How to Write an Effective Profile Statement for Your Resume - Part 1
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- Опубліковано 27 сер 2024
- This is Part 1 of 3 on how to write an effective Profile Statement for your resume. Employers typically spend about 30 seconds scanning your resume to decide if they should invite you for an interview. Start your resume with a strong Profile Statement to encourage them to keep reading.
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As a dedicated and focused quality professional with more than 9 years’ experience in pharmaceutical industry believes in systems built for quality and believes in facilitating other sections, departments within organization with timely communicating, handling and resolving problems.
Good start. Try to be more specific. For example, what kind of professional are you? Sales, administration, management, research and development? What do you mean by "facilitating other sections, departments"? Which sections and departments? Avoid using the word "believes", especially twice in on sentence.
Nothing personal in there, wrong
Recent graduate from an International Relations degree program with concentration in Trade and Global development with more than one years of experience in advocacy against social injustice, conducting policy research for a sustainable society and laying the foundations for the next generation of leaders through community outreach.
This probably is a bit wordy but I would love some constructive feedback please. Also, I really love the simplicity and clarity of your video!
Thanks for the comment! A couple of suggestions: 1) instead of advocacy against..., try "...advocacy for social justice" - positive language is always more powerful; 2) "...conducting policy research for sustainability, and community outreach for leadership development." - you don't need all the details in a profile statement because you can elaborate in the interview, and this will make your statement less 'wordy'. Hope this helps!
Recent graduate with over eight years experience in the Business Process Outsourcing (BPO) sector as a data processor, annotator, reviewer, trainer and coordinator. For the time being, I am working on a Web Research project (Inplay) focusing on training, reporting, allocation of work, and quality analysis of altered providers in different counties.
"Recent graduate with degree in Petroleum Engineering Technology with experience in real estate, customer service, and bookkeeping." Though I'm not sure if i'm doing it right, your video has been most helpful and makes sense. Thank you!!
Great start David! You are doing it right! Now add a sentence about what you specialize in - see part 2: ua-cam.com/video/8z-B5gtducw/v-deo.html.
@supperstephen Looks good! Small suggestion: "...four years of experience *teaching* ESL, and more than three years of experience *teaching* IELTS and TOEFL."
I skimmed UA-cam and finally found your video, think it's best 👌
A recent graduate with Diploma of Community Services,Working towards a Bachelor of psychology along with Advanced diploma of community sector management. a dedicated and proven Personal Care Assistant, Security Officer my career in these combined capacities spans more than six years With a passion for helping others achieve their goals.I have obtained a solid skill set, as well as an array of transferable skills. My work style is one of thoroughness and fairness.These skills are complemented by my ability to adapt well to high pressure work, develop solid working rapport with all managers and colleagues, and work optimally in both team and individual situations.It is my objective to secure a position within a role where I can care for others and do what I can to ensure a great quality of life for all I work with. With my solid record for safety and quality work, I am confident of achieving win-win outcomes in my next role
it is too long , be careful
@@chaimaelaaroussi3631 Nah should be at least 5 times as long. CV readers have all day to read one CV so you need make sure they're kept engaged like they're being paid to read Tolkein.
A recent graduate with a degree in Financial Management equipped with skills in data entry, managing e-mails, bookkeeping, and customer service I truly enjoy working as a team to exchange ideas. I am approachable, direct, and effective at encouraging others.
Very good start! Try "I work effectively in teams to maximize morale and results." and remove the last sentence - too many 'soft' adjectives.
A focused and reliable customer service professional with more than 1 year of experience with dealing with a variety of different customers and providing timely and patient service.
Good start. First, remove the "with" between "experience" and "dealing". No need to repeat it. Describe the types of customers you served, such as "demanding customers" or "frustrated customers". Not all your customers need to be like this, but you help your new employer see your value by painting a picture of your work situation.
An articulate, highly motivated, focused, and capable accounting professional who has a history of
providing consistent leadership in the financial areas of a business. Kwame, a proactive and well-
organized individual, who takes personal responsibility for meeting commitments and ensuring that
results are achieved, Very Punctual, well-presented, and possess excellent communication,
analytical and interpersonal skills. And above all, a good team player with the ability to communicate effectively at all levels.
