Is that finished? The ending just comes out of nowhere. Not quite hearing Gospel to be honest. Far more impressionist, Gospel tends to be much more functional. Some lovely sounds but it's all played at one dynamic and constant arpeggios makes you feel like your on a rollercoaster. The message of Jesus was of hope, this didn't feel that way felt more mysterious also feel it slightly slower would give the chords more time to ring and enjoy them but that's personal taste. Whatever you wrote, sounded good with some minor alterations could be a very nice piece but for me personally didn't bring off the title.
@@Nicozumba I'll say this: The chord at the end should probably be played with your right hand rather than your left. I barely know how to play piano so I wouldn't know.
Because of the title, I thought it was a song version of: "change the world. My final message. Goodbye." I did not know it was a mystical melody
Well I thought of the title only after I made half of the song. It was always supposed to sound hopecore-esque, meaning uplifting and inspiring.
a rat smokes his last blunt before ascending to a higher plane
LOL
What a pleasant work!
Thank you
Ou sounds great to me! It reminds me of the start of a fantasy rpg when you just enter the starting village or forest ^^!!
Huge, huge thank you for 1k views! Glad you liked it!
Woahh this is so underrated
Very nice, I enjoyed it
I'm glad you did
this song fills me with determination
Undertale moment
so beautiful love it
I thought this was gonna be the one from inuyasha, but I'm glad I'm wrong.
Is Inuyasha infamous or smth?
@sakey2235 nope. i actually like it (and that op1 especially). I'm just glad to find your piece 😁
@@mixedfiction112 oh nice
so prettyyy
Thanks!!
my final message… goodb ye
This was really nice, maybe this could fit with a violin that joins on the second half?
A violin...? idk, I'm having trouble picturing it...
@@sakey2235 It is ok, i dont have any experience to give advice anyways
@@sakey2235 Hey, any chance i can try adding a violin to the music?
@@MrVindowski Sorry for taking light years to respond! Yes, you may.
kinds reminds me of impressionalism it's pretty
Is that finished? The ending just comes out of nowhere. Not quite hearing Gospel to be honest. Far more impressionist, Gospel tends to be much more functional. Some lovely sounds but it's all played at one dynamic and constant arpeggios makes you feel like your on a rollercoaster. The message of Jesus was of hope, this didn't feel that way felt more mysterious also feel it slightly slower would give the chords more time to ring and enjoy them but that's personal taste. Whatever you wrote, sounded good with some minor alterations could be a very nice piece but for me personally didn't bring off the title.
Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it a lot.
Hum...its rings a bell...
Quite literrally
Literally? wdym /gen
@@sakey2235anyway cool! I might even learn it
@@Nicozumba I'll say this: The chord at the end should probably be played with your right hand rather than your left. I barely know how to play piano so I wouldn't know.
@@sakey2235 Yeah...also its weird to see the "octvave" thing like Im more used to see notes up but I appreaciate it for sightreading
@@Nicozumba nw
3. quite boring but eh
To each their own