I really like it when you combine the whole story into a single video,rather than having to watch multiple videos in chapters. TYVM for another great video!
@@adi8724 how is that really obvious? Many people like to listen to it in episodes sometimes people don't have an hour or 2+ to listen but can listen if it was in shorter segments. Your comment is just ignorant.
I always saw it in my head as “Braun”, maybe just because I knew a guy whose last name was spelled that way. The paper towels are probably the right way..😂
Thanks! I remembered hearing a creepypasta with a creature matching 16A's description a while back, but I couldn't think of his name. I wondered if he was in two different stories.
Hi Dr, been listening to you with "Dollar store earbuds"my wife purchased for me so I wouldn't disturb her at night. Finally broke the last pair! Purchased a better quality earbud and wow!! The background effects and music you apply are fantastic. I'm going to relisten to your playlist to see what I missed. No more cheap earbuds for Dr creepin at night.lol.
And now we're complete. I'm going to listen to the whole thing even though I've already listened to the other installments. Love that build-up to the final. Thank you Doc. 😁
This is by far the best series of stories in my opinion . When 16A takes his name as Brawn then teaming with the Windego Anya the story just gets better and better . The would've made an excellent movie series I do believe . Doc , you did a fantastic job on this one with only one mistake , it wasn't long enough . Dr Creepen , you're fantastic at this work because one can actually picture the story in their mind as you read and that's not easily accomplished . So great job Doc. and definitely keep them coming . Outstanding !
I think that was the beginning of Braun...hopefully we will find out soon...this story was definitely intense...thank you Dearest Dr for yet another great story with your angelic voice....pleasant dreams
@@lisaspada2125 PALEEZE ELABORATE ON WHERE I CAN HERE THA SEQUEL TA THIS STORY!!! I AM SO INTRIGUED & DIDN'T WANT IT TA END...!!! (Braun??? The agency... can u gimme tha titles ta each creepypastas???)
Great story and narration! Listened twice 9/28/23 while on a very long walk. At the end, interesting to consider who were the good versus the bad. I’ll have to find the follow up story.
Fantastic! The story behind the actual birth of Brawn! The Brawn stories have become some of my most favorite tales! Was Brawn the product of a human experiment?
The reason why there is a comment section is for people to comment on the video that they just watched not the video that they haven’t watched yet. People watch the video first and then they comment on it you don’t comment on something that you haven’t watched yet
Earlier I left a comment talking about the ending of the story and someone replied to me saying that I have spoiled the ending of the story for her so I deleted my previous comment and I made a new one. Unfortunately people like to leave a comment on the video before watching it or view the comments that were left on the video before watching it for themselves
@@shay4068 I take a scroll through before listening to see if the story is good, usually if its bad or has massive plot holes there will be some comments about it, also I can find out if its part of a series/other info etc. - reading carefully I don't see spoilers while doing this though
Ok Mr Mills 45, a job damn well done! You’ve made up for yesterday’s ending and this was definitely an unusual ending. How the story was ever actually told, or reached to the outside world of the protagonists brain, I’ll never know. But our Precious Dr Creepen delivered it so exceptionally that I can overlook damn near any thing I find to be a sort of issue. Such professionally performed narration, in addition to an excellent written word. I hope you lead us straight to the lair of that damn ice Queen herself. I’d be happy to revoke her license to live. All in All, those of us who are already knowledgeable of this series, don’t take the excitement away from anyone who isn’t. And thanks again to Mr Mills 45 for such an amazing job! 👍👍👍👍👍 That’s FIVE thumbs up, the highest award I give.
Another awesome story and narration, Dr. Creepen (as usual!😊) Several people have mentioned this being attached to another story about Braun/Brawn. Can someone tell me the name of that story? Thanks!!