Good start. Some tips: make it more concise by removing unnecessary adjectives that describe you; your name should only appear in the header of your resume, together with your contact info - nowhere else; be careful with grammar.
A focused and dedicated professional with more than 10 years of experience in planning, leading and executing various software projects.
Great start! I suggest to add what kind of professional you are. For example, "...dedicated project management professional with..."
A recent graduate with a Masters in Embedded System Engineering with more than one year of experience in RF Engineering focussing on the design of High-frequency functional blocks, EM-Simulation, layouts, and RF measurements.
Excellent! " *Master's* "
A dedicated and focused professional with more than 1 year of experience in Cybersecurity.
A recent graduate with a Degree in Civil Engineering with experience in Civil Engineering, Computer Operator, Assistant manager and using Microsoft office tools
Good start! Just make sure that your list is 'parallel'. Eg. "...with experience in Civil Engineering, Computer OperatION [here you should be more specific, eg. 'programming using Java', or 'creating Excel spreadsheets'], managING, and using MS Office tools [again, be specific about what tools you used]".
Your information is very useful my brother. Thank you
You're welcome!
A reliable professional with more than 6 years experience in administration.
Would you mind telling us your name , teacher of " How to write an effective Profile Statement for a resume. " You are very good teacher make us understand resume very well as:
. Your teaching method very good easy to get it.
. well- defined
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. You are speaking in the way we get every word you say far different from someone who speak rapidly too much linking to grasp.
. Your subject- matters are valuable
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A reliable professional with a 5 year experience in IT Internal Audit
Good start!
Recently graduated with a Bachelor of Science Degree in Pure and Applied Sciences. Business Process Outsourcing (BPO) expert with more than eight years' experience as a data processor, annotator, web researcher, reviewer, trainer, and coordinator. For the time being, I am working on a Web Research project (Inplay) focusing on training, reporting, allocation of work, and quality analysis of altered providers in different counties.
Very good! Start the last sentence with "Currently working on a Web Research project..."
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A dedicated professional with 23+ years’ experience controlling for London chauffeur companies specialising in coordinating drivers, optimising routes and prioritising calls in high-pressure environments. Thorough knowledge of various dispatch software systems. Trained/mentored 30+ controllers and telephonists to a competent level.
Looking to contribute my skills and experience to a growing company.
This video is one of the best I have seen, and I've researched a lot! Thank you for taking the time to make it. Do you have any advice on the wording for someone who recently completed an online certificate course in Accounting? Or if that should even be included in this portion of my resume since it is not a degree? I don't want to put it too high on a pedestal but it was a challenging course, I learned a lot and I am proud I completed it! Thank you!! Hope to hear from you soon. ☺️
J Ryder thanks for your positive comment! Your certification definitely belongs in the 'Education' section of your resume. In your profile statement focus on results of the course. You can mention a couple of the more important skills you learned and used to complete projects and assignments that are applicable to the jobs for which you are applying. For example: "Specializing in using Quickbooks to create error-free balance sheets."
KISSS Business English Awesome, thank you very much!
J Ryder you're welcome!
A focused and reliable professional with more than 3 years of experience in business administration, selling and distribution expenses, and using Microsoft Office Tools.
Good start. You may want to include an adjective describing what type of professional you are - eg. 'sales', 'business development', etc. It would also be useful if you added an example of how you used MS Office tools - for accounting, reporting...?
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God bless you
A dedicated ,reliable and focused professional with five years experience in writing, journalism,computer services,teamwork,communication,Tutoring,and organisational leadership.
Thank you! Good start. I recommend being more specific. What kind of job are you applying for? Does it require all the skills you mention? For example, organisational leaders usually do not provide tutoring services; what kind of computer services do you have experience in - for example, programming using JAVA, or applications such as Microsoft Office? Focus your skills to the type of job you are applying for.
KISSS Business English Very cool of you to continue responding after a couple years!!! You seem like a great teacher.
@@Sydneymariex thank you! I want you to do your best, and succeed!
A reliable person with more than five years of managerial experience in fast food chain with expertise on handling manpower,machine,method and materials
Good start. Tips: Replace "reliable person" with more relevant and powerful words; "...with expertise IN managing people, equipment, processes, and inventory."
you's great thanks, here's mine (A recent graduate from Master degree in (MCSc.) Computer Science, and dedicated professional of teaching different ages of kids English and in Technology as well with experience more than 1 years in using numerous ways in teach.)
