How I Would Write Miraculous' Power System - Creation's Experiment
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- Опубліковано 24 лип 2024
- I wish we got more of all the kwami in the show.
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Introduction: 0:00
The Origin Of The Miraculous: 1:05
The Kwami: 5:51
Transmission And Emotion: 8:16
Creation: 11:08
Destruction: 13:28
Creation And Destruction: 15:48
Temporary Holders: 16:59
Perception: 19:33
Preservation: 22:11
Action: 24:08
Conclusion: 28:15
Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir (French: Miraculous, les aventures de Ladybug et Chat Noir; also known as Miraculous Ladybug or Miraculous]) is a French CGI superhero / magical girl television series. The series focuses on two Parisian teenagers, Marinette Dupain-Cheng and Adrien Agreste, who transform into the superheroes Ladybug and Cat Noir, respectively, to protect the city from supervillains. The series is co-produced by French studios Zagtoon and Method Animation in association with Toei Animation in Japan, with the participation of TF1, AB Droits Audiovisuels, The Walt Disney Company France, Gloob, SK Broadband and EBS.
In modern-day Paris, teenagers Marinette Dupain-Cheng and Adrien Agreste transform into superheroes when evil arises. Marinette and Adrien transform into their superhero personas, Ladybug and Cat Noir respectively, using magical jeweled objects known as the Miraculous. Not knowing each other's true identities, the two work together to protect Paris from the mysterious villain, Hawk Moth, who covets and attempts to steal their powers by using his akumas, butterflies infused with negative energy, to transform Paris' everyday citizens into supervillains when they go through negative emotions. All the while, the two struggle with their feelings for each other, not knowing each other's secret identities - Marinette is in love with Adrien but not Cat Noir, while Adrien is in love with Ladybug but not Marinette.
Adrien Agreste, better known as Cat Noir, is one of the two titular main protagonists (alongside Ladybug) of Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir. He is a student at Collège Françoise Dupont and a fashion model. With his magical ring, inhabited by a Kwami named Plagg, he has the power of bad luck and can transform into the superhero Cat Noir (Chat Noir in the French version). In Season 3, he temporarily receives the Ladybug Miraculous from Tikki, which, when inhabited by her, can transform him into Mister Bug, a ladybug-themed superhero, and in "Desperada", he temporarily receives the Snake Miraculous from Ladybug, which, when inhabited by the Kwami Sass, can transform him into Aspik, a snake-themed superhero.
Marinette Dupain-Cheng is the primary protagonist of Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir. She is a student in Miss Bustier's class at Collège Françoise Dupont in Paris, France, and a budding fashion designer who wants to have her own brand one day. With the Ladybug Miraculous, when inhabited by Tikki, Marinette transforms into the superheroine Ladybug, gaining the power of creation to stop Hawk Moth and his akumatized villains. She is the leader of the French Miraculous superhero team.
Alya Césaire is one of the four deuteragonists (alongside Tikki, Plagg and Nino Lahiffe) of Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir. She is a former student in Miss Bustier's class at Collège Françoise Dupont, Marinette Dupain-Cheng's best friend, and Nino Lahiffe's girlfriend. She is also the only admin of the Ladyblog and head of the school blog.
In "Sapotis", after her younger twin sisters are akumatized into the titular villain, Alya receives the Fox Miraculous from Ladybug. When the Miraculous is inhabited by Trixx, Alya becomes Rena Rouge, a fox-themed superhero who helps Ladybug and Cat Noir "during particularly difficult missions" in the second season and beyond.
Chloé Bourgeois is the central antagonist of Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir, serving as the secondary antagonist of Season 1, the anti-heroic tritagonist of Season 2, a major anti-hero-turned-final antagonist of Season 3, and a major antagonist of Seasons 4 and 5. She is a student in Miss Bustier's class at Collège Françoise Dupont.
She is a rival of Marinette Dupain-Cheng (and Ladybug). She is also the daughter of André and Audrey Bourgeois and the older half-sister of Zoé Lee.
In "Style Queen", after Ladybug loses the Bee Miraculous that she wanted to entrust Alya Césaire with, Chloé finds it. When the Miraculous was inhabited by Pollen, she became Queen Bee, a bee-themed antihero who helped Ladybug and Cat Noir "during particularly difficult missions" in Seasons 2 and 3. - Розваги
What do you guys think'?
Should I try my hand at rewriting other power systems?
