Diary of a wimpy kid: The Secret

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  • Опубліковано 23 сер 2024
  • LLB by u/OneLastSmile
    LLB creator profile / lmajzrfkit
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    This is an llb and a fanfiction and not made by Jeff Kinney
    Doawk fanfiction
    LLB fanfic
    Diary of a wimpy kid fanfiction
    Diary of a wimpy kid fanfic
    Diary of a wimpy kid llb
    Doawk fanfic
    Doawk llb
    Doawk fan-fiction
    Greg heffley
    Frank heffley
    Rodrick heffley
    Dysfunctional perspectives
    25 years later
    Funny
    Weird
    Manny heffley
    Susan heffley
    diary of a wimpy audiobook fanfiction
    Audiobook

КОМЕНТАРІ • 558

  • @Una_Ridlow
    @Una_Ridlow 5 місяців тому +452

    Hi, OneLastSmile here. I wanted to thank you again for making such an amazing video, I really appreciate that the story I wrote so many years ago has persisted in people's memories for this long. The time period I wrote this LLB in was a very different era. This was my first big horror project, I invested a lot of time into making it and enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for reading! I loved every second of it. I may return to the LLB scene eventually!

    • @Una_Ridlow
      @Una_Ridlow 5 місяців тому +29

      Some random author insights:
      Back when I wrote this I had some serious oversights in regards to Truth/Truth Redux. Especially with Redux there are certain parts I forgot weren't told about in The Secret (mostly because of the fairly large gap of time between the original run of Truth and the run of Truth Redux.) There were some plot points I regret including in Redux entirely, as well.
      This is more or less a bit of lost lore at this point, but at the time of writing I was buddies with another LLB author who was writing a multiverse themed LLB. I was so excited by this concept that I decided to 'connect' mine into it for no real reason. The body that Manny inhabits for the last few chapters of Redux is also from another LLB, I believe it was one with Greg as a school shooter? The multiverse thing is the big plot point I've come to regret including, imo it killed the horror vibe and sort of sent everything off into left field in a negative way. If I ever rewrite Truth again, this is the part I regret and want to fix most.
      I consider "it was all a dream/experiment/multiverse" to be a vibekiller when it comes to horror stories, but at the time of writing this I was young and unseasoned in writing horror so I made the common mistakes any young author will make.
      I'm really glad that even in 2024, years after my original publishing of The Secret and The Truth/Truth Redux, people are still enjoying a horror story I wrote. I think this is a story that still holds up as being scary, but it's definitely not without flaws and plotholes just like anything else.

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +22

      @@Una_Ridlow agreed m8 I did find it came out of left field in redux where it was retconed to be about the multiverse but still your horror llb was good, and I felt really bad for manny in it my boy was just a toddler they turned him into a monster 😭😭😭

    • @Gerard_TheBookMaker
      @Gerard_TheBookMaker 5 місяців тому +2

      Hello

    • @flyingtank
      @flyingtank 5 місяців тому +5

      You sound like susan

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +2

      @@flyingtank is that a compliment If so thanks m8 :)

  • @Jp2-offical2022
    @Jp2-offical2022 4 місяці тому +97

    Greg:losing his mind
    Rodrick:dead
    Susan(mom):THE PAPER IS BLANK GREGORY!!!
    Frank(dad):i hate you manny
    Manny:🤫🧏

  • @ashmohammed9985
    @ashmohammed9985 4 місяці тому +165

    Greg was Manny’s favourite……Manny took Greg’s body consistently took over Greg’s corpse……and temporarily was Greg…..and Susan killed Manny…..MAN WHAT THE F---

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  4 місяці тому +43

      well okay, manny stops talking one day and this was franks boiling point since he thought manny would be his one kid to grow up how he wanted so he took it out on him and got his other sons in on it as well Rodrick was complacent but Greg felt empathetic but still continued out of fear, Susan sees this every day and one day eventually snaps and didn’t want to see it anymore so she puts manny down thinking this to be better then the life he got but manny combined with the abuse he got plus the one person he thought he could trust betray his souls became a vengeful spirit strong enough to create a fake Pocket dimension where he killed the heffelys each day also everything being covered in front juice is because he hated it and they torture him with it, on Friday his body as well as the pocket dimension start falling apart so to save himself he took a nearby body from a different Greg but that gave him admesia, despite the rule of a day unable to pass unless someone dies manny somehow circumvents this at the cost of the day’s memory’s and his body rotting, eventually though from all of this manny gets the attention of other dimensional people and they start resarching him and his behaviour and by Saturday when they see him falling apart they think it’s the perfect time to capture him, by the last loop on Saturday manny finally escapes I think by accidently using his powers and finds a dimension that was exactly like his except it was Sunday, the trama from seeing this again made him possess this dimension manny and kill Susan though he semi regrets this also he frames frank as revenge for all the abuse but loses all his memories due to the side effect of possessing someone, by the end Manny returns to normal and manny