The original story I think was - I am a monster built by the government to kill other monsters ! Let me know if m m or not ask it cryptids (that's 16a they mentioned ) x
The description of what seems to be a pre-Braun, Braun, it sounds like a not quite finished version, more like 15Z, instead of 16A. Hairless, slim, yet still blue and clawed, and able to speak. It just seems he’ll get upgrades before any more episodes about him. Maybe one that explains his new growth. At least that’s the image I see. It’s definitely him, but not yet fully “grown”.
@@mrmills45 Seriously? I could’ve sworn he was covered with blue hair, much like the Cookie Monster? That’s always been the image I’ve had in my head when he was off on one of his awesome adventures. I really need to know if you’re messing with me or not!! I may be suffering from The Mandela effect.
@@jackdurden466 I’d probably go back and recheck the first episode just to refresh your memory. But yeah he’s always looked the exact same from when he was “born” up until part 8 of the series where he turned red. That was his only change appearance wise.
@@mrmills45 I was thinking I’d do that exact same thing. I don’t know why I always pictured him covered with blue hair. Like I mentioned, it truly may have been a relation to the damn Cookie Monster! But I am going back to listen again. It’s definitely a series I don’t mind hearing again, making it a rare and great one. So well done sir!! 👍
Dr. Creeps channel. "I was a monster created by the government " is the video to watch after this. Enjoy. The beginning of BRAWN. This is awesome. .can't believe I stumbled onto the back story! !! ENJOY!!
Of all the creepy story readers, you pick the best stories. And you've got a great voice. I do get a little annoyed that you don't pronounce the last word in each sentence though. "The thing connected to her nehhhh." "Sweeps of the buildihhh." I get that it's a stylistic choice and adds flair to the narration, but it makes it difficult to understand what the last word of each sentence, which gets frustrating over the course of 90+ minutes. Again, you pick the most well written stories and have a nice voice. That's all you need. In my opinion, the stylistic flair is unnecessary and distracting.
I Cant believe it!...I only had 30mins left & the exciting bit too, before I decided to check the comments to see who was here listening , and even though its a new story only posted tonight there they were, two inconsiderates posting the ending of the story in their comments! Why do people do that? just ruined it for me & plenty of others Im sure...the story was only posted a couple hours ago, and its 1hour:46 mins long so these people rushed to the end & then into the comments to tell us all what happens to the protagonist? Seriously annoying , their comments ought to be removed when they contain spoilers within the first few hours.
You’re right, but I’ve long ago learned to not read them as no one cares about spilling spoilers in the comments. Just don’t look. It’s actually hard as I feel drawn to them, but regret it everytime.
@@jackdurden466 Yeah I only looked to see if some old friends had said hi & I really couldnt help seeing them Jack, they were short one line sentences at & near the top of what was a short comments thread at that time, saying exactly what had happened to him. My eyes took it in before I could look away or realise that they were spoilers. I wasnt prepared to see that & honestly didnt think anybody would blatantly tell the ending of a brand newly uploaded story . Most of us older lot have been with Doc since the start & we are all usually very good about not ruining his work & the experience for others who pop in to say hello etc, its pretty easy to head a comment with the commonly used "SPOILER ALERT" if you are discussing the video in detail. I see a lots changed.
I really like it when you combine the whole story into a single video,rather than having to watch multiple videos in chapters. TYVM for another great video!
That's exactly what it sounded like to me. The first introduction to 16A, who would later give himself the name of Brawn. The "creature" who exhibited more humanity than his creators.
Please put a "SPOILER WARNING SIGN" on comments like this when you are telling people the ending of a new story that has only just been posted tonight. Many of us who have friends here pop in to the comments to see who is here listening, and I was 75mins listening tonight when I decided to come see who is here & say hello, I straight away saw two different comments telling me in one quick sentence what happened to the protagonist. Its not fair to do this on a new story.
@@FIONA21ful Hi, Karen! I didn't realize that I'd be obliged to you in any way. You can always continue listening and not read the comments. It's just comments. And there are lots of us who wrote the same line of thought - no one died yet reading the comments. So read on the others and have a nice weekend!
