The Worst Script Ever - Bad Writing, Shipping, and a Sonic OC
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- Опубліковано 18 жов 2024
- What happens when a middle schooler thinks she can write an episode of Sonic X? Many things. All of them bad. Join me as I pick apart this work of art.
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Voice Cast:
SNT, Cheese, Chao Announcer #2 - Me
Shadow, Omega - Zedrin
/ zombiezephyr
Sonic - Vocalee
/ voca_lee
Tails, Rouge - MEMJ0123
/ memj0123
Amy - Saki McGee
/ sakimcgee
/ sakimcgee
Cream - Meredith Sims
/ vasnapdragon
Vector - Wolfblade93
/ wolfblade93
Espio - Grant Paulsen
/ grantpaulsenva
Charmy - PCShnun
/ pcshnun
Knuckles - Spencer
/ stuckinadessert
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Special Guests:
Kn of SonicSong182 - Chao Announcer #1
/ sonicsong182
Sasso Studios - Guest Animator
/ sassostudios
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![Smoother animation ≠ Better animation [read description]](/img/n.gif)
Hope you guys enjoyed suffering with me! I wanna give a big thanks to all the VAs for the amazing work, as well as Sasso Studios for the awesome animation at 12:30
Dude I loved this so much
UwU ThE BiSt ScRiPt EVer :3
Ya
Uwu
Edit- also guys compare this to the first video with snt and the different is cool
7 person to like lol
Kids, there's nothing cooler than getting a Chaos Emerald from someone you like, but if someone tries to give you a Chaos Emerald in a place or in a way that makes you feel uncomfortable, *that's no good.*
Hypershadic23 amazing
kidney emerald
69th like haha!
-i guess this is my new therapy session-
Uh yeah what they said
In the fight scenes, I like to imagine Sonic and shadow are just gmod rag dolls smashing together and jittering around
Omg YES I SHOULD MAKE THAT WHEN I GET GMOD ONE DAY IM A LOSER qwq
Meow.
[My god, Sonic zombies sonic vs shadow.]
Meow.
[That is what I think of.]
That's beautiful. 😂
*sonic riders fandub has entered the chat*
I can already hear the sounds just reading this.
Shadow is like a 5 year old kid, who wants to give something cool he found to a person he likes.
True
facts
That's also how penguins "propose" to each other. They give a nice pebble that they found to another penguin and if the penguin accepts it, then they're mates.
It's like a wedding ring but not
No one else like this comment, keep it at 999. Not that the number sucks, but it’s just so satisfying for it to be at 999.
as cringey as this thing is, its also adorable to just see something so genuine. Little courtney wasn't worried about being cringe, she just made whatever the heck she wanted to make. The old SNT content is to me so charming because it came from a place of innocence, a kid just having fun with a fictional world
Agreed
Alright, hear me out here:
AU where SNT KNOWS about everyone liking her and she’s just super cynical about it and sick of everyone’s shit
Best AU Ever!
GemmTheCosmic because of it she starts working with eggman
NO CUSSING PPL AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH
I'm for it
@@foxiavlogs6112 you clear haven't seen the streams lmao
i think the line "I feel so alone, nobody understands... nobody... *climbs up a tree*" is really underrated
“I’m so quirky🥺no one will understand my pain”
LMAOAOAOAO
i’d start losing it omg
lmao
IM LITERALLY CRYING AND WHY CLIMB UP A TREE
Just remember, this was all because SNT didn't want a chaos emerald
First reply!
;^
"No, don't pressure me!"
" *T A K E I T* "
Worst plot ever am I right chat.
Agreed
ok, this is off-topic, but our yt names-
S.N.T Comics characters in a nutshell:
S.N.T: Wattpad Y/N
Sonic: Nice Guy™
Shadow: Low-key red flag
Tails: Has common sense 25% of the time
Cream: Only smart one
Amy: Tsundere Lesbian
Knuckles: Misogynistic Zuko
Rookie: Most sane character here-
Cheese: The ACTUAL smart one
(probably exclusive to here) The Chaotix: The only guys in character.. for some reason
“No matter what horrible things I do, I’ll still love you.”
This sounds like something a wattpad boyfriend would say.
Yea, that's a red flag. 😳😭
Fanfic reader here: It is true.
@@MysticFIourCookie other fanfic reader: Can confirm
Lmao-
True
G O D
Ayyy its shadows VA
@@annabenson1238 If S.N.T was in the Archie comics univers, well Scourge would try to get with her instead of Fiona, Light Mobius would be a bit different because Sonic married Sally & S.N.T and he would have four because of this, etc.