    • @thesiIIiestgoose
      @thesiIIiestgoose 4 місяці тому +10

      I ain’t reading allat💀

    • @Malcolm-johnWilcock-mr2le
      @Malcolm-johnWilcock-mr2le 3 місяці тому +4

      Just the MAN WHAT THE F at the end

    • @toytown123
      @toytown123 3 місяці тому +2

      Thanks!​@@Thesteamsmythe

    • @CrazyLila
      @CrazyLila 2 місяці тому +4

      Well this spoiled the whole thing because you know when you click on a video and there’s a comment showing on the bottom? This was it. Maybe because it was the top comment but and maybe wait no but anyways and maybe it’s my fault that I continued reading it but still well at least it was funny by it I mean your comment

  • @Dalton_Boardman2000
    @Dalton_Boardman2000 4 місяці тому +136

    It's disconcerting that this version of Greg is miles less sociopathic than the source material.

    • @cawsomeaolin
      @cawsomeaolin 4 місяці тому +1

      0/10 uncreative

    • @CheeseMeat_
      @CheeseMeat_ 2 місяці тому

      @@cawsomeaolin how?

    • @TimmyLittle-bt6kh
      @TimmyLittle-bt6kh 29 днів тому +1

      @@cawsomeaolinshut beta u cabt do better

    • @IGSA101
      @IGSA101 14 днів тому

      Sociopaths only fear consequences, and Greg is sure facing a lot of them.

  • @courtneykelly2028
    @courtneykelly2028 5 місяців тому +169

    There are one of two explanations for this. Either A: A nightmare that is impossible to wake up from or B: An infinite time loop with no memory of the previous day whatsoever.

    • @RandomRealm417
      @RandomRealm417 4 місяці тому +1

      Probably B

    • @nicbat7149
      @nicbat7149 4 місяці тому +9

      Two secret options: C: he is clipping between dimensions. or D: He is going insane and hallucinating explaining the blank paper that Greg saw text on.
      (edit): Just time skipped to the end and it's just some Sonic.EXE stuff. bruh, when i saw the part where Greg actually felt bad for manny i thought it was all like supposed to represent something like a metaphor but nope it was just Sonic.EXE but it's Diary of a Wimpy Kid.

  • @SuperCommando567
    @SuperCommando567 4 місяці тому +42

    This is actually scary, and so original, like even I couldn’t have thought of this.

  • @noahpittmanprofessionalfnf8483
    @noahpittmanprofessionalfnf8483 5 місяців тому +171

    I have a theory at 28:17
    When manny was looking through the doors it could be him looking through many different alternate universes because some of them are referring to other fan fictions. Like “ballistic missile” is doawk the ballistic missile. “Gregory as an adult” is 25 years later and “a burning grave could maybe be 25 years later too. “A lot of yoghurt” could be the dark web fan fiction but I don’t know. “The apocalypse could be any other apocalypse LLB but I could think it can be the fregpocolypse and when manny opened the door of the night where he was killed is this one.
    So I think these “doors” could be portals to certain LLBs and when manny got out the door it is him leaving his own LLB.

    • @Una_Ridlow
      @Una_Ridlow 5 місяців тому +23

      This is pretty much it, yeah. At the time a friend of mine was writing a multiverse themed LLB and I decided to do that too for no reason lol.
      Yoghurt is in reference to an extremely popular llb about Albert Sandy and yogurt. Apocalypse was in reference to a specific era llb that I no longer recall the name of

    • @noahpittmanprofessionalfnf8483
      @noahpittmanprofessionalfnf8483 5 місяців тому +6

      @@Una_RidlowOk thanks for clearing it up

    • @user-gq1zn2rw8k
      @user-gq1zn2rw8k 5 місяців тому +5

      I’m not sure but rowley’s dad holding a skewer might be Franks’s night out?

    • @Gl1cH3d_GamingYT
      @Gl1cH3d_GamingYT 5 місяців тому +3

      BUT HEY THAT'S JUST A THEORY AAA BOOK THEORY thanks for watching

    • @brizzybrake1344
      @brizzybrake1344 5 місяців тому +1

      Maybe

  • @kosmalaanimations2864
    @kosmalaanimations2864 5 місяців тому +238

    Honestly this is kind of nice to see manny actually getting some explanation to how he actually is treated actually makes sense

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +29

      Yeah and the way they treated him was unfair he was just a baby 😭😭😭

    • @Robloxdude2024yt
      @Robloxdude2024yt 2 місяці тому +4

      ​@@Thesteamsmythe 24th like to ur comment

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  2 місяці тому +1

      @@Robloxdude2024yt cool :)

    • @Robloxdude2024yt
      @Robloxdude2024yt 2 місяці тому +3

      @@Thesteamsmythe it gave me chills this fanbook

    • @Robloxdude2024yt
      @Robloxdude2024yt 2 місяці тому +3

      ​@@Thesteamsmythe btw I subbed

  • @Texas4981
    @Texas4981 5 місяців тому +331

    Top tier Voice acting, you genuinely sound like you're stuck in purgatory with a hellish little brother

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +23

      Thank you takes a lot of work but glad you appreciate the work I put in to sound that way :)

    • @blainetate743
      @blainetate743 5 місяців тому +4

      I disagree. Sounds forced.