Good start! It is always a good idea to focus your profile statement on one thing. Are you applying for a teaching job? If yes, then I suggest focusing on either teaching English or Technology. Starting your profile statement by mentioning your MCSc. would probably not be a good thing if you are applying for an English teaching job, but if the job involves teaching 'technical English', then it is good. Make sure to do your best with English grammar in your profile statement.
A dedicated Team Leader with more than 10 years of experience in handling people, communicate with them and monitoring their daily job.
Great start! Instead of writing "communicating", try to be more specific. Think of how you communicated - did you 'persuade', 'instruct', 'motivate'?
Recent post graduate from chemistry with more than an year experience in quality assurance and regulatory affairs specialisation in iso 13485 and iso 9001
Try "Recent graduate with a Master of Chemistry degree and more than one year of experience..."
A recent graduate with a degree in bachelor of business administration with more then two years of experience in real estate marketing , insurance marketing , customer services , Microsoft office tools and team work communication
(A recent graduate with a degree in process engineering with a 6-month experience in process analyzing, designing engineer, chemical calculation, organizing, managing meeting, and using MS office tools.) I hope doing great.
Great start. When choosing the skills you include in your Profile Statement, try to use those that appear in the job advertisement too.
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A dedicated and reliable professional pharmacist with a deploma in clinical pharmacy and working towards a diploma in TQM and PCI with more than 10 years experience as a pharmacy manager
Looks great! You may want to remove one of the adjectives at the beginning. I recommend "A dedicated and reliable pharmacist with..."
Thank you so much for all the help. my try is: ''A recent graduate with a degree in ''Innovation in Information and Communication Technology'' and 2 years of experience in developing innovative technological solutions for business case studies.'
Looks good so far!
A recent graduate with a degree in BSC. Businesses administration ( logistics and supply chain management ), with working experiences in warehousing and procurement management.
Good start. Spell out BSC and avoid parentheses.
Thank you for such simple tips on CV
You’re welcome!
A recent graduate with a degree of mechanical engineering with experience in planning, analysis, leading and improving quality as quality ambassador certified
Great start! "...with a degree IN mechanical engineering..."
A recent graduate with a mechanical engineering degree, with over a years’ experience in the production and manufacturing sector.
Very good! Minor tip: "...with a mechanical engineering degree *and* over a *year's* experience..."
A recent graduate with a degree in Information and Communication Technology Engineering with Experience in programming languages like (C++, python, Html, Css, JavaScript, PHP), self-motivated and using Microsoft Office tools
Very good! Just a few suggestions: 1) Change 'like' to 'such as'; 2) remove the brackets () when listing your programming languages; 3) remove the last section starting with 'self-motivated...', and if it's important, put MS Office tools in a Technical Skills section on your resume.
A dedicated professional with more then 2 years experience in operation as an executive.
Monitoring operational performance of both internal and external service.
Services*
For the first section of part one, what do you do when you have mutiple professions or areas of expertise? Let's say you are (or have professional experience as) a teacher, a vlogger, a beekeeper, a gardener, a carpenter, an architect, and possibly even more. Do you select only the one that is most pertinent to the job you are applying for or should you list all of them or just 2 or just 3?
What if you have professional credentials or licensures, should they also be listed in this section or just on the resume?
So you're a 'multipotentialite'. Great! Join the club! Yes, in your profile statement focus only on the accomplishments and qualifications most pertinent for the particular job or career path that you are now applying for. Also consider transferable skills that you may have from your other jobs. You should lead with the most relevant credentials, but include others that may not be relevant because they show that you are committed to gaining new skills. Watch this short video to see how to include credentials on your resume ua-cam.com/video/eYlfOmM06pQ/v-deo.html. You want to match your qualifications to the job requirements.
Thank you so much sir. Your are very helpful.
Awesome Bart* Thank you!!!!!
This was very useful
A focussed professional with 2+ years experience in Application management of a Global Supply Chain application.
Good start. Make sure to include an apostrophe after the s in years: years'
Really very useful video..
Thank you for teaching this valuable information sir.
Great, and helpful video! Thank you.
A dedicated, and reliable professional with 15+ years experience in Customer Service, Microsoft Office Tools, Teamwork, Communication, Shipping and Receiving, and Record Keeping.
