Why don't you love me? Lyrical Oneshot (Marichat. Reveal. Angst) Miraculous Ladybug Fanfic/Audiofic
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- Опубліковано 13 жов 2024
- Why don't you love me... After accidently revealing their identities to one another... things aren't as perfect as they had hoped whilst coming to terms with their other halves...
Massive shout out to Mellendraws for the use of her amazing, emotional artwork in the thumbnail. Go and send her some love:
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The story is based on the song: Why don't you love me? by Hot Chelle Rae featuring Demi Lovato. Lyric's are in bold.
Music is by: RedXmoonXRose
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Thomas Astruc said that there are stuff he can't include in the show, but he would love to, and that lucky for us there are fanfics, and I was like “thank God there is Dawn Chorus” Beautiful as always
Awww bless you, that is so sweet!! 💖😊
agreed!
Ahh Totally agreed! The fanfictions are sooo cute and I know that they can't include things like this (you get me i guess 😅) in the show. So there goes Dawnn our everyday hero😂💕
Who would be anyone to disagree?! Ever since season 4 ended my impatience reached it's limits and I used fanfics to help me stay patient. Channel to channel, texting stories and written stories. Not one channel has come close to Dawn Chorus Writes. Not one channel has been so realistic, include audio, and overall write this good whether it's Jheqia or Dawn. To this day when I want fanfictions, Dawn is the first channel I can even think of. Before I would type "Miraculous One-Shots." Now I type "Dawn Chorus Writes." Dont know if I would stay patient without ya, Dawn! Thank you for your amazing content!
@@SweetSpotPA Thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot to me!! 💖😊
I like that Marinette got to tell him everything he put her through both as Adrien & as Cat. 🥺😭 I loved it. Its was so perfect.
“child soldier” or something like that. I LOVE how the author described the trauma and struggles of Marinette/Ladybug and Adrien/Cat Noir. 👏❤️
Nah yall dont understand😩 I was litterally about to cry on the SCHOOL BUS✋🏽😭 *ON THE SCHOOL BUS* 🤡 I *CANT* with the amount of love and passion that went into this story❤🤧👍🏼
This was amazing. The argument hurt my heart 😭 but enjoyed the end💗
I know what you mean but it felt good for them both to vent their emotions so they could get to that place... I think that is what the show is missing. 💖
fair point.. i heard from somewhere idk where .. that sometimes it's good to argue once in a while to let out what needs to be said and then come to an agreement by compromise or finding a way to resolve something
Let's just say something, Dawn, you are stealing my sleep! 🤣 I litterally can't sleep through the night without waking up with some profound revelation about a new step in the mlb love dynamic, and it's driving me insane! 😊 In a good way. Love your work Dawn, and Jheqia, It gives me so much inspiration! 💖
Plagg slapping Adrien was one of the best things I have heard in a long while. Also character development!
agreed
That was so good!!!!!
This needs to happen in the show!!!!!
Amazing writing as always Jheqia and Dawn your narration was perfect!!
Thank you so much!! 😊💖
This art is soooooo cute! I would listen to this fic just because of the thumbnail - it's that good!
Wow that was definitely very emotional. I was crying, but such a great story. And such a cute ending.
What's wrong with you, kitty?! Mari, don't be so Ewell! You hurt him! Save him, please!
Definitely an emotional roller coaster..in a very good way, beautiful story.
This was so well read! The narration was excellent! Oh, the feels!!!
That was simply amazing! The emotion you put into the narration!
aww shucks, giving the bashful look... its nothing!! 💖
Emotional is an understatement, lady!
Seriously I’m sobbing, this has no right to be as amazing as it is AND make me cry like a baby. The wholesomeness is too much for my feeble heart 😭💕
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„He knew it was too good, too perfect to last but….“ 💕💖✨🐞🐾
Incredible. Absolutely in-credi-ble. I am at a loss for other words. Well done is not even close to a description of how I feel right now. ♥️
AMAZING, as usual! I love how emotional this is! It definitely has everything people can imagine. Although, I love to say I have almost the purrfect idea for a series myself. I'm mid-writing it now and this reminds me of it. They both have a little of everything and something quite more. They're both definitely strong, even if it will be my first fanfic. Although I do think I have a good plot idea, nothing competes with this! THIS IS AMAZING.
This is really beautiful!! I loved how their identities have been revealed to them...
This literally made me cry. Thank you so much for your hard work. I always love reading to what you post and I’m always wishing that it could happen in the actual show.
This is to perfect I mean Purrfect !! I absolutely love how the story ❤️🥺.
This is truely amazing! You and your team captured the emotions so well. This is one of the best stories that i have found so far.