You sir are a trooper, thank you for enduring this God awful script for the sake of content. You are a hero.
@@Lawfullypilled Are you talking to me?
The fact you endured this hellhole, is good
You’re honestly a stronger person than most of us for making this public.
agree
I would cry in a corner if I made a cringey thing public.
If I posted dis I would be dead inside
I agree it is true i will never do that if i have a channel
*Crying in corner*
All of my videos are cringe *you will never understand my pain*
the way everyone yelled snt at 22:37 is the funniest shit ever hearing vectors voice be so worried and loud just made me cry from laughter
As much as Courtney claims to be currently suffering and cringing, I bet her 7th grade self would have LOVED to see the amazing quality of this video of her script being shown through visuals and voice acting. I hope that she is at least happy about that.
Damn I have to remember.
Young you would be proud of how much you have grown even tho you would hate your young self because of how bad you where...
@@guncatto2625 I personnally I think my younger self would find my current self embarrassing
@@aikotitilai3820 y
"Sonic instead of listening to me and searching for SNT, you went a head and still searched for SNT. So although, we could've contacted you once we found her, you get to be framed as the bad guy instead." lol
xD
My childhood teachers logic
Am I the only one who thinks Sonic would be extremely good at search and rescue? Since you know, he's fast and can still process his environment, even at extreme speeds..
@@jinxkitty3122 idk
Lol,
Script: "wipes tears from snt's eyes"
My brain: the shadow figurine gonna punch her
@William Afton vanny asked you if you wanna go on a killing spree with her :p
Remember: it’s completely okay to be “cringe” and make “cringe” stuff aslong as you aren’t hurting anyone while doing it and enjoying yourself
"as long as you aren't enjoying yourself" got it!
@@blurredwolf2339Ah yes, ambiguous language. Truly epic funny times.
...
The key word in "hurting anyone else while doing it and enjoying yourself" is "and". You can do one or the other, just not both.
Sonic: Why are you running?! WHY are you running?!
SNT: ÄÄÄÄ
_wheeze_
_wheeze_
That is EXACTLY what I thought of during that scene
ö Ü
funny face.
Wheeze
Sonic acts like that 8 year old kid who get mad at his friend for talking at his crush
Well I mean maybe when the creator was young it might have happened in kindergarten WHO KNOWS-
@@8bitty192 I was making a joke XD lol
Art geek_211 me too lol
CALEB I TOLD YOU NOT TO TALK TO VERONICA-
Sounds like people in my school, I’m in high school so that’s just sad
3:23
Shadow: Take the Chaos Emerald, SNT!
SNT: No, don't pressure me!
Shadow: ACCEPT THE WEED-
Eggman:"Did someone say weed?"
Disney logic: Donald Duck doesn't wear pants but when he doesn't have his shirt he covers "it" up, and I hope you know what I mean by "it"
@@-brye_the_bun- ...what does that have to do with my stupid comment from a few months ago or the fact that this has SEGA characters, not Disney?
@@-brye_the_bun- I think you are in the wrong commentchain.
@@Red-qq6ut your comment is 10 years ago
Rouge: "What are you fighting about now?"
Shadow: "You don't need to know about that!"
Surprisingly in character, actually. 🤣🤣
“And why isn’t tails and knuckles asking the same thing? Do they just blindly go whoever ever sonic goes because he’s sonic?”
Sega: *immense sweating*
Sega: *(Silently erases script)*
Players of Sonic: *ankwardly remember all the games*
yep pretty much facts lol especially 06 ugh
I like how at first AmyxSNT was intented as kind of a joke ending for the comic, with Amy being the tsundere and SNT the oblivious dork, but at this point it's practically the main ship
I think after SNT Forces it's SNTxRookie
@@Mylesledragon I still ship SNT/Amy
@@cursedalien Honestly at first I thought Rookie was gay because the ~special~ aura wasn’t working.
@@allisonstarr6074thats actually hilarious
@@Mylesledragon Seeing this was after SNT Forces (and y’know…Emerald Eyes)
I think SNAmy is still alive and well.
Sonic through the entire script : ANGER ANGER AND MORE ANGER .
SNT : I’m tO sPeCiAl To HeLp ThEm PrOpErLy
Shadow : just trying to be nice but is silently a psychopath .
Also sonic: it's a me! SERIAL KILLER MAN
If SNT ran away in the middle of the fight Sonic would've died
Lol
Amy: *Repressed gay noises holding an SNT plush*
Sonic is written out of Character so aggressively he is so unfitting for his character.
It's almost as if the character of Sonic and Shadow was swapped.