Sounds like I am on the right track. I have been working in the Office Services department of a Law firm the last 15 years. I am trying to keep my Resume open, to where I can apply to any job industry. You mind telling if I am off tomorrow to a good start? Thanks so much!
Looks great so far!
You need to lose the commas before any "and".
That is not always true. If you are listing only 2 things then yes, but if you are listing 3 or more things then the rules change.
A deticated professional with five plus years experience in Accounting and Finance Department of Import and Distribution Sector using MS Excel and Quickbook, specializing in contolling inventory, receivable and payable, looking to contribute my skills and experiences to growth of the company while continuing to learn about the industry so that I can be of more value to your company.
Very good! Instead of a comma put a period between "...Quickbooks" and "specializing"; Instead of a comma put a period between "...payable" and "looking to contribute"; remove "to your company" at the end of your statement.
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A recent graduate from the diploma in secretaryship (UK) with more than 2 years experience in scheduling, organizing , managing staff and using microsoft office tools.
Great start! Change "from the diploma..." to "with a diploma...".
Thanku so much sir..this vedio helped a lot
Ammu Athira you're welcome!
Your welcome too
Good explanation sir , please explain me , what to write about this: ( outline the key highlights of your professional career to the Employer's.)
Key highlights are your most important accomplishments in your past jobs.
A dedicated and reliable professional in Taxation and Accounting with more than 10 years experience in management and leadership level.
Good start! You may want to consider a couple of small changes so it looks like this: "A dedicated and reliable Taxation and Accounting professional with more than 10 years experience at the management and leadership level."
Recent graduate with degree in bachelors in English language with experience of English literature and translation from English to Arabic and vice verse.
I'm New graduate and i don't have any experience so I wrote what I learned
@@sara-1028 Good start! What kind of jobs would you like to apply for? Depending on your answer, you will want to be more specific about the type of experience you have with English Literature. Maybe focusing on your translation skills will be more useful? Let me know so I can give you more specific tips. Watch my newest video on transferable skills so that you can get more ideas ua-cam.com/video/AOC5kt9mtTg/v-deo.html
Assalam u alikum video is very helpful" A recent graduate with a degree in bachelor of business administratin with a 2 years of experience in real estate , digital and insurance marketing
Good start, but be carful with grammar. Also, try "A recent graduate with a degree in business administration..." or "...with a Bachelor of Business Administration degree..."
@@kissscareercoaching thanks
It's helpful
" A recent graduate with a bachelor of business administratin degree with a 2 years of experience in real estate , digital and insurance marketing
A dedicated young professional working towards a diploma in Accounting and finance with awesome experience in using computerized accounting packages and Microsoft office tools.
Great start! Instead of writing "awesome experience", try saying what you did. For example, "...diploma in Accounting and Finance, with experience using computerized accounting packages [you should be specific and name these tools - eg. Quickbooks] and MS Office tools to manage income and expenses."
U are a legend man
Thank you!
This is what I was looking for. Thank you
You're welcome!
A recently qualified chemistry graduate with university experience in lab based analysis, data collection, project management, problem solving, statistical analysis, and report writing.
Great start! What do you mean by 'recently qualified'? If you just graduated, write 'A recent graduate with a Bachelor degree in Chemistry...' or something similar. You don't need to specify 'university experience', just write 'with experience in...'.
Competent and solution oriented mechanical design engineer having 2 years of experience in design of special purpose machines, test rigs, new product development blending technical expertise with project management proficiency.
Very good! Finish your profile statement with a sentence that shows the areas where you can help your future employer. To help you, watch part 2: ua-cam.com/video/8z-B5gtducw/v-deo.html
An experienced and dedicated professional accountant with more than 8 years’ experience in Lecturing intermediary and advanced Financial Accounting and working towards a certification as Certified Public Accountant (CPA)
Great start! Tip: change 'intermediary' to 'intermediate', and add the word 'courses' after 'Financial Accounting'.
First of all, thank you so much for your videos. Second, here is my first part: "A recent graduate with a degree in Construction Engineering with over thirteen years of experience in customer service, banking, real estate development, project management, and construction contracting."
You're welcome! And great start! The only suggestion I have for you is to reduce the number of areas you have experience in. In your current statement you listed 5 areas. Try to reduce it to the 3 areas most relevant to the job you are applying for.
