❤❤❤❤i Really enjoyed this story...please leave it alone...im enthusiastic about your next series of books/ Stories...thank you so much for these stories...❤❤❤❤
Thank you! Right now I have a rodeo novella series outlined (and book 1 is mostly written, probably to be released in January) and a darker-setting novel series I'm still playing with.
I have enjoyed all of your stories and this is no exception. Granted a narration by a person is preferable, however this is not as disappointing as most. Finally, I don't believe that neither I nor most of the public are qualified to critique literary work. Also, as an old w g m, I appreciate the racial diversity in your stories. Thank You
Thank you for your feedback! I can agree with you on the public critiquing literary work. What happens to me sometimes is I get wrapped up in making it the “best ever” as a creator when it’s fine as it is. Authors often will use a subset of their audience to give a story a final read through (or listen-through in this case) to make sure they didn’t miss anything absolutely egregious or even to lay to rest the voice in the back of their head telling them it needs “just one more edit”. You have no idea how happy it makes me to know that you appreciate the diversity 😩🥰 I can’t say thank you enough for listening to my stories weekly and leaving such lovely and uplifting comments.
Re edit. Only for the simple fact that it might be easier to navigate if someone were to be listening and driving… having specific time stamps would have helped me pace the story, but I enjoyed it all the same. 🤗❤
I am enjoying this very much, thank you. A rework would be fun go for it. Going to have some fun and listen to all of your books The AI you used is ok and not as bad as some I have heard 🥰🥰🥰
I very much enjoyed this story. I’m not real sure what if anything you could or should update it with as far as the storyline goes. As has been committed on it other reviews the AI narration is not so good but not as poor as some. I too very much enjoyed the diversity in the characters and their backgrounds. I’m looking forward to more exceptional from you. Thank you 😊
Wonderful story! Your characters and story lines are delightful. From my vantage point stories this good don’t need much if any of the detailed descriptions of hot action. ( I’m probably a minority of one in this regard. ) I would be leaving this story alone. It ain’t broke, it don’t need fixin’. Several comments about your computer narration, but I’ve gotten used to it. It does make some attempt at modulating inflection. Some drawbacks -it just flat out mispronounces words like hardon that are slang, and it can’t make tonal changes that would help differentiate speech by characters, but these aren’t killers. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Thanks for the feedback 🥰 I try to catch all the funky pronunciations, but sometimes it thinks it’s right and I miss it. I’ll make a note to check the slang more frequently. Thanks for listening and thanks for being here 🖤
Thank you! I found some of the language choppy, the flow a little shaky, and all around I feel like I could do a better job with the characterization. I don’t think there’s anything structurally wrong, though.
Thanks for the feedback! 🖤 I’m sorry the AI voice doesn’t work for you. It’s definitely not perfect, but I did try to find the least offensive of the voices until human narration becomes an option.
I enjoyed the story, but I think you could do better. There are some parts dragging (maybe it's because of the Ai reading?) This one isn't your best one I've read/listened to here on youtube.
Isn’t that interesting how some feel shorter and longer? I can see which ones the story fell in place for me and which ones needed more plotting work. Thanks for your feedback and thanks for listening 🖤
Hey, thanks for the feedback! That’s really interesting to me because I remember you were fond of the Christmas story which is the same word count as this one. The Christmas one was more recently written. That goes to show that I definitely have improved in my storytelling abilities, and making sure every scene is necessary to the story. I’m going to put that in my notes and take that back to my editor.
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❤❤❤❤i Really enjoyed this story...please leave it alone...im enthusiastic about your next series of books/ Stories...thank you so much for these stories...❤❤❤❤
Thank you! Right now I have a rodeo novella series outlined (and book 1 is mostly written, probably to be released in January) and a darker-setting novel series I'm still playing with.
I really enjoyed the story. Love it so much ❤️ 😂🎉
I have enjoyed all of your stories and this is no exception. Granted a narration by a person is preferable, however this is not as disappointing as most. Finally, I don't believe that neither I nor most of the public are qualified to critique literary work. Also, as an old w g m, I appreciate the racial diversity in your stories. Thank You
Thank you for your feedback! I can agree with you on the public critiquing literary work. What happens to me sometimes is I get wrapped up in making it the “best ever” as a creator when it’s fine as it is. Authors often will use a subset of their audience to give a story a final read through (or listen-through in this case) to make sure they didn’t miss anything absolutely egregious or even to lay to rest the voice in the back of their head telling them it needs “just one more edit”.