😂
This fan fiction was truly one of the fan fictions of all time. The script was there and the characters were truly the characters of all time. I give it a bees out of 10
I give it a mopey love interest OC out of creepy Shadow.
hey does any1 know dave and bambi AKA dnb
Why do you care @@salaartariq2103
"Nobody understands me... *climbs up a tree*" is such a mood
Mhm..
LOL so true
Soo true. =)
True lamo
XD Yes
A wise man once said "Those whom hide their past to appear based are cringe, but those whom share their cringe are based.
*”I am cringe, and that’s based. I will never be based, and that is not cringe.”*
@@scootermcpeanuts6699 "There's no cringe I'd rather share than mine."
Pros:
-Shadow was written, kinda well at times, when he was concerned over SNT, that was fine, as at this time Shadow (seeing as how you wrote this after Heroes was released) was written to be forgiving and to care for others before he was ruined post-Sonic 06. Him caring for SNT at the end would actually be fitting for his character; even if his sudden shift in the script wasn't good
-Team Chaotix was perfect
-The Knuckles/Rouge banter was good even though it was brief
While you despise it, there are some things to be proud of what you did here
True, some parts of this story was accurate and interesting to keep watching.
yuh
Shadow in heroes was actually pretty chill, and wasn't whatever he was in his own game, so yeah he's written acceptably well
@@stanbrule9357 yep
5:06 “Stop it, stop fighting!”✌️😰✌️
End your duel.
@@wantedbird55srandomchannel28 *Cease your conflict.*
@@this_dude3881 Discontinue Thou Argument
Fun fact: Did you know that the boice actor for the Original shadow made him sound this way was based off his old roomate that made everything sound "dramatic."
???
Lol that’s cool
Boice lmao
That's- actually really interesting!
Hearing that the OG voice actor based his voice off of a dramatic friend oddly makes shadow's unique voice
endearing.
*Also,*
*_I'm stealing "Boice" now_*
Voice*
"Next time SNT runs away..." he's saying that with such confidence. Kinda makes it seem like her running away is a pretty common occurrence.
"Where is that damn SNT"
5:00
_Sonic and Shadow starts arguing_
SNT: Stop it! Stop fighting! ✌🏻😊✌🏻
To stop fighting, just stop fighting
@@Phoenix_Blader_93
To stop being sad, just stop being sad
@@kaminozkorner LMAO
The most quirky thing ever is trying to stop fights, in the most dramatic way-
@@kaminozkorner bad parents when their kid says they are depressed
This script actually plays with YA love triangle tropes really well. Of course, Courtney circa 2005 May not have been aware of them.
Let’s review:
Girly girl likes one of the guys and is therefore portrayed in a negative light
Treating the girl like a trophy
“Good” guy acts jerkish in a way to contrast with the “bad” guy developing gentlemanly qualities
I mean, I’ve never read series infamous for doing this but this follows the plot beat of the “dark” men being portrayed as desirable. To be fair to Shadow he didn’t sexually assault SNT, Young Courtney just accidentally implied he did.
Huh, surprised I got positive reception on this comment. Go figure!
@@allisonstarr6074How's that surprising?
@@isavenewspapers8890 I assumed people wouldn’t like me calling out popular book series (I edited the names out)
"No matter what horrible things I might do, I'll still love you"
🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩🚩
When you give of so many Red Flags that everyone thinks the Soviet Union has re-emerged *cue Soviet Anthem*
That's the equivalent of murdering someone's entire family except one person and you tell that one person "No how many people I kill, I'll still love you"
Someone: is that a red flag. Me: crimson
My phone makes these flags look yellow. Because we can't have the same icons as other phones, or some crap...
That's a lot of red flags in that statement right there
(meanwhile, in an alternate but still very cringey universe)
Sonic: Shadow? SNT ran up to me crying and... She said she was under a lot of pressure. Did you scare her?
Shadow: ... Yes, it seems so. I just wanted to give SNT this Chaos Emerald, so I could teach her how to use Chaos Control. But I didn't explain myself and... I was far too forceful.
SNT: Oh... That's what you wanted...
Shadow: SNT, I'm sorry.
SNT: No, it's ok... I was overreacting. I'm really sorry, Shadow...
Sonic: Hey, don't you two worry! These things happen, especially around here. So no need to feel ashamed!
SNT: Yeah you're right, Sonic.
(Shadow nods)
SNT: Shadow, do you really think I'm ready to use your power?
Shadow: Oh, it's not just me who can use it. You'll do fine. Now, let me show you how to hold the Emerald...