A young professional working towards my degree in the Audio Engineering Program at Milwaukee Area Technical College with more then two years experience in live sound reinforcement.
Looks good! You may want to change "my degree" to "a degree".
Great and helpful video! Thanks a lots :D
You're welcome!
Lovely video, thanks
You're welcome!
Reliable, Proactive Client-Focused Sales Manager with more than 2 years experience as a Territory Sales Manager helping demanding customers come to a solution that best fits their needs.
Good start! I suggest focusing more on your sales results rather than your customers. Hiring managers want to see results. If you are looking for a sales position, the best thing you can do is include numbers such as: 1) By how much (%) did you exceed your quota? 2) How many sales periods in a row did you meet or exceed your monthly/quarterly/annual quota? 3) How did you compare against other sales representatives on your team?
It is great note
Hello sir, I find your videos very helpful. Thank you. I've one question. Can a "private home tutoring" be considered as an experience?
You're welcome! Yes, definitely! Private home tutoring is like having your own business. It's great work experience that you should include in your resume.
A reliable recent graduate with diploma in Mechatronics with experience in Electronics Assembly, Electrical fitting, Soldering, Programming, 3D Priniting and Designing in AutoCAD.
Great start, Piotr! Try a more concise beginning, such as "Recent graduate with a diploma in...". Quantify your experience, such as "...with two years of experience in..."
@@kissscareercoaching Yet I got only few weeks of experinece or at best month or two. So I cannot mention any more than that. Anyway Thanks for answer
@@piotrg7954 in that case you're right, don't mention how much experience you have. Focus on mentioning specific skills instead.
In the first part,
Would i be able to include (knowledge experience) instead of experience?
Here is my response based on my understanding of what you wrote: Knowing something doesn't always mean that you can do it. If you don't have experience, I recommend using the phrase "...with the ability to ____" and insert your action. For example, "...with the ability to analyse financial reports."
A recent graduate with a Bachelor in Electrical Engineering , with less than a year experience in Classic control, PLC, looking towards a master degree in Engineering physics
Good start! Instead of writing "with less than a year experience", remove the first part and just write " with experience in...". If you have not started your Master's degree yet, don't include it in your profile statement. Focus more on how you can use your current skills to help your next employer.
A recent graduate from the Bachelors degree in Environmental and Safety Engineering with more than one year experience in Health Safety Security and Environment (HSSE) in a Thermal Power Generation Plant
Good start! Two suggestions: Capital 'D' in Degree; "with more than a year experience".
It's very helpful, thank you so much.
May I have your point of view on this one please ? Thank you in advance
"A focused professional with more than one and half years experience in leading and monitoring project"
Great start. You may want to include an adjective to show the type of project, eg. "software development project".
A young professional working towards a degree in Business Administration with experience in Sales Management, Project Management, Organizing, Product design and using Microsoft Office tools
Good start, but make sure to match your profile statement to the job you are applying for. For example, sales management and product design are skills that are usually not required together in one job. It's also good to be specific. Were you a sales manager, managing sales people? Or were you an account manager, managing your client accounts? What MS Office tools can you use? What did you use them to do?
A Dedicated Professional, with 10+ years experience in local and abroad as an Office Clerk (Secretary, Accounting Assistant), Receptionist, Waitress, Showroom Sales Supervisor, Inventory Taker, Telephone Operator, Customer Service, Cashier using a MS Word tools
Good start, but you need to focus. What are the requirements of the job you are applying for? There is little relationship between office clerk, waitress, and showroom sales.. Do you need office skills, customer service skills, or sales skills for the job you’re applying for? Avoid listing all your positions, and focus only on the skills that are relevant.
@@kissscareercoaching Thank you sir for sharing some more ideas..
@@navales4410 You're welcome!
"A dedicated and competent banking professional with more than 5 years of experience in investment consultation, administration, sales and customer service with thorough knowledge of financial industry regulations and compliance. "
I am working on my resume to apply for compliance/aml dept in banks. I have experience in branch banking and back office administration and sales in call center environment. Please advise. Thank you
A fast learner and hardworking Second Year Chemical Engineering student with experience in organising, team working and using Matlab and 2+ years waiter work experience in Chinese Restaurant.