Addendum: So, in the same vein as how I said that the Miraculous will be destroyed because humanity no longer needs them, the kid's superhero careers wouldn't actually end with the destruction of the miraculous. Their exposure to them have given them a sort of connection to the force their magic is based on. They're weaker than when they were heroes, but they're wizards now. Not all of them will pursue active hero careers (Zoe, Felix, etc.) but they'll lend a hand if necessary and are on call for serious magic threats. Once it's clear the all powerful Miraculous heroes are gone, new weaker villains can try to take on Paris. That way you can keep the stakes level without needing direct escalation. It wouldn't be easy to write, I'll admit.
I really appreciate you giving destruction more relevance! The fact that Tikki cannot destroy what she has created helps Ladybug to become more precise with her abilities, as well as Chat Noir learning HOW to use destruction to his advantage.
You are just saying that cause you are not including all of the miraculous cause the most powerful miraculous is the rooster
@@lightningstriker8884 wat???
@@lightningstriker8884 actually the roster is not the most powerful it cannot be used as a wish and it cannot give you the same powers of other kwami so as to not disturb their magic
@ophiuchus7800 ah, but I am talking about after that episode the rooster miraculous was reconed
Personally I'm not a fan of temporary holders since there's no explanation on why the holders aren't all permanent unless dead or renouncing their position. It makes the other kwamis and their holders feel like filler characters with no development, especially given that it's stated that the cat and ladybug miraculous are the only ones you need for ultimate power.
Exactly, Miraculous just doesn't work as an ensamble show. We barely focus on Cat, so how can they focus on the 16 more one-off heroes.
@@snooker7107 now we have 17 one off heroes at once, good luck trying to give all of them at least some screen time
Well, the temporary holders are already Canon as they can change any time. As it have haplened in the show. But I'm wondering how you would prefer this point to be?
@@aidannatsume9550 Well now they get to keep their miraculous, if I recall correctly. The best route from hereon is dividing screentime, ie some episodes focus on Adrien, Marinette, Alya, Zoe, and Nino, while others focus on Sabrina, Marc, Nathaniel, Luka, etc.
You realize that they are also useless when you realize that when they need extra power, all it takes is for Ladybug or Chat Noir to merge, but no, let's go around the city looking for the team
15:42 'For Adrien, it's a staff like in the show, but it also acts as a sheath for his sword.'
That is such a neat and fitting way to integrate Adrien's fencing skills in his weapon that I'm actually mad that it WASN'T in the original show. It's the perfect shape, and just imagine the drama of Chat Noir, who usually uses his staff to smashy smashy thwacky thwacky, having to get a little more serious in a fight, taking a stance with it at his side, and in a flash he's unsheathed his blade and slashed an incoming projectile to ribbons. OR!- the sword could be considered more a special move; a swipe with his sword while using Cataclysm turns a single direct contact attack into a tangible slash of destruction that flies out in front of him to hit multiple obstacles!
...Once again I wish fandom had written the show instead.
So that one tesaiga move? Or gestuga tensho?
@@AnixZiel it would be the saigo no getsuga tensho or even mugetsu
AN GARDE!!!!
That would be lowkey kinda cool...
This is so conceptually interesting!! I especially love how you wrote the concept of Action, with Queen Bee having Venom and "Honey Bee" having Command -- like you said, the DRAMA... Chloe wishes she had the power of Command SO BAD LMAO
Yesssss
I love the idea of Zoe and Chole both having the bee miraculous
I thought what he had to say on their dynamic was super interesting! Undergoing the same abuse and reacting to it so differently that they themselves become opposites. Then over the course of the story slowly meeting one another in the middle to finally utilize the maximum potential of their power.
That idea of Wayzz being Tikki and Plagg's son in a manner does make sense. After all, what sometimes drives creation? Protection from destruction.
As much as I hated the unnecessary addition of Zoe in the show, I think she fits perfectly into your rewrite. Having her move to Paris earlier in the series and have drama with the family and getting close with Marinette enough to be entrusted with a miraculous.
I think bumblebee is better suited for zoe since bumblebees are a less aggressive version of a honey bee which matches with Zoe's personality
cool, that's what I thought of too :D
Isn't Bumblebee already trademarked?
I really like the concept of two opposing miraculous holders! It matches thematically with how Chat and Ladybug are supposed to be opposites as well as gives the temporary holders each of them choose some really interesting character development.
I really want that Zoe rewrite video now. Looking forward to your Felix one!
