Write a grade 9 A Christmas Carol paragraph with me (FREE paragraph for you to use)

Here is a ✨grade 9✨ paragraph for you to use in your A Christmas Carol essays!
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Timestamps⏰
0:00 - Intro
0:32 - The Lightup Hub
0:55 - Grade 9 structure
1:37 - Question for the paragraph
1:46 - Point
2:33 - Evidence
3:08 - Technique + Analysis
4:38 - Evidence 2
5:01 - Technique + Analysis 2
6:16 - Context
7:45 - Writer’s intentions
9:05 - Link
9:31 - What has been done well?
11:00 - Outro
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i refuse to believe that you can use ostracisation that many times in one paragraph

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[@Divinarium1]

@TheProdigy-sg5ns It's highly predicted. But I know aqa always throws in the themes that are the most unexpected. Don't be a one theme wonder. Revise quotes for everything/

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[@RhiHolly]

Loved this! I was 2 marks of a grade 9 in language but cant get passed a grade 5 or 6 in my literature. This was amazing thankyou

[@Zero1._]

How language, any q5 tips or anything?

[@dylanoliff]

@@Zero1._ i got 38/40 on Q5 and tbh i would say spend more time on it and ensure to be using the sophisticated vocab to get all the spag while mixing all your language techniques. Dont forget the simples like onomatopoeia and metaphors though too because although not difficult you have to make sure to bring them up

[@Zero1._]

@dylanoliff yh I already spend the most time on it def but I can never break into the 30s, I'm always 25-29 and rlly wana surpass that

[@easycraftydesigns3141]

Could this work for language just remove the context part? And would it work for most questions? Mr salles says to just write every sentence as PEE or just write as many explanations as there are marks (E.G 8 explanations for 8 marks), so I don’t know which one to follow.

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@The Lightup Hub how much time should you spend on each paragraph using this structure?

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Do you do just 1 of these or multiple per question?

[@thelightuphub]

3 per essay! 😊

[@matilda2811]

how do you word so advanced

[@thelightuphub]

Lots of practice and learning! On the Lightup hub we have grade 9 key word sheets for every text (with definitions and examples) so you can mirror these too 🫶🏽

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is this english language or English literature

[@thelightuphub]

Literature!

[@dylanoliff]

are you joking mate

[@Divinarium1]

@@dylanoliff He lowers the grade boundaries for everyone. Don't interrupt a person helping everyone else

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No veiws?

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