Hello! I realize in hindsight, my part in this video might come off as a little "set in stone" in a few ways - meaning, I may have come off as though my way is the only 'right' way to write - I definitely think that, as a writer, I still have a long way to go myself, and so most of the things I said are just tips, and if I came across 'pushy', I apologize profusely. My goal was never to act as though my word is gospel, but only to give my advice, however, my language in this video ('never' 'always', etc.) seemed sometimes too exact, so again, I apologize. I hope you all liked it, though!
Well, I've had 7 episodes of my show and I was pretty bad at writing. I think this will help me write a better show, and make it more interesting. Most of the things you said here make sense to me, and I think I can improve even after writing the 8th episode of my show. Thank you for making this, It really helps!
For the writing of my show, I feel like I will be ok, my mother is a writer, she also reads over many books and edits them before they are published. My uncle is also a publisher. I’m glad my family is helping with this, cause they are all extremely talented
I needed this. Thank you so much and I can’t wait to watch this :D After watching: Okay, this video really helped. The redundant writing part really helps, and I didn’t even know it was a problem until now. I also liked the character build up part and the whole lot of this video! Thank you so much for this video, and I can’t wait to see the voice acting tips as I’m a voice actor myself 😃!
I am a big fan of this series. My show FTATBR even by joke show standards isnt too good and im sure other people could be in similar situations. Please continue!
This is all really helpful advice for stories and writing in general, I'll definitely keep these different tips in mind when writing my own small stories!
personally i prefer storyboard because it can remind me what and how to animate that scene (i had a object show involving numbers but i later scrapped it because im too lazy animating [im using scratch to animate XD] and i hit puberty during the production of it and my voice changed so i couldn't recreate the original voice for the contestants anymore)
I do miss this series quite a bit, although I’d probably never make an object show for many reasons, it’s still cool to see in depth on how to make these sorts of things
Thanks so much :D I’m working on an object show (object crazy) and wasn’t sure how the storyline would go, but after watching this video I think my show won’t be as bad as I though it would be :)
Well this was helpful! It was kind of funny this came in my recommendation section right when I started to make an object show!(or hope so atleast..) I’m not the best writer in the world for scripts since I usually do third person short stories and not like a first person story where it sounds like a script so I found this helpful! Though, I have to work on that two buddy writing thing since I’m doing the scripting and other behind the scenes stuff alone. Sorry for the paragraph! Once again, thank you for the helpful information.
Nice , before I tried doing a storyboard , but over the months , characters changed and changed . Finally I’m with my final set of characters! 4 teams , 28 contestants! I will write some script which will have all topics like horror dramatic depression action comedy , and more! ( don’t listen to the last sentence it’s obviously a stupid idea lmao )
I don’t know that much about writing, but something that I’m gonna do is if there’s a major event that happens, make it change the personalities of the characters, for example, something I’m gonna have happen in my own show, if a character doesn’t like hanging out with people, or doesn’t like being near people in general, and they are forced to be for other characters for a long time, make it so that they like hanging out with them more.
"So,every show needs a script" After listening to this (and the rest of the video) I realized I basically skipped EVERY basic thing about making an object show XD.... Damn no wonder mine is so bad
Even tho this 3 years old, I LOVE this video! I wanna create a object show *but I have school and I also have a tiny amount of animating experience and I’ll have like 0 voice actor* but this was really helpful for me! I just don’t know what my characters will be battling for 🧍 I’ll be commenting this on your other tutorials about this!
1:33 I personally agree with this, my girlfriend is making an object show and i'm her co-writer! It's much easier to work together without conflicting things, because in the past I made my own show, but I had too many of my friends asking to help write it, to where everything was out of control.