Just based on the description of Tikki in this restructure, I’m now just picturing her aligning with Oppenheimer during the Manhattan Project.
She totally would.
I love this so much 😂
@@JesseGolo”Tikki i need you to make an atom bomb”
“You had me at make”
The idea of having Chloe and Zoe have opposite powers to their personalities is so good of an idea! It gives what both characters need. It forces Chloe to practice self restraint and patience and it forces Zoe to be more assertive.
I like how you changed Pollen’s character to be more assertive towards both Chloe and Zoe. Pollen was basically another yes man toward Chloe in the show and that wasn’t what she needed at all. I appreciate you still keeping Queen Bee while also adding in Honey Bee. I love the idea of Chloe and Zoe bonding over them both being the wielder of the bee. I assume that based on the situation, Ladybug will call upon either Chloe or Zoe.
The only thing I’d change is changing the weapon to a raiper because of the idea of a practice raiper is that if you touch someone with it, the game is over. It fits perfectly with the idea of venom and it can work for command. Also a raiper is heavily in French culture.
However I’m not entirely opposed to brass knuckles. It would be excellent if the brass knuckles looked like honeycombs.
In my fanfic I wrote out the Miracoulouses of black cat and ladybug. quote from timeline folder "Tikki and Plagg REFUSED to be on a miraculous since their power was too dangerous for humans to use"
I like his interpretation of the quamis. You know in his version Tikki brought the idea to Plagg and he just straight up said if you're making one for yourself you're making one for me too, I have to be there when everything goes terribly wrong and you need me to fix it.
Link, please? I wanna to read it!
So how do they get involved in the story if they're not bound to a Miraculous?
I love the concept of, depending on the holder the powers change to suit, compliment or even challenge their way of perceiving the ideas of: creaction destruction... and having the powers reflect that is just so fitting seeing as the concepts the kwamis are, don't really make sense to be tied down to one power each.
Yeah gosh that makes it more fun
There’s just so much I love about the ideas presented here.
Having each Kwami not only play an active role in their wielders’ character development, but also have unique characteristics and personalities that make them stand out from one another? Yes please! And I love the choice you made to make them omnipotent beings that are incapable of change. One may think that making them capable of changing the way they think would allow them to experience some character development, but with so many characters, I find it so much wiser that you chose to simply make them conduits through which their wielders develop. On top of that, making them immovable in their values and beliefs makes them feel so much more…godly?
In addition, I absolutely love the new names for Illusion and Protection. As each Miraculous seems to embody a concept, it’s much more appropriate to have each be called something much broader? Simply put, I find Preservation to be a far broader concept than Protection, which I think, allows for much more exploration in regards to how each wielder uses their respective Miraculous.
On that note, placing a clearer emphasis on the concepts of the Miraculous, as well as having two wielders for each (at least in regards to the temporary holders), is such an interesting idea, and it allows the show to actually delve a bit more into a philosophical side of itself, while also linking it to the differences between each character and how they perceive things. By seeing how each character chooses to use their power, we are essentially given an insight into how each character thinks and feels, and it’s just such a brilliant take.
Also, having Adrien have a morbid interest in destruction, which contrasts with Marinette’s love of creation not only gives Adrien some much needed interests, but it also serves to make the two even more opposite than they already were, thus better fitting them into the contrasting concepts of Creation and Destruction.
Anyway, sorry if this was long, but I genuinely adore the ideas presented in this video.
Thank you.
A good way of making the purification system not unique to Ladybug, but also keep the Ladybug and Cat Miraculous as special as they are creation and destruction, Ying and Yang and stuff
So maybe BOTH can do the purification, or only the black cat can do that (because purification is the destruction of evil, got that from a Aloubell video)
Or that they both can catch the akuma/amok, but they need to work together to purify it and a good substitute for the Miraculous ladybug would be both Cat and Ladybug use their powers, because the Miraculous Ladybug repairing stuff doesn't make any sense, Creation only ADDS STUFF, creation being able to "repair damage" in the sense of being able to revert mind control, and other powers effect is so weird, I can get destruction nullifying an others power but like, creation?
I feel like the "black cat purification" thing is a bit to plagiaristic, so I think the "both of them needing to work together to purif" is better
@@superlemonslicer1224 Yeah, i thought of them both working together
But then i also remembered that other one from Aloubell
isn't it beautiful that miraculous, a show whose main hero has the power of creation, inspires creation in a part of its audience by rewriting, reworking, and thinking about it?
