How to Conclude Body Paragraphs in IELTS Writing

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  • @E2IELTS
    @E2IELTS  3 роки тому +40

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  • @alwaysgood3913
    @alwaysgood3913 3 роки тому +73

    Hey guys I got my results yesterday and I scored an overall band 8.0, for Reading Listening and Speaking I scored an 8, unfortunately for Writing I only scored 7.5; I just wanted to personally convey my many thanks to your team for these wonderful videos. I only had about 10 days to prepare, and so a part of my preparation for my IELTS exam was from this channel, Thank You so much guys and I wish everyone else the very best with their IELTS exam as well.

    • @navinthakur4381
      @navinthakur4381 3 роки тому

      Writing tips please 😭 why my band is still 6

    • @alwaysgood3913
      @alwaysgood3913 3 роки тому +10

      @@navinthakur4381 I would recommend you to follow a structure and time yourself. Personally I did not get time to recheck for grammatical errors as well as typos. As expected in my feedback I was told I had a lot of grammatical errors, this was only so because I didn't recheck, so practice with time. And once again I'd recommend you to follow a structure, I followed the E2 structure and was commended on it in the feedback. So Jay's videos are really helpful. Aside from that I'd recommend focusing a lot more attention on entertainment/literature that are in English. It would undoubtedly help you a lot. I believe practice questions are available online, so you can look at it. I would also recommend getting a copy of the Cambridge IELTS book, they have specific examples of band 5,6 writings. So you can compare your writing with it and see if your writing matches that, then improve on it.

    • @navinthakur4381
      @navinthakur4381 3 роки тому +1

      @@alwaysgood3913 ok thanks. 😄 This really helps ❤️

    • @alwaysgood3913
      @alwaysgood3913 3 роки тому

      @@navinthakur4381 Happy to help, let me know if I can do anything more for you.

    • @navinthakur4381
      @navinthakur4381 3 роки тому +1

      @@alwaysgood3913 sure. I will. 😊

  • @dunjee2
    @dunjee2 3 роки тому +21

    Hi E2 Language, I really want to give a shout out as I sat for IELTS test and my overall result was 7.5. That was my first attempt.
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    @marysh3840 2 роки тому

    The more examples you use, the more one can learn. Great. Thanks

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    @shadanmariam 3 роки тому +3

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    Btw the essay topic was repeat from e2 writing topics

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    @anitahamza936 3 роки тому

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  • @mohammadjalili4557
    @mohammadjalili4557 3 роки тому +1

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    @realsides9714 3 роки тому +2

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    just like a boss in writing.

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    @jaideepsingh2846 2 роки тому

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  • @bhaylupatel5144
    @bhaylupatel5144 3 роки тому +1

    Sir please make a video on conclusion of all types of essay.

  • @abubakarmusharrof1347
    @abubakarmusharrof1347 3 роки тому

    Thank you for your valueable suggestion❤️

  • @jta3393
    @jta3393 3 роки тому +5

    Thanks so much for this helpful video May I pls ask how writing score is given in IELTS please? (1) if I score 7,7,7,8 for all four elements for task 1, will I get 7.5 or 7 for task 1; (2) if my task 1 is 7.5 and my task 2 is 8, what would be my overall writing band? Thanks so much for your guidance!

  • @WorldGamer777
    @WorldGamer777 2 роки тому

    Awesome! This video helped me a lot

  • @dhruvradadiya4580
    @dhruvradadiya4580 3 роки тому

    Please make the video on last minute preparation what to do and not to do before the 2 days or the day before exam

  • @GirlWhoKnewTooMuch
    @GirlWhoKnewTooMuch 6 місяців тому

    I have one question: should essay task 2 have a body paragraph with a conclusion?
    Or the sctructure can be: BP introduction, BP first point of view, BP second point of view?

  • @reet7772
    @reet7772 3 роки тому +4

    Thanks so much sir ♥️Love from Punjab♥️🙏God bless you Always 🙏

  • @sistersworld49
    @sistersworld49 3 роки тому +1

    Please also explain that how to write the conclusion of any essay.

  • @Sese_makeups
    @Sese_makeups 2 роки тому

    Hi, please is it appropriate to use question sentences in IELTS writing?
    Like, asking a rhetorical question in your easy.