Good start! Try these small changes: "...with 2+ years experience in organizing (mention what you organized), working in teams, customer service, and using Matlab (mention where you used it).
A recent graduate with Master's degree in Data Analytics with experience in (job relevant skills)
Looks good so far!
Thank you so much for the tip. please help me with this worry. How do I write one if I graduated in 2011 with a degree in Statistics but never worked in any statistical field but willing to start my career in that field?
Make sure to mention your education in your cover letter, and think about the transferable skills you gained that are applicable to a career in statistics. This can help: ua-cam.com/video/AOC5kt9mtTg/v-deo.html
Hi coach,
Is the below satisfying or I should make it more specific? Would like to hear your comment.
"Accomplished and result-oriented professional with 20+ years of management experience in various industries leading culturally diverse teams."
You may want to mention what type of professional you are, and what industries you have experience with. Use the job advertisement, or the industry that the company you are applying to is in, to help you focus your profile statement.
Thank you for your feedback. It was really helpful.
You’re welcome! I’m glad.
A recent graduate and dedicated professional with a degree in Organizational Leadership, working towards an MBA in Human Resources, with more than 15+ years of experience in communications, administration, data analysis, and technical troubleshooting.
I tried to fit it all in. Is it too lengthy? lol
I want to get a job in Human Resources so that’s why I put the MBA in there. Please let me know if it’s too much. Thanks for this very helpful video! 💛
yeah it seems quite a professionalism and accurate
Astro Queen Astro good start, but we need to 'tighten it up' a bit. Some comments/questions: Are you a recent graduate in Org Leadership?; "15+" is the same as "more than 15" so choose one; if you want a job in HR leave out the tech troubleshooting experience.
KISSS Business English -Yes I graduated in May 2019.
I’m having a difficult time wording my resume to reflect my past experience with the career change to HR that I want to make. Thank you for your help!
Astro Queen focus on mentioning transferable skills in your accomplishment statements in your resume. This video might help ua-cam.com/video/AOC5kt9mtTg/v-deo.html
Excuse me, Sir. My in Thai as shown. In English is " Niyom Phusopha " as in my passport. Thanks a lot.
You are welcome, Niyom.
They way ir explaining each and every point is a lesson to everyone.
Thank you!
A focused professional with more than 8 years of experience
in programming using flash and javascript.
Very good so far. Make sure you use capital letters to start proper nouns such as 'Flash'.
Thank you so much for the amazing video. what if my previous job experience is not related to my major? I am an English language graduate and I have 3 years of experience in career advising and student support.
You're welcome! Don't mention your major in your profile statement. Focus on your work experience and transferable skills. This video could be useful for you: ua-cam.com/video/AOC5kt9mtTg/v-deo.html
A young professional working towards a degree in Industrial Computer Technology with experience in troubleshooting, using autoCAD and microsoft office.
Great start. Be careful with using capital letters for proper nouns (names).
My personal profile. A recent graduate from the degree in commerce program with six month experience.
Good start! Try "A recent graduate WITH a degree in commerce, with six months experience in [specify your experience here]."
This Video helped me a lot , thank you soooooooooo much
Great!
What if I have a bachelor's degree and one in progress (not graduate yet) master's degree?
This video may help ua-cam.com/video/qv1XxAavCuw/v-deo.html
A dedicated and reliable professional with more than 6 years experience in customs clearance using specialised software to calculate taxes and duties with attention to detail and accuracy
Great start! For the last part I suggest "...using specialised software to accurately calculate taxes and duties."
Hi, Thank you for your helpful tips and guidance. Would you please have any advice on this statement summary? : I am a reliable and resourceful biomedical engineering professional with over 6 years’ experience in areas from System Verification & Validation to software Quality and customer care in medical industry. High level of assimilation of concepts and strategies in solving problems with strengths in analytical thinking, compliance, and process improvement resolutions. Strong Planning and organizational skills in a dynamic environment.
Great start. Some suggestions: Start with "Reliable..." - don't use personal pronouns; the sentence starting with "High level..." should be shorter and more concise. You can include things like Problem Solving, Analytical Thinking, Process Improvement in a Skills section on your resume.
A young professional working toward a degree in Biomedical Electronic Engineering program with 2 months experience in Quality Assurance (QA) process from an internship.