Ladybug really is the most powerful hero on youtube...
As someone who doesnt like canon Zoe, if we could get a rewrite of her character and have the dynamic you propose, by golly I can see myself maybe liking her. I would honestly like to see a general series rewrite from you with these ideas. Also when you mentioned the plot point of LC and CN being out and the 6 heries having to work together, I had immediate mental images of how that could happen. Like maybe the 6 of them have to keep swapping through transformations while the other none transformed run off to do something else. Like maybe each of them, even with learning each other's powers, still specialize in something to still give them differentiation and not make 1 seem useless when the other gets both powers. So for a fight 1 group of three can go off and do things and then switch with the other set to deal with something. Or we have them traveling in pairs, with the transformed not only having to fight and protect the city but to also protect their partner so they can work together. Get some cute intwractions, maybe some bickering, maybe some reconciling and understanding. Maybe they could learn to multitask better or maybe discover a new ability that manifests with the new things they have to accomplish and new desires that formulate in different ways
9:11 I’d like to think that Gabriel has a anti-social disorder in this version. Fusing the miraculous of emotion and transmission was easier for him, for having a lack of empathy and emotion -and being controlling and manipulative. He had form an unhealthy obsession with his wife, willing to do anything and destroy anything to bring her back, and with fusing the miraculous only deteriorating his mind and body. I’ll also like to think that the miraculous is like an ancient “myth” that most don’t believe in. But the few who does-spend their whole lives searching for them, Gabriel so happens to be one of those people. The reason why he found both emotion and transmission was because they were drawn towards him. Maybe the grimoire was the reason why he became so interested into the miraculous, oh wow-the possibility and potential this story has.
Maybe the grimoire can disguise itself as a plain book? It could’ve been passed down to each generation of guardians until it had gotten into the wrong hands once, making people obsessed with the idea of having a wish that could distort reality (but in reality nobody can handle the sheer power of it) but fortunately the grimoire was recovered, and was given the ability to disguise itself. Or maybe it was forever lost, until Gabriel got his on it. Of course Gabriel had to put up a fight in order to get his hands on it. Ooooo I like this idea, I need to make multiple concepts on this now
I would love to see a rewrite of Zoe's character. I love her and she deserves a better execution than the one she got.
Yeah totally agree
15:29 That is EXACTLY what I thought his powerup would have been like.
I mean the Ladybug had a controlled and more focused creation, especially with the charms.
Heck they could have used it in a modified version of the hack-san episode, in a timeline where Chloe never betrayed Ladybug in Miracle Queen and in Hack San Alya became Scarabella for more than one episode. Let's say make it a two parter.
Long story short, Chloe would become friends with Marinette after being trapped in a virtual world *Think pixelator but with marinette instead of adrien*, reveals her jealousy of Mariette's success/family. Alya dislikes this, Lila uses this. *Friendship with Marinette is destroyed completely*
Alya gets akumatizes, but breaks out of it. She realizes she should NOT be ladybug due to her feelings and what she knows, similar to how luka acted later on.
But in this scenario, Cat Noir is encouraged to focus and use a new version of the ability focused on a single claw, focusing based on feeling. ALL memories involving Ladybug.
Thus making her forget about ladybug, but also everything she knows.
Luka would instead become the next Alya later *Until he too is given the option*, but lets change it so he approaches Adrien first and the later confesses to him about it. Adrien NEEDED a friend like Alya to share his secret with.
After this, Alya would still be friends with Lila instead of Marinette thanks to Lila's lies.
Pollen would still be given to Zoe, but now that Alya can no longer be trusted... Trix goes to Chloe instead, by CHLOE'S choice, to show she has changed. *My sister will do a better job with pollen*
No, having Alya stop being Marinette's friend completely would be the worst possible thing!
I'd prefer toning down the salt.
I absolutely love this idea for miraculous' power system. It makes me wonder if other concepts could be called upon for favors or another miraculous, like the concept of nothingness, which would technically predate both creation and destruction
nah because than marinette wouldn't be as special also i guess gimmi the kwami for that concept
@@monerb7185I feel like Gimmi doesn't exist in this interpretation
@@superlemonslicer1224 yeah probably
Why do you like this better?
@@ethancox9737it's better structured, it gives characters more room to grow and reasons to interact and if the show needs to pull something out of nowhere to make the plot make sense it's less sudden and has more restrictions to it (unlike how Creation is treated in the show, like, it could do literally anything unless the wielder just chooses not to, which undermines most of the other characters relevance and makes the villain look like a joke.)
