Never Give Humans Chance To Go To War! I HFY I Sci Fi Story

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  • Опубліковано 18 жов 2024
  • Original Story, Written and owned by me

КОМЕНТАРІ • 7

  • @seankane8628
    @seankane8628 День тому

    "Humans didn't study war no more, because they had become so frighteningly Good at it. "

  • @GamingSpoiler
    @GamingSpoiler День тому

    While the story isn't bad, it isn't good either, it lacks many core elements to a story:
    1- No twist, the story is just "happening"
    2- No dates or Locations, yes, they are not that important, but it gives unique element of authenticity to a story.
    3- "Humans=good / Aliens=bad" has become an overused plot
    4- No conflict, humans just destroy and overwhelm everyone and outsmart everyone, like playing a game on "Easy mode"
    A story needs to be exciting, interesting, full of events and unexpected twists.

  • @missystiffler5145
    @missystiffler5145 2 дні тому +8

    The same (SAME) old story.....over and over and over.

    • @Always4ward
      @Always4ward 2 дні тому +2

      Time to say goodbye to this channel

    • @enclaveofficerz3245
      @enclaveofficerz3245 2 дні тому +1

      yep

    • @Alpha_Digamma
      @Alpha_Digamma День тому +1

      These channels are but a training ground for AI, both in writing and voice. So us listening and enjoying the content isn't really a metric these channels care about.