Dan Wells on Story Structure, part 1 of 5

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  • Опубліковано 16 жов 2024
  • Hey folks, thanks for watching. Before you comment . . . yes, I'm aware that the intro and outro are obnoxious, and that the music is annoying, etc. Unfortunately I don't have the raw footage anymore and can't fix it. Despite that, I hope you can enjoy the content. If not, well, best of luck in life.
    If, despite the flaws, you appreciate video, I would sure love it if you would support my writing. Search for S. James Nelson on Amazon. Thanks!
    Dan Wells at Life, the Universe, and Everything, February 13, 2010.
    Thanks for watching. If you like the stuff on my channel, I'd love it if you bought my book: The Demigod Proving, available as a Kindle eBook at Amazon.com: amzn.to/nXMRbO.
    Thanks!

КОМЕНТАРІ • 79

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  13 років тому +69

    I've gotten lots of comments about the music before and at the end of videos. Thank you for the feedback. Unfortunately I don't have the raw footage any more and can't fix the videos, but trust me that future videos won't have the same problem.

    • @TheWorld_2099
      @TheWorld_2099 3 роки тому +6

      Thanks for acknowledging it..!
      Have an excellent day

    • @Angels_Ashes
      @Angels_Ashes 3 роки тому

      I actually like the music. What is it called?

  • @proudmom514
    @proudmom514 12 років тому +26

    Seriously? I am just glad that Dan is taking the time to share this information with us. Most writers would have tried to market this kind of literary advice. Fortunately, here we are on youtube watching it for free.

  • @itsatraplol
    @itsatraplol 2 місяці тому +3

    Whoa, never thought I'd see Matt Colville's name up on the screen when I'm watching one of my favorite authors teach me about 7 point plot structure! Worlds collide!

  • @SpoonsForks
    @SpoonsForks 8 років тому +177

    WHY THE MUSIC

    • @kell_checks_in
      @kell_checks_in 4 місяці тому

      Agreed, but it does eventually fade out. I have sensory processing disorders and wicked sensitive hearing (short version: my central nervous system is busted) and have to forego MANY videos with blocking music through the entirety of the video. (WHY do people do this?) At least for these, it stops so we can focus on what's being said.

  • @protercool8474
    @protercool8474 2 роки тому +12

    "Brandon Sanderson, he's a fantasy writer you may have heard of."
    I'm pretty sure this is exactly how Dan would say that today, only he'd be grinning and the crowd laughing.

  • @hayngrl101
    @hayngrl101 12 років тому +8

    Watching this again, 2 years after it was recorded, and a month after seeing it live at LTUE 2012. It's that good, and motivating. Thanks Dan.

  • @kell_checks_in
    @kell_checks_in 4 місяці тому +1

    This playlist is a precious treasure. Thanks so much!

  • @Leto85
    @Leto85 6 років тому +30

    Intro's over at 2:35.
    From there on, I see similarities with K.M. Weiland's approach, so I'm curious to see where the two methods will deviate.
    Good video! I'll definitely watch the rest of the series.

    • @ryanratchford2530
      @ryanratchford2530 5 років тому +1

      Leto85 Thankyou very useful every time I rewatch thid

  • @cameronfairbairn
    @cameronfairbairn 8 років тому +92

    This is really great content but that music being jackhammered over the top of the sound is so annoying I want to headbutt the wall.

    • @jarhar007
      @jarhar007 7 років тому +4

      Yes the music lasts too long. I still get all the information that I need from the videos, and it's not quite that annoying to me. I suspect it's not nearly as annoying to you as you would have us all believe.
      It's a free video on UA-cam. Thank you to the person who posted!

    • @fergal2424
      @fergal2424 5 років тому

      Tis only a few seconds at the beginning and end like

  • @crystinapierce6833
    @crystinapierce6833 2 роки тому +5

    Been struggling understanding how to outline. He said “your resolution is not the end, it’s the climax” and it finally makes sense.

  • @jarhar007
    @jarhar007 7 років тому +4

    Great information. I've watched these videos numerous times, because it always helps to remind myself of the awesome way that Dan breaks down story structure.

