What if Naruto and Kushina Escape to Kumo | Part 3

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  • Опубліковано 21 лис 2024

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  • @bradleykucera6371
    @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +17

    Oh hell yeah! Here we go boys! Chunin exam finals and the start of the unraveling! Let’s get it! Hope you enjoy the twists and turns I threw in. Let me know what you think in the comments!

    • @theknight1919
      @theknight1919 5 місяців тому

      So how far are you from finishing the story

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +3

      @@theknight1919 umm, it is written and I have to edit it. Probably tonight or tomorrow at the latest?

    • @theknight1919
      @theknight1919 5 місяців тому

      @@bradleykucera6371 that’s amazing 🤩 because I have been really enjoying the story

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +2

      @@theknight1919 glad to hear it brother.

    • @killlabee88naruto22
      @killlabee88naruto22 5 місяців тому +1

      Love this story man this one helped me get through a bad day at work today

  • @bradleykucera6371
    @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +2

    What did everyone think of my writing of Tayuya? She is honestly one of my favorite characters to write and I wanted to get your opinions on it.

    • @Zeek314
      @Zeek314 5 місяців тому

      Excellent! Vulgar & insanely loyal...I approve

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      @@Zeek314 thanks!

    • @andrewkitsune5457
      @andrewkitsune5457 4 місяці тому

      Very well done. I am glad to see her having a good life

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 4 місяці тому

      @@andrewkitsune5457 Haha, thanks. I thought so too. I hated how Tayuya was always given the shaft.

  • @thebookwyrm0982
    @thebookwyrm0982 5 місяців тому +4

    I was just searching for something to listen to, thanks for posting this.

  • @amandabrainard6874
    @amandabrainard6874 5 місяців тому +3

    I enjoy lemons they add to the story and help with the visualization of what is going on between the the couples.

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +1

      I will keep that in mind. UA-cam makes it hard for lemons, but I will definitely keep them in my future fics

    • @yourdad6314
      @yourdad6314 5 місяців тому

      Horny ass

    • @Roqjn
      @Roqjn 4 місяці тому

      @@bradleykucera6371I honestly have to agree, in real life that is what adds the nail to the coffin for any relationship, I believe it’s essential for any relationship heavy story to add lemons

  • @Zeek314
    @Zeek314 5 місяців тому +2

    Great story! The lemons aren't necessary for the stories to be fleshed out (pun intended)...They can be a good bonus, but I enjoy the story itself more.

  • @djdriver2344
    @djdriver2344 5 місяців тому +1

    Definitely need the next part please

  • @sandramunzel4339
    @sandramunzel4339 5 місяців тому

    This is definitely my new favorite serie.
    please part 4

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      That’s great to hear. What do like most about it?

  • @redhamarhoon5631
    @redhamarhoon5631 5 місяців тому

    Please release the next part of this series because I love it so much

  • @jacobknight922
    @jacobknight922 5 місяців тому

    Love the story part 4 please

  • @thomashendrie8889
    @thomashendrie8889 5 місяців тому

    next part pz loveing it

  • @lithembakhumalo-xn1qf
    @lithembakhumalo-xn1qf 5 місяців тому +2

    The story is good but I feel like some of the lemons are an essential part of the story but all in all this is a great story ❤

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +1

      I really struggled with that but I didn't want to go in and add them retroactively. I ended up doing two super lemons later on.

    • @nocturnalsleep7507
      @nocturnalsleep7507 5 місяців тому

      What is a lemons?

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      @@nocturnalsleep7507 basically I write out a sex scene. I have done so in my previous fics and I tried to abstain while writing this one.

