Sarah Connor? Is this before or after Terminator? A LT might be an aide, or maybe even advisor, but NEVER the second in command to an Admiral. Writer needs to do research to try to sound intelligent.
The explosion of the alien energy core and flagship sent shock waves through what? Through the vacuum of space? Facepalm and eye roll, you earned it, you authorbot
Can we also talk about how everyone wants to attack through the plane of the bodies orbiting Sol? Why not warp/ftl/whatever to a space above the Earth and travel in from there? There is no need to fight your way through fleets hidden in rocks or gas giants.
Well, hiding in the asteroid field .... the planetary system is basically a disk and even the asteroids are not as dense as the rings of Jupiter; so hiding the fleet in the asteroids is excellent idea, the enemy won't pass it because the fleet of the galactic council will come from above or below the plane of the disk.
@@richardbale3278 Ever noticed that they seems to be.A lot of special forces who can take down.A vast Armada of Hi-Tech battle cruzers.Really special forces can do some damage.But not enough to stop a Armada.
this is the 3rd channel to screw up a story you mention the lt conducting a stralth opp to take out the command ship in the next line that same lt is getting ready for battle oh yeah after the battle near the asteroid field had already started the enemy is on the way get your shit together or dont tell the stories
The narrator voice might be good for reading poetry but not Galactic War, sorry. It's kind of like using a drill sergeant voice to read children's books. Doesn't quite cut it.
I'm not sure why I watch AI narrated crap. Decent stories are ruined with horrible grammar, misunderstanding of what it is "reading", and a monotone and emotionless narration that is unnatural which destroys the flow and suspense of the story.
These AI generated stories are so funny when considered as satirical versions of classic Sci-Fi stories. The voice should be a stoner's stupid uncaring drawl and the drama treated as over-the-top world-ending exaggeration.
can we have one story without AI Narrator i mean its really annoying to here two different time the same just say in another way give it a try i mean i here already so much but still fix your way of telling the story and it would be great even for some Books but here all i can say medium story bad narration sorry but honestly if you wish we suscrib you really need more then AI Narrator and 2-3 way of telling the same event
Sarah Connor? Is this before or after Terminator?
A LT might be an aide, or maybe even advisor, but NEVER the second in command to an Admiral.
Writer needs to do research to try to sound intelligent.
A Lieutenant would never be Second in Command to an Admiral. Maybe his ADC but never 2IC. 😂😂😂
Add ignorance to stupid and you get a 2nd Lieutenant all too often.
Another story has a Sargent as second in command.
And if everyone in between the commander and the 2nd LT. were injured. who would be the 2nd in command?
One statement " This Is Sparta !!"
The explosion of the alien energy core and flagship sent shock waves through what? Through the vacuum of space?
Facepalm and eye roll, you earned it, you authorbot
Si fy dude it is sify it is a story give it a break
Oh crap…the asteroid field again.
The star wars asteroid field is an orbiting mess that doesn’t exist.
They are miles apart and small.
Yeah these stories use that a lot it's funny😂
Can we also talk about how everyone wants to attack through the plane of the bodies orbiting Sol? Why not warp/ftl/whatever to a space above the Earth and travel in from there? There is no need to fight your way through fleets hidden in rocks or gas giants.
Its always the end of humanity.
Well, hiding in the asteroid field .... the planetary system is basically a disk and even the asteroids are not as dense as the rings of Jupiter; so hiding the fleet in the asteroids is excellent idea, the enemy won't pass it because the fleet of the galactic council will come from above or below the plane of the disk.
Prime minister david harpers.....Canadian in me "you mean Steven Harper dont you?"
Can we have just one story without the " Far from over " ? I think it was said like four times in this story.
Well, we only got two "bristling with weaponry " out of this one.
@@richardbale3278 Ever noticed that they seems to be.A lot of special forces who can take down.A vast Armada of Hi-Tech battle cruzers.Really special forces can do some damage.But not enough to stop a Armada.
this is the 3rd channel to screw up a story you mention the lt conducting a stralth opp to take out the command ship in the next line that same lt is getting ready for battle oh yeah after the battle near the asteroid field had already started the enemy is on the way get your shit together or dont tell the stories
The narrator voice might be good for reading poetry but not Galactic War, sorry. It's kind of like using a drill sergeant voice to read children's books. Doesn't quite cut it.
It's AI. No emotion and completely ill suited to read stories of any kind
Why don’t you use the 18 barrel plasma cannon that you show in the picture to blow their fleet out of space?
Really? Sarah Connor? Is a terminator going to help the humans also..
I need you space boots and your laser rifle.
Is it me or didn’t Sarah Connor die sometime ago 🤔
Earth is the slave masters.
I'm not sure why I watch AI narrated crap. Decent stories are ruined with horrible grammar, misunderstanding of what it is "reading", and a monotone and emotionless narration that is unnatural which destroys the flow and suspense of the story.
Please the alien ships did nothing but wait for their flag ship to fall and then it said they were leaderless. They were incapable the wntire time.
The I.A. Isn't well trained in military structure and ranks. A lowest junior officer as second in command of a flag officer? 🤔
Fuck me how many times is this story going to repeat itself. What shit show of a story.
Weak narration. So ho-hum.
These AI generated stories are terrible....a Lieutenant second in command to an admiral? really? Just stop.
Direct Hit😂
I think I am the one who should stop.Stop listen to this mess that is.
Calm down Captain Pedantic
These AI generated stories are so funny when considered as satirical versions of classic Sci-Fi stories. The voice should be a stoner's stupid uncaring drawl and the drama treated as over-the-top world-ending exaggeration.
Please do better
poor story-line. just another copy of several older ones here
can we have one story without AI Narrator i mean its really annoying to here two different time the same just say in another way give it a try i mean i here already so much but still fix your way of telling the story and it would be great even for some Books but here all i can say medium story bad narration sorry but honestly if you wish we suscrib you really need more then AI Narrator and 2-3 way of telling the same event