Critique with Michael Klein - Session 2

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  • Опубліковано 23 лис 2024

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  • @judypal55
    @judypal55 5 років тому +2

    So helpful, thank you; it's interesting how you can make these changes, without the still life in front of you. It emphasizes how you build the painting- it's not just 'paint what you see'.

  • @juliannaohara9374
    @juliannaohara9374 6 років тому +4

    I am loving these critique videos! It is fascinating how you are able to take that beautiful painting to another level. Thank you for being so generous with your time.

  • @judithgoulden972
    @judithgoulden972 6 років тому +8

    Wonderful critique. So interesting to see how small changes make a huge difference. I hope you will do more of these critiques.

  • @johannebeerbaum1546
    @johannebeerbaum1546 5 років тому +1

    The glow directly under the tipped vase makes it look like it is levitating.

    • @LeeHill66
      @LeeHill66 5 років тому

      Agreed, the glow under vase makes no sense. There should be a shadow there

  • @fbpliegorrivero8869
    @fbpliegorrivero8869 6 років тому +1

    Good to watch this critique! Thumbs up

  • @donnajohnstone4476
    @donnajohnstone4476 6 років тому +1

    Thank you for sharing your work

  • @MoniqueBourgeois
    @MoniqueBourgeois 6 років тому +1

    Great lessons here. Thank you.

  • @sashas5844
    @sashas5844 Рік тому

    The vase on the left still looks like it's floating up in the air, it's so obvious, needs to be fixed or removed entirely

  • @Joel-ml5bg
    @Joel-ml5bg 28 днів тому

    The ellipse band on the vase is way off. Doesn't look fixable.

  • @johannebeerbaum1546
    @johannebeerbaum1546 5 років тому

    Table still off between pitcher and right hand plum.

  • @realitas
    @realitas 5 років тому +1

    It would be a much better painting without the vase. The jug and plums alone would make a more pleasing composition.

  • @johannebeerbaum1546
    @johannebeerbaum1546 5 років тому

    On right all the way to edge table is still too high.

  • @johannebeerbaum1546
    @johannebeerbaum1546 5 років тому

    Fix is much better.

  • @JamesBond-gq2mb
    @JamesBond-gq2mb 6 років тому +1

    Like your technique and demonstration. If I may make a suggestion. I am bothered by your um’s and ahh’s between words.

    • @patricialaurin3785
      @patricialaurin3785 5 років тому +5

      Seriously James Bond ... that's pretty petty of you!!!! The guy is giving us his time ... for FREE no less, if you're so bothered by an um or an ahh, just move on buddy, maybe get some help! Michael is human, none of us are perfect & your petty criticism reflects what I see wrong with our society today! Is it the internet or are parents no longer teaching their kids good manners & thoughtful consideration of others? This is an art critique, not grammar school, we all develop little idiosyncrasies throughout our life, that's what makes us unique, it's a good thing! You could have & should have just left that last sentence out! Be nice!