I stopped listening upon him being so confused at an empty station and NOT LOOKING AT HIS WATCH...He is in North Korea and a resident says NOT TO TAKE A TRAIN...a smart person would bea little more careful and I dont listen to stories with dumb protagonists...anyone can write a horror clip with a dumb protagonist..the good stories are the ones where the protagonist is actually smart and still finds themselves in dispair...Not this clown..he is not too smart so I am out of here....I have listeed to stories of yours many hours long because they were great..this one not even worth the half hour..
Stupid people are common in real life, God knows I'm one, so why not in stories? Art imitates life, after all. I just didn't like how he seemed to soft pedal how bad NK is. Look at poor old Otto.
Yup pretty much the same with me, no matter what bullshit went on through the day I know I have a wealth of his videos coming back home to knock out to
Wow, I’m here EARLY!!! I just finished “I’m a Cast Member In Your Favorite TV Show And I’m Being Held Hostage”. That was such an AMAZING story that the Doc breathed life into! I can’t wait for the rest of the story! The author said she has written (or is almost done writing) the ending. That was in December 2020 so I hope she is finished and the Doc is ready to narrate it, as soon as he possibly can! Love from Texas ♥️🤠🌴
It definitely gave a sense of place, and gave me the feeling that the author either had been there, or was relaying a story from someone who had. The only thing missing, in my opinion, were the textures, how did the floor of the train platform look, or feel under your feet, that kind of thing. But I was engaged throughout, especially since this is about such a closed off and mysterious place. I imagine there are a multitude of natural wonders in North Korea that the rest of the world has never heard of, as it has mountains and vast wilderness areas.
Thanks! As a novice writer I was worried about going overboard on the exposition. There was quite a lot of description of the Metro itself, so I didn't want to go into too much detail, especially as I have another Metro-based episode planned.
Asian mythology and beliefs are so mesmerizing and mysterious.... Love to hear stories about their culture, beliefs and mannerisms.... always unique each time.... But we need more suspense and feelings of impending doom.... Lol... As always love to hear your beautiful voice 💕💕💕
That was an excellent story you authored and read tonight. I also like your pen name. Yes, I would Enjoy an ongoing series. Have a magnificent Monday @Dr. Creepen ❤
Great story brother and def would like to hear more of this series hands down!!!! Awesome narration as always and awesome story again thanks man and hope you have a wonderful day brother!!!
Great story! Please write/read more! I guess because North Korea is so mysterious there's opportunity there to leverage the potential creep factor. Loved it!
Was an interesting story using information not normally known in this part of the world. Great urban myth and fairly well written and narrated! Keep it up, I would love to hear more from this.
Hey Dr Creepen Great job. I enjoyed it. Please include the everday things that are so different between South and North Korea and USA/Canada/England. How their government has cameras everywhere on streets etc. Also like spy stories. Keep it up. Please write and share more
Hey Doc. Thanks for the shorter one of your stories. I have always been, and still am, a big fan of your channel. Unfortunately however I don’t always have the time to be able to sit down and enjoy some of your longer ones. It’s nice to know that you occasionally do put out a more manageable video.
That was a really enjoyable story, keep up the good work :). I really like your approach of making story believable. It helps build nice atmosphere, I find stories that bash reader (or listener) with paranormal (especially without a proper build up) rather anticlimactic.
That was a dope ass story Doc!!! I enjoyed the premise, North Korea is fascinating to me. And sad. But its certainly interesting. I know a great channel i watch of a NK escapee, shes incredible
Oh no, Doc wow a great story that hopefully has more incoming. Whatever will i do. I guess I'll fight my way thru a great story that's well written. What a hard knock life i got going atm 😅
I am always fascinated by anything DPRK and this felt like a genuine eastern verbal folklore tale. Since we don't get to know enough about north korea, it makes a great target for storytelling. Great job, Dr Creepen!
By the time I finished listening to this one last night it was too late and I was too tired to say anything. Interesting story!! I get the impression that you've done a huge amount of research, as it seemed to me to have been written by someone who was very familiar with North Korea and has spent a great deal of time there. Nicely done!! Looking forward to hearing more of your work! :D
I like a lot of spy stuff. I hope it's more like that, and not how they're constantly balancing on the fence of genocide. Edit: I actually really liked it Doc! I'd like to hear more for sure.