Vector: CHARMY! (echoes louder)
*THEY MUST BE FIGHTING OVER MEEEEEE*
*LEROY.... JENKINS!* _(Booming voice that rocks Mobius)_
Uhhhhhhhh uh oh no
Me brain hurt. Lose much brain cells.
SNT is the type of person who’d yell “IM SO QUIRKY”
That or “LOL I’M SO RANDOM”
@@kammothy542 exactly
SMh nobidy understands me! SMH SMH SMH Ugh i hate barbies 🙄🙄🙄🙄 SMHH ew i hate pink im not like other girls. SMH SMH SMH i dint liek hanging with the other girl i only hang with the boy im one of then 🤪🤪🤪🤪SMHSMHSMHSMH SMH SMH SMH SMH
Snt-
iM nOt lIKe oTHer gIrLS
It def screams pick me girl vibes
8:14
To be fair, it’s pretty hard to get the Chaotix egregiously wrong
Fair point. They’re the comic relief for the most part so they really just have to be a little silly so if you wanna make them suck you’d actually have to wanna TRY and make them suck
That’s why they’re some of the few characters that actually haven’t had any major derailment.
When you realize that the reading of the comic was 4 years ago-
(EDIT: why did this have to blow up 🥲)
Omg I just realized, I used to watch it all the time
😳
wait wat
why did this comment blow up-
Vid: Snt is looking down at her feet. She is sad.
Me: *Completely ignores SNT and focuses on the beauty that is Sonic and Shadow fighting 8:59
Lmfao
Rolling around at the speed of... ouch
Sonadow💗😩
@@Letarianmilton get out
@@Snazzypreformance no let them stay
I'm going to be completely honest. Your take on Team Chaotix is perfect. This fanfiction may be terrible but I adore their interactions in this script.
Charmey is way to much like me and I'm a adult which goes to show I refused to grow up.
They are shockingly in character for an early teen conceived fanfic.
Theory. Maybe Morgan wrote their dialog
@@End_Productionsmaybe all I know is..everyone came for snt but stayed for team chaotix.
@@End_Productions *dialogue
Not gonna lie, SNT, your old sonic videos actually helped me make my litteral first oc and helped 10-12 year old me get into fandoms in general.
the only video I remember somewhat clearly is the meme-style video with Will? one of the younger characters saying "did I do good will?" and him saying "you did very good"
I started off making a child of Silver and Blaze, Frost the Ice Cat... but over the years I evolved her. She became a lynx and gave her an entire interesting story, even thought of changing her alot...but it was interesting. I got into the sonic fandom, then slowly the warrior fandoms. now here I am trying to make art in a million fandoms! XD
so I have to thank you ❤️❤️
Alternative title: Courtney dying on the inside for about 30 minutes for our entertainment
R.I.P you have served us well :.)
Wtf why are THERE TALKING CHAOS OMOCHAOOOOOOOO
“Nobody understands me, nobody..”
*climbs tree*
XD
*Plays Mood while this scene plays out* WHY YOU IN A MOOD S.N.T? Hmmmm????
Nobody understands me so I will climb up a random tree and expect someone to find me crying
I think that it's funny because in Sonic everyone jumps higher than the trees all the time so if she jumps up to climb the tree she just rockets into space.
Some emo teen: No one understands ME T-T
Starts climbing up a tree*
I will remain here with all of my CROW that actually understands what I’M going through
Big “cries, turns into a wolf, runs” energy
20:14 I know that it’s supposed to be bunch of chao comforting her but I kinda almost wish you took that misspell literally and surrounded her with chaos like natural disasters and stuff that somehow comforts her lol.
This has got to be the funniest comment I've seen
or clone chaos and make him comfort her
It would have been better if it were chaos emeralds around het
@Vector
🤣
“Thanks earthquake and global warming, the comfort was very nice :) “
12:17: Wow the transition happened so fast that Rouge managed to get into her other outfit so quickly.
Yeah, and some how BOTH team blasts managed to hit SNT to; sonic’s knocking her back and Shadow’s JUST so happened to knock down the tree little hedge-fox SNT had climbed into like a little squirrel
Deep thoughts:
S.N.T is technically related to Sonic since she has his D.N.A
s w e e t
h o m e
*a l a b a m a*
Maybe thats why she actually isnt interested in Sonic Or Shadow, she's biologically unable to find them as romantic partners since it would count as incest. But Amy on the other hand...
Olivia Waggoner Yes Snamy (or Snookie)
@@aivilo9892 well if were going off biological urges as justification, she couldn't find any attractive cuz they can't procreate
@@aivilo9892 she's not related to shadow she's related to tails knuckles and sonic
The one thing i learned from this:
If someone don't understand you, just climb a tree
*goes to Russia
*Don't speak the language
*climb tree
*get stuck
*cannot call for help because no one understands me
@@reptilprinceoflizardpeople5797 ok, you're a genius, where's your crown?
