The Konoha civilian counsel is getting on my nerves, but I guess that was your intent. They didn't even need Black Zetsu's influence. Great story though. I wouldnt mind a tail beast bomb or 3 dropping on Konoha especially during a counsel meeting but that would end it too quickly
@@UchihaFanFics thanks for the feedback. Maybe I could post the files on my channel but I don’t have an audience of my own yet. Plus, I love my boy Dark Sage.
I was listening to this while going to bed and passed out at the 3 hour mark. I’m happy I skipped back and made sure not to miss that. Finally an author who didn’t have an OP Naruto constantly have to chase a certain coward and just got it over with. Keep it up brother you’re great at what you do and thanks to both you and dark sage for sharing❤
I am all for a harem, but I feel that excluding some of the individuals adds stakes to the story and it is not like Naruto will just end up with every girl he encounters.
No worries it's all opinions personally I like fem haku samui tamari fu ino tenten are my favorites for Naruto personally I don't like hinata she is the most cruel character she know how lonely he was and just watched
@@lewiscoronel2984 See, I don't think Hinata is cruel. Hinata is one of the most tragic characters in the series and she honestly had it harder than most. You cannot understate the effects of prolonged child abuse. The Hyuga clan is honestly unforgiveable and what they did to Hinata was the same. A child that grew up in that environment, especially a pre-teen adolescent, wouldn't stand a chance. The core personality hadn't developed and she stood no chance of resisting it. I think Hinata is a beautiful girl and a good character. Honestly, I would use her more if she weren't so over-used.
Hey, I have the whole story written. I haven’t uploaded it to FFN yet because I am lazy and I am already into my next fic. It will go up sometime …. Soon … probably…
Enjoy everyone! Getting into the nitty gritty and the tempo escalated quite a bit! Let me know what you think.
The only thing I'm against is the pligim.. that's only my personal belief other than that it's a great story so far
@@raymullinsjr4312 pligim?
I love your fan fics❤ maybe you should start your own channel
The Konoha civilian counsel is getting on my nerves, but I guess that was your intent. They didn't even need Black Zetsu's influence. Great story though. I wouldnt mind a tail beast bomb or 3 dropping on Konoha especially during a counsel meeting but that would end it too quickly
@@UchihaFanFics thanks for the feedback. Maybe I could post the files on my channel but I don’t have an audience of my own yet. Plus, I love my boy Dark Sage.
Part 5 please ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
More more we all need more to this story please
haha you will get more my friend. As promised, all of my stories are written to completion
This story is really focking good when you dropping next part
Ask Sage, there are two more videos to go.
Part 5 please ❤❤❤ so amazing
I was listening to this while going to bed and passed out at the 3 hour mark. I’m happy I skipped back and made sure not to miss that. Finally an author who didn’t have an OP Naruto constantly have to chase a certain coward and just got it over with. Keep it up brother you’re great at what you do and thanks to both you and dark sage for sharing❤
Part 5 please
Part 5
Part five part six part seven I need them all
The video was great please make next part 5💛💛💛😊😊😊💙💙💙😊😊😊💚💚💚😊😊😊🖤🖤🖤😊😊😊💜💜💜💜💜
This story is great.I feel invested in It doesn't disappoint and I feel full satisfied with this chapter
That is great to hear! High praise for me. I went all out with the Orochimaru battle
Been Waiting for this epic continuation 😅 thanks for the upload and story!😊
You are most welcome my friend
This is cool sad haku didn't make harem but story is good can't wait to hear the end
I am all for a harem, but I feel that excluding some of the individuals adds stakes to the story and it is not like Naruto will just end up with every girl he encounters.
@bradleykucera6371
True I just like fem haku for Naruto her pain and character help balance out Naruto in my opinion
@@lewiscoronel2984 i do not disagree. I will apologize for my next fic in advance lol.
No worries it's all opinions personally I like fem haku samui tamari fu ino tenten are my favorites for Naruto personally I don't like hinata she is the most cruel character she know how lonely he was and just watched
@@lewiscoronel2984 See, I don't think Hinata is cruel. Hinata is one of the most tragic characters in the series and she honestly had it harder than most. You cannot understate the effects of prolonged child abuse. The Hyuga clan is honestly unforgiveable and what they did to Hinata was the same. A child that grew up in that environment, especially a pre-teen adolescent, wouldn't stand a chance. The core personality hadn't developed and she stood no chance of resisting it. I think Hinata is a beautiful girl and a good character. Honestly, I would use her more if she weren't so over-used.
Part5
Need the next part plz
next part please
I love this story I need more of this story
More is yet to come. I am happy with how I ended it. Let me know what you think
Need part 5
Part 4
This chapter is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
What did you like most about it?
He’s waiting for the Arthur to drop more of the story
I have the whole thing. Ill be posting the next part tomorrow. Ive had a very busy week, and i havent been able to make any videos. My bad
That’s fine
Next one plz!!!!!!
I have been waiting for this 😆😆😆
I hope it lives up to your expectations
@@bradleykucera6371 yes it has and I love it 😏
@@16jerrell thanks bud. Much appreciated
@@bradleykucera6371 your welcome bro 😁
Hey dark sage, i was wondering if you could make a tutorial on how to start a Naruto fan fic youtube channel
Check my channel description. Send me a email
Yessssss
Part 5 when?
today
Put all the fucking scenes in and make all videos age appropiate
Dam everyone chapter 20 is the last chapter they updated
Hey, I have the whole story written. I haven’t uploaded it to FFN yet because I am lazy and I am already into my next fic. It will go up sometime …. Soon … probably…
@@bradleykucera6371 wait are you the one who created the fanfic
@@Blackzin360 yes, this is the third one dark Sage has published for me
@@bradleykucera6371 when good story
@@bradleykucera6371 This story is awesome please keep up the great work