    • @yohantheredactedman8016
      @yohantheredactedman8016 5 місяців тому

      ​@@nocturnalsleep7507 see when naru and his "girls" have some fun time or with 9 tails them lemons 🍋

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +2

      Yeah, I added one big lemon scene into the story. My next story has a bunch of them. Look forward to “What if Naruto was Written by Jiraiya the Gallant”

  • @enrico-jo4om
    @enrico-jo4om 5 місяців тому

    Part 4pleadr 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

  • @Bree-z-fd2ww
    @Bree-z-fd2ww 5 місяців тому +1

    finally man thank you

  • @MikhalTaylor
    @MikhalTaylor 5 місяців тому

    Pretty pleased with the chair on top at the lemons back, please❤😂😅

  • @alanwszelaki6114
    @alanwszelaki6114 5 місяців тому

    Part 4 please ❤❤❤❤

  • @LaddyAyra1
    @LaddyAyra1 5 місяців тому

    I love this story 💖🤩

  • @killlabee88naruto22
    @killlabee88naruto22 5 місяців тому

    Keep it going

  • @JoshMcKinstry-x9s
    @JoshMcKinstry-x9s 5 місяців тому

    part 4-50pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • @16jerrell
    @16jerrell 5 місяців тому

    I love it

  • @abdullahyasin6953
    @abdullahyasin6953 5 місяців тому

    Part 4 please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @GeorgeAlexander-r9u
    @GeorgeAlexander-r9u 5 місяців тому

    This is such a great story come on man I need you to drop part 4

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +1

      The story is complete. Just waiting on Sage to release!

  • @JoshMcKinstry-x9s
    @JoshMcKinstry-x9s 5 місяців тому

    part 4 pls pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @greyfoxshadow
    @greyfoxshadow 5 місяців тому

    I need more of this story

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      It is written to the end my friend. Should be out by the end of the week.

  • @miikkamerikallio5348
    @miikkamerikallio5348 5 місяців тому

    This is such a great story, can't wait for more

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      What did you like most about it?

    • @miikkamerikallio5348
      @miikkamerikallio5348 5 місяців тому

      @@bradleykucera6371 love the kumo aspect and the effect Naruto and Kushina have on the Raikage

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      @@miikkamerikallio5348 yeah, I couldn’t believe how much flack on caught on FFN for changing AI’s personality. That was always one of the best parts about Naruto. He had the power to reach in and inspire people to change. I am glad you liked it.

  • @lewiscoronel2984
    @lewiscoronel2984 5 місяців тому

    Thank u for part 3 just started thank u thank u

  • @yosoymarcos8100
    @yosoymarcos8100 5 місяців тому

    Best what if series so far

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      What do you like most about it? I really want to improve the quality of my writing.

    • @yosoymarcos8100
      @yosoymarcos8100 5 місяців тому

      @@bradleykucera6371 well you have a good amount of creative freedom with this one, writing wise you're killing it. I really like the different scenarios you have created! I never expected how good Naruto would be at kumo! He's Op

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +1

      @@yosoymarcos8100 haha, yeah. I refuse to write a weak or average Naruto. I am also incapable of writing the childish, ignorant and naive Naruto so I always find ways to compensate for that

    • @yosoymarcos8100
      @yosoymarcos8100 5 місяців тому

      @@bradleykucera6371 yeah man, honestly this has been a favorite so far from all the what it’s I’ve heard and I started listening too what it’s on naruto since late 2020 😂 it helps me get through my 10 hour work shift !

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +1

      @@yosoymarcos8100 trust me brother, I understand that. The whole reason I started writing them was because I was so fed up with authors not finishing their work. Plus, I thought I could do it better.

  • @kee_bagchaser1951
    @kee_bagchaser1951 5 місяців тому

    Part 4

  • @demetriustyson4418
    @demetriustyson4418 5 місяців тому

    NEED PART 4

  • @amandabrainard6874
    @amandabrainard6874 5 місяців тому

    next part please

  • @felixserrano3760
    @felixserrano3760 5 місяців тому +1

    I love the video was great please make next part 4❤❤❤😊😊😊💛💛💛😊😊😊😊🤍🤍🤍😊😊😊💙💙💙💙💙

  • @tommahar570
    @tommahar570 5 місяців тому

    Part 4pleadr

  • @16jerrell
    @16jerrell 5 місяців тому

    Oh yea I been waiting for this 😆😆😆

  • @raymarkmaralit5903
    @raymarkmaralit5903 5 місяців тому

    Nice. Ive been waiting for this 😁😁😁

  • @joseph5952
    @joseph5952 5 місяців тому

    I feel like lemons in the story help it especially if it isn't a moment but it is like every few minutes then no but in case yes