    • @sans-p9u
      @sans-p9u 4 місяці тому +1

      Manny is the SMARTEST BECAUSE ONCE HE SPOKE SPANISH

    • @rainyday_lps3080
      @rainyday_lps3080 4 місяці тому +1

      @@blainetate743 Fr it sounds way to animated and forced

  • @tatesanimationslive-wg4od
    @tatesanimationslive-wg4od 5 місяців тому +231

    This is the one time you can feel kinda bad for manny, first, he was bullied to hell and back, then, Susan killed Manny to try to end his suffering, and then he got transported to a world made of froot juice, where his body was rapidly decomposeing, and he had to repeatedly kill people and get their bodys.

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +17

      Agreed he didn’t deserve this 😭😭😭

    • @Hammvr
      @Hammvr 5 місяців тому +11

      He’s only three a that young should never deserve misery

    • @tatesanimationslive-wg4od
      @tatesanimationslive-wg4od 5 місяців тому +5

      OH MY GOD! YOU REPLIED TO ME! THATS SO AWESOME! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! |]

    • @TrickShot303
      @TrickShot303 5 місяців тому +6

      @@Thesteamsmythe he does he has basically turned gregs life into hell hes a damn socio and phsyco path

    • @AlastorsSluttyLilHipSway
      @AlastorsSluttyLilHipSway 4 місяці тому +2

      @@TrickShot303wasnt his fault i think all the stuff he been through was BEFOREHAND that. So he was just broken. “Villans arent Born. Their Made.”

  • @user-ghyuj789p
    @user-ghyuj789p 5 місяців тому +62

    I love the emotion and extra dialogue this guy adds. It’s pretty cool

  • @Justchillingstrangers2012
    @Justchillingstrangers2012 5 місяців тому +48

    I swear.. THE PANICK N SCREAMING VOICE I LOVE IT ABSOLUTELY

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +4

      Thanks m8 I put a lot of heart into these reading and I always appreciate people liking the effort I put in to try to make the characters sound like how you’d think they’d sound like :)

    • @Justchillingstrangers2012
      @Justchillingstrangers2012 5 місяців тому

      DON’T ASK ME HOW TF DID I GET 16 LIKES-

  • @seemingsalvation
    @seemingsalvation 5 місяців тому +34

    One of the first llbs I read that I can remember being genuinely intrigued in and feeling passion for. It's still one of my favorites now.

  • @greenthebean8252
    @greenthebean8252 5 місяців тому +46

    I like how he just randomly started cussing sense it’s only him and Manny

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому

      Agreed m8

    • @Bruh404-i4e
      @Bruh404-i4e 4 місяці тому +4

      It’s maybe if Jeff wanted to make an 18+ diary of a wimpy kid book for adults for its reasons for “disturbing imagery and swears.”

    • @cawsomeaolin
      @cawsomeaolin 4 місяці тому

      @@Bruh404-i4e please i already can’t take those llbs seriously with that wimpy kid artstyle

  • @orangecitrus8056
    @orangecitrus8056 5 місяців тому +68

    dude you have no idea how hard my gf hugged me throughout the video. you did a good job reading I'd say you're as good as Enigma, who's basically one of the goats of DOAWK fanfiction

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +5

      Thank you m8 :)
      I’m glad you enjoyed my llb reading I appreciate you calling me as good as enigma and I hope things go well for you and your gf

    • @BountyHunterV1
      @BountyHunterV1 5 місяців тому

      @@Thesteamsmytheis this a real book

    • @Mcblocksy-funny-vids
      @Mcblocksy-funny-vids 5 місяців тому

      @@Thesteamsmytheso THATS why i say m8

    • @orangecitrus8056
      @orangecitrus8056 5 місяців тому

      @@BountyHunterV1 no

    • @TrickShot303
      @TrickShot303 5 місяців тому

      also please read diaryganropa best fan fic I herd pls read

  • @MapleSyrupTheFirst
    @MapleSyrupTheFirst 5 місяців тому +80

    28:22
    gregory as an adult - 25 years later fanfiction
    A burning grave - five named clive / 25 years later
    the apocolypse - Fregpocalypse / The Zombie Apocalypse
    ballistic missiles - Ballistic Missile
    an old timey war - Out of Time
    a lot of yogurt - the dark web

    • @user-gq1zn2rw8k
      @user-gq1zn2rw8k 5 місяців тому +3

      A lot of yogurt could be the yougurtverse series

    • @user-gq1zn2rw8k
      @user-gq1zn2rw8k 5 місяців тому +6

      Rowley’s dad holding a skewer - Frank’s night out

    • @Sssssbshskan
      @Sssssbshskan 5 місяців тому

      ​@@user-gq1zn2rw8kno I think it was blazed and confused?

