I am speechless…. Gimme a second… Soooo first thing I IMMEDIATELY got drawn into was Mr this for that’s speech. The voice and tone with the rhyme scheme made me break out in goosebumps. I did kinda figure her brother was going to be taken, it was a slight thought before he stuffed the sandwich in her gaming console but that part confirmed it for me… even though it STILL made me break out in chills and bumps when the creature took him…. My stomach and chest got tight…. I also was able to foretell that “daddy” was going to be no better… but was thinking she would ask for her brother back and her dad to leave again. When she said she wanted her parents happy and to never fight… i figured she was a goner at that moment. I wasn’t expecting Mama running to see why Sarah was screaming… the adrenaline and panicking made me again, lose my breath and feel the anxiety too…. Didn’t think that the mom would open the door and instantly forget… I thought she was in shock or something because she was confused like where is Sarah. Then I seen the room and then daddy was at table writing and both kids forgotten and never existed. It was REALLY Really good. I love how it ended, with Mama slowly glancing at the door like she did, as if what just happened was what her husband had written? And almost like she vaguely remembered what just happened a moment ago, but wasn’t sure? This Short deserves an Award. It’s my favorite so far. Phenomenal job all around!! 🎉
There was a Twilight Zone (80's series) called "The Card" with Meredith Baxter like this, except she runs up her credit card bill and when she's late on making payments, one thing after another vanishes.
WOWWWWW! I am a Film Producing student from India and would like to congratulate you all! I was at the edge throughout! Loved it guys. I would like to know. more about the production of this film
Every year I build a collection of Halloween short films to share with friends and family. This is a fantastic short film. Congratulations on your achievement. Thank You
I see what you did there. Living in the shadow of the oil well. It's a parable illustrating the childishly short sighted trade-offs we make for fossil fuel.
The fish was really good. Phenomenal job!
The little girl acted phenomenal
I am speechless…. Gimme a second…
Soooo first thing I IMMEDIATELY got drawn into was Mr this for that’s speech. The voice and tone with the rhyme scheme made me break out in goosebumps. I did kinda figure her brother was going to be taken, it was a slight thought before he stuffed the sandwich in her gaming console but that part confirmed it for me… even though it STILL made me break out in chills and bumps when the creature took him…. My stomach and chest got tight…. I also was able to foretell that “daddy” was going to be no better… but was thinking she would ask for her brother back and her dad to leave again. When she said she wanted her parents happy and to never fight… i figured she was a goner at that moment. I wasn’t expecting Mama running to see why Sarah was screaming… the adrenaline and panicking made me again, lose my breath and feel the anxiety too…. Didn’t think that the mom would open the door and instantly forget… I thought she was in shock or something because she was confused like where is Sarah. Then I seen the room and then daddy was at table writing and both kids forgotten and never existed.
It was REALLY Really good.
I love how it ended, with Mama slowly glancing at the door like she did, as if what just happened was what her husband had written? And almost like she vaguely remembered what just happened a moment ago, but wasn’t sure?
This Short deserves an Award. It’s my favorite so far. Phenomenal job all around!! 🎉
This little story could rival some of the old classics...very very good film.
The Best short film I've seen in a long time.
There was a Twilight Zone (80's series) called "The Card" with Meredith Baxter like this, except she runs up her credit card bill and when she's late on making payments, one thing after another vanishes.
Why was I expecting this to be one of those movie recap videos?
WOWWWWW! I am a Film Producing student from India and would like to congratulate you all! I was at the edge throughout! Loved it guys. I would like to know. more about the production of this film
Great story, well told! Congratulations to all involved.
This short was fantastic!!! Loved everything about it! Such good acting! Really creepy story. Kudos! Bravo! More, please!
Every year I build a collection of Halloween short films to share with friends and family. This is a fantastic short film. Congratulations on your achievement.
Thank You
This needs to be a feature! Great short
Well done. Great entertainment. Thank you.
Brilliant longer version please 🙏
The girl is a really good actor, and the story satisfactorily disturbing.
This was sooo well done!! What a cool idea.
LOVED THIS!!! Would be amazing to see a continuation of the short, but not complaining….SO GOOD. 🖤
Very, very good. In fact excellent. Well done to all those involved.
Damn! that was good…
Holy moly i watch alot of horror shorts,but this jam right here is next level devil shiz ,incredible absolutely incredible.
Oh my gosh this is brilliant!!!!
LOVE BUT HAT. THIS WORLD SHOULD BE PAVED OF GOLD, BUT THIS.
Beautiful talent art and acting from child Beautiful little girl too ❤
Really good,and that little girl fantastic acting
I see what you did there.
Living in the shadow of the oil well.
It's a parable illustrating the childishly short sighted trade-offs we make for fossil fuel.
Absolutely brilliant
Fantastic!
Whoa. This was good!
Great one . I liked this one.
I know exactly what I want...!
Excellent!
Good one!
Amazing😮😮😮😊😊😊
Deep