@@redlady120 Your reply to my polite request to not spoil it for everyone says it all. From what I understand about your US Karen culture, you as the unapolagetic spoiler of the end of the story for everyone , are the actual Karen here. I simply hoped you might care to know an easy way around it. Using Spoiler Alerts is a common courtesy.
Thanks for listening... here are the time stamps for the three parts:
Part 1 00:15
Part 2 39:37
Part 3 1:19:51
Thank you so much for all your wonderful work and best of luck on your return to the w😜kforce STAY SANE🥰 STAY WELL 🥰
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Why I never finished the senior year summer camp story?
Hands down Dr CREEPEN the very best on UA-cam thank you for all the stories you up load. 🙏❤️
I really like it when you combine the whole story into a single video,rather than having to watch multiple videos in chapters. TYVM for another great video!
Me too
I like it when dumb people say really obvious things 😉
Yea I agree
@@adi8724 how is that really obvious?
Many people like to listen to it in episodes sometimes people don't have an hour or 2+ to listen but can listen if it was in shorter segments. Your comment is just ignorant.
@@XxMidnightToker420xX
ignore the dumb trolls.
I like prefer episodic method. Still, potato/potáto, they all make the world go round.😁
Brawn... his name is Brawn.
Great job, this story was a perfect prequel.
I always saw it in my head as “Braun”, maybe just because I knew a guy whose last name was spelled that way. The paper towels are probably the right way..😂
Doesn't matter how its spelt braun jenny Dr brown and Aria
What is this a prequel to?
@@Snow-vo1yi a story called "I'm a monster created by the government"
Thanks! I remembered hearing a creepypasta with a creature matching 16A's description a while back, but I couldn't think of his name. I wondered if he was in two different stories.
Hi Dr, been listening to you with "Dollar store earbuds"my wife purchased for me so I wouldn't disturb her at night. Finally broke the last pair! Purchased a better quality earbud and wow!! The background effects and music you apply are fantastic. I'm going to relisten to your playlist to see what I missed. No more cheap earbuds for Dr creepin at night.lol.
And now we're complete.
I'm going to listen to the whole thing even though I've already listened to the other installments. Love that build-up to the final.
Thank you Doc. 😁
This is by far the best series of stories in my opinion . When 16A takes his name as Brawn then teaming with the Windego Anya the story just gets better and better . The would've made an excellent movie series I do believe . Doc , you did a fantastic job on this one with only one mistake , it wasn't long enough . Dr Creepen , you're fantastic at this work because one can actually picture the story in their mind as you read and that's not easily accomplished . So great job Doc. and definitely keep them coming . Outstanding !
Her name is aria,bit yeah this story of Brawn is fantastic
I really wish the author would write more to Brawn's adventures after his battle with the cult. It was such a wonderful storyline :)
I think that was the beginning of Braun...hopefully we will find out soon...this story was definitely intense...thank you Dearest Dr for yet another great story with your angelic voice....pleasant dreams
Totally the prologue to Braun
At least
That's what I was hearing
Fits perfectly into his story
Too perfectly 🤔👀
@@ModernDayAfro of course, he’s 16A.
I think you might be right, i was getting that vibe and thought i recognized some of the scientist names
@@chrism4008 either the agency or Dr West is a bit give away there's a lot I hear and it falls into place 😉 !!
@@lisaspada2125 PALEEZE ELABORATE ON WHERE I CAN HERE THA SEQUEL TA THIS STORY!!! I AM SO INTRIGUED & DIDN'T WANT IT TA END...!!! (Braun??? The agency... can u gimme tha titles ta each creepypastas???)
Best way to spend a Friday night.
Agreed..
Love this one. Thank you so much. The only problem is, when they’re so good I won’t let myself go to sleep until it’s over.♥️
Listening to each part, I wondered if it had anything to do with Braun's story, and thankfully it was.