  • @dexteralex3118
    @dexteralex3118 3 роки тому +2

    Watching this in 2021, already an established writer, but there is something about this that makes me want to learn from scratch again. Such good content. ❤️

  • @carriewrites9477
    @carriewrites9477 10 років тому +5

    This is wonderfully useful. I can't wait to apply these three ideas to my story idea. Thank you for your wisdom.

  • @townsendstephen
    @townsendstephen 8 років тому +5

    I loved this. Much needed. I have done most of my writing by gut feel and needed this structure. Better books from me in the future.

  • @LoesungFeuer5
    @LoesungFeuer5 8 років тому +8

    It took me a whole Year and hundreds hours of writing to understand this fully.

  • @arthurlandon8756
    @arthurlandon8756 8 років тому +10

    This is good. I'm a big writing excuses fan... but I would say that John Truby's 7 steps are a little more precise. He also has a 22 step structure which can follow the 7, but it's pretty full on!

  • @anthemofink
    @anthemofink 2 роки тому +3

    Holy crap. Never expected to see DM Matt Colville listed in there! 2:51 The dude's a river to his people.

    • @abomidog
      @abomidog Рік тому +2

      I friggin shouted when I saw his name there! Forgot he was a part of that book. How awesome is it these writers can connect (even indirectly)! The trust I have in Matt Colville gives me even more motivation for trying out this story structure 😊

  • @FitBitsPT
    @FitBitsPT 12 років тому +2

    literally just finished your first book; this was then followed by a google search which lead me to the above video, 1 down 4 to go.

  • @alotofbaddecisions2046
    @alotofbaddecisions2046 4 роки тому +2

    2:49 nice surprise to see Matt Colville here

  • @PuppyPetshopsTV
    @PuppyPetshopsTV 9 років тому +3

    VERY insightful! I can see how a lot of these points can be applied to my own book, and how doing so during my revision process could drastically improve my book! Going straight to part 2! >:D

  • @sspsllc
    @sspsllc 12 років тому +8

    Can we lose the music background? Don't need it.

  • @helium73
    @helium73 6 років тому +1

    Discovery vs Outline writers. I was watching one video where they forced discovery writers to use outlines and outline writers to use the discovery method in order to improve their writing. I guess I've always been a discovery writer because I'd use notebooks and if I didn't just start I didn't fill the whole notebook up.

  • @asaskald
    @asaskald 7 років тому +1

    Very informative and insightful. Thanks! I'll check out that recommended book in the description.

  • @batdoe
    @batdoe 13 років тому

    I like all 5 parts of this talk. Will be watching the matrix soon.

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  12 років тому +1

    Glad you're liking the video and enjoyed the book.

  • @captainnolan5062
    @captainnolan5062 3 роки тому

    Thank you for posting this, the content is very helpful.

  • @noahway13
    @noahway13 11 років тому +1

    Great personality and info. Screw the negative people.

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  12 років тому

    Thanks so much; I appreciate it! And thanks for watching the channel!

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  12 років тому +2

    Unfortunately we can't. I no longer have the original video, and can't edit the music out.

  • @CPollaers
    @CPollaers 4 роки тому +1

    It would be great if this was in 7 parts

  • @abcadef6171
    @abcadef6171 7 років тому +8

    My notes on this, for those that can't deal with the intro/outro: pastebin.com/KaXrUTkN

    • @sry8895
      @sry8895 7 років тому +1

      Very helpful Abca Def, thank you! :)

    • @egyvalaki2774
      @egyvalaki2774 7 років тому +1

      That's great! Thank you!

    • @TheSangson
      @TheSangson 6 років тому

      You fucking win the internet, that's great. Thanks for doing this!

  • @ItsyBitsyChelly
    @ItsyBitsyChelly 13 років тому +1

    Fabulous!! Thanks so much for this !

  • @kennielaur8015
    @kennielaur8015 8 років тому +1

    Is there a transcript for this available?

  • @jessicagilbert4197
    @jessicagilbert4197 10 років тому

    Love these videos

  • @faith5584
    @faith5584 10 років тому +1

    This was great very helpful.

  • @monsterfurby
    @monsterfurby 11 місяців тому

    Apart from the fact that maybe one should actually say factually true things about the plot of the examples one is using, this is definitely good advice.