I’m intrigued by the idea of holders getting different powers based on different interpretations of the concept their kwami embodies, and the ability for one holder to eventually learn to harness any of those other possible powers if they learn and grow with their miraculous. It reminds me in some ways of epithets from the series “Epithet Erased” and how powers in that world are based around words and any definition or interpretation of the word an inscribed is able to master. A part of me really likes the magic system of miraculous the way it is despite its many flaws but your interpretation of it is definitely very fun and your take on the kwami’s is so interesting and well thought out.
Still think they should have had Chloe betray Hawkmoth in Miracle Queen, using her power to control Mayura.
Oh and make the other miraculous not used until AFTER Hawkmoth was defeated.
Like where Gabriel regretted his actions, similar to the movie and gives up.
But promises to HELP Ladybug and Cat Noir in the future, later making a secret headquarters with master Fu working along side things.
No jail time, just public service.
Then have Natalie be the next villain, the sentimonster creation being more powerful. Multi sentimonsters possible. Requiring more heroes to battle her.
i prefer this interpretation actually, having this type of storytelling makes it interesting. ithink itd be a good story to teach kids how theres always room for improvement and that it isnt a bad thing. fan art for this interpretation would be so good
This power system is fire ngl
I really love the detail that Gabriel would be a good fit for the ladybug miraculous, two sides of the same coin is my favourite trope
I really like the concept of different holders having their own versions of the Miraculous' abilities, based off their relationship with the aspect! It really shows how a miraculous can be an extension of the user rather than just a too for power.
I also really love how you condensed the powers to just a few to make things simpler. The powers in the show right now don't all seem related in the slightest, some seem to be variations of each other, and some are just downright bad.
I believe the dragon miraculous has the concept of perfection because it has a perfect balance of everything you need in a battle or conflict, you can attack, defend and flee using the same miraculous with three different powers, not to mention the sword that can be used to attack or block. It would be easier to give a concept more connected to the elements but perfection is a more focused interpretation of how this miraculous actually works.
Ouu I love the idea of the personalities of the holders matching with the concepts! If I could, I’d add that the Kwami could take any form, but they chose the cutest so humans aren’t scared of them upon sight.
The power system changes so much in the show, theyr always adding or ignoring their own powers rules smh
I think you can pitch in one or two more kwamis. My personal first pick is Intuition, where Sass can be well sassy, trying to make the temporary holder second guess their intuitive decision. Ladybug's choice would definitely still be Luka, and I can see a plot point where Sass is getting on Luka's intuition where it would compromise himself on knowing secrets, of whether he should keep it a secret or not. The power is still Second Chance. As for weapon, I don't know.
A lyre!
Reducing the amount of heroes truly is the best idea. I get what they wanted to do with the Chinese Zodiac but is just too much,you can even see they started to run out of ideas with how vague or similar some powers are. Personally I would round out the number,making it 8 Miraculous,but that's just me preferring round numbers (also maybe to keep it in a way each Miraculous has an opposite or a pair they belong in to keep the theme of balance).
And personally I would just remove "temporary holders" or have them as more of a,main hero is going to be absent for x or y reason so they need a replacement,but all heroes keep their kwamis and miraculous permantely unless dead,give up the title,or is found out (in a way that might put them in genuine danger),but your explanation is pretty good so it's fine. And the double wielder thing makes sense! Hurray! Making Adrien do stuff!!
Overall,pretty good rewrite of the power system! I like it!
They truly were running out of ideas. The goat's is just a weaker lucky charm. The roosters makes no sense and is OP. The dogs is basically just based on circumstance. The ball is so small and it needs to hit its target for the power to work.
I don't know if this is functionally better but THIS MAKES SO MUCH MORE SENSE than the hole the writers wrote themselves into at the start of the actual show! This lore is a zillion times better than the canon lore and seriously lacks the holes and questions. Love this, bro.
On Transmission and Emotion: It's implied early on that the way Hawkmoth uses the Butterfly miraculous is a corruption of it's intended use. This seems to have been forgotten by the modern writers, but it explains a lot of the differences, particularly around ladybug purifying them
According to the Shadybug and Claw Noir special, the Butterfly's intended purpose is to create heroes, not villains.
@@ethancox9737 This video was before that, and I was talking mostly about the recent movie at the time, which starts with "ooooh butterflies eeeevil" despite that being nonsense.