    • @Pripaner
      @Pripaner 5 місяців тому +2

      Manny in bed with Susan standing in the doorframe: The Secret

    • @zupec2749forget
      @zupec2749forget 4 місяці тому

      hEs gOiNG tHrOUgH pOrTaLs oF aLtErNaTe DiMeNsIoNs!

  • @MRNentertainment7122
    @MRNentertainment7122 4 місяці тому +16

    Maybe it's just the reputation of the weird Wimpy Kid fan books but I actually kind of like this one

  • @JalimRabei2dias
    @JalimRabei2dias 5 місяців тому +58

    3:03 it can be really scary if you put yourself on Greg's place

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +12

      I’d be scared since he’s running my bed sheets lol

  • @Supercoolguy69420
    @Supercoolguy69420 5 місяців тому +24

    Who knew froot juice can break down universes and be able to make someone travel through different parallel universes

  • @jackgaming7158
    @jackgaming7158 5 місяців тому +131

    Ofc, the thing worser than oil…. FUCKING FROOT JUICE

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +16

      Greg tortured my boy manny with it nobody deserves it that was just wrong of greg

    • @MyCatsNamIsMario
      @MyCatsNamIsMario 5 місяців тому +4

      Jello my good man not froot juice

    • @RamanNoodles01
      @RamanNoodles01 5 місяців тому +2

      @@MyCatsNamIsMario bro… 🤓

    • @MyCatsNamIsMario
      @MyCatsNamIsMario 5 місяців тому +2

      @@RamanNoodles01 what

    • @RamanNoodles01
      @RamanNoodles01 5 місяців тому +2

      @@MyCatsNamIsMario it’s called Froot Juice in universe, and u corrected him for no reason

  • @HAND628
    @HAND628 4 місяці тому +7

    "IT"S FUCKING FROOT-JUICE." that got me lmao

  • @Rope-Tornado
    @Rope-Tornado 5 місяців тому +17

    I thought this was going to be a really bad horror thing but it was genuinely extremely interesting!

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +2

      Im glad you enjoyed this llb it’s one of my favourites and if you like this one I highly suggest you check out my reading of doawk overflowing I promise you won’t regret it m8 :)

  • @voidliss8
    @voidliss8 5 місяців тому +50

    The ancient Myans described hell as rotting house

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +12

      True lol and people also consider constant isolation a hell

    • @Pripaner
      @Pripaner 5 місяців тому +3

      A rotting alive body in a rotting house

    • @reviewtechUSSR1
      @reviewtechUSSR1 4 місяці тому

      Really? How?

    • @voidliss8
      @voidliss8 4 місяці тому

      @@reviewtechUSSR1 wdym

    • @PXLFrosty84
      @PXLFrosty84 4 місяці тому

      @@reviewtechUSSR1 wdym “how”

  • @idioticgamingVR
    @idioticgamingVR 4 місяці тому +12

    16:01 theory. So the person writing this IS manny. He claimed mom was the only innocent person, and he claimed he killed his dad, rodrick, greg, and mom. 21:31 another theory to support this. And in 22:44 he posseses gregs body? 22:55 AHAHAHAHHAHAH I WAS RIGHT

  • @charlie69600
    @charlie69600 5 місяців тому +16

    This was amazing and your voice acting was perfect and for that you just got a sub

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +2

      Glad you enjoyed the reading m8, I highly recommend you also check out my reading of overflowing as well m8 :)

  • @cool_guy_1.e4071
    @cool_guy_1.e4071 5 місяців тому +11

    This feels like a diray of the wimpy kid horror movie... I love it

  • @idioticgamingVR
    @idioticgamingVR 4 місяці тому +11

    Manny, were you summoning demons again?

  • @Love-flowers
    @Love-flowers 4 місяці тому +10

    This gotta be gregorys canon voice.

  • @melatyourservice
    @melatyourservice 5 місяців тому +42

    ....... Jesus I feel all sad ,happy and confused at the same time,What the fu** did I just saw....... Great reading as always though mate been waiting for it , appreciate it

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +4

      Your welcome m8 :)
      Agreed on that this llb makes me feel really bad for manny he was just a baby and didn’t deserve this, they made him into a monster 😭😭😭

    • @Themanwhosnortstheglue
      @Themanwhosnortstheglue 4 місяці тому +1

      What does llb mean??