  • @stadsridders
    @stadsridders 12 років тому

    Dear James, do you have your slides online?
    Great talk by the way :-)

  • @SherylMotivatorTate
    @SherylMotivatorTate 11 років тому

    found this to be both helpful and interesting thank you

  • @SpiritedHeart94
    @SpiritedHeart94 Рік тому +1

    Is it just me, or are most horror writers actually really funny in real life?

  • @dirkvoltaar
    @dirkvoltaar 2 роки тому

    Dude is interesting and all, but I wish he’d shut up so I can hear the music.
    09:18 - Music comes back in. Hell yeah.

  • @honeyluv32690
    @honeyluv32690 3 роки тому

    awesome thank you.

  • @SamuelDaram
    @SamuelDaram 13 років тому +1

    Talk starts at 0:30

  • @InfernoBlazeKiller
    @InfernoBlazeKiller 11 років тому +1

    It's philophers stone!

  • @javencummins1426
    @javencummins1426 2 роки тому

    Important things to go back on.
    7:55

  • @tangobayus
    @tangobayus 12 років тому +1

    great content. ending music comes too soon and too loud

  • @2185wisai
    @2185wisai 7 місяців тому +1

    young dan wells 🥵

  • @logeyewill
    @logeyewill 11 років тому

    I bought it?

  • @JohnKennedy-tm9wl
    @JohnKennedy-tm9wl Місяць тому

    Nice intro

  • @zhorian1071
    @zhorian1071 5 років тому

    Surprisingly how I imagined him to look

  • @Bondanalloy
    @Bondanalloy 11 років тому

    Does he mean the Stark Trek TNG RPG Narrator's Toolkit?

  • @kawa69
    @kawa69 2 роки тому

    It's so weird because this guy shares the exact same name as me, and I'm also an aspiring writer

    • @theonlysinoda
      @theonlysinoda Рік тому

      Cruel world brother, infinite timelines and in this one he's the real and you're the copy

  • @danwells1958
    @danwells1958 11 років тому +1

    Gabe, as I say in the video, this system is not mine; I did not make it up, and therefore no one can steal it from me. It's a common technique which I assume Cathy is also drawing on for her books. I know you're trying to help, and I appreciate that, but angry attacks and crass name-calling are not the way I want to be represented online. Your language is out of line, and I encourage you to apologize to Cathy. Note: I do not use gmail, so this is a new account I set up to respond here.

  • @cheunky
    @cheunky 7 місяців тому

    Got a gta loading screen for a writing lecture

  • @HezekiahKidron
    @HezekiahKidron  12 років тому

    I'm not sure. I'll have to take a look. I'll let you know probably in a day or two.

  • @logeyewill
    @logeyewill 11 років тому

    RELAX KATHY I OWN YOUR BOOK. IT WAS WELL SAID ALSO.

  • @danbuffington75
    @danbuffington75 3 роки тому +1

    2:54 The secret sauce...

  • @doro626
    @doro626 12 років тому

    4 people must like the Star Wars role playing rules better.

  • @logeyewill
    @logeyewill 11 років тому

    YEAH, GOOD GUY TODAY BUT WHAT'S IS ARC

  • @hannahscottp4389
    @hannahscottp4389 6 років тому

    WHY THE MUSIC OVER THE SOUND?!

  • @thinkthoughtsforhours6052
    @thinkthoughtsforhours6052 Рік тому

    You have to pay the years
    Learn and focus for years
    Fail and fine tune your craft for years
    Then you will have unlimited income and unlimited freedom and lifelong skill
    7/13/23

  • @jmellenen2608
    @jmellenen2608 7 років тому

    A point of order on your production. Your music, if that is what you call it, is supposed to be completely faded down by the time you start speaking!

  • @CathyYardleyRockYourWriting
    @CathyYardleyRockYourWriting 11 років тому +3

    I'm Cathy Yardley, author of ROCK YOUR PLOT. Lots of teachers tackle this plot structure, including Jack Bickham, Robert McKee, Deb Dixon, Larry Brooks, Syd Field, Mary Buckham, etc. None of us "created" the plot point system. We just have different techniques for getting to those points. I have been in contact with Mr. Wells, and he's aware of the misunderstanding. So if you could just stop posting that I'm a "lying, thieving bitch"... that'd be great.