@@Hydrozio how do you cross the words like that
@@reptilprinceoflizardpeople5797 ayo this is genius what
😂
This is the worst thing I've ever seen.
I love it.
@°•Errorink Fan•° Yo shit, can you read? Read more.
I just wanted to tell you that this has become my current comfort video. ; w ; I think I've watched it 10 times in the past couple of days.
“LET THE BATTLE BEGI!-“
Ad: *POSITIVITY IS A CHOICE*
Lol
I got a resees as
Lamo yes 😂
Well the ad isn't wrong
@@morpho_kight true
9:01 now THATS animation!
100/10
XD AMY WAS SO MAD SHE COULD TAKE A SHIT
😬😂😬
♾
@@selfloveybear5556 You mean *Mad?* Also don’t swear-
Dude, it's interesting to see how most of us regret about stories we made when younger but we still keep them in some kind of "special place" in our minds
I wish I wouldn't tbh
Me with the super power warrior cats self insert fanfic I wrote that was also a musical
We could explain Shadow's sudden 180° change in heart by having him remember Maria, perhaps a Fight that broke out between them during their time on the Ark.
Perhaps this situation reminded him of that Fight, maybe it could be shown in a flashback sequence during the chase.
Of course we do know that Maria the "Hedgehog" canonically exists within the SNTverse, but that's another Universe's Maria, we could still say that this Maria that existed in this Universe, died on the Ark.
It's a possibility, if Shadow and Maria do have a Sibling-like Relationship, then it's inevitable that they'll have a Sibling Fight, and eventually they'll make it up to each other at the end.
But then again, this is just me trying to help salvage an already-cringeworthy script.
I love how the title "Jealousy" is written in the same font and color as the "SpECiAl" sequence XD
Because jealousy is SpECiAl (lol)
@@spaceartstuff very SpEcIaL
@@kindauneededifuaskme No it’s not the script, it’s just that..
ShEs SpEcIaL🌸✨❤️🦋🪄🦄
"I tried stopping you two from fighting but you wouldn't listen to me"
BOY YOU DIDN'T DO ANYTHING
Shadow: I'll still love you
Maria: AM I A JOKE TO YOU
"Maria"
**Explosion's go off in the distance**
@@ryleishields snapcube? 👀
"B****, what am I, A ROACH?"
Wait aren't they like siblings?
I usually find fight scenes boring, but I really enjoyed the one in your script because of all the fun audience reactions. And the idea of two Chao(s) doing commentary was probably funny enough to excuse them for suddenly knowing how to speak. There's good stuff here!
Shadow x SNT x Sonic Love Triangle: *small brain*
SNT x Amy ( platonic or romantic): *Big Brain Time*
Its big brain time
i like to think that Amy is to scared to say she likes SNT cause of shadow and sonic so she just pretends to hate her
big brain shipping
someone make a fanfiction where amy realizes she doesn't actually like sonic and she was just having internalized homophobia
@@vilivette ON IT.
“You don’t understand! Nobody does!”
Oh god SNT is going threw her emo phase
Then you can just hear SNT with her face beat up with makeup, and screaming at Dr. Eggman "ITS NOT A FAZE EGGMAN!"
*then SNT leaves the room and when sonic goes inside there’s a omelette on the floor*
EnderHog: Nobody ever will...
its not a phase mum! er= i mean
courtney!
Yes XDDD
Shadow: *Gets hit by acorn.*
Shadow: "And so I took that personally-"
😂😂😂😂😂
9:01 Sonic and Shadow spinning around in front of each other is just amazing
11:38 snt: nobody understands me
Me: boo hoo, lemme play a sad song on the world's smallest violin
* *starts playing "the sound of silence"* *
*plays something that makes people’s ears bleed* heh heh my ears NEVER hurt!
11:31
Imagine their neighbor’s just watching an adult playing with a stuffed sonic creature climbing a tree-
every sonic plush tuber in a nutshell
At 20:38 too.
I just imagine the neighbor staring at her being like "wtf is she doing now".
@@SkyStrife2690 I remember watching Spindashpro as a kid. So much nostalgia.
@@thegrandxbunny2073 same actually lol. I love that guy.
No one:
Not even SNT:
Shadow: Can i offer you a chaos emerald in these trying times?