You have no idea how happy it makes me to know that you appreciate the diversity 😩🥰 I can’t say thank you enough for listening to my stories weekly and leaving such lovely and uplifting comments.
What is “w g m “?
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@@LLorynAuthor Any prison rape or mention of prison rape in this story?
I think you should continue this book in a series. I really enjoyed it.
Your stories are terrific I hope to hear more of them
Thank you! I do have plenty more in the works 🥰
I really love listening to your stories. You are a great author. I think this story is perfect as it is. Thank you.
Thank you! It warms my heart to know you are enjoying the stories. 🥰
WOW, what a wonderful / beautiful story, enjoyed every moment - Thank you
Thank you for listening 🥰 it makes me happy to know you enjoyed it so much.
I loved the story the way it is. The narrator isnt the worst.
Hey! Thanks for giving it a listen and thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it so much.
I enjoyed this and think it's great as is. Thank you!
Thank you for listening and for the feedback! 🖤
It was so beautiful thank you ❤
Thank you 😭
Awesome story, I have enjoyed some of your other work as well !
Thank you! That’s great to hear 🖤 I appreciate you giving them a listen.
Re edit. Only for the simple fact that it might be easier to navigate if someone were to be listening and driving… having specific time stamps would have helped me pace the story, but I enjoyed it all the same. 🤗❤
I agree with that 100%. Not having chapters was not a good look 😂 glad you enjoyed it otherwise!
I am enjoying this very much, thank you. A rework would be fun go for it. Going to have some fun and listen to all of your books The AI you used is ok and not as bad as some I have heard
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Thank you! And I hope you have some fun listening 🥰 if I may make an author recommendation - the cowboy story is a real winner.
One of the better low drama M4M stories
Haha, thank you for the feedback and thank you for listening!
I loved it. Its wonderful as it is. 👌💙✌️💜
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it 💕
I very much enjoyed this story. I’m not real sure what if anything you could or should update it with as far as the storyline goes. As has been committed on it other reviews the AI narration is not so good but not as poor as some. I too very much enjoyed the diversity in the characters and their backgrounds. I’m looking forward to more exceptional from you.
Thank you 😊
I loved this book ❤❤❤
Ayy. Thank you for giving it a listen. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I like this story just the way it is..
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
love the story ❤
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🥰
This book is awesome I'm only halfway down
Wonderful story! Your characters and story lines are delightful. From my vantage point stories this good don’t need much if any of the detailed descriptions of hot action. ( I’m probably a minority of one in this regard. ) I would be leaving this story alone. It ain’t broke, it don’t need fixin’. Several comments about your computer narration, but I’ve gotten used to it. It does make some attempt at modulating inflection. Some drawbacks -it just flat out mispronounces words like hardon that are slang, and it can’t make tonal changes that would help differentiate speech by characters, but these aren’t killers. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Thanks for the feedback 🥰 I try to catch all the funky pronunciations, but sometimes it thinks it’s right and I miss it. I’ll make a note to check the slang more frequently. Thanks for listening and thanks for being here 🖤
Story was great, I thought he was going to propose at the opening galleria event in front of everyone
I love the story line and I don't think it's need any changes but you can do something like next season
Thank you for giving it a listen 🥰 and for your feedback. I’m sure Lincoln could find something else to get into, haha.
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It was great. If you were going to do a 2024 version, what would you improve?
Thank you! I found some of the language choppy, the flow a little shaky, and all around I feel like I could do a better job with the characterization. I don’t think there’s anything structurally wrong, though.
The computer generated voice was too awful to listen to .
Thanks for the feedback! 🖤 I’m sorry the AI voice doesn’t work for you. It’s definitely not perfect, but I did try to find the least offensive of the voices until human narration becomes an option.
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I enjoyed the story, but I think you could do better. There are some parts dragging (maybe it's because of the Ai reading?) This one isn't your best one I've read/listened to here on youtube.
'The rockstar's fake romance' was also a 7 hours read, but seemed to be shorter than this one. It was more engaging, wittier.
Isn’t that interesting how some feel shorter and longer? I can see which ones the story fell in place for me and which ones needed more plotting work. Thanks for your feedback and thanks for listening 🖤
I found this story too long with too much fluff.
Hey, thanks for the feedback! That’s really interesting to me because I remember you were fond of the Christmas story which is the same word count as this one. The Christmas one was more recently written. That goes to show that I definitely have improved in my storytelling abilities, and making sure every scene is necessary to the story.
I’m going to put that in my notes and take that back to my editor.
@@LLorynAuthor The Christmas story was warm and heartwarming and I loved it. Could not get into the ex-con story I appreciate your replying.