It is a great story by Ruskin bond Unfortunately you couldn’t add much emotions to the story and missed so much part You portrayed it like a simple fight between two boys and they became friends at the end but it is not like that Kindly improve No offence or personal grudges
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It is a great story by Ruskin bond
Unfortunately you couldn’t add much emotions to the story and missed so much part
You portrayed it like a simple fight between two boys and they became friends at the end but it is not like that
Kindly improve
No offence or personal grudges
sure.
Yo
Hii