15:18 😭♥thank you so much for critiquing my drawing, Jackie!! I absolutely love how you made the shoes big and chunky and how fluffy and loose the sweater feels! I'd definitely think more about making shapes in different sizes and checking my values!!
Yeah, I was looking at it, and I thought, gosh, that looks perfect. If I were in that situation, I'd have no idea what to say about how to improve the drawing, and would be trying hard to find something, anything, to improve. But she made it look from great to *incredible*!
5:40 Can I just say thank you for keeping the spirit of the character? You enhanced the proportions but you kept the nose shape and lip shape all the same, and I really appreciate that :D (not my drawing for the record, I just noticed that you were really respectful that way!)
I think my favorite part about your “fixing/roast” videos are that unlike a lot of artists I usually see make these kinds of videos, you actually try to match the artsyle of the artwork you’re “fixing” instead of just making it look like your own artsyle. These videos are super entertaining and helpful! Love it ❤
that second example is actually so crazy, just the one change of moving the nose and lips down with no other alterations besides that immediately improved the anatomy and facial structure
I love watching art critiques from ppl who actually know what they're doing and explain the logic/theory behind each change they make. Jackie gives off great vibes and always shows respect to the original artist's work while giving them valuable pointers too
It’s crazy how a lot of the changes are just moving the artists own lines around and after it looks so much better. Like when she doesn’t even draw on top and just shifts the original drawing it’s like the original artist has the skill they just need some guidance in applying it.
The way you criticize, the way you work, the way you explain and advise shows just how of a PROFESSIONAL you are! The thing that really makes it impressive is that you fix and show a better version of the drawing without changing the art style and not make it feel like your own unlike other artists that destroy the spirit of the drawing rather than fix it. Nice work Jackie!!💌
I’m so glad to find an art UA-camr that critiques art rather than entirely changing it to their art style and the characters design because they feel like it.
I really appreciate just how respectful you are to the artist and their work. Usually when I see people attempting to "fix" others art, they unintentionally come across as rude or completely change the artstyle to their own without giving advice to improve (Kooleen is a good example on how not to fix someones art) but not only do you give actually helpful criticism and advice, but you keep the artstyle the same as the orignal while giving praise on what does work in the orignal
Please do more of these!!! I usually don't learn much from that kind of video but the way you do it has actually taught me a lot. I'm so glad I found your channel!
I love how such simple things make it look so much different and helps improve the art!- its just all these little things added together that really change the piece as a whole and its so fun to watch ^^
I'm absolutely in love with how you critique/ "fix" peoples art while still fitting in their original styles. So many people change the person's art entirely, basically making it their own piece and i love to see constructive criticism in the community :)
Genuinely love this so much more than other art fixing videos because you enhance instead of changing completely, first time seeing your channel and I believe more beginners should follow you
It's mindblowing how much a few little changes can completely change a drawing up. This is the type of stuff i try to do after taking a day or two break from a piece to get fresh eyes. Amazing work, this channel is so valuable to an artist like me who totally gets tunnel vision during a piece
i recently found your channel through youtube’s shorts and i LOVE how you don’t insult anything while you fix the stuff. its so nice and refreshing from other artists who think they are better than everyone else
I’m taking digital art this year and a phage no clue what I’m doing. Watching your videos as well as hunting for tips has helped me learn from other peoples mistakes and how to avoid them myself. If anyone sees this and has tips for me, please share! I’m excited to learn how this sorcery works 😂. ❤❤❤
I don't know if anyone has pointed it out to you yet, but just a tip, the drawing with the braids, they were drawn mostly correctly! They were drawing them not as braids that you would see in your hair, but as box braids which are tightly braided so they don't tend to be bumpy! In fact, if braided really small, the edges are so smooth that it moves and resembles straightened hair! I understand your critique, but I would personally consider the culture/type of braid before changing something like that, as the type of braid the artist originally did was an entirely different thing than what it was turned into! :)
this is fascinating actually!! i've been drawing for as long as i can hold a pencil but i'm still not confident to create my own characters. this is giving me more confidence for sure
So excited for this one! Best to learn on certain mistakes with practise, your videos help so much, and for the people featured, great art, keep going!
Would love to see more of this! This is great to see and genuinely super helpful. I've been drawing for years but still have plenty of room to improve, this all helps a lot
A lengthy comment to a small jump-cut at 2:47 I think one of the problems with the first drawing was the eye. Human eye physically can't rotate past 50 degrees, + the view cone is about ~40 deg (yep I googled). So even when going for the most bombastic sideeye, the eye can't look straight at you while the face is in full profile. On the drawing though due to quite a bit of white of the eye left of the iris it looks like the eye is staring straight at us, making it look uncanny. Jackie improved it by tucking the white space in, which clearly helps, but did not comment on it, so I thought I'd mention that.
Side note, the way you push the drawing to be more interesting and more dynamic really remind me of how drag queens really push their costumes to be these big amazing works of wearable art. I'll keep that in mind when working on stylizing my character designs. I tend to think of things as needing to be proportional like it would be irl, but the beauty of art and design and being able to really push those boundaries. Will be keeping that in mind more often now
3:00 Woah the art looked weird to me (I don't draw) but I didn't know why, then when you added the low part of the lip it all made sense and suddenly it looked much better!
I love this series!! It’s super helpful for me as an artist to visually learn, so it’s been helping more than you know! Also, not sure if this has been mentioned already or not, but I noticed around 7:34 there’s some extra voice overlap (from what I think is the sponsored dialogue) and it was difficult to hear what was being read/said.