Wooo! I was worried you had stopped making these! Thanks so much! Gosh I respect you so much for criticising BFB in that small way- I feel like most of the community idolises it and II to say anything off about them
For my show, instead of writing, I think of ideas, combine them into a rough draft storyboard, fix it up as a final copy, make a script, and send it to the animator and va’s
For my object show Battle For Uh Meow I usually build my script while I'm animateing with a few memes sprinkled throughout even down to the title Fun fact: BFUM 4 (witch as the time of commenting isn't out yet) was originally going to have an FNF themed challenge but was scrapped in place for a BR themed challenge (BR standing for something but to avoid spoilers I won't tell you that means)
I am planning On making a "reality" show kind of thing which are basically object shows, but in my case i will use stick figures who's names are the color they are, i have given all of them their own Little thing that they're really good at (literally refrencing danganronpa at that) aaaand yea, that's what i wanna do
I've made the script for ep 1 of my show Common Times up til the intro and here it is if you wanna read it Water: Hey band aid do you want to play catch? Band Aid: Sure They Play Water: *throws ball* Blue Cat: *falls from sky and crushes ball* Water: HEY OUR BALL! Blue Cat: What? Blue Cat: *looks down* Oh Bandaid Uh who are you? Blue Cat Im Blue Cat Crown: Hey Peasants I Heard Something Pop, What Was It!? Remote: Shut up crown no one likes you or your royalty Crown: 🙁 Blue Cat: Do you Guys want To Battle To win a prize????? Water: NO Blue Cat: >:( Blue Cat: too bad Water: OH SHOO- Intro Plays
I'm going to make my show, it's called: Object Time (OT for short) Contestants: Numberbot Red pencil Box Plate Numberbot's Personality: She is kind, friendly, helpful, and curious Red Pencil's Personality: She is Very Smart Box's personality: He is mean Plate's personality: He is good
I never thought a chocolate bar would give me an english lesson
lol!
He is better than my english teacher lol
i need to start thinking about my chocolate bars before i eat them
Especially a chocolate bar who went to jail for kidnapping and other crimes.
Same
Hello! I realize in hindsight, my part in this video might come off as a little "set in stone" in a few ways - meaning, I may have come off as though my way is the only 'right' way to write - I definitely think that, as a writer, I still have a long way to go myself, and so most of the things I said are just tips, and if I came across 'pushy', I apologize profusely. My goal was never to act as though my word is gospel, but only to give my advice, however, my language in this video ('never' 'always', etc.) seemed sometimes too exact, so again, I apologize. I hope you all liked it, though!
WebzForevz hi bro :3
Your the best object show writer EVERYTHING IS SOOOOOO ORIGINAL
Pizza
Just eatin' bread :3
Literally nobody is actually replying to what you actually said-
Well, I've had 7 episodes of my show and I was pretty bad at writing. I think this will help me write a better show, and make it more interesting. Most of the things you said here make sense to me, and I think I can improve even after writing the 8th episode of my show. Thank you for making this, It really helps!
Nice
Oki
"first challenge!"
*Show starts*
@AnimationObjectShow I M H I R I N G
I'm the worst at reading and writing in my school and my carrer
“...which are sh-” “nOT VERY GOOD.”
I love this series so far and it and other object show creating videos have helped a ton!
I will write
I don’t know why but this comment is a gem that stands out to me.
This is comedy gold
What does this comment mean
memes
I will reply
i love how the "big plot lines" part seems like subtly making fun of object invasion
Cup is missing!
@@FlaminGingerbread oh he back lol
For the writing of my show, I feel like I will be ok, my mother is a writer, she also reads over many books and edits them before they are published. My uncle is also a publisher. I’m glad my family is helping with this, cause they are all extremely talented
ur so lucky to have a writer family 😭
Finally the second parts is out! I’ve been working on my own show for quite a while now so this helped a lot! Thanks!
Eg
Someone should make an object show that intentionally breaks as many rules in this series as it can
I would watch this
Aight I'm doing this
I'll credit you lol
i wanna see that@@Random_McRandomface
Then you'd just get a joke show
now i can write the best object show EVER!
Yey!
I'm sorry Jordan, but you really can't. No offense but your show is pretty bad.
me too!
@@bigowen6789 the animation is top key though, right?
It would be absolutely treason to not say it's at least 5/10
@@TheHappyGabeShow I think it's a 3/10 show
I needed this. Thank you so much and I can’t wait to watch this :D
After watching: Okay, this video really helped. The redundant writing part really helps, and I didn’t even know it was a problem until now. I also liked the character build up part and the whole lot of this video! Thank you so much for this video, and I can’t wait to see the voice acting tips as I’m a voice actor myself 😃!
me too.
I’m sure this will help several rising writers, including me. Thanks for this helpful video
I am a big fan of this series. My show FTATBR even by joke show standards isnt too good and im sure other people could be in similar situations. Please continue!
4:22 "ageless character"
Me: *laughs in Gelatin*
XDDDDD AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHA *WHEEEEEEEeeEeEeeE33ZZEEEE*
@@LuanGarcia123 uh ok?
@BOLT Gaming What's the context for this...?
He be a 5 year olde
his "age" is actually how long it's been since his first appearance
Object Show Tips is back and better than ever!
This is all really helpful advice for stories and writing in general, I'll definitely keep these different tips in mind when writing my own small stories!
