Oh hell yeah! Here we go boys! Chunin exam finals and the start of the unraveling! Let’s get it! Hope you enjoy the twists and turns I threw in. Let me know what you think in the comments!
@@bradleykucera6371I honestly have to agree, in real life that is what adds the nail to the coffin for any relationship, I believe it’s essential for any relationship heavy story to add lemons
Yeah, I added one big lemon scene into the story. My next story has a bunch of them. Look forward to “What if Naruto was Written by Jiraiya the Gallant”
Great story! The lemons aren't necessary for the stories to be fleshed out (pun intended)...They can be a good bonus, but I enjoy the story itself more.
@@miikkamerikallio5348 yeah, I couldn’t believe how much flack on caught on FFN for changing AI’s personality. That was always one of the best parts about Naruto. He had the power to reach in and inspire people to change. I am glad you liked it.
@@bradleykucera6371 well you have a good amount of creative freedom with this one, writing wise you're killing it. I really like the different scenarios you have created! I never expected how good Naruto would be at kumo! He's Op
@@yosoymarcos8100 haha, yeah. I refuse to write a weak or average Naruto. I am also incapable of writing the childish, ignorant and naive Naruto so I always find ways to compensate for that
@@bradleykucera6371 yeah man, honestly this has been a favorite so far from all the what it’s I’ve heard and I started listening too what it’s on naruto since late 2020 😂 it helps me get through my 10 hour work shift !
@@yosoymarcos8100 trust me brother, I understand that. The whole reason I started writing them was because I was so fed up with authors not finishing their work. Plus, I thought I could do it better.
You need a english teacher and a grammer class bro im not the smartest but im damn shir😂 nobody talks like that 😂🤣 quick question was the shir to much or should i spell it sure
@bradleykucera6371 Hell yeah, it's funny, and the conversation really got to be thinking about his been created, but no one seen it is it truly there. 👍🏿🤣🤣
@@DarkSage7 in my opinion it's like the writers don't do research on how the character's names are spelled rather as just write how they think it's spelled
problem is that its spelled differently in different translations. earlier manga translations may spell it one way, then the newer ones another. anime also spells it its own way. its a problem arising from the fact that Japanese is the original language, and it doesn't use the latin alphabet, so translators have to get creative with it and go based of sound
I wrote it that way on purpose to highlight the depravity of the Hyuga clan. I originally intended on throwing Hannabi into Naruto's harem but I bailed on that. I couldn't think of a good way to seemlessly incorporate her into it.
Oh hell yeah! Here we go boys! Chunin exam finals and the start of the unraveling! Let’s get it! Hope you enjoy the twists and turns I threw in. Let me know what you think in the comments!
So how far are you from finishing the story
@@theknight1919 umm, it is written and I have to edit it. Probably tonight or tomorrow at the latest?
@@bradleykucera6371 that’s amazing 🤩 because I have been really enjoying the story
@@theknight1919 glad to hear it brother.
Love this story man this one helped me get through a bad day at work today
I was just searching for something to listen to, thanks for posting this.
I enjoy lemons they add to the story and help with the visualization of what is going on between the the couples.
I will keep that in mind. UA-cam makes it hard for lemons, but I will definitely keep them in my future fics
Horny ass
@@bradleykucera6371I honestly have to agree, in real life that is what adds the nail to the coffin for any relationship, I believe it’s essential for any relationship heavy story to add lemons
What did everyone think of my writing of Tayuya? She is honestly one of my favorite characters to write and I wanted to get your opinions on it.
Excellent! Vulgar & insanely loyal...I approve
@@Zeek314 thanks!
Very well done. I am glad to see her having a good life
@@andrewkitsune5457 Haha, thanks. I thought so too. I hated how Tayuya was always given the shaft.
The story is good but I feel like some of the lemons are an essential part of the story but all in all this is a great story ❤
I really struggled with that but I didn't want to go in and add them retroactively. I ended up doing two super lemons later on.
What is a lemons?
@@nocturnalsleep7507 basically I write out a sex scene. I have done so in my previous fics and I tried to abstain while writing this one.
@@nocturnalsleep7507 see when naru and his "girls" have some fun time or with 9 tails them lemons 🍋
Yeah, I added one big lemon scene into the story. My next story has a bunch of them. Look forward to “What if Naruto was Written by Jiraiya the Gallant”
Great story! The lemons aren't necessary for the stories to be fleshed out (pun intended)...They can be a good bonus, but I enjoy the story itself more.
Thanks for the feedback!