Very good. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Thank you so much Dr Creepen for one and a half hours of narrative bliss ❤️❤️❤️
Your stories and voice Have to hear to sleep at night. Ty love your show!!!!!!!!
Absolutely fantastic love this story and the big blue (Braun)and his friends Aria and another (just like you) amazing Dr !!!!!! 😉🤔😃💜
Omg, March 14th is my birthday! Now that’s a cool way to start off, ik know this is gonna be a good one
And thus our friend Braun is born You and Mr. Creeps should get together and do a collaboration Well done as usual sir
I knew as soon as I heard site 12 that this was MrMills45 referring to the agency. I'm definitely gonna listen to this all the way through.
Brilliant...your narrations are so soothing to the ear, it's my daily therapy....thank you for your contribution to us all...
Great story and narration! Listened twice 9/28/23 while on a very long walk. At the end, interesting to consider who were the good versus the bad. I’ll have to find the follow up story.
Thank you for the content as always. And thanks for the time stamp for part 3. Great story so far.
Glad you enjoyed it
Written like a semi-pro, narrated like a boss.
And thank you,.Doc!
My weekend's complete
Stay safe and take care!!
@Phoenix 𝙾𝚙𝚎𝚗 𝙼𝚢 PROFILE
Let the bodies hit the floor
Wow Dr that was the best one yet. Thanks for bringing it to my ears.
The way you tell story’s is amazing, I love bein in my welding mask and just listening to your story’s.. thank you
Judge me for all I care!
Favorite drink. Diet Mtn Dew
I think 16A is about my favorite character/cryptid ever! Not to mention he’s BLUE!! My favorite color :)
Fantastic! The story behind the actual birth of Brawn! The Brawn stories have become some of my most favorite tales! Was Brawn the product of a human experiment?
Love the experiment and space narrations
Da awesome story Dr, sorry I haven't been commenting lately, but I've been crazy busy. Still love your content!
No worries!
🔥🔥🔥
Btw great job on Viidith26 narration in the underwater suite story 😎😎😎
Thank you! 😁
A fantastic story.... Great job... Well done
Thank you Doctah and mrmills45
Another great story wrapped up!
Much better than the Forrest Tucker Experiment: How to make the perfect F troop. Kudos.
There is a story linked to this one. It's called "I am a monster created by the government" it tells the story of 16a
Didn't make the connection before...brawn was 16A
This makes this a great prequel!!
The reason why there is a comment section is for people to comment on the video that they just watched not the video that they haven’t watched yet. People watch the video first and then they comment on it you don’t comment on something that you haven’t watched yet
It’s incredible, some actual sense in the comment section! What a total Anomaly!
Earlier I left a comment talking about the ending of the story and someone replied to me saying that I have spoiled the ending of the story for her so I deleted my previous comment and I made a new one. Unfortunately people like to leave a comment on the video before watching it or view the comments that were left on the video before watching it for themselves
@@shay4068 I take a scroll through before listening to see if the story is good, usually if its bad or has massive plot holes there will be some comments about it, also I can find out if its part of a series/other info etc. - reading carefully I don't see spoilers while doing this though
I am sorry but I disagree, looking for plot holes in the comment section or see if the story is good is a spoiler
I'll always be around to listen to you Doc. 💕
Very well done, excellent reading voice sir.
Thank you 4 all you do .
Mr. Creepen always puts me to sleep 😴 💤 his thick accent scares no ones
I love your voice so soothing 😌 💕 thank you for reading to me
Excellent as always⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👌👍🇬🇧
On a two hour bus journey so going to enjoy this
Ok Mr Mills 45, a job damn well done! You’ve made up for yesterday’s ending and this was definitely an unusual ending. How the story was ever actually told, or reached to the outside world of the protagonists brain, I’ll never know. But our Precious Dr Creepen delivered it so exceptionally that I can overlook damn near any thing I find to be a sort of issue. Such professionally performed narration, in addition to an excellent written word. I hope you lead us straight to the lair of that damn ice Queen herself. I’d be happy to revoke her license to live. All in All, those of us who are already knowledgeable of this series, don’t take the excitement away from anyone who isn’t. And thanks again to Mr Mills 45 for such an amazing job! 👍👍👍👍👍 That’s FIVE thumbs up, the highest award I give.