BZ Animations LMAO NOOOO
Yep
SNT acting like "no one understands me" just made me frustrated as heck so thank you
SNT: "it's gonna take a while for me to forgive you"
SNT one minute later: *I WANNA HOLD YOUR HAAAAAND, I WANNA HOLD YOUR HAND*
Man can you IMAGINE how stoked your younger self would be to see her script adapted into a fully voice-acted video with high quality art and animations tho? Wholesome thought.
To think this madness all started with Shadow trying to give SNT a Chaos Emerald...
Even SNT knows
Why is this comment so underrated
@@nan1bannan165 cuz its NOT special
I like how Shadow says "Next time SNT runs away" as if this happens every Tuesday or something
i love how everybody agrees that SNTAmy is the superior ship. we all saw Amy hating SNT for existing and then were like “yep that’s cute”
It's a caliginous quadrant
She a tsundere
I personally think SNTxRookie/Gizmo is the superior ship tbh
@@blubin189 I agree
In the sprite comics hightlights video the voicer of amy said that she was salty pink "lesbein"
I want to see a "fixing all the errors remake" version of this
Underrated comment
@@VP_Rando yep
@@VP_Rando yep
YEP YEP
That would be amazing!
[9:01] Those rotating drawings is...... just prefect- I MEAN: perfect.
Do you mean, *P E R T F E C T*
@@BladerKev ...I didn't get it (I'm brazillian)
@@ianp.j.c.5615 It was a refference to a bootleg zones vg video for a famiclone ddr game
@@BladerKev Oh...
Also the source engine sounds
"Well.. we were fighting over you. You should be happy someone cares for you..." LMFAOO DAMN 💀
I'm waiting for the SNT-harem ending. In which everyone marries SNT, adopts 50 chao, achieve world peace, and of course, find that damn fourth chaos emerald.
Lol 😂
So cream also marries SNT?
@@lpfan4491 that sounds really cursed
SNT: “STOP IT! STOP FIGHTING!!”
Her hands: ✋✌️
ShE wAnTs PeAcE!
Stop,PeAcE
Haha. She does want peace ✌️
Snt: stop fighting
Also snt: does nothing
No actually, this script isn't really bad. It's just a bad plot.
Yeah, but I don't like when my Sonic stories are only in one area, I like when they go to different worlds like in the games. I wanna start doing animations
"I watch anime for the plot!"
The plot:
Oh boy oh boy... Just the fact that it's voiced... It's enough to crack me up.
@@squiggle1908 Yikes-
Wait why tf is it liked
23:42 the way sonic says every thing seriously but sonic says “I am here to murder you” happily
"Oh brother"
Espio was the most relatable character in this
*I enjoy your pfp*
Script writing aside, you VA team did great here. I loved the "What?" Part gg.
This is actually not the worst thing I’ve ever seen. In fact, it’s almost average compared to other works. Works that I’ve ever read or **ahem** wrote. The VAs were really good too, especially Shadow’s and Sonic’s. Keep up the great work, everyone!
Also, to all the dudes I talked with in the chat; I had fun! Y’all were great! If you see this comment, just know that I appreciated talking with you.
I love you're pfp. It has my fav character and she's in low quality UwU
esam zetouna YES! Bow down to Her Highness Derp Frog!
We stand for Tsuyu baby
Kate Barnes! It’s nice to see you again! Still figuring out the details of your OC, I imagine?
Danielle Nice to see you too! I am still working out the final stuff for my OC heh-
This actually kind of inspired me to make my own Sonic OC and script. I thought it would be really hard but my creative juices just started flooding my brain. I haven't drawn her yet but this is basically the backstory of her. I also put the script I made in the comment if you wanna read it.
Her backstory: Her name is Kalani. She is a wolf. She lived in a regular wolf pack with her parents, Magnolia (the mother), Void (the father), and her older brother, Lucian. She had a relatively uneventful childhood until Lucian was 17 and she was 15. Their home caught on fire and Kalani made it out losing an arm. The others were all dead. She decided to go to Dr. Robotnik. She convinced Robotnik to help her in exchange for working for him. So she became a bioweapon. She came out with a robotic arm and robotic wings. That's when Kalani met him. She saw a black and gray creature with a red jewel on his chest. He introduced himself as Infinite. She immediately caught feelings. Little did she know Infinite felt the same way, but he was in fear of rejection. So they never got into a relationship. Until the event that their lives flashed before their eyes. This script is called "Sacrifice".
Sacrifice
(The scene opens with Kalani reading a book.)
Kalani: *reading the book* "Never in my life will I understand why they betrayed us, but that doesn't matter now. We must"-
(Her reading gets interrupted when the speaker in her room starts making noise. It's Robotnik talking.)