  • @katlehontshangase2727
    @katlehontshangase2727 5 місяців тому

    Part4😊

  • @apollolavallias7731
    @apollolavallias7731 5 місяців тому

    I nmeeeeeddd part 4 im dope fiendin over jere

    • @ravenburleson7324
      @ravenburleson7324 5 місяців тому

      You need a english teacher and a grammer class bro im not the smartest but im damn shir😂 nobody talks like that 😂🤣 quick question was the shir to much or should i spell it sure

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +1

      Haha, 🤣 I am glad y’all have enjoyed it.

  • @songohan1488
    @songohan1488 5 місяців тому

    Lemons make the story more interesting

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      Noted, I will take that into my future writing

  • @Sarniikhan
    @Sarniikhan 5 місяців тому

    Once agin delivered a banging story 😅 Lemons 🍋 are fine with me it can only add to an already epic tale....😅

  • @AlexUrness-ke2ix
    @AlexUrness-ke2ix 5 місяців тому

    Ad the lemons

  • @ravenburleson7324
    @ravenburleson7324 5 місяців тому

    Bro I need more dont leave me or us like this

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      You have my word that all my stories will be written to completion.

  • @keyzellous4539
    @keyzellous4539 5 місяців тому

    Do anybody get Mordecai and Rigby vibes when Deidara talk to Sasori

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      Low key, when I was writing that conversation, I was just laughing to myself once the idea came to me. I just went with it. Did you enjoy it?

    • @keyzellous4539
      @keyzellous4539 5 місяців тому

      @bradleykucera6371 Hell yeah, it's funny, and the conversation really got to be thinking about his been created, but no one seen it is it truly there. 👍🏿🤣🤣

  • @16jerrell
    @16jerrell 5 місяців тому

    Can we have part 4 please 🙏

  • @jenniferaskew9191
    @jenniferaskew9191 5 місяців тому

    Part reo

  • @montymont4192
    @montymont4192 5 місяців тому

    you better finish this story

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      Already finished my friend. One of the first Kumo fics ever written to completion

  • @anthonyherring5329
    @anthonyherring5329 4 місяці тому

    I've noticed that when the Raikage is mentioned or is talking or is being spoken to his name is pronounced as "Aye" when it's just the letter A

    • @DarkSage7
      @DarkSage7  4 місяці тому

      @@anthonyherring5329 yeah in this text its written as Ai

    • @anthonyherring5329
      @anthonyherring5329 4 місяці тому

      @@DarkSage7 in my opinion it's like the writers don't do research on how the character's names are spelled rather as just write how they think it's spelled

    • @DarkSage7
      @DarkSage7  3 місяці тому

      problem is that its spelled differently in different translations. earlier manga translations may spell it one way, then the newer ones another. anime also spells it its own way. its a problem arising from the fact that Japanese is the original language, and it doesn't use the latin alphabet, so translators have to get creative with it and go based of sound

  • @montymont4192
    @montymont4192 5 місяців тому

    please finish this series on youtube

  • @1742Q
    @1742Q 5 місяців тому

    4 🍋🍋🍋🍋

  • @jenniferaskew9191
    @jenniferaskew9191 5 місяців тому

    45678

  • @priceyboy8369
    @priceyboy8369 5 місяців тому

    ITS OVER NINE THOUSAND 😂

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому

      haha, I am glad you enjoyed that! I didn't know how many people would get the reference

    • @priceyboy8369
      @priceyboy8369 5 місяців тому

      @@bradleykucera6371 mainy people will but don't understand where it from

  • @montymont4192
    @montymont4192 5 місяців тому

    hinata marries neji? brother eughh

    • @bradleykucera6371
      @bradleykucera6371 5 місяців тому +1

      I wrote it that way on purpose to highlight the depravity of the Hyuga clan. I originally intended on throwing Hannabi into Naruto's harem but I bailed on that. I couldn't think of a good way to seemlessly incorporate her into it.