IT'S FINALLY BACK
2:51 Last time I checked, cusses aren't normally in tutorials. Good call, Wuggolo. 👍
6:15 This is actually a popular way to denote a joke in real life, and Clock talked like this in BFB 1.
Funny how I'm already making a new object show, so this is very helpful ! So 2 writters is pretty good imo
Me too!
Honestly, I’m planning on making an object show, and these have really helped me!
personally i prefer storyboard because it can remind me what and how to animate that scene (i had a object show involving numbers but i later scrapped it because im too lazy animating [im using scratch to animate XD] and i hit puberty during the production of it and my voice changed so i couldn't recreate the original voice for the contestants anymore)
i had been planning to revive it after i got adobe animate tho.....
Fave object show creator👍😁
@@Wuggolo. I've been waiting for this forever
This is really useful especially since im working on an object show with my friends
Neato!
I'm alone
Awsome! I’ll try and check it out whenever it comes out.
wait is it you kirby from the discord server Kirby Gang? It’s me blurby!!!
The Happy Gabe Show same
AnimationsC Small world, how you been doin man
0:53 I actually did a scriptless object show a year back! It sucked. Came to this video for writing tips... For season three of it.
Dang, people might need to watch this series! It can really help them make a really good object show.
EEE has probably one of the most excellent writing and this is the best object show plot I’ve ever seen
I do miss this series quite a bit, although I’d probably never make an object show for many reasons, it’s still cool to see in depth on how to make these sorts of things
wow webz is a really cool character
IT'S FINALLY HERE-
as a bad writer, i appreciate this video
same
OOOH, i have an idea for the next episode! narrative/story
Finally it’s here!And kind of back but yesssssss!
Thanks so much :D I’m working on an object show (object crazy) and wasn’t sure how the storyline would go, but after watching this video I think my show won’t be as bad as I though it would be :)
theres already a show called object crazy
Well this was helpful! It was kind of funny this came in my recommendation section right when I started to make an object show!(or hope so atleast..) I’m not the best writer in the world for scripts since I usually do third person short stories and not like a first person story where it sounds like a script so I found this helpful! Though, I have to work on that two buddy writing thing since I’m doing the scripting and other behind the scenes stuff alone.
Sorry for the paragraph! Once again, thank you for the helpful information.
4:56
Character 1: does bad grammar (I can’t believe you why are you even here)
Webzforevz: *meme approved*
*Congratulations*
*your meme has been approved*
Thank you so much! I was struggling to write one page, but this helped me write a whole episode.
Webz sounds like the robot who corrects my false coding in Lua when he talked after the examples.
*Now we all Can write the Best Shows Ever*
Thanks Wuggolo
damn this series is great! i’m working on a joke-ish show called Post It’s Super Show, and this really helps
Nice , before I tried doing a storyboard , but over the months , characters changed and changed . Finally I’m with my final set of characters! 4 teams , 28 contestants! I will write some script which will have all topics like horror dramatic depression action comedy , and more! ( don’t listen to the last sentence it’s obviously a stupid idea lmao )
I don’t know that much about writing, but something that I’m gonna do is if there’s a major event that happens, make it change the personalities of the characters, for example, something I’m gonna have happen in my own show, if a character doesn’t like hanging out with people, or doesn’t like being near people in general, and they are forced to be for other characters for a long time, make it so that they like hanging out with them more.
"So,every show needs a script"
After listening to this (and the rest of the video)
I realized I basically skipped EVERY basic thing about making an object show XD....
Damn no wonder mine is so bad
Me and my best friend from Brazil will be writing my upcoming object show although I written the first episode alone
Even tho this 3 years old, I LOVE this video!
I wanna create a object show *but I have school and I also have a tiny amount of animating experience and I’ll have like 0 voice actor* but this was really helpful for me!
I just don’t know what my characters will be battling for 🧍
I’ll be commenting this on your other tutorials about this!
Wow, thanks Wuggolo and Webz for the tips! I learned so much here!
Yes it’s back finally!!!!
I just watched this series today, and I'm still waiting on Part 3.
HE DID IT HE ACTUALLY DID IT
This is more helpful than 2 years worth of school tbh
6:05 bro sounded like he was making a 1000 word essay 💀
WHY DID WEBZFOREVZ SAYING PSHAW MAKE ME LAUGH SO MUCH
Yay it's back. OST has been really demanded eh?
Matthew dont you mean OSC
@@sh-bammm8104 No. OST. Object Show TIPS.