  • @jashanpreetsingh2040
    @jashanpreetsingh2040 3 роки тому

    Wonderful writing skills 👏

  • @rumanadeemkhan
    @rumanadeemkhan Рік тому +1

    awesome tnx🙂

  • @saahaarshh
    @saahaarshh 3 роки тому

    Amazing tips thank youuuu🙏🏻

  • @palleisurecity3563
    @palleisurecity3563 3 роки тому

    Please make a video for speaking improvement

  • @theammykaurkhosa4996
    @theammykaurkhosa4996 3 роки тому

    please make videos on reading academic please

  • @kahinabelhabib372
    @kahinabelhabib372 3 роки тому

    Super technic , thanks 🤗

  • @machdaniafala2977
    @machdaniafala2977 3 роки тому

    It is very helpful,...thank you

  • @sukhdeepkaur6098
    @sukhdeepkaur6098 3 роки тому

    thanku so much e2 ielts

  • @ridhiaggrawal3075
    @ridhiaggrawal3075 3 роки тому

    Please help E2 team I am not able to download the pdf file otherwise the video is amazing I was recently facing the issue for the technique of concluding body paragraphs. I'm glad that it helped me🙏

  • @lostworld1462
    @lostworld1462 3 роки тому

    Thanks a lot for this new idea..

  • @farahsamer212
    @farahsamer212 3 роки тому +3

    Amazing video👍🏻
    Sorry about dislike but I want to save it separately.this is my method in saving my fav. Videos😂

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  3 роки тому +3

      😂

    • @education6723
      @education6723 3 роки тому +2

      Dear you can create a special and separate playlist instead of disliked videos playlist.

  • @education6723
    @education6723 3 роки тому

    Hello sir
    Please help me in understanding the format of letter
    If it is to someone whom you know formally but he has helped you personally
    Is it semiformal ot informal?
    For e.g. write to your colleague who lent you support by giving you book to ptepare for the presentation.
    Is it semiformal or informal?

  • @faxriddinpolatov9840
    @faxriddinpolatov9840 3 роки тому

    Very helpful video

  • @ManjinderKaur-o7x
    @ManjinderKaur-o7x 8 місяців тому

    Sir , can i start conclusion with , Having concluded ??

  • @MAAN-MSM
    @MAAN-MSM 3 роки тому

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  • @amirsamir302
    @amirsamir302 3 роки тому

    Thank you for the great videos! Do you have any video on using big words in the speaking test? One that talks about things like whether or not we should use the word plethora, and other similar words. How can I balance having a wide range of vocabulary without seeming like I am trying to force big words into my speech?

  • @tiamat1628
    @tiamat1628 2 роки тому

    Will this exempt me from writing a conclusion at the end of the essay?? I wonder.

  • @mahtab4127
    @mahtab4127 3 роки тому

    I have IELTS exam in next couple of weeks wish me luck 😁✌🏻

  • @ksg3363
    @ksg3363 3 роки тому +2

    I just received my IELTS test result today and I want to thank all the teachers in E2 IELTS for helping me achieve good scores on my first take😭
    W-7 S-7 R-8.5 L-9 overall: 8.0 (academic)
    I was so worried about my writing and speaking scores (because I totally messed up the part 2 of the speaking test and I didn’t have enough time to fully check my task 1 essay) but I still got my target band score. Y’all are awesome, thank you!!!!

  • @MultiChaowalit
    @MultiChaowalit 3 роки тому

    Thank you professor

  • @mohaddesehnassaji9644
    @mohaddesehnassaji9644 2 роки тому

    Hi
    Thanks for the great lesson.
    I used this structure in my essay, that said, I think using this structure twice made my writing mechanical. Is that right? or it's fine to use it twice? Thankyu.

  • @rajdeepkaur5737
    @rajdeepkaur5737 2 роки тому

    The more physical excersises students do, the strong their physical strength will be.. is this right ?? Please tell me

  • @sandhu3352
    @sandhu3352 3 роки тому

    Are these videos sufficient for preperation or in contrast are there some additional source???

  • @kaurkomal329
    @kaurkomal329 3 роки тому

    Can we give direct suggestion in the conclusion whether they asked or not ?

  • @haiderali-xj7kr
    @haiderali-xj7kr 2 роки тому +4

    The more I watch E2 writing videos, the more useful knowledge I get.

  • @downbad54619
    @downbad54619 Рік тому

    This is the only channel i would literally spend the rest of my day learning IELTS from

  • @divyeshparekh6395
    @divyeshparekh6395 2 роки тому

    Hey Mark! how could we use despite and however in the same sentence together?