This my guy Brawn! 💪🏾👹🥲
I have just recently found yr channel I love it and addicted to yr stories
Great job
Great way to unwind
That was super jitz😁❤️ love Braun😍
Sad but beautiful.
Excited
Thank you Dr.
My cat kept swiping at the helicopter in the background because he thought it was a fly.
😂😂😂😂And that’s why I love cats!!
I hope you had a good day my friend
That rivers current is very fast!
I like the 16 a story’s they are awesome
Want more of this story...please 😊
good stuff as always, doc
I swear, Brawn isn't something Dr. West just cooked up, he's an absolute angel sent by God to save the people of the world.
Don't mind if I do! I know what in doing for the next two hours c: thanks doc!
yes awesome
Awesomeness...
Another awesome story and narration, Dr. Creepen (as usual!😊) Several people have mentioned this being attached to another story about Braun/Brawn. Can someone tell me the name of that story? Thanks!!
The original story I think was - I am a monster built by the government to kill other monsters !
Let me know if m m or not ask it cryptids (that's 16a they mentioned ) x
@@lisaspada2125 Thank you!!!
Trust me, he'll would NOT be better than this!!!
Is this about Braun an dr west?
Thanks
Whats up !! From downtown Boston. Thought you may wanna know where your voice is being transmitted.
Cheers 😊
When u see his paper in the picture 😏but seriously i love ur stories, especially ones from this universe 😁
The description of what seems to be a pre-Braun, Braun, it sounds like a not quite finished version, more like 15Z, instead of 16A. Hairless, slim, yet still blue and clawed, and able to speak. It just seems he’ll get upgrades before any more episodes about him. Maybe one that explains his new growth. At least that’s the image I see. It’s definitely him, but not yet fully “grown”.
Oh no he’s always been hairless and slim haha. (Author here) same appearance as the main series!
@@mrmills45 Seriously? I could’ve sworn he was covered with blue hair, much like the Cookie Monster? That’s always been the image I’ve had in my head when he was off on one of his awesome adventures. I really need to know if you’re messing with me or not!! I may be suffering from The Mandela effect.
@@jackdurden466 I’d probably go back and recheck the first episode just to refresh your memory. But yeah he’s always looked the exact same from when he was “born” up until part 8 of the series where he turned red. That was his only change appearance wise.
@@mrmills45 I was thinking I’d do that exact same thing. I don’t know why I always pictured him covered with blue hair. Like I mentioned, it truly may have been a relation to the damn Cookie Monster! But I am going back to listen again. It’s definitely a series I don’t mind hearing again, making it a rare and great one. So well done sir!! 👍
Och now the complete story great ❤💖💗
Dr. Creeps channel. "I was a monster created by the government " is the video to watch after this. Enjoy. The beginning of BRAWN. This is awesome. .can't believe I stumbled onto the back story! !! ENJOY!!
Is this about my favorite cryptid critter - Brawn?!
"what happens when you see his paper in the picture" about an hour deep lol
Of all the creepy story readers, you pick the best stories. And you've got a great voice. I do get a little annoyed that you don't pronounce the last word in each sentence though. "The thing connected to her nehhhh." "Sweeps of the buildihhh." I get that it's a stylistic choice and adds flair to the narration, but it makes it difficult to understand what the last word of each sentence, which gets frustrating over the course of 90+ minutes.
Again, you pick the most well written stories and have a nice voice. That's all you need. In my opinion, the stylistic flair is unnecessary and distracting.
