema, cada vez que haces un One Shot, los haces tan buenos que me dejas desando más!!! Ah por cierto espero todo esté bien 😀

  • @robertodeleon-gonzalez9844
    @robertodeleon-gonzalez9844 2 роки тому +2

    This holds the promise of love requited and redeemed, and it is quite beautiful. Thank you...
    🥲

  • @bridgettwilliams6779
    @bridgettwilliams6779 2 роки тому +2

    Hi I am Bridget please do a part two I am a huge fan

  • @zackbell2403
    @zackbell2403 2 роки тому +2

    Sobbbbbbs I’m soooo glad your back

  • @johnam1234
    @johnam1234 2 роки тому +2

    I really enjoyed the video story and hope to see more in the future. Also a maybe part 2

  • @Will-mk5pj
    @Will-mk5pj 2 роки тому +4

    I just listened to this song last night!! I can’t wait to see how you weave a story with it!

  • @theschmi5021
    @theschmi5021 2 роки тому +1

    Sorry for being late, lots going on in life I guess. Anyway! This one was so intriguing to me! Him knowing and telling her that he still desired her. Desired her more knowing who she was. I wish this wasn't a oneshot, but alas it is...

  • @AllyBubblesSpriggs
    @AllyBubblesSpriggs 2 роки тому +1

    Sorry I missed the premiere. But, here I am!

  • @myladynoir00
    @myladynoir00 Рік тому

    He was him.
    Oh my heart! 🥰🥺❤️✨

  • @sikkander6341
    @sikkander6341 2 роки тому +7

    Hi dawn I missed you it's been weeks how are you I hope you are ok and waiting for you to do more fanfic

  • @Dances_in_the_kitchen
    @Dances_in_the_kitchen 2 роки тому +3

    Yay Marichat Monday!! I love this ❤️🐞

  • @tikiloves7609
    @tikiloves7609 2 роки тому +1

    Perfect 😭😭😭 I need a part 2!!!! ❤️

  • @beccad3296
    @beccad3296 2 роки тому +1

    Welcome back Dawn. I hope you are feeling much better. Thanks for the oneshot, beautiful as always.

  • @arriusarithius4971
    @arriusarithius4971 2 роки тому +2

    It's been a while so i was a bit surprised when i hear your chat voice at the start 😂 But I cant help that tingly feeling and excitement to hear you narrate stories again! Glad you're feeling better 💕💗
    Also, I felt that... It felt some of Captain is leaking Jheqia 😏😂

  • @toxic7nitemare
    @toxic7nitemare 2 роки тому

    😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 😲 omg i wish i could know adriens reaction 😭 😫 😩 so adorable great story

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 роки тому +2

    Hiya dawn, jheqia!!! Sry I'm late 😔😿
    But the story was out of words as usual. Wishing u guys the best 💞💞💞

  • @robertthompson3447
    @robertthompson3447 2 роки тому +5

    How in the camembert are you going to leave this as a "one shot" ?

    • @robertthompson3447
      @robertthompson3447 2 роки тому +2

      Big thanks to you and your team 🥰😍🥰, you know I can never get enough. 🤞🥺🤗

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 роки тому +1

      @@robertthompson3447 Lol! I don't know. Right now, my list of requested sequels and follow ons has become longer than my works in progress! Maybe I will get to it someday, if I'm inspired too! I am so glad you enjoyed it!

  • @maryshashaw2895
    @maryshashaw2895 2 роки тому +2

    I loved it I would love a part two Please please I missed u dawn hope ur ok

  • @kitabootforever
    @kitabootforever 2 роки тому +1

    Sweet Sweet sunshine boy.

  • @eleishadolbey6889
    @eleishadolbey6889 2 роки тому +1

    Yay you're back!!!
    Have missed you!!
    Hope all is well with you?