I know what you mean by the "references are for guides, not for drawings." But Im gonna have to disagree on this one😅 not every drawing is meant to be stylized. Some people like more realsitic styles and proportions
helloo i have a question! around 11:25 you said that references are for guides, not actual drawing, which is very opposite to what i’ve heard many artists say - can you (or anyone in the comments section) explain why you shouldn’t use references for actual drawing?
No you should use references! I mean copying exactly the pose without pushing it or stylizing is not helping you get better at making choices in design.
I'm not an artist but I disagree with what you did to the braided hair(is it even braided? could be dreads...) of the third one, it looked better before imho.
@@BahamutEx i definitely agree, I was just arguing that they probably weren't meant to be dreads. The way she drew it looks more weirdly lumpy then like braids tho
@@Goldie22 Yeah I can see your point. I see dreads way too rarely to say it for sure, still could be meant to be texture. *shrugs* at least we can agree that it looked better before, lol.
@@BahamutEx dreads look so cool, I need to figure out how to draw em so I can put em on more of my own characters lol But I really do hope I see them on more characters till then
Ok photoshop question - how are you able to lasso tool pieces of each drawing to where when you move the piece it looks like it’s on its own layer? Is the drawing just duplicated and you cut away from the top layer? Like the face and ear at 8:24
OMG?? I've rewatched some of the older fix-your-arts several times on this channel, and now we get A NEW ONE? God bless
178 and no comments let me fix it
Literally I LOVE these videos
My impatient ass tryna watch the vid in 10 mins before I have to go 💀
You made the 3rd one more ugly!!
15:18 😭♥thank you so much for critiquing my drawing, Jackie!! I absolutely love how you made the shoes big and chunky and how fluffy and loose the sweater feels! I'd definitely think more about making shapes in different sizes and checking my values!!
Awesome work!
I like your drawing it's cute love the expression of it 😊
Yeah, I was looking at it, and I thought, gosh, that looks perfect. If I were in that situation, I'd have no idea what to say about how to improve the drawing, and would be trying hard to find something, anything, to improve. But she made it look from great to *incredible*!
hi, do you have an insta/twitter account? I reeeeeeeally like ur art style and i would like to see u create more and more.
Your art style is so cuteeee
"ROOOAAASSTTT" - kindly makes small changes whilst complimenting each character 🥰
I love Jackie sm she's so wholesome hehe
5:40 Can I just say thank you for keeping the spirit of the character? You enhanced the proportions but you kept the nose shape and lip shape all the same, and I really appreciate that :D
(not my drawing for the record, I just noticed that you were really respectful that way!)
11:00 holy shit, the colour correcting made that drawing pop right off the page and breathed life into her
I think my favorite part about your “fixing/roast” videos are that unlike a lot of artists I usually see make these kinds of videos, you actually try to match the artsyle of the artwork you’re “fixing” instead of just making it look like your own artsyle. These videos are super entertaining and helpful! Love it ❤
7:27 the audio doubling had me laughing way harder than it should have
💀💀😭
My laptop is on the brink of death and I thought it was finally keeling over T^T
I THOUGHT MY PHONE WAS BROKEN SO I REPLAYED THAT SHIT LIKE 10 TIMES 😭😭😭😭
lol
that second example is actually so crazy, just the one change of moving the nose and lips down with no other alterations besides that immediately improved the anatomy and facial structure
For reals, I gasped! like what witch craft was that!? Runs to work on my anatomy furiously.
thank you for critiquing my drawing!!💕
I've been struggling with stepping up my art to the next level, your advice helps so much!
you have such an amazing piece!!! your character is so adorable😻‼️‼️
@@privatedomicile thank you sm! ☺️
your character is so cute❤❤❤
11:09 such a big improvement just from changing and moving down the proportions! I also have the same issue so ill definitely keep note of this!
When I look at some pieces I’m like. „Oh this looks great how do you improve that really?” and then Jackie adjusts some things and I’m like „OHHHHH…”
I love watching art critiques from ppl who actually know what they're doing and explain the logic/theory behind each change they make. Jackie gives off great vibes and always shows respect to the original artist's work while giving them valuable pointers too
It’s crazy how a lot of the changes are just moving the artists own lines around and after it looks so much better. Like when she doesn’t even draw on top and just shifts the original drawing it’s like the original artist has the skill they just need some guidance in applying it.
The way you criticize, the way you work, the way you explain and advise shows just how of a PROFESSIONAL you are! The thing that really makes it impressive is that you fix and show a better version of the drawing without changing the art style and not make it feel like your own unlike other artists that destroy the spirit of the drawing rather than fix it. Nice work Jackie!!💌
I’m so glad to find an art UA-camr that critiques art rather than entirely changing it to their art style and the characters design because they feel like it.
I really appreciate just how respectful you are to the artist and their work. Usually when I see people attempting to "fix" others art, they unintentionally come across as rude or completely change the artstyle to their own without giving advice to improve (Kooleen is a good example on how not to fix someones art) but not only do you give actually helpful criticism and advice, but you keep the artstyle the same as the orignal while giving praise on what does work in the orignal
my toxic trait is thinking i could draw any of these
Real
Please do more of these!!! I usually don't learn much from that kind of video but the way you do it has actually taught me a lot. I'm so glad I found your channel!
Jackie, I bought your course, and it is one of the best on Domestika. Congratulations!!!
Wooo!
I love