Listen to the all lord Creepen
There can only be one
I Cant believe it!...I only had 30mins left & the exciting bit too, before I decided to check the comments to see who was here listening , and even though its a new story only posted tonight there they were, two inconsiderates posting the ending of the story in their comments! Why do people do that? just ruined it for me & plenty of others Im sure...the story was only posted a couple hours ago, and its 1hour:46 mins long so these people rushed to the end & then into the comments to tell us all what happens to the protagonist?
Seriously annoying , their comments ought to be removed when they contain spoilers within the first few hours.
You’re right, but I’ve long ago learned to not read them as no one cares about spilling spoilers in the comments. Just don’t look. It’s actually hard as I feel drawn to them, but regret it everytime.
@@jackdurden466 Yeah I only looked to see if some old friends had said hi & I really couldnt help seeing them Jack, they were short one line sentences at & near the top of what was a short comments thread at that time, saying exactly what had happened to him. My eyes took it in before I could look away or realise that they were spoilers.
I wasnt prepared to see that & honestly didnt think anybody would blatantly tell the ending of a brand newly uploaded story . Most of us older lot have been with Doc since the start & we are all usually very good about not ruining his work & the experience for others who pop in to say hello etc, its pretty easy to head a comment with the commonly used "SPOILER ALERT" if you are discussing the video in detail. I see a lots changed.
What's this a prequel for exactly?
Well, the Storm took my connection! But, I'm back to binge watching my favorite storyteller 🥰🌹 Yeah.. over 1.5k..?! WOW!
Coodles, Dearest Doctor! ✅👍
Wish everybody wonderful weekend 🙋♀️😊❤
I really like it when you combine the whole story into a single video,rather than having to watch multiple videos in chapters. TYVM for another great video!
👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿
Awwww! I was hoping he'd take down the facility and make the scientists pay
Why spoil the story for others
Great story!!! But a bit disappointed :(. I wanted him to make it
Spoiler alert. Thanks
Okay but why is Sephiroth impaling Cloud?
Woo
😎👍
I’m just gonna throw this out like every other person lol Hmmmm 🤔 reminds me of another story!
The Beginning of Braun/Brawn?
I really love and appreciate the effort you creepy bastids across the boards put into the stories. Thanks.
I’m still listening because listen when i go ti bed. But is this connected to the “im a creature created by the government” story?
There can only be one
1st
Congratulations on being firstlicious 👍
SGD. I didn't recognize you with your new name.🙂 I hope you are well this evening. Much love.💕
@@sexygrandmadarkness2722 Heyyyy beautiful! I thought you had taken a vacation!
Prequel?
That's exactly what it sounded like to me. The first introduction to 16A, who would later give himself the name of Brawn. The "creature" who exhibited more humanity than his creators.
@@maxhonneger2761 thats what i thought in part 1
It's rather sad... I wish he would've survived
Please put a "SPOILER WARNING SIGN" on comments like this when you are telling people the ending of a new story that has only just been posted tonight.
Many of us who have friends here pop in to the comments to see who is here listening, and I was 75mins listening tonight when I decided to come see who is here & say hello, I straight away saw two different comments telling me in one quick sentence what happened to the protagonist. Its not fair to do this on a new story.
@@FIONA21ful Hi, Karen!
I didn't realize that I'd be obliged to you in any way.
You can always continue listening and not read the comments.
It's just comments. And there are lots of us who wrote the same line of thought - no one died yet reading the comments.
So read on the others and have a nice weekend!
@@redlady120 Your reply to my polite request to not spoil it for everyone says it all. From what I understand about your US Karen culture, you as the unapolagetic spoiler of the end of the story for everyone , are the actual Karen here.
I simply hoped you might care to know an easy way around it. Using Spoiler Alerts is a common courtesy.
How does he not immediately know he's got the code in his backpack? 🙄
Yes doc i need my prescription filled can i have one of your best please more i want more honesty iam not addicted wink wink
I'm still so confused why show the main character their secrets?
I didn't realize this was a Braun story. 16A
.... Am i detecting canon?
🖤💀🖤
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