Thank you and this is a one woman team creating the stories with the help of a great writing friend in Jheqia. Glad you enjoyed the story so much.
How are all of these videos so good?
This is my all time favorite reveal, and I have read and or listened to a lot of reveals.
It's because of the realism that a kids show would hide as to not scar the children watching that this is my favorite.
Yeah I agree, it is that release in emotion and to show that's its not perfect to start with. 🤔💖
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I was also referring to the more rated R side of things you can't have notable death in a kids show after all.
AHAHAHAHAHAAHHA
But ton would be too busy planning the wedding to ask questions
AHAHAHHAHAHAAHHAHA
i could not stop laughing during that part of the video 🤣
ooh, I'm excited, but I accidentally read the comments and now I'm scared it's going to throw my emotions into turmoil, I'll just have to wait and see
Can't wait to read what you think!! 😉
i love this video they should make this an episode in the show maybe
Amazing I cried and laughed great story again as usual
I love this! It was so awesome and great. It would be awesome if something similar happened in the show.
I've read/watch/hear a lot of places where Chat/Adrien would propose, but the sewers... That's a new one 😂 I absolutely love this, it has the Ephemeral vibe at the beginning
I am in tears of joy😢❤i love it😍❤
Wow this is amazing!
Was Marinette never good enough for the famous adrien Agreste the great Cat noir?!!
That hit!
This is the epitome of perfection
Adrien . This makes me cry. Love it
Why don't you love me
Ah....Are you there NOT "doing IT' already...
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I love this so much, its just so powerful
Me reacting to everything Adrien does in this audiofic : are you actually stupid Adrien. V.s me reacting to marinette during this : tell him girl tell him!!! I am here for you
Kissing in the sewers must be so romantic 🥺
lol 😆 yeah the smell really adds to the feels
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Couldn't we assume they are like... storm sewers or something? And come on! One of the most romantic scenes in the show happens in the sewers! "You and me against the world, milady!"
This is one of the best I have listened to in my entire life Thank you😍😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾2029 I’m still pouring tears of joy
💖💖😆🎇 Love it!!! Just about to Upload Romeo and his Marinette for tonight - Utter fluff!!
epilogue of the proposal is a necessity at this point
am I right or am I right?
Beautiful! I didn't want it to end!
Such a lovely story thank you! 😍
Lesson learn, Always listen to plagg when he is serious at least
I think I'm going to cry, 😥, Oh, looks like I already did. 😭
Aww bless you 🤗💖
OMG I started crying.🥺😥. And I am still crying😢😭😭
yep, emotional turmoil, that's all I can say
Lovely story
😢❤❤beautiful, I loved it 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Dawn can we just both admit that mlb if it wasn't a kids show would be one of the best emotional tramitizeing series's ever
4EVER 🧡 MARICHAT 4 LIFE
This was soo fudging good, I cant stop squealing 😁😁😁
😭sooooo beautiful
I love your comics
SO CUTEEEE
Thank you. 😃
Ph I cant wait to wach after school 💖
Omg this gonna make me cry that's how you know it's good writing ✍ when it makes you feel there emotions
I'm not ok lol nah but the end is so sweet
Amazing video love me some marichat! ✨💖 Also I wanted to ask is Dawn your brith name or a stage name? because it’s really pretty and I just wanted to know
Thank you and Dawn is my middle name I go by, apparently I was born at dawn and been up at that time ever since and now I use that time to write. 😊🎇🌞
i need fluff after reading this umay gulay
😭😭😭😭😭 love it
💖🤗
All true😍
For the algorithm
Well the thing is I personally think both did something wrong because yeah adrien never saw mari as more than a friend but mari never saw car noir as more than a Friend either and cat noir is definitely the true adrien
Such a good story!!
Also ever notice she says he/she when it’s she/he??
I’m not making fun, just never noticed
why hasn't the story of Señorita I asked for been released yet?it's been more than 4 months. Was it because Ladrien was hated and disliked that you weren't released? I'm a bit lazy with Marichat.
I have a list of requested lyricals and a constant playlist of the songs I listen to all the time. I haven't gotten to Senorita yet isn't because it's Ladrien but the whole story hasn't come to me around the lyrics yet. That is how I write. I will be releasing more requested ones during March.
@@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I understood.
how exactly is this marichat?
5 minutes!
Gosh animate this please
Thats not true ladybug is not just fraction of marinette side its her whole side andwhat about cat noir
90% of this book is wrong and not true bht good story btw
She loved adrien not cn why cn was adrien true side underneath and don't say anything about his flirting marinette has been a crazy stalker over Adrien too!
Marinette had everyone but adrien didn't had anyone to talk to
Both suffered equally
? ???????
too much worshiping of marinette in this fanfic :(