I like it. The story moved along well, the tone was good, I was caught up in the story, and I didn't see any plot holes, and I always notice plot holes because they're one of my pet peeves. I don't know much about North Korea. I thought it was perhaps a bit ambitious to write about a foreign country as if one lived there, but since I don't know anything about it I can't really speak to that. I definitely enjoyed and it and would be happy to hear more.
I am late replying so I hope you see this, Doc. This was completely AMAZING!! I know how much in detail you studied this and it shows. A very interesting look into North Korea. We must have more, Please! 🐦♥️💀
I appreciate that you did some research on the culture before writing the story. I would like to hear more about this character, his adventures, and things experienced in North Korea. Tbh I may be wrong but I thought you said on a q&a years ago you were a teacher and i thought this might be your experience in NK. Not meeting a ghost but the culture mentioned in to story. I would like more stories and maybe more background on the main character in them. :)
I think you hit the nail on the head. This feels like something that could happen. Picking a setting like North Korea primes the audience to expect weirdness, making it easier to suspend disbelief.
I enjoyed it. Keep the story going! I'm looking forward to hearing about the tombs. Side note: Have you ever been to Korea (either side)? Or do you have any relatives? It's an interesting locale to choose for a story if you don't have any ties to it.
Well done Dr.! Definitely strange, I thought for sure she had taken him into another reality. But the fact of it being a simple answer in saving them, that’s a common theme in some Japanese stories. That entitles will approach you, ask you a question, and depending on your answer, decides whether you live, die, or are just mutilated. Excellent job! 👍
I stopped listening upon him being so confused at an empty station and NOT LOOKING AT HIS WATCH...He is in North Korea and a resident says NOT TO TAKE A TRAIN...a smart person would bea little more careful and I dont listen to stories with dumb protagonists...anyone can write a horror clip with a dumb protagonist..the good stories are the ones where the protagonist is actually smart and still finds themselves in dispair...Not this clown..he is not too smart so I am out of here....I have listeed to stories of yours many hours long because they were great..this one not even worth the half hour..
Stupid people are common in real life, God knows I'm one, so why not in stories? Art imitates life, after all.
I just didn't like how he seemed to soft pedal how bad NK is. Look at poor old Otto.
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Keep writing these. I Really enjoyed it. North Korea is an interesting setting that's not used much so it is really interesting
Thank you! Will do!
U should write and read ur own stories more often. Ur a great writer
I haven’t even listened yet, but after reading hundreds of others works, he’d absolutely develop some talent!
Wow, I’m here EARLY!!! I just finished “I’m a Cast Member In Your Favorite TV Show And I’m Being Held Hostage”. That was such an AMAZING story that the Doc breathed life into! I can’t wait for the rest of the story! The author said she has written (or is almost done writing) the ending. That was in December 2020 so I hope she is finished and the Doc is ready to narrate it, as soon as he possibly can!
Love from Texas ♥️🤠🌴
It definitely gave a sense of place, and gave me the feeling that the author either had been there, or was relaying a story from someone who had. The only thing missing, in my opinion, were the textures, how did the floor of the train platform look, or feel under your feet, that kind of thing. But I was engaged throughout, especially since this is about such a closed off and mysterious place. I imagine there are a multitude of natural wonders in North Korea that the rest of the world has never heard of, as it has mountains and vast wilderness areas.
Thanks! As a novice writer I was worried about going overboard on the exposition. There was quite a lot of description of the Metro itself, so I didn't want to go into too much detail, especially as I have another Metro-based episode planned.
As soon as I heard you wrote it, just instantly smashed the like button haven't even heard it but I already know it's going to be great.
Wow, thank you!
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Beautifully Done. Doc.
More please! Thanks for this treat Doc!
Well done good Doctor! Quite well written and well worth pursuing. I enjoyed it a lot! Would love to hear more. Thank you very much!!
Doc, the story was awesome. I was totally immersed & would definitely like to hear more. Thank you & God bless 🙏
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More to come!
@@DrCreepen I am so glad to hear that!
Asian mythology and beliefs are so mesmerizing and mysterious.... Love to hear stories about their culture, beliefs and mannerisms.... always unique each time.... But we need more suspense and feelings of impending doom.... Lol... As always love to hear your beautiful voice 💕💕💕
Cool, this sounds really interesting!
...Yes please, I would like very much to hear more of your adventures, well done!