  • @jaypandya6786
    @jaypandya6786 2 роки тому

    Practice

  • @brendarevai9875
    @brendarevai9875 3 роки тому

    Hello. Can write recommendations in my concluding paragraph

  • @murodoff.a
    @murodoff.a Рік тому

    the more we watch your e2 lessons, the more literate we get 😂

  • @suhrobabdivaliyev4124
    @suhrobabdivaliyev4124 Рік тому +1

    The drawback of space investigation being expensive should not be overlooked. Not only do spaceships and equipment require a lot of funds, but it is also important to pay "astronomical" salaries to cosmonauts and scientists. This is especially problematic when a country is suffering from high rates of abject poverty, hunger, and malnutrition, all of which often occur in the absence of adequate investments in education and agriculture. The longer world governments channel huge budgets into space exploration, the longer people from disadvantaged families will continue to live in adversity.

  • @johnmiller8363
    @johnmiller8363 Рік тому +1

    How to find E2 resources like essay related topics and.its vocab

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  Рік тому

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  • @karankumar-yq6ep
    @karankumar-yq6ep 2 роки тому

    in correlative coMPARISON we are using comma to separate two independent clauses ....wont that be wrong

  • @Barbarossa-heir
    @Barbarossa-heir 2 роки тому

    What about those who weren't lucky enough to finish the conclusion ,.the final sentence ..?
    How would they be scored ? Especially if they wrote in a good grammar , clear ideas??

  • @cricketbuddy123
    @cricketbuddy123 3 роки тому +1

    Hence, the more I see these videos, the greater knowledge I will end up in my brain.

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  • @totalsmart6909
    @totalsmart6909 3 роки тому +2

    hello..the pdf isn't being downloaded...why?

  • @nv8972
    @nv8972 3 роки тому

    Hi, Andy Flower.

  • @jobsinmiddleeastbyjiwansah763
    @jobsinmiddleeastbyjiwansah763 2 роки тому

    Great

  • @yasarshaikh7216
    @yasarshaikh7216 Рік тому

    How to download the free pdf? When I go to the link it only shows the registration, and nothing about the PDF

  • @Mza79
    @Mza79 2 роки тому

    The explained essay will not get more than 6 band because the complex structures( coordinating conjunctions) are not used in it, such as although, even though, even if, while, in order to, since, because etcetera.

  • @chrisblessy5673
    @chrisblessy5673 3 роки тому

    How important is the placement of commas in the test ?

  • @worldsaha5160
    @worldsaha5160 3 роки тому

    In writing task 1 what will be good to write overview at last or after the intro ?

  • @TangailPoint
    @TangailPoint 21 день тому

    great

  • @tanushathapa-wx5ge
    @tanushathapa-wx5ge Рік тому

    Today is ma listening writing and reading exam ..

  • @sitapark6644
    @sitapark6644 3 роки тому +1

    Can we conclude body paragraphs by giving example only?
    btw thanks for this video! marvelous!

  • @sukhwindervaid
    @sukhwindervaid 3 роки тому

    Wow ❤

  • @paonechaudhary8835
    @paonechaudhary8835 3 роки тому

    Sir, if in introduction i avoid general life and directly start paraphrasing and thesis line then is it okay??

  • @hasanmirmonsef4762
    @hasanmirmonsef4762 3 роки тому

    Actually, the topic sentence of the first paragraph lacks a reminder. What does "it" refer to?

  • @super7ace
    @super7ace 11 місяців тому

    Very helpful and very informative video. Thank you so much!

  • @nv8972
    @nv8972 3 роки тому +1

    So, this guy is breaking the Jay's simple methods.

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    @ritika3202 3 роки тому +10

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    Terms and conditions applied maybe😂

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      @E2IELTS  3 роки тому +1

      It's meant to be a star 😅😂

  • @hgsports3815
    @hgsports3815 3 роки тому

    In Islamabad, there are top-notch Universities in Pakistan. So, I can't imagine the fees at London Business School

  • @OmarAli-iz7xy
    @OmarAli-iz7xy 2 роки тому

    yes, I got it The harder the task is, the more one can learn from it .

  • @arnavshrestha8465
    @arnavshrestha8465 3 роки тому

    5:43

  • @niveditabalyan1269
    @niveditabalyan1269 3 роки тому

    Need help to get feedback. I got 6.5 in writing and 8.5 in other sections

  • @farruhx5099
    @farruhx5099 3 роки тому

    good luck

  • @ayeshanoor7672
    @ayeshanoor7672 Рік тому

    Where's the conclusion of this essay

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  • @arnavshrestha8465
    @arnavshrestha8465 3 роки тому

    5:25

  • @bishnulimbu7712
    @bishnulimbu7712 2 роки тому

    ending was epic ha ha

  • @jamshaidansir8832
    @jamshaidansir8832 2 роки тому

    What is the name of this teacher?

  • @bittersweet7777
    @bittersweet7777 3 роки тому

    Give me back my Tony Stark teaching IELTS 😂😂😂