Great start! You can remove the word "program". Since you have only 2 months' experience, I suggest you just write "...with internship experience in Quality Assurance (QA)."
A young professional working towards a degree in business administration with an ability to communicate effectively, organizational, time management and using Microsoft tools effectively.
Great start, just some grammar tips: "...ability to communicate effectively, organize, manage time, and use Microsoft tools." You may want to list the MS tools, like Word, Excel, to add 'keywords' to your profile.
@@kissscareercoaching Okay thank you sir
Sir can you help me how to write my effective profile statement. I recently graduated in a degree of bs-architecture, and have 2years of apprenticeships before had board exam. So how can i write a effective profile... Thank you for quick response and god bless😀
So, you are a recent graduate with a Bachelor of Science degree in architecture...I will leave the rest for you to write. Follow the instructions in the videos and post your completed profile statement here. I will give you some feedback!
A dedicated professional pursuing Post Graduate Program in Big Data Engineering from BITS Pilani with a degree in Bachelor of Engineering in Computer Science with 2+ years experience in ETL Datastage Developer.
Amit Kumar Sahu looks good! You may want to put your 2+ years experience before your education. Also, change the last word 'Developer' into 'Development'.
A reliable professional with more than 3 years experience in advance and conventional NDT in oil and gas plants, refineries, fabrication, aviation, and production.
Or I can say....
A reliable NDT inspector with more than 3 years experience in advance and conventional NDT in oil and gas plants, refineries, fabrication, aviation, and production.
This version is more specific right from the start, so it's the better one. Tips: "...3 years'..." [apostrophe after s]. Consider using "advanced" instead of "advance". If you are applying to companies that are familiar with the acronyms you use, it's ok to use "NDT", but some general recruiters and human resource people may not know what it is, so it could be useful to spell it out first, put it in brackets after (NDT), and for the rest of your resume you can continue to use the acronym.
An efficiency-oriented professional with seven years experience in business operations.
Looks good so far!
A young professional working towards a degree in business management with experience in using Microsoft Office tools and participating in school activities as a volunteer.
Great start! What did you use MS Office for? For example, "...using Microsoft Office tools to write and edit reports, and create and manage spreadsheets."
@@kissscareercoaching Thank you very much!
A young professional working towards a Master’s degree in Public Administration with more than one year experience in municipal government.
Thanks for the tips!
Looks great so far! You may want to include a few words suggesting what type of experience you have in municipal governments, for example "...with more than one year experience in MANAGING FILES in municipal government.
A focused professional engaged in the customer service field with 10+ years experience in customer service and childcare safety.
Good start. Is your experience in customer service related to childcare safety? This is not clear from your sentence. If you let me know I can be more specific with providing a suggestion for you.
"A dedicated professional with a Diploma in Education Primary and NEBOSH International General Certificate in Occupational Health and Safety, with eight years, of teaching experience and 4 years in HSE management.
Finally, I can communicate professionally and work under pressure to complete tasks in line with the job description"
Good start! A couple of suggestions: "...with eight years'..." [apostrophe after the 's'] And "Communicating professionally and calmly working under pressure to complete all necessary tasks to achieve goals."
I'm not sure what "Education Primary" is. Do you mean "Primary Education", as in teaching kids?
exactly, any suggestion on this too? Thank you .
A YOUNG, ENTHUSIASTIC PROFESSIONAL WORKING TOWARDS A DEGREE IN ELECTRICAL ENGINEERING WITH EXPERIENCE IN CRITICAL THINKING AND ACTIVE LEARNING, PLAYING WITH ELECTROMAGNETIC FIELDS.
Looks great so far! I recommend putting a period after "...thinking and active learning." Can you be more specific, maybe give an example of what you did when you were "playing with electromagnetic fields"?
Thanks for this marvelous video 😊👍A young highly motivated professional working towards a bachelor's degree in oil and gas engineering with experience in translation different languages, working in team, leadership and active learning.( I am studying oil and gas engineering but I am applying for a translation job ) is it good ?! 😐
Sara Alaghbari you’re welcome! If you want to work in translation, and the industry is not important to you, just mention that you’re working towards a bachelors degree but don’t mention what kind.
A Young professional working towards a degree in Biotechnology with experience in microbial and biochemical experiments.
Looks like a great start!