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  4 місяці тому +1

      @@Themanwhosnortstheglue looks like book

    • @melatyourservice
      @melatyourservice 4 місяці тому +1

      @@Thesteamsmythe I'm not gonna lie to you I don't know what it stands for my self but it's diary of wimpy kid fanfics that looks like gregs diaries..... I think

  • @ImArTiStIc629
    @ImArTiStIc629 5 місяців тому +20

    This was a better read than i thought it would be

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +5

      This is probably the most underrated og doawk fanfic, this came out 6 years ago an yet nobody’s read it and it’s probably my favorite one of my favorite doawk fanfics

  • @Cutted_Cheese
    @Cutted_Cheese 4 місяці тому +7

    Why the FUCK was this in my for you page?!!? *I still loved it tho*

  • @WalkingTheWastes
    @WalkingTheWastes 5 місяців тому +5

    I have a theory, has anyone played the game "Limbo" by playdead, basically the world is black and white, and our character's whole body is black like ink, and His white eyes are the only silhouette, there's a lot of dangers and greg takes a similar appearance to the character, and when he sees his body with his family, that got me thinking, he's obviously dead, but what if he's in Limbo with others who were in the same situation as him, what if his family is? All that are in in Limbo probably have a lot to overcome, and accomplish, and to fix their mistakes, they won't be able to find peace until they do so...

  • @WinstonTheGWRCastle
    @WinstonTheGWRCastle 4 місяці тому +5

    the "IM FREE" Part Is Like Fnaf SL Ennard Ending

  • @andrewpoon2378
    @andrewpoon2378 4 місяці тому +7

    The first 3 minutes are going to give me nightmares. Thanks for that!

    • @andrewpoon2378
      @andrewpoon2378 4 місяці тому +3

      20 minutes. Im going to be awake all night now.

  • @GodzeH
    @GodzeH 5 місяців тому +24

    Best horror fanfict ever

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +5

      Agreed and it’s done so well to my channel :)

  • @naotokamigire-terumi9912
    @naotokamigire-terumi9912 5 місяців тому +11

    A surpise happy ending.

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +3

      Agreed and he didn’t deserve what happened to him 😭

  • @forozankochaki7663
    @forozankochaki7663 5 місяців тому +6

    This is such a good horror wimpy kid book really rocked it man

  • @denisebrathwaite8259
    @denisebrathwaite8259 5 місяців тому +20

    Damn, this was the darkest read aloud of "Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" I ever heard. 😨😰😱😢

  • @strangecolouredbird
    @strangecolouredbird 4 місяці тому +3

    This reminds me of one of my ideas- of a purgatory you're only trapped in because you forget, and the only escape is to never sleep.

  • @suttertv8000
    @suttertv8000 4 місяці тому +3

    I think in this book of diary of a one because I think it Gregg landed inside of Manny. Amazing digital circus.

  • @Trashy_OSC
    @Trashy_OSC 3 місяці тому +2

    This is sending fuckin shivers down my spine 😭

  • @DarkBlade616-hl3ph
    @DarkBlade616-hl3ph 5 місяців тому +5

    Bro as being a fan of diary of a wimpy kid when I younger, this just sent shivers down my spine. Amazing story though

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому

      Agreed the creator wrote peak fiction and crazy part is this is one of the oldest doawk fanfics but was buried for a long time until I found it

  • @Titan-tp3eq
    @Titan-tp3eq 4 місяці тому +13

    Seeing greg s corpse hanging from the ceiling all dismembered and mangled gave me the chills.

  • @rohanghoshdastidar1047
    @rohanghoshdastidar1047 5 місяців тому +16

    Some constructive criticism - Sometimes in your reading, you express too much excitement, and because of that, parts which are actually intense doesn't pop up because all of your reading sounds hyper

  • @wafflemaker-ej3kj
    @wafflemaker-ej3kj 4 місяці тому +3

    the title was amazing i luv mannys drawing

  • @ThatGuyDarkLord
    @ThatGuyDarkLord 4 місяці тому +5

    Manny after the lobotomy:

  • @renevorster6272
    @renevorster6272 Місяць тому +3

    Picture this. You take place as Gregory Heffley from the hit novel series “Diary Of A Wimpy Kid.” You are living in your house as normal, except you can’t find your older brother Rodrick, or your father Frank. You never feel hungry, your mom barely speaks, and your little brother Manny does not show any sign of communication. And the day never passes. Something is wrong. You look into the kitchen and see your mother’s mutilated body hung by wires leaking oil. No, fruit juice. Fucking fruit juice. The next “day” she is completely fine. You look into the basement, you see the exact same situation with your older brother and your dad. Your little brother now seems angry, and starts scribbling on pieces of paper, you feel worried. You try to get him to speak, but he never does. Cut to a few hours later, you are panicked as Manny corners you and takes your life. He cannot let “The Secret” get out. You now take place as Manny, and are trapped in an infinite loop/nightmare, the setting being your own house, which is falling to the bits as you speak. with no way to escape, you have no memories, and each time you discover the corpses, you recall you memories. But every few “days” (even though none seem to pass) you get reset again, in a cold house that reeks of fruit juice, stuck in a decaying body resembling Greg, with nobody but the mutilated corpses of your family, with your memories reset again. Over and over and over. You are completely alone. You feel some extraterrestrial force has taken over. You keep writing down in your journal, being able to read, write, and speak, as you now have the physical attributes of Greg. You finally find a way out and figure out that you were tormented, hurt, and abused by your own family. And the one you think is innocent? That person suffocated you in a pillow in your sleep to kill you to “set you free” from the torment. They were successful. You take your original body from the night you were killed, kill your mother from that alternate universe, and run out the alternate universe. Suddenly, you are yourself again. Living in a world without your abusive dad, who has been taken to the cops. Living with your grandmother, you feel… happy. For the first time in what seems like forever. But you will never shake the things you just experienced out of your head. Those memories will never go away.
    Deep shit.
    That gave me chills when I read this comment over ._.

  • @alenahmetovic9282
    @alenahmetovic9282 4 місяці тому +5

    2:56 He sounds like Morty

  • @brizzybrake1344
    @brizzybrake1344 5 місяців тому +3

    This is perfect cinema 👌
    This should be a 16+ diary of a wimpy kid book

  • @nameless00119
    @nameless00119 4 місяці тому +3

    I got confused when the lore kicked in, but, I knew

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  4 місяці тому

      Agreed and I like how it’s open ended where you can interpret most of it

  • @Polychi1998
    @Polychi1998 4 місяці тому +2

    This really needed horror music for each scene.

  • @HappyJigsawPuzzle-hb6mj
    @HappyJigsawPuzzle-hb6mj 5 місяців тому +5

    This has to be the most darkest goddamn thing in the entire universe I barely understood any of it and yet I do

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +1

      Yeap it’s mean to be like that confusing so you can interpret it yourself :)

  • @user-wz9yh2jp3j
    @user-wz9yh2jp3j 5 місяців тому +14

    bro is stuck in the groundhogs day movie

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +7

      True lol but each day things start to decay more and more

    • @user-wz9yh2jp3j
      @user-wz9yh2jp3j 5 місяців тому +3

      @@Thesteamsmythe manny what’s your strengths? manny:i’m onwy thwee

  • @coyzn
    @coyzn 5 місяців тому +12

    This might been his most viral video he release and I'm happy for him. Been a fan since 3 months :D

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +2

      It is I thought Greg’s first edge would be all I’d be known for lol but it’s amazing this video got viral, glad you’ve been a fan for so long m8 and it’s insane how far things have become I mean I never thought I’d ever reach 1000 and I’m extremely grateful for it so thank you and everyone else :)

  • @Showa1973
    @Showa1973 5 місяців тому +7

    You're my favorite doawk fanfic youtuber

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +2

      Thank you m8 :)
      It’s awesome to here I’m your favorite doawk fanfic UA-camr and I really appreciate your kind words

  • @PurplyWasTaken
    @PurplyWasTaken 5 місяців тому +4

    this makes me need some sort of doawk horror series. 10/10 would read

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +1

      Glad you liked the reading m8, btw if you want more horror doawk fanfic checkout my reading of encaved or the night shift

    • @PurplyWasTaken
      @PurplyWasTaken 5 місяців тому +1

      will do when i finish this!@@Thesteamsmythe

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому

      @@PurplyWasTaken awesome m8 :)

  • @arvino3709
    @arvino3709 4 місяці тому +1

    jeff kinney needs to make books like this

  • @IsabelleplaysTy
    @IsabelleplaysTy 4 місяці тому +3

    6:49 dude they are dead
    12:21 why did Greg deserves this?

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  4 місяці тому +1

      Well I’ll explain it even though the story greg, deserved it since he participated in the bullying but even manny regretted killing him since he was his favorite and Rodrick and frank were done like that on Monday and Tuesday but manny kept them alive as a punishment for the Abuse he got

  • @user-pt1kb4lu3o
    @user-pt1kb4lu3o 5 місяців тому +4

    i undertsand now.
    on monday, rodrick or frank got tourtured then murderd
    tuesday, same happened but with rodrick or frank
    wednesday, greg turn
    friday, susan

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +2

      Close Thursday was Susan and but Friday mannys body started to decay Because it was artificial since he was dead because of Susan and got a body from a different dimension version of greg

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +3

      Also the twist was Sunday was mannys then he was technically the first

  • @lisab8061
    @lisab8061 5 місяців тому +4

    Manny did not Deserved to be bullied to insanity

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому

      Agreed he was just a baby and what the my did to him was unfair 😭😭😭

  • @TrickShot303
    @TrickShot303 5 місяців тому +4

    thanks or making this.This to me is better than encaved thak you truly this is why i subbed keep up the good work