This is definitely my new favorite serie.
please part 4
That’s great to hear. What do like most about it?
Definitely need the next part please
Next
Please release the next part of this series because I love it so much
This is such a great story, can't wait for more
What did you like most about it?
@@bradleykucera6371 love the kumo aspect and the effect Naruto and Kushina have on the Raikage
@@miikkamerikallio5348 yeah, I couldn’t believe how much flack on caught on FFN for changing AI’s personality. That was always one of the best parts about Naruto. He had the power to reach in and inspire people to change. I am glad you liked it.
This is such a great story come on man I need you to drop part 4
The story is complete. Just waiting on Sage to release!
Pretty pleased with the chair on top at the lemons back, please❤😂😅
I love the video was great please make next part 4❤❤❤😊😊😊💛💛💛😊😊😊😊🤍🤍🤍😊😊😊💙💙💙💙💙
Love the story part 4 please
Best what if series so far
What do you like most about it? I really want to improve the quality of my writing.
@@bradleykucera6371 well you have a good amount of creative freedom with this one, writing wise you're killing it. I really like the different scenarios you have created! I never expected how good Naruto would be at kumo! He's Op
@@yosoymarcos8100 haha, yeah. I refuse to write a weak or average Naruto. I am also incapable of writing the childish, ignorant and naive Naruto so I always find ways to compensate for that
@@bradleykucera6371 yeah man, honestly this has been a favorite so far from all the what it’s I’ve heard and I started listening too what it’s on naruto since late 2020 😂 it helps me get through my 10 hour work shift !
@@yosoymarcos8100 trust me brother, I understand that. The whole reason I started writing them was because I was so fed up with authors not finishing their work. Plus, I thought I could do it better.
Part 4 please ❤❤❤❤
next part pz loveing it
Nice. Ive been waiting for this 😁😁😁
Part 4
part 4-50pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Thank u for part 3 just started thank u thank u
I nmeeeeeddd part 4 im dope fiendin over jere
You need a english teacher and a grammer class bro im not the smartest but im damn shir😂 nobody talks like that 😂🤣 quick question was the shir to much or should i spell it sure
Haha, 🤣 I am glad y’all have enjoyed it.
finally man thank you
part 4 pls pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 2
Part 4pleadr 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Lemons make the story more interesting
Noted, I will take that into my future writing
I love this story 💖🤩
Part4😊
I feel like lemons in the story help it especially if it isn't a moment but it is like every few minutes then no but in case yes
next part please
Oh yea I been waiting for this 😆😆😆
Part 4pleadr
Part 4 please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Keep it going
I need more of this story
It is written to the end my friend. Should be out by the end of the week.
NEED PART 4
you better finish this story
Already finished my friend. One of the first Kumo fics ever written to completion
Bro I need more dont leave me or us like this
You have my word that all my stories will be written to completion.
I love it
Once agin delivered a banging story 😅 Lemons 🍋 are fine with me it can only add to an already epic tale....😅
I will keep that in mind friend.
Do anybody get Mordecai and Rigby vibes when Deidara talk to Sasori
Low key, when I was writing that conversation, I was just laughing to myself once the idea came to me. I just went with it. Did you enjoy it?
@bradleykucera6371 Hell yeah, it's funny, and the conversation really got to be thinking about his been created, but no one seen it is it truly there. 👍🏿🤣🤣
Can we have part 4 please 🙏
Ad the lemons
Noted
Part reo
4 🍋🍋🍋🍋
Your opinion is heard, friend.
I've noticed that when the Raikage is mentioned or is talking or is being spoken to his name is pronounced as "Aye" when it's just the letter A
@@anthonyherring5329 yeah in this text its written as Ai
@@DarkSage7 in my opinion it's like the writers don't do research on how the character's names are spelled rather as just write how they think it's spelled
problem is that its spelled differently in different translations. earlier manga translations may spell it one way, then the newer ones another. anime also spells it its own way. its a problem arising from the fact that Japanese is the original language, and it doesn't use the latin alphabet, so translators have to get creative with it and go based of sound
please finish this series on youtube
45678
ITS OVER NINE THOUSAND 😂
haha, I am glad you enjoyed that! I didn't know how many people would get the reference
@@bradleykucera6371 mainy people will but don't understand where it from
hinata marries neji? brother eughh
I wrote it that way on purpose to highlight the depravity of the Hyuga clan. I originally intended on throwing Hannabi into Naruto's harem but I bailed on that. I couldn't think of a good way to seemlessly incorporate her into it.