These are turning out great. Can't wait to hear more of them. Have a wonderful night. Loves to you and yours 😘💕😌
Thank you so much!
I loved that! More please!
Definitely keep writing and continue the story . I'd like to hear more! One my favorite readers!!!! One of the top best!!!!
Loved your story I'm from Vancouver myself East Hastings is a wild ride for sure keep up the good work
Thank you! Will do!
I liked this one Doc. Great writing, and as usual, awesome narration. 👌
Thanks for listening
First I would like to thank you for your hard work. I really enjoy your narrations. I am also loving your writing. Great job! 💕
Extremely well written and narrated brother! Keep em coming, I hope there are more in this series
That was an excellent story you authored and read tonight. I also like your pen name. Yes, I would Enjoy an ongoing series. Have a magnificent Monday @Dr. Creepen ❤
This was very well researched and enjoyable. Thank you!
Glad you enjoyed it!
loved the story! i really hope to hear more all the extra detail put into it from your research made it super enjoyable to listen to
Yeah doc keep it coming! I love the fresh concept, can't wait for a continuation!!
This was fantastic! I look forward to more ♥
More to come!
I would love to hear more from this one it was awesome! Thank you oh and it helps with my shopping experience.
You are a legend in the creepypasta world 💯. Congrats👍
Thanks! 😃
Great story brother and def would like to hear more of this series hands down!!!! Awesome narration as always and awesome story again thanks man and hope you have a wonderful day brother!!!
More to come!
Yes so glad your early Dr. Much appreciated and needed
I really enjoyed folklore, myths and urban legend from other countries. But a story written by you is truly a treat, that was awesome thank you 😊.
Many thanks!
Great story! Please write/read more! I guess because North Korea is so mysterious there's opportunity there to leverage the potential creep factor. Loved it!
I look forward to hearing more of these as a series. I love when you write us stories, besides. 💜🖤
Omg this was actually really good, hope you continue!
What would I do without your stories. Thanks Doc.💕
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Loved it!
Very atmospheric!
Love it!! Great story, man! Keep on writing!
Was an interesting story using information not normally known in this part of the world. Great urban myth and fairly well written and narrated! Keep it up, I would love to hear more from this.
I felt you narrated much better with this story also . Much better connection with story . I look forward to hearing more
Congrats I think you achieved all you wished for! It was really enjoyable ♥️♥️♥️
This was awesome!!!! Please keep writing!!!!
Downtown East side Vancouver is a horror story all by itself!!
Never hear anybody refinance that before...
i really enjoyed it doc thanks
Glad to hear it!
Today a little bit later, i was so busy but now as always good late morning 🤣dear Doc i would never miss your narration 🙋♀️❤
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Loved this story-as I do ALL “train” stories! MAKE THIS A SERIES & KEEP IT GOING!!!
This was excellent. Simple and direct in plot, with bags of tension and detail. Well done.
Hey Dr Creepen
Great job. I enjoyed it. Please include the everday things that are so different between South and North Korea and USA/Canada/England. How their government has cameras everywhere on streets etc. Also like spy stories. Keep it up. Please write and share more
Thanks for the idea! The protagonist is Canadian for a reason... he wouldn't have gotten into the country so easily as a US citizen.
@@DrCreepen yes I see. I figured as much. Very clever!💯😄😷💪🏽💋💜❤👍🏻
Hey Doc. Thanks for the shorter one of your stories. I have always been, and still am, a big fan of your channel. Unfortunately however I don’t always have the time to be able to sit down and enjoy some of your longer ones. It’s nice to know that you occasionally do put out a more manageable video.
I love the stories you've been writing Dr.Creepn. you can even make the DPRK sound, ... civil.
You make my day Doc. Every day😊
Great story and narration Dr. You are on to something. There are not very many North Korea stories. 😊
This was a great listen. The writing was engaging while still being in the realm of the believable and I certainly hope you do more!
Very good story! Keep them coming!
Thanks! Will do!
This was great can’t wait for the next one ☝🏽 👀👀 your stories are better than most stories gives it a new feel 👩🏽🎨
Do continue!
This was truly captivating, beautifully written Dr!!
Thank you for another amazing video 💖 I especially love listening to stories you write!