Matthew oh sorry
Another useful lesson by Wuggolo themselves.
Please continue this! I would love to see your voice acting tips :D
This is really useful, I hope one day I can make a great plot line of my object show
This is English class all over again. Can't believe that stuff actually helped my carreer plan.
1:33 I personally agree with this, my girlfriend is making an object show and i'm her co-writer! It's much easier to work together without conflicting things, because in the past I made my own show, but I had too many of my friends asking to help write it, to where everything was out of control.
i remember watching these during online classes in my school, even just watching them casually is interesting
Ive waited for more than a year for this
I’m doing an improv object show
I made 1
Sorta the same on my part as well
Wooo! I was worried you had stopped making these! Thanks so much!
Gosh I respect you so much for criticising BFB in that small way- I feel like most of the community idolises it and II to say anything off about them
2:52
Webzforevez: **Talking about Object Shows that are-**
Wuggolo: NOT VERY GOOD!
**Webzforevez gets angry so does Wuggolo**
please continue this, i really need this
Thanks for the tip, Wuggolo!
For my show, instead of writing, I think of ideas, combine them into a rough draft storyboard, fix it up as a final copy, make a script, and send it to the animator and va’s
You guys are better than my english teacher
Ah the tips,,,
Jk this was extremely helpful! great job you two!
Will there be a part 3? These videos are really helpfull, I'd like more tips if possible
Thank you I needed this :)
For my object show Battle For Uh Meow I usually build my script while I'm animateing with a few memes sprinkled throughout even down to the title
Fun fact: BFUM 4 (witch as the time of commenting isn't out yet) was originally going to have an FNF themed challenge but was scrapped in place for a BR themed challenge (BR standing for something but to avoid spoilers I won't tell you that means)
I’m a pretty good script writer anyways, but still, this helps!
Thanks, this helped me a lot. But I still need to learn a lot about writing
As I am a pretty good writer myself, this was very useful!! Keep it up!
Pretty useful and convenient! Thanks for the help and I love this series!
I am planning On making a "reality" show kind of thing which are basically object shows, but in my case i will use stick figures who's names are the color they are, i have given all of them their own Little thing that they're really good at (literally refrencing danganronpa at that) aaaand yea, that's what i wanna do
I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR SI LONG YESHH
Wow! Thanks for the tips! (I write alone and I don't write scripts or storyboards, I just think of whatever.)
I've made the script for ep 1 of my show Common Times up til the intro and here it is if you wanna read it
Water: Hey band aid do you want to play catch?
Band Aid: Sure
They Play
Water: *throws ball*
Blue Cat: *falls from sky and crushes ball*
Water: HEY OUR BALL!
Blue Cat: What?
Blue Cat: *looks down* Oh
Bandaid Uh who are you?
Blue Cat Im Blue Cat
Crown: Hey Peasants I Heard Something Pop, What Was It!?
Remote: Shut up crown no one likes you or your royalty
Crown: 🙁
Blue Cat: Do you Guys want To Battle To win a prize?????
Water: NO
Blue Cat: >:(
Blue Cat: too bad
Water: OH SHOO-
Intro Plays
Part 3 when ?!?!!
2:52 great scene
“Unless you’re doing an improv object show.” This was pre-15 minute object show which I’m quite sure was improv.
Very cool!
finally
part 2!
This is how they should teach lectures in school cause here you can actually learn
I'm going to make my show, it's called: Object Time (OT for short)
Contestants:
Numberbot
Red pencil
Box
Plate
Numberbot's Personality: She is kind, friendly, helpful, and curious
Red Pencil's Personality: She is Very Smart
Box's personality: He is mean
Plate's personality: He is good
This may help me one day with doing Objective Deathmatch. I will try to watch it later.
Wuggolo I watched this in depth and Im working on an object show
I'll send a link when it's done
BRING IT BACK
Wuggolo: *says you should have one other writer in his opinion*
Me,no friends:Haha yeah
Wug didn’t want web to cuss because it’s going to ruin how good this is
Im still waiting for part 3
"Pshaw"
WebzForevz, multiple occasions
I'm surprised the thumbnail has excellent entities
Me who doesn’t even have a script and just make it up as I go 👁👄👁
Same here
Me too
Lol Same XD
Lol that's HFOS
Same
I suggest you should also do animation app decisions for the 3rd part
I remember I watched you I first met you on your most popular video I did not meet you in 2012 I think 2014-2016 tho
Tysm im planning to make an object show im making contestants aswelll but im soon to start looking for voice actors
This helps with writing in general