    • @TrickShot303
      @TrickShot303 5 місяців тому +2

      also manny = messed up

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  4 місяці тому +1

      Thanks m8 this was to compensate for the long wait but good news for encaved fans the llbs finally confirmed to continue since the school holidays are starting and the creator will finally be free

    • @TrickShot303
      @TrickShot303 4 місяці тому +1

      @@Thesteamsmythe THANK YOU YESSS

  • @Poncho-tube-sock-the-56th
    @Poncho-tube-sock-the-56th 4 місяці тому +2

    This book so far makes me think of that meme of the black guy with the huge wide open mouth

  • @Thefatherwhoheardaboutthis
    @Thefatherwhoheardaboutthis 5 місяців тому +5

    This is sick. I love it.

  • @hdbdbnmvmhmdvwmnhvsacjvhkk2984
    @hdbdbnmvmhmdvwmnhvsacjvhkk2984 3 місяці тому +1

    The plot twist when the character who's speaking Is manny

  • @SpearoThatIsMini
    @SpearoThatIsMini 5 місяців тому +3

    I like the things where you piece it together as you read it

  • @scargames2277
    @scargames2277 13 днів тому +1

    but here's the real question: where was rowley?

  • @Denmy_12000
    @Denmy_12000 4 місяці тому +1

    When he said got revenge already twice he sounded Irish😂

  • @sufficientframe
    @sufficientframe 4 місяці тому +2

    That was one hell of a creepypasta!

  • @Ender_Boy_11
    @Ender_Boy_11 3 місяці тому

    Somehow this is the least bizarre DOAWK fanfic I have ever read

  • @FacelessTheAnimatorLOL
    @FacelessTheAnimatorLOL 4 місяці тому +3

    1:10 is very relatable 🗣️🔥

  • @AMERICAN482
    @AMERICAN482 4 місяці тому +1

    I like the part when he says “It’s still fucking Saturday” 26:10

  • @TheOfficialBeanieGuy
    @TheOfficialBeanieGuy 5 місяців тому +2

    i THOUGHT THIS WAS A REAL BOOK FOR A SECOND

  • @Liamfox-ks6ws
    @Liamfox-ks6ws 4 місяці тому

    Manny’s sort of like VAL, because SHE sometimes goes away with the action with just staring at you, even though back in 2004, she said things like, “BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH UPON A STAR FOR. IT MIGHT MAKE YOUR WORST NIGHTMARES COME TRUE.” (VAL Fact: Her name stands for: Virtual Analysis Line)

  • @Joe-wt1yw
    @Joe-wt1yw 5 місяців тому +4

    the mum looks like spamton

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому

      Funny you say that because I made a reading on a doawk fanfic about Greg fighting spamton lol ua-cam.com/video/fJpSXkhR_Ek/v-deo.htmlsi=lnl8rQWPMYbxK0e7

  • @itsjustlevicode377
    @itsjustlevicode377 5 місяців тому +4

    If this book is real im forcing my library teacher to get it

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +1

      Sadly it’s not 😔

    • @Pripaner
      @Pripaner 5 місяців тому

      @@Thesteamsmythesomeone needs to make these doawk books real

  • @dropfe4ryt2
    @dropfe4ryt2 24 дні тому

    manny is always a menace in these

  • @g00berthealien
    @g00berthealien 5 місяців тому +8

    your readings are fire

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +1

      Thanks glad you like them m8 and I hope to also your doawk llb goes well :)

  • @Stoked_magic
    @Stoked_magic 4 місяці тому +1

    This one really confused me on what was even going on. This was definitely an acid trip for me (or a froot juice trip)

  • @matla27
    @matla27 4 місяці тому +1

    I guess this is basically diary of a wimpy kid analog horror

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  4 місяці тому

      True but also doawk encaved another fanfic I read is more analog horror

    • @matla27
      @matla27 4 місяці тому

      Ok

    • @matla27
      @matla27 4 місяці тому

      But, look at this vid

  • @JackRook
    @JackRook 5 місяців тому +3

    Me seeing a new DoaWK fanfic: aw shiz, here we go again

  • @AspectAnimates
    @AspectAnimates 4 місяці тому +1

    SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY!