@@000Dragon50000 Oh, got it. Maybe that was a mistake, but I think we might see the Butterfly used for good in the next movie.
For why the Miraculous were made with the restrictions they were, I always headcannoned that the one who made them was power hungry and didn’t trust the Kwami’s to do as they’re told, so created them so that the user had all the power in their dynamic so they can get the most out of the Kwamis powers
Wow I have never seen someone make Zoe work
I absolutely love the “opposite Kwami depending on the personality of the holder” idea and I agree 1000% with the choices you made😭 this feels like fanfic but better
Yoooo u just fixed this entire series 😅
This isn’t how I’d do it (and I have done it when I wrote a miraculous fanfic in 2016), but I still really like it! A few things I’d tweak but I generally like it over all and it’s put a lot more thought in than Thomas ever did.
22:08 Lolll I love the little humour in hear. Your system building for this makes so much sense. I could see this being a version of miraculous intended for a slightly older audience, maybe in an anime version. The way you explain the miraculous' powers and how they work is just so exciting!!!
I think that the only time a concept would have character development is if there’s such a huge shift in humanity and how it’s perceived that it gains new personality traits based on the perception shift.
Or if the concept influences humanity, it would be that humanity as a whole notices changes in the instant that the concept is happening
The Eagle miraculous is also known as Liberation. Thus giving it the -ion suffix it needs
24:00 so instead of being Yokami (Yo-ka-me) It should be Yokame (Yo-ka-may) This is because Kami translates to God not turtle, Kame is turtle. Other then that i think the video is perfect
Idea: The Time Miraculous can act as Miraculous Ladybug changing the chosen object on what it will happen like a timelapse.
This is great! You went so much more into depth and gave more genuine thought into not only how the Miraculous dynamic would affect the show but logical history. The idea that Tikki is the one who's spearheading everything, because Creation wants to create, but Plagg is equally powerful but languid, although the one who has to clean up her messes.
I love the force of nature personalites you ascribe to the kwami.
Why don't you want them to be all cutesy?
I had an idea for the other miraculouses. Maybe at one point (when shadowmoth is indisposed) they can introduce the other miraculouses as secondary antagonists.
Maybe a rogue guardian thought the miraculouses were a genius idea and decided to create, forcibly binding other concepts to them, but doing so corrupted the kwamis within making them obsessed with their concept (for example, if plagg was one of the corrupted, he would just want to destroy everything and not stop at any point).
They would seek out holders and promise them powers in exchange for furthering their concept, they could work like mini bosses and once the "hero" would be beaten, the miraculous would be destroyed and the kwami freed.
Adrian’s power in the OG show was just Decay from MHA
But somehow nerfed most of the time it was on screen 😭
@@cassiyahsmith9940 True
Gasp, no Sass, no Fluff, no Longg.
Nah. Those a 3 of my fav Kwami
I get Fluff, but Longg and Sass are cool
@@passarovoador6662 sacrifices had to be made
Well technically they're not gone they just don't have miraculous.
Jesse did cook on this one
😮This is BRILLIANT! I LOVE your ideas! I can not WAIT to see your rewrite of Felix and Zoe.
A side question will Feligami still be a thing in your story? I just LOVE them so I am asking to know.
Also I understood that you imply that Felix will later on get Dussu,I am curious to see how in your story.👀
Oh and are Adrien and Felix still sentibeings? Oh I am really EXCITED to find out!🥳🥰🎆🎇💗
I'm not sure about nerfing the butterfly. I think it would be better if the butterfly was transformation, not just transmission. I think it actually was that originally.
I love this concept, especially your reasoning for the temporary holder concept, it isn't just cat noir and ladybug taking turns picking who to give it to, it's the fact that the difference choices will affect the situation in different ways with their different powers, so they have to judge the situation and decide which of the two character's power is better for a specific situation. I also love how the miraculous do different things when wielded by different people because yes people are different and interpret things differently and with the miraculous being concepts instead of magical being their powers are up to the user's interpretation which I love. This is getting a like from me, keep up the good work
I wanna hear a rewrite of Zoe
I like this rewrite!! Wish it was in the real show 😂
Would you actually want the kwamis to not be completely innocent?
