The Best Way to Write a Pie Chart BAND 9 | IELTS 14 TEST 1 TASK 1

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  • How to write a pie chart BAND 9, The secret way to write a BAND 9 pie chart for IELTS TASK 1 in India, Nepal IELTS TASK 1.
    The chart shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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  • @omeryilmazz
    @omeryilmazz Рік тому +3

    The chart illustrates proportions of three different kinds of nutrients ( sodium, added sugar and saturated fat ) in ordinary meals which is consumer may be affected unhealthy if consumed to much among three of them in the USA.
    Overall, consumers were affected the most unhealthy if consumed to sodium at dinner, while the least affected if consumed to sodium at breakfast and snacks.
    Initially, average percentage of consumed sodium at breakfast and snacks were hit a low-point of 14%. If sodium consumed at lunch time which led to affect to consumer by 29%. Moreover, dinner contributed the most share was 43% among in typical meals.
    However, if added sugar ate by people at snacks time had the most portion at 42%, while breakfast had the least rate at 16%. Also, added sugar spent at lunch and dinner times at 19% and 23% respectively.
    Saturated fat created the most unhealthy portion at dinner time by 37%, while breakfast time had just at 16%. Lunch time took the second most unhealthy place with rate of 26% and snacks followed it at 21% on spent saturated fat.

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      This one has many grammatical mistakes, and really hard to understand, the main point of TASK 1 is to deliver the given information as easy as possible, I suggest you to read real IELTS samples and work on your grammar

  • @kuukuagyesiwah2272
    @kuukuagyesiwah2272 Рік тому +4

    Wow you are too good .. how did I not find you earlier. My exams is in 2 weeks ,hopefully I get to learn something from you.. God bless you

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much.
      I am glad you like my videos

  • @HumbleHistorian
    @HumbleHistorian 2 роки тому +4

    Change The World 🌎!

  • @fftobi
    @fftobi Рік тому +3

    Thank u for your sample answers,with help of which i prepare for IELTS exam

  • @HasanMorshed-ot1
    @HasanMorshed-ot1 Рік тому +2

    Thanks a lot. But I want to Know this types of answer which standard band I got if I follow this contains.

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому

      Sorry for replying late.
      This task 1 has been written perfectly as following the requirements of IELTS official guide.

    • @HasanMorshed-ot1
      @HasanMorshed-ot1 Рік тому

      Thank You very much. I wise may Allah help you.@@KeshIELTS

  • @fahmidaprogga3960
    @fahmidaprogga3960 2 роки тому +2

    Loved your ideasss

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  2 роки тому

      Thank you so much 😊

  • @杨小贤-r7w
    @杨小贤-r7w Рік тому +2

    Thank! I have looked a lot of answers. None of them is better than yours!

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much for your appreciation
      You made my day

  • @khaffyexcel7413
    @khaffyexcel7413 2 роки тому +4

    Very concise and precise, you made writing understandable and easier to pass

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  2 роки тому +1

      WoW, Thank you so much !

  • @living_armor_stand
    @living_armor_stand Рік тому +1

    thank you bro, I am using your samples in an attempt to learn them and rewrite them, hoping that this technique will improve my writing skills in some way.

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much
      I am glad they are helping you

  • @AbdAlrahmanZabadany
    @AbdAlrahmanZabadany Рік тому +1

    6:15 chart*

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much for correcting it

  • @ruchiishani5207
    @ruchiishani5207 Рік тому +2

    have u any sentence structure format for task 1

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Could you please clarify what you mean?

  • @slnmktg7287
    @slnmktg7287 2 роки тому +2

    Is it for GT also or only Academic

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  2 роки тому +2

      It is for Academic IELTS

  • @syedsiammuntasir2557
    @syedsiammuntasir2557 10 місяців тому +1

    2 bodies ain't mandatory for task 1? In our country instructors advised us to give minimum 2 bodies in task 1

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  9 місяців тому +1

      Thank you for mentioning this

  • @nilakshidancestudio8122
    @nilakshidancestudio8122 2 роки тому +2

    interested
    ,please upload more video thanks

  • @Dipti_07
    @Dipti_07 Рік тому +1

    Why have you not mentioned the percentage as it is? The examiner/ marker is not gonna add or subtract the percentages to understand.

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much
      for mentioning this
      Actually they do 🙂

  • @borobhai8760
    @borobhai8760 Рік тому +1

    nice

  • @amberawanrin2701
    @amberawanrin2701 Рік тому +2

    You didn’t explain to us as you wrote
    For someone learning pie chart for the first time, gonna be pretty difficult to understand you bro

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thank you so much for mentioning this, I will take this into account

  • @fahmidaprogga3960
    @fahmidaprogga3960 2 роки тому +2

    It's impressive that how you compared every data with others
    Take love from Bangladesh 💗

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  2 роки тому

      Thank you for your appreciation and support 🙂

  • @Khadkanitika1026
    @Khadkanitika1026 8 місяців тому +1

    Chart or cart?

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  4 місяці тому +1

      Chart
      Sorry for a late reply, I was busy!

  • @Pacifist777
    @Pacifist777 Рік тому +1

    Hi bro! Why you did not start the introduction with lines like "The pie chart depicts" or with other verbs?

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +2

      Hello
      I tried to use different grammar
      Thank you so much for mentioning it

  • @teacherjoko8029
    @teacherjoko8029 Рік тому +1

    Unhealthy is an opinion. no opinions in Task 1.

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  11 місяців тому +1

      Thank you so much
      I will take this into account!

  • @jast-al
    @jast-al Рік тому +1

    EEXELLENT

  • @doniyorurokov2645
    @doniyorurokov2645 Рік тому +1

    Shogirt ustizidan otmasa shogirtmas. San buni uddalading brashka

    • @KeshIELTS
      @KeshIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thank you for believing in me

  • @AdrotyAnanna
    @AdrotyAnanna Рік тому +1

    😂