Also think that this AI hasn’t been programmed with “the Hero’s Arch” version of story telling. The hero can’t win the first time, there has to be some moment of reflection and growth, then to come back to the battle better prepared. Or at least to some moral change. More interesting and believable
Galactic Councilor 1: Admiral whatever it is we can handle it together Admiral: it's the humans they say they are back because we apparently didn't learn our lesson the first time Councilor 1: shit Councilor 2: shit Councilor 3: shit Human Admiral: my Ears are Burning I think they are talking about us 😂😂😂
Why can no one inform the 'AI' that '...' means a slight pause before beginning the next sentence? As to the 'story' - listened to countless inane versions before. Your channel is now blocked.
Which empire are you talking about. Is this the galactic empire ruled by the sith? You do know that happened along time ago in a galaxy far, far away. So what empire????
i have never understood? why destroy the ships. just disable them. capture. and melt them down to make new ships. do not just have a bunch of trash floating around, or worse flying through space to cause problems latter.
How many times and ways can you say the exact same thing? This story is doing its best to determine that. It beyond the point of listening to it. I definitely wont be subbing this channel if this is the type of stories it has.
Ok... 1. A good premise.....but... 2. Repetitive... * Constantly repeating how "the empire" and it's leaders are contemptuous of humans. * Constantly repeating how the empire is only responding with a minor fleet to deal with humans. (Saying these things over and over... In slightly different ways does NOT enhance the story. It makes the story boring and tedious. It's just a bunch of unnecessary "fluff" to try to extend the story. ) *** Also... A human military leader would NEVER say things like " we intentionally hid our capabilities" ..or.. "we practiced and learned " * These things would be obvious. * Plus the simple fact that professional military do not brag. They demonstrate with action. Only idiots and politicians brag. Not professional warriors.
We go from the Empire sending just enough ships to present a show of force to the Empire fleet being destroyed. Really? When did the Empire send in it's main fleet? I managed to quell the gag reflex up to the mid point of this story. Another 9 minute story, over worded and repetitious to stretch it out needlessly to a 23 minute, nap inducing, repeated story line.
5 Minute Story extendend with empty ever repeatimg semseless wording
The empire think humanity is weak, the aliens arrogance they were reduced to floating wreakage.
Also think that this AI hasn’t been programmed with “the Hero’s Arch” version of story telling. The hero can’t win the first time, there has to be some moment of reflection and growth, then to come back to the battle better prepared. Or at least to some moral change. More interesting and believable
That was already addressed at the beginning of the story
Galactic Councilor 1: Admiral whatever it is we can handle it together
Admiral: it's the humans they say they are back because we apparently didn't learn our lesson the first time
Councilor 1: shit
Councilor 2: shit
Councilor 3: shit
Human Admiral: my Ears are Burning I think they are talking about us 😂😂😂
Sounds like Dune plans within plans
Traps within traps
Was the Empire confidant? I'm not sure if it was mentioned...
and there it was. a Knife through butter. lol
Why can no one inform the 'AI' that '...' means a slight pause before beginning the next sentence? As to the 'story' - listened to countless inane versions before. Your channel is now blocked.
Which empire are you talking about. Is this the galactic empire ruled by the sith? You do know that happened along time ago in a galaxy far, far away. So what empire????
😂😂😂 get out of the basement dude, you are looking for canon?😂😂😂😂😂
Help me find a story involving a human engineer (sparks) / pirates and a transporter he modified
i have never understood?
why destroy the ships. just disable them. capture. and melt them down to make new ships.
do not just have a bunch of trash floating around, or worse flying through space to cause problems latter.
German way : collect and recycle 😅😂
Its much easier to send in a few scraper ships to pick up the debris from the battle than possibly having to fight survivors aboard their ships.
you know that you say the same lines like 5 times over and over, I started out liking these now there just bla bla bla
How many times and ways can you say the exact same thing? This story is doing its best to determine that. It beyond the point of listening to it. I definitely wont be subbing this channel if this is the type of stories it has.
Ok...
1. A good premise.....but...
2. Repetitive...
* Constantly repeating how "the empire" and it's leaders are contemptuous of humans.
* Constantly repeating how the empire is only responding with a minor fleet to deal with humans.
(Saying these things over and over... In slightly different ways does NOT enhance the story. It makes the story boring and tedious. It's just a bunch of unnecessary "fluff" to try to extend the story. )
*** Also... A human military leader would NEVER say things like " we intentionally hid our capabilities" ..or.. "we practiced and learned "
* These things would be obvious.
* Plus the simple fact that professional military do not brag. They demonstrate with action.
Only idiots and politicians brag.
Not professional warriors.
We go from the Empire sending just enough ships to present a show of force to the Empire fleet being destroyed. Really? When did the Empire send in it's main fleet? I managed to quell the gag reflex up to the mid point of this story. Another 9 minute story, over worded and repetitious to stretch it out needlessly to a 23 minute, nap inducing, repeated story line.
Repetitive, repetitive, repetitive!