(The scene cuts in half with Kalani on the left and Infinite on the right. Infinite's playing video games.)
Robotnik: Everyone, come into the lab! Our new weapon is ready!
Kalani and Infinite: Oh, God what is it now?
(The screen full screens on Kalani's side.)
(She goes down to the lab and finds Infinite down there as well, looking like he doesn't want to be there.)
Infinite: So, Doctor. What is this new weapon?
Robotnik: I'm glad you asked! Here it is. *he turns around and pulls out a foot-long kitchen knife*
(The two look at the screen utterly confused.)
Robotnik: I know it looks like a regular knife, but don't be fooled. This weapon has poison installed in it, so when someone gets stabbed with it, some of the poison will be injected into the bloodstream. They won't die immediately, but they'll be feeling so much pain, they'll wish they could. You two will go and use it to finally defeat that blue hedgehog once and for all.
(He hands Infinite the knife.)
(The scene switches to when the two finally make it to Sonic's location.)
Kalani: You ready?
Infinite: *blushes slightly under his mask* Yep.
(Kalani knocks on the door.)
Sonic: *opens the door* Hello?
(Kalani lunges at him, staring the fight. Infinite runs in, holding the knife.)
Timeskip: We are now a half hour into the fight. It switched to outside. Kalani is holding everyone back while infinite is doing hand-to-hand with Sonic.
(All of a sudden, a flash of purple breaks through Kalani's defenses. It's Blaze the cat! And she's going straight for Infinite.)
Kalani: Infinite! On your nine!
(He turns around to see Blaze inches away. He gets pushed by her and drops the knife.)
Blaze: Sonic! Grab the knife!
(Sonic picks up the knife. Blaze runs out of the way as Sonic heads for Infinite, knife in hand.)
Infinite: *screams*.
(Kalani turns around and a devastated look covers her face.)
Kalani: Infinite!
(She runs towards them and jumps midway through.)
Kalani: I won't let you hurt him!
(A flashbang covers the screen. When the flash clears, it shows Infinite covering his hands.)
Infinite: Wha? What happened?
(He looks up at Sonic. Sonic looks mortified.)
(Infinite looks down and sees why Sonic is mortified.)
Infinite: Oh my God! Kalani!
(The screen shows Kalani curled into a ball with the knife stuck in her side.)
Infinite: *looks up at Sonic* What did you do?!
Sonic: I- I didn't mean to!
(Infinite looks back down at Kalani.)
Infinite: Kalani, please! *looks at the crowd* Someone get help! *back down at her* Kalani, hang in there! I already lost my squad! I can't lose you too! I love you! *covers where his mouth is under his mask*
(Kalani's eyes snap open.)
Infinite: *looks over and sees an ambulance* Thank goodness!
(The scene switches to a hospital with Kalani in the bed asleep and Infinite at her side.)
Doctor: She's going to live with no major complications. We managed to get all the poison out of her body. But she'll be pretty weak for a while. I'll leave you with her. Let me know if you need anything.
(The doctor leaves. A few minutes later, Kalani starts groaning and her eyes start opening.)
Infinite: Kalani?
(She sits up and looks around while her sight readjusts.)
Kalani: Infinite? Where am I?
Infinite: You're in the hospital. *quickly adds in* The doctors already did what they had to do. All of the poison is out, you're going to be alright, but you'll be pretty weak for a bit, so I suggest taking a few days off from work.
Kalani: Um, Infinite?
Infinite: Yes?
Kalani: Was what you said true?
Infinite: What do you mean?
Kalani: You said you love me. Is that true?
(Infinite's face turns red under the mask.)
Infinite: *looks down* Y- yeah...
(Kalani's face flushed red)
Kalani: *thoughts* He... loves me too? What do I do? Confess back you idiot! Come on! *aloud words* I... love you too.
Infinite: Y- You do?
(Kalani nods.)
(Infinite takes off his mask.)
(The screen zooms out as the two look into each other's eyes and kiss.)
(Fade to black.)
Perfecto script 😂👍
This video also inspired me to make a sonic oc(haven't got much yet)
That’s actually a pretty decent script. I mean it’s a lot better than the script here since it feels more accurate and maybe something that could happen.
The fact that Amy has an SNT doll, further proves that the ship is canon
Edit: Bruh what, none of my comments blew up like this!
Now I want a SNT doll for myself
Biggest bet is that she actually has a crush on her so she gets mad at sonic but pretends she's mad at SNT instead
Jkjk
Unless....
@@katicatlove5296 two things, 1. Do you think Amy has a crush on snt or the other way around because your wording/spelling makes things really confusing, 2. That actually would make for an interesting plot, not gonna lie.