That’s really interesting!!! I think that the bee miraculous would also really like mari too!! Her hesitation to ask adrein out. Tiki creates situations and the bee telling her to go for it.
now ım kinda curious as to how would the different interpretations of butterfly and peacock work, ı feel emotion can be similar to preservation gabriel uses it in tendom with nooro to influes others emotions and heithen them, but what if felix while being deceptive and cunning, still very emphatetic and emotional, he just doesnt act out on them, would have multiple variations of the same power that give him different abilities, he has the emotion of "Rage" which gives him immense physical strength and stamina and a more destructive weapon like a heamer or a morningstar, "Jubilation" which gives him increased speed and hightened senses and the weapon would be something fast but not very deadly like shuriken, "Serenity" which gives him the ability to restore any damage he endures, the "weapon" here would be more symbolic than anything ı think so a scepter maybe "Melancholy", which summons a physical manifestation of the weilders sadness, no weapon as this is a form that basically makes the weilder immobile. when he transforms the kwami just basically hightens his most present emotion to whichever corrosponding power it might seem very overpowered but considering the miraculous will be at gabriel for a majority of time and his interpretation of emotion being much weaker than felixes ı think its okay and felix when first starting to use it maybe stuck in one emotional form since it would have to take immense control for someone so emphetatic to be able to channel a single emotion so maybe the first couple times he uses he is always stuck in Melancholy mode and is unable to weild it properly but overtime learns to use the emotional spectrum better
This interpretation is really interesting!
This is almost perfect!! Two things, one, I’m not sure the cleansing akumas and fixing everything is perfect, but eh, it’s good enough. Two… ABSOLUTELY NOT WE ARE NOT PUTTING ZOE AS A HOLDER I WOULD RATHER DIE. so yeah, rewrite Julka please. Honestly I think you should have written the show, it would be way more interesting and less based on a romance that goes no where endlessly. Oh and I love that now, the kwamiis are just universe power so they could “opt in” on tikki’s experiment. As much as I’m sad to see the two time kawmiis go, it makes sense that those kwamiis would be too powerful to give to humans. I like the new characterization of the kwamiis. The only problem with “kwamiis go to the person who reflects thier powers or whatever is ADRIEN. I didn’t realize this until now but he’s character is NOTHING like plagg. Sure he has some amount of rebellion and destructive energy, but he’s really just a traumatized kid with perfectionist issues, self worth issues, etc. another disservice to Adrien as mari is completely compatible with tikki and Adrian is mostly based on chemistry with plagg, not compatible.
I LOVE your idea!
Omg i love this. I dont fully agree with a bit, but I really want to write a story with this power system
Edit: can I get permission to use this concept for a fanfic I'm planning to write?
I like it, although I'm not sure I understand how the heroes purify akumas. You said the akuma itself is not a product of both Butterfly and Peacock Miraculouses, right? The peacock feels emotions and teleports the akuma from the Butterfly miraculous around
I've actually nerfed both Miraculous. The peacock gives superpowers and creates sentibeings based on emotions. The butterfly lets you transmit those powers onto others. So akuma as they exist in this version are a product of combining both Miraculous.
Purifying the Akuma is a matter of removing the magic connecting the miraculous so Hawkmoth can't keep transmitting powers.
i was not expecting someone to show a w.i.t.c.h. clip
Well, I am reviewing the episodes.
Wow. All of that . . . makes a lot of damn sense
27:32 What the hell?! Chloe’s head is huge!
Trunks: I'm confused, is it Kami house or Kame house?
Krillin: No, see KamE house is the one with the turtle
Cool
7:19 well i like it is sweet candy 🍬🍭
Ngl I'd watch videos of you rewriting the whole show
I loved this video! Your input and rework of this is very good, I do have a question however. The powerups, the food ones, Do you think there could be a valid place for them in this new system. I personally viewed them as unnecessary, but the idea that kwami's eating food they enjoy makes them preform better?
Powerups that comes with powers seems unnecessary, but the idea that the book, while based on the miraculous contains magic spells or recipes is cool. Like i imagine with miraculouses, Past holders had done research, maybe developing potions or "powerups" that you can create small batches of to influence the miraculouses power within its restrictions.
But using then would require a familiarity and understanding of the miraculous you use. To have a strong mind, the only thing is what would the powers or upgrades be? Within reason of course, but as they improve, they would be able to not just be stronger with the miraculous (better use of their power/s) but would offer upgrades? We have the base for breathing underwater, or another weapon or tool. There wouldnt be to many upgrades but just a few that others have discovered.
the thing i do think is important is that the superheros suits respond to what they want or need in their suit. no way marinette would have this basic skinsuit when she could have so much better. where are her shoes huh?