Early today, Dear Doctor. Another one of yours? Looking forward to it. 😊💜💙💚💛❤
Loved it!! Excellent story, excellent narration, as usual!! Thanks so much for sharing you're hard work ; )
Goal achieved...very plausible😱😱😱
That was a really enjoyable story, keep up the good work :). I really like your approach of making story believable. It helps build nice atmosphere, I find stories that bash reader (or listener) with paranormal (especially without a proper build up) rather anticlimactic.
This will maka a great series!👍
I really enjoyed the story and look forward to more.
Wow this was so good! Hope you get to write more!
relaxing man i missed that intro
That was a dope ass story Doc!!! I enjoyed the premise, North Korea is fascinating to me. And sad. But its certainly interesting. I know a great channel i watch of a NK escapee, shes incredible
This reading is insanely good.
My favorite part of Sunday
Amazing please continue my dear friend
Thank you, I will
Oh no, Doc wow a great story that hopefully has more incoming. Whatever will i do. I guess I'll fight my way thru a great story that's well written. What a hard knock life i got going atm 😅
I am always fascinated by anything DPRK and this felt like a genuine eastern verbal folklore tale. Since we don't get to know enough about north korea, it makes a great target for storytelling. Great job, Dr Creepen!
Yes! Continue please!!
Absolutely loved the story, and would definitely like more .
yes. more please.
This is quite well-written; loved the story!
By the time I finished listening to this one last night it was too late and I was too tired to say anything. Interesting story!! I get the impression that you've done a huge amount of research, as it seemed to me to have been written by someone who was very familiar with North Korea and has spent a great deal of time there. Nicely done!! Looking forward to hearing more of your work! :D
Loved every minute and I felt like I was somewhere I've never been before epic and would love to hear more ☺️
A North Korea series sounds great! This story was relaxing and tense all in one. Loved it.
Good potential for a series. Maybe the narrator sneaks into a gathering of political elites doing a ritual.
I like a lot of spy stuff. I hope it's more like that, and not how they're constantly balancing on the fence of genocide. Edit: I actually really liked it Doc! I'd like to hear more for sure.
I like it. The story moved along well, the tone was good, I was caught up in the story, and I didn't see any plot holes, and I always notice plot holes because they're one of my pet peeves. I don't know much about North Korea. I thought it was perhaps a bit ambitious to write about a foreign country as if one lived there, but since I don't know anything about it I can't really speak to that. I definitely enjoyed and it and would be happy to hear more.
Yes please, continue to invest time in this series, it is AWESOME!! :-)
Great story Dr
Thank you 🙂
Wonderful
Great story good sir!! Can't for the series to continue
Really cool. Thanks
Glad you liked it!
Great job doc! You must do the follow ups!
That's the plan!
Absolutely beautiful!
Thank you! Cheers!
@@DrCreepen No, I thank you for taking your time to do this. It truly helps me through a workday☺️🖤
I am late replying so I hope you see this, Doc. This was completely AMAZING!! I know how much in detail you studied this and it shows. A very interesting look into North Korea. We must have more, Please!
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That was amazing! So well done historical fiction or is it historical horror.? Either way, bravo
I appreciate that you did some research on the culture before writing the story. I would like to hear more about this character, his adventures, and things experienced in North Korea. Tbh I may be wrong but I thought you said on a q&a years ago you were a teacher and i thought this might be your experience in NK. Not meeting a ghost but the culture mentioned in to story. I would like more stories and maybe more background on the main character in them. :)
I think you hit the nail on the head. This feels like something that could happen. Picking a setting like North Korea primes the audience to expect weirdness, making it easier to suspend disbelief.
Yes, more please! I loved that story!
I enjoyed it. Keep the story going! I'm looking forward to hearing about the tombs.
Side note:
Have you ever been to Korea (either side)? Or do you have any relatives? It's an interesting locale to choose for a story if you don't have any ties to it.
I enjoyed this one. Please continue the story
Well done Dr.! Definitely strange, I thought for sure she had taken him into another reality. But the fact of it being a simple answer in saving them, that’s a common theme in some Japanese stories. That entitles will approach you, ask you a question, and depending on your answer, decides whether you live, die, or are just mutilated. Excellent job! 👍
At least you will Never see Slenderman in the Woods of North Korea.
Yes more please
Yes i wanna hear more i really liked it alot
Yesssssss!!!! Thank you!!!
You're welcome!!
Wow, doctor you did an outstanding job!
Hiya doc its Jenny and the cats and we were just about to go to bed but we saw your post so we grabbed our favourite drinks ready to listen 😺😺😺
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