@@bellbito7318 Amy having a crush on SNT lmao it's kinda implied in the SNT forces series
@@bellbito7318 btw I am sorry for my wording, my autocorrect sucks
Shadow; Take it!
SNT: No thanks.
Shadow; *TAKE THE DANG EMERALD YOU FRIKIN--*
when shadow wiped SNT'S tears it looks like he is punching her
Maybe he was trying to kill her
@@hhoop3876 can't cry if you're dead, his logic was solid
@@Egg-d4mn3d you can still piss which is a form of crying
@@altr1k it's your bladder crying.
19:13 alternate ending 3:team chaotix get arrested for woman beating and everyone says:welp thats some fuckin shit
The voice actors must've been in so much pain lol
Your user name is brilliant
"Yeah, what is it this time?"
"What are you fighting about now?"
"You don't need to know that!"
...
Isn't this why, after a while, no one wanted to remain formal allies with ancient Sparta?
I just wanted to say thank you: I really appreciate how you look back on the work you did when you were younger with a balance of critique and respect. So many of us only look back on our old work with shame and cringing, but it led us (hopefully) to be better writers, character developers, story tellers etc. When all we see online is the amazing stuff, it can be easy to forget that even successful people made stuff they're not proud of when they were less experienced. And yet, your fondness for your OC shines through the critique. There is a genuine wholesomeness to your stories about her: she's not just some old character you can rag on for funny videos, she's a real piece of your heart and you treat her with the respect (and gentle mockery) of a dear friend.
I guess what I'm trying to say is it's heartwarming to see such positivity and self respect for a character that meant so much to you growing up. You've shown me that we don't need to be ashamed of our old OCs, just make sure we learn from the mistakes we made with them when we didn't know any better. And that I don't have to feel ashamed of still being fond of my original OC all these years later.
Yeah agreed 🙂
yknow, despite the fact that its not well written, imagine how excited little you would have been to see her writing come to life like this.
That much is pretty cool :)
"The only chao that can talk is Omochao."
Black market chao:
Also, Cheese could talk in Heroes, for some reason
Also the professor chao
Essentially, if it's funny it is an acceptable creative license.
Wait I only just remembered that the Chao item shop was called the _black market_
I guess the black market chao, the fortune teller, principal, and doctor don't exist
Also, to fix the script:
Makes it so Tails saw them arguing beforehand, and saw them with a chaos emerald,, so he assumed they were fighting over that. When the battle started, he went to tell his friends they were fighting, but didn’t really know over what, he just saw them holding a chaos emerald and thought that was why.
This can explain why them fighting over SNT was such a shock. Because they thought they were fighting over something else.
There's a lot of stuff happening in this script, shadow randomly giving an chaos emerald away, sonic and shadow fighting but this time for no reason. Team chaotix being in character, sonic hero's team fighting each other. Man...I'm glad i didn't make a sonic type script when i was little, because at that time i didn't know a bunch of sonic lore and stuff as i do now.
SNT:
Shadow: *Here, some chaos emerald. Because your epic*
Drink the emerald
@@STAROCiDE is this an order, a suggestion or a prophecy
@@stress1300 Yes
@@stress1300 its an instruction
nO, spEcIal.
When you write things up as a kid, you think they're cool.
Then you look at them when you get older and you think: "Why did I bring this monstrosity into existence?"
true dat
Oof can't wait to do that but with steven universe AU's ('-;")
I legitimately cackled like a whistle at 21:50 from pure internal death, no joke-
I think I did the same just now
Sonic going through a corruption arc because he's not getting the girl is the funniest shit ever and I am so here for it XD
SNT’s dialogue makes her sound like a three year old
It does
Tbh I think SNT is so annoying
@@Mr_prince1221 same I also think she's kind of Mary sueish literally she has two boys and Amy in love with her.
@@vinnillaswirl1236 I feel bad for poor Courtney
@@Mr_prince1221 shes better now though
I'd pay good money if for the next sonic game Courtney was in the background judging everything
like;
and sonic character: "Eggman is trying to take over! we gotta stop him!!"
Courtney: "When is he not though??"
Me: 😏
Everyone else: no.
Me: 😏
Everyone else: don’t say IT!
Me: SHES SPECIAL!!! 💖
9:48 also can i just mention how good Courtney’s singing was, beautiful.
YES.
Thank you sir for completing a part of me
OMG YES!🤩
“Say the line, Mr c Willis!”
Mr c Willis: _She’s S P E C I A L._
“Hello shadow… I’m here to murder you.” -Sonic