Defeat with lyrics ft

Thumbnail: ‎‪@TargetLyrics‬
nameplates: ‎‪@VoidTheLyricist‬
Lyrics: ‎‪@RosieTheLyricist‬ and ‎‎‪@Carlosaurus_Rex‬, and ‪@Ashly-28‬ and ‪@SabreFunkin‬
Art: Too many. But they're all amazing ppl!
VA's:
Black impostor: ‪@faeteava‬
Boyfriend: ‪@VortexTT36‬
Flashback: ‪@RosieTheLyricist‬
BF.XML: ‪@Carlosaurus_Rex‬
Tuning: ‪@VortexTT36‬, ‪@ToasterOven22‬, ‪@JaidenBoyfriend‬

[@VortexTT36]

YO FINALLY
This was so fun to do we all did so well

[@RosieTheLyricist]

FRRRR THANKS FOR HELPING MAN !!!

[@Fr4nk13-09]

@@RosieTheLyricist SEE I TOLD YOU TO TAKE IT SLOW IM SO HAPPY FOR THIS

[@Carlosaurus_Rex]

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! EVERYONE DID SO GOOD! only took us 6 fucking months- /j
In all seriousness, I loved voicing in this! It turned out perfect! Thanks for having me as V3 BF! I’m excited to work on more stuffz with you! Good job, Rose 💖

[@RosieTheLyricist]

@@Carlosaurus_Rex you served well! 🫡 we're gonna miss you man!

[@GGFBOfficial]

WAHOOOOO!!!!!!!!! THIS IS WHAT IVE BEEN WAITING FOR!!
U NEVER DISAPPOINT ROSIE:33333

[@clara3375]

This is awesome! It was fun doing art for this

[@MistaReroy]

Good job ya'll, can't wait for the next one!

[@strix8707]

I love the unique instrumental that goes alongside the well thought out lyrics, and the flashback is amazing. Well done!

[@FazeLiam_75OFFICIALYT]

Nice! Great job everyone, y’all did great!

[@aria_slayz_fr]

BRO HOLY SHIT FINALLY LMAO, THIS AWESOME ESPECIALLY WITH THE FACT THAT THIS HAS NEW INST
one criticism: why not ask me to art (jk)

[@RosieTheLyricist]

I made that! For R-sides and used it here as a Lil Tease, if you caught that, I'd be surprised !

[@aria_slayz_fr]

@@RosieTheLyricistITS PEAK

[@Scrappy1955]

:3 It took me over 3 weeks to notice. I apparently did art for this.

[@RosieTheLyricist]

I remember you gave me a panel in novas server one time,

[@Scrappy1955]

@@RosieTheLyricist Oh yeah....

[@NebulaNovathecoverguy]

Good job took a while but good job

[@Nysst56]

PEAK

[@Ashly-28]

THIS IS PEAK SIS

[@Bray7111]

After 6 months it’s finally out I loved this people who did art in this did so good and the voice acting and tuning was great i loved this

[@shadykoopastudios]

Congratulations daughter 🎉

[@MikeTheInkDroneDemon]

This defeat with the lyrics was great.🥺

[@TargetLyrics]

Peak! Good job rosie!

[@Blazexe]

So cool

[@EnterRandomName-fh3wk]

How did I miss this😭😭

[@bibbletrio]

PEAKKKKKKK

[@ThatOneAverageLyr1c1st]

Fuck I missed the premiere but this shit is fucking peak 🔥

[@JourneycattYT]

i've been listening to this fire ass song for 3 days, help

[@VortexTT36]

There is no help for you

[@JourneycattYT]

@@VortexTT36 oh god

[@MysteriousSoulBf]

Dang nice

[@Thecherrybro07]

Finally get to witness peak!

[@JourneycattYT]

F I N A L L Y .

[@pentitblade]

I'm gonna give an entire review on this because it took like 8 months!
PRE-WATCH
I'm expecting this to be around at the same level of Dwerbi's defeat (which took around the same time)
POST-WATCH
So the writing improved, through it does only center on "oo you're gonna meet your demise" it's still good
tuning is great (i can't understand FL Studio's dark magic yet)
VAing is good
Art i'm not even near to comprehend
so,
good?
Yes.
should it have taken this long from first time it got teased?
No.
But, it's good at the end of the day.

[@RosieTheLyricist]

It only took long bc everyone was on break or comms half the time so finding reliable resources was hard, sorry abt that

[@officialoritheclay4006]

I like 👍

[@NebulaNovathecoverguy]

I like 👍

[@Carlosaurus_Rex]

Just like? Nah, I LOVE THIS!

[@NebulaNovathecoverguy]

@@Carlosaurus_Rex I’m just impersonating Ori

[@KennyTheLyr1c1st]

bro really said
SNAP BACK TO REALITY

[@RosieTheLyricist]

YO, WHATS UP KENNY

[@RosieTheLyricist]

WE FINALLY DID IT !!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉

[@SabreFunkin]

YO, WHERE ARE MY CREDITS FOR THE FIRST LINES???? THOSE WERE MY LYRICS AT THE START!!! >:[

[@DiamondTheBlue6]

FINALLY
so, do I get paid-

[@RosieTheLyricist]

Depends, what I'd be in debt of

[@rockstarfoxy2852]

1:07 no more singing time for martyr
wasn't that from brodo's(maimymayo's) sonic.exe lyrics?

[@thebros2494]

no wait wasnt that a nicoisnxxt reference that maimy sang for? that one song with bf tired of exe singing "drowning drowning sinking sinkin"

[@whisperplayzyt]

As a lyricist, I feel like I must point these out. First, your textbox is not at the bottom. Ocd moment. The first line we hear has no rhymes. 2nd boyfriend line also has no rhymes. No rhymes means it doesn't sound as peak! That's probably a trend here. 0:34 you didn't capitalize that first word. 0:36 text doesn't stay in the same place. 0:42 using and now twice is a sin. 0:46 I really hope vortex just screwed up the tuning that sounded a little autotuned. 0:53 what's up with the random art panel? 1:06 overused maimy line. 1:33 isn't this panel from blurs ic... 1:59 haha color moment. There's probably more but idk anymore. Moral is take these into consideration for your next peak.

[@RosieTheLyricist]

Your criticism helps, I'll keep that in mind for IC!

[@whisperplayzyt]

@@RosieTheLyricist sweet

[@andreuscox5547]

After months is actually real and here

[@rockstarfoxy2852]

and also I just realized some of the stuff in the teasers was not in this video

[@Theexplosion-er6ih]

First comment

[@blackimpostersus]

Black imposter approve 👍

[@acoolerbob]

impostor*

[@jakubovi_jesteri]

the lyrics are interesting but after the flashback part, the music is kinda louder than the lyrics

[@RosieTheLyricist]

If I end up reuploading this with better editing I'll keep that in mind

[@jakubovi_jesteri]

@@RosieTheLyricist you did a really good job tho 👍👍👍

[@TargetLyrics]

Could i do a cover🙏

[@RosieTheLyricist]

Yeah!

[@TargetLyrics]

Thanks!