  • @brendonhopkins7939
    @brendonhopkins7939 4 місяці тому +1

    The voice acting is fire

  • @KiaanWavare
    @KiaanWavare 5 місяців тому +1

    THE VOICE ACTING IS KILLING ME LMAO

  • @X_VidzNStuff
    @X_VidzNStuff 5 місяців тому +2

    I was so interested in this video that I forgot I was doing homework
    literally watched this until the end
    for what I understood in this video:
    manny was getting tortured, hurt and much more while being 3
    the mom killed manny and I guess wanting revenge,
    killed everyone day by day
    onto Greg, Greg was stuck on Wednesday and wrote things that happened strangely
    manny stopped talking, hallucinations, blah blah blah
    he went into the basement and found dad and Rodrick in strings with f r o o t j o i c e
    manny wasn’t happy and mom stopped talking. and was stuck in a loop. eventually he died
    then to Susan which I kinda skipped, also died
    in Friday idk if this was on Gregory or manny but he was just stuck in a infinite loop and finding clues
    in Saturday manny somehow had the ability to write and such getting many memories after looking through the mirror
    his body started to rot and found 2 scientist from closet, killed one and took over one
    was accepting fate but found universes out of joy
    one universe “lots of yogurt” is really disturbing if u think about it
    manny found a door that happened what was in the beginning
    killed mom and the police blamed dad on it
    manny was losing his memories and such
    on Monday everything was probably back to normal
    and oh my god I didn’t know I typed this much

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +1

      Yeap you basically got it all down lol probably one of the best written doawk llbs and crazy part is this is from years ago but was buried until I found it

  • @chrisfisher8083
    @chrisfisher8083 5 місяців тому

    2:46 just in the tone of his voice you can tell how freaked out he is I mean congrats to you for that

  • @recovered_th0nkCesar
    @recovered_th0nkCesar 2 місяці тому

    The void of the wimpy kid universe (amazing gumball ref)

  • @EmberMakesPlaylistz
    @EmberMakesPlaylistz 2 місяці тому

    The first manny voice caught me off guard snd i spit out my water

  • @OfficialJokeStudios
    @OfficialJokeStudios 7 днів тому

    28:03 “I SEE IT. THE TRUE ESSENCE OF CURSED ENERGY!!”

  • @Super_Goofy_Goober77
    @Super_Goofy_Goober77 4 місяці тому

    This feels like don't hug me, I'm scared

  • @ddanipea
    @ddanipea 5 місяців тому +1

    14:57 replay this moment at 2x speed for insanity

  • @Sansational69Sansational-iz5dy
    @Sansational69Sansational-iz5dy Місяць тому

    bro was choking to death the whole video 💀

  • @BeansproutGames
    @BeansproutGames 5 місяців тому +4

    10/10 horror fanfic 👌

  • @Abigail02125
    @Abigail02125 4 місяці тому

    After watching this I was looking at my diary of a wimpy kid collection like 0-0, also while I was watching this I heard a gunshot outside and had to get my siblings inside but no one else heard it...

  • @edgelord8476
    @edgelord8476 5 місяців тому +4

    Bro great book keep it up!😊

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +1

      Will definitely keep up the readings m8, also if you enjoyed this reading I highly suggest you check out my reading of doawk overflowing my best reading tbh :)

  • @BoeyHeapNg
    @BoeyHeapNg 4 місяці тому

    1:02 props to dad frfr

  • @RKCandBC
    @RKCandBC 5 місяців тому

    As a wimpy kid reader, a bit of change up in horror is rather… creative? In a good way though! I never really thought of this wow

  • @vilebloodannalise
    @vilebloodannalise 5 місяців тому +2

    Like, holy hell holy hell holy hell holy hell traumatizing

  • @agentquackanimations6772
    @agentquackanimations6772 4 місяці тому

    HOLY CRAP THIS WAS SO CREEPY BUT SO COOL!!!!

  • @justBiolock
    @justBiolock 5 місяців тому +3

    Damn Bro. NICE , Hopefully More of the content comes out. Good luck dude and YES Please Stop doing that BYYEEEEE

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +2

      Will definitely do more content and will as promised read your llb but sorry that outro ain’t leaving anytime soon lol been using it for so long so it’s kinda stuck now

    • @justBiolock
      @justBiolock 5 місяців тому +1

      @@ThesteamsmytheAre you making for it ONLY?

    • @justBiolock
      @justBiolock 5 місяців тому

      Just put the sequl cover aswell .

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому

      @@justBiolock nah as promised it’ll be part of a compilation, I mean depending on how long the reading is if it’s long enough I can give it it’s own video but if now then compilation :)

    • @justBiolock
      @justBiolock 5 місяців тому +1

      @@Thesteamsmythe I definetly making a 100 pages Book next (RUSTED )

  • @migling
    @migling 5 місяців тому +4

    How did manny create a pocket universe!?!?!?

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  5 місяців тому +1

      After his death he became a vengeful spirit powerful due to years of abuse

    • @migling
      @migling 5 місяців тому

      @@Thesteamsmythe oh

    • @user-uv4pc7bi7k
      @user-uv4pc7bi7k 4 місяці тому +1

      I would anwser like medic, "HAHAHA I HAVE NO IDEA" but a vengeful spirit is way better

    • @Thesteamsmythe
      @Thesteamsmythe  4 місяці тому

      @@user-uv4pc7bi7k true lol

    • @user-uv4pc7bi7k
      @user-uv4pc7bi7k 4 місяці тому +1

      @@Thesteamsmythe ok