Honestly, I'd probably forgo the idea of food powerups and make it so the suit responds to what's needed. Like if they transform in a cold environment or underwater, the suit adapts to it.
I also liked turning the kwami’s into more of a “Jarvas-like” character than being these all-knowing ‘do everything I say because I’m a god’ character
How come?
Yes I love it make it cannon!
I wish this was the show
i couldve sworn ive heard of that command mechanic somewhere else
Why did you have the Miraculous not be the only way to access the kwamis' powers? Master Fu seems to know some magic of his own, but he can't do anything flashy without a Miraculous.
Honestly this is a cool idea ❤
12.4.24
wait what is kagami's weapon as yokami is it a shield for both
Yes.
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I feel like it could be worn on the head kinda like a hat but can also be used as a shield and a weapon. Like captain America, instead it can fly back to you
@@d0ublewhammyKagami wearing the shield as a Sandogasa like Fu could look cool.
Also, would Adrien still be a sweet guy despite being into destructive stuff?
Yes.
@@JesseGolo Ok, that's fine.
The 'Freedom' miraculous is Liberation, I think.
Liberation is the name of the power, but it's considered the Miraculous of Freedom.
@@JesseGolo Really? So, it COULD actually be the 'suffix:dom' box?
@@SapphireRiptide Maybe.
@@JesseGolo That would be hilarious. Imagine there is a boredom miraculous. 😂
@@SapphireRiptide _Mehhhhh~_
Where is that shot of Hawk Moth as a statue underwater from?
Chat Blanc.
@@JesseGolo Yeah, I remembered that now.
This is so much better than the original show
En effet expérience ...hmm sûr humans and animals ok?médicament Anafam ok? Is very dangerous and étalon is true c'est vrai quoi que cours en disiez...
Tell me, why did you have the Miraculous be gone at the end?
It's part of the themes I'm aiming for in regards to humanity operating independently. If the characters want to keep being heroes, they'll use actual magic to connect to the kwami.
@@JesseGolo Why did you not want the Miraculous to be the only way for the kwami to connect with this world?
@@ethancox9737 If the forces of the universe are only accessible via kwami, it greatly limits what magic can be done without a miraculous, which limits the enemies that they could have besides Hawkmoth.
For example, if the rabbit miraculous is the only magical object that can allow you to time travel, that means that the only time traveling enemy she could face are the ones created by the butterfly. But in this system, now there can be time traveling wizards who can also connect to the concept of time through other ways, and thus, the user if the rabbit can fight them on even ground.
@@JesseGolo I know, but in canon it actually is implied that other types of magic exist, but the kwamis couldn't be seen or heard by humans before a powerful mage created the Miraculous. We know the pharaoh who was defeated by the ancient Ladybug wasn't using a Miraculous, for instance. Maybe it would be better to have the kwami and the actual cosmic forces not be entirely the same thing.
I've only watched season one and part of season 2 (and disliked most of it) so I dropped the show. Every piece of lore I have comes from rambling essays on UA-cam 😂😂😂😂 and with that said, this sounds like an exponentially better written and more interesting plot/lore than the show has ever attempted 😂😂😂😂😂
What didn't you like about season 2?
First
anyone else think that luca would be ladybugs choice and nino would be chat noir's?
Personally, I don't think Luca would match well with Protection. The way I see his character, he'd probably match better with either time or emotion.
I know, but one is not a miraculous in the rewrite and the other is Gabriels, I just think that, as Nino is Adrian's best friend he would be his choice.
I would make Kagami the fox for Adrien. Because like Adrien she is also controlled by her parent and can't be herself. So when she gets a power its to make everything their true self as she wishes the same for herself. She can even call herself Kitsune since those are trickster Japanese foxes
Then Nino is Adrien's choice for turtle. Luka doesn't work for preservation since he's a music writer and is about making new things rather than preserving anything. Don't know who to do for turtle. Maybe Mylene since she's about preserving nature and so on.
Why did you want the kwami to not be so good and pure?
Because concepts have no inherent morality.
@@JesseGolo Right, but the kwami aren't just embodiments of concepts, they're also magical mascots that were meant to be used for good. I think a better idea would be to introduce another set of spirits who represent the darker sides of the kwamis' concepts after Hawkmoth is beaten.
Do this with black clover
remove the zodiac miraculouses (miraculi?) and just keep the main 5. there’s literally no reason for the others to exist, only to make marinette’s classmates superheroes for one random episode and then never be seen again.