  • @myladynoir00
    @myladynoir00 Рік тому

    Love this!
    Also thinking "Behind the Mask" by Michael Jackson could make an interesting story 🤔

  • @Princesstwilight17
    @Princesstwilight17 2 роки тому +2

    I love it ❤

  • @cdraeger4106
    @cdraeger4106 2 роки тому +2

    Hay dawn! I’m so glad you posted this! I was getting worried thinking you got hurt! How are you?

  • @abigailreeder9130
    @abigailreeder9130 2 роки тому

    WE NEED PART TWO PLZ PLZ PLZ

  • @alineborges8452
    @alineborges8452 2 роки тому

    hoje teve ep novo e ainda uma fic maravilhosa dessas, dia de sorte :)

  • @bappida3091
    @bappida3091 2 роки тому +1

    Dawn you okay right! U got me there! Hope your having a miraculous week🤗😉😊
    Will there be a part 2 of the btw?

  • @Dire_Database217
    @Dire_Database217 2 роки тому +3

    Hey dawn, I'm sure this story will be amazing. I'm sorry for what had to happen. But if you need any more time to recover, we will give it to you 😁🙂🫂

  • @nafiatulaghniarahmawati6423
    @nafiatulaghniarahmawati6423 2 роки тому +3

    hey down why haven't you seen for a long time?

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 роки тому +3

      I have been really ill recently, which meant I couldn't write and record stories. I'm not healed yet but at the moment I'm ok.

    • @nafiatulaghniarahmawati6423
      @nafiatulaghniarahmawati6423 2 роки тому +2

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous may god heal you? I also have a toothache so we are the same. hope we get well soon

  • @rosilvapeterson262
    @rosilvapeterson262 Рік тому

    No fair, I want more please?🥹

  • @AllyBubblesSpriggs
    @AllyBubblesSpriggs 2 роки тому +1

    😭😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍😍😍

  • @angienorton5577
    @angienorton5577 5 місяців тому

    That was LadyNoir..

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 роки тому

    Hey Dawn I have question.
    Why is it always Mari and Cat......Does the fandom "Ghost" Adrien?
    For my vision is like a Sailor moon reveal where Mari is Sailor moon and Adrien as Tusedo mask.
    Sigh remembering a meme "Oh my god he is tusedo mask

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 роки тому

      Its probably because a relationshop between two civilians is kinda boring? It makes the most logical sense since they are both heroes in secret, but having a hero love a civilian (who is his partner unknowingly) is a lot more… interesting. Plus the chemistry between Cat and Marinette is surprisingly good

    • @nuruddinshah684
      @nuruddinshah684 2 роки тому

      @@Will-mk5pj Plus the chemistry between Cat and Marinette surprisingly good
      True. But it always one-sided. For "Adrien" side at least. For the Fandom is more interested in that then a wholesome/Complete.
      I just rather see go full Cat Blac. Have many reason why

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 роки тому +1

      @@nuruddinshah684 Honestly Adrien is neglected in the show. He needs a friend whom he can confide in fully! And not Nino. Dude spilled the beans on who he and Alya are. (Shouldn’t that have caused Adrien to immediately start questioning who is who and put the pieces together? Dude’s smart, but they write him like an idiot

    • @nuruddinshah684
      @nuruddinshah684 2 роки тому

      @@Will-mk5pj true. If the dude can understand Advance math. Why is it the showrunner do it. And don get me started with chloe. So...many possibilities

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 роки тому

      @@nuruddinshah684 I mean… advanced math, fencing, Chinese… he’s shown to be talented yet… blind and dumb? I do understand that the show is from Marinette’s perspective, but still, he should have some theories as to who everyone is, even with the magic protecting their identities. ESPECIALLY since Nino told him who Carapace and Rena Rouge are. And its a super simple connection between ladybug and Marinette once you realize the degree the both of them trust Alya/Rena.

  • @joycehealy6978
    @joycehealy6978 Рік тому

    Quick question do we have to be infor a meeting with you guys too much to get home from work today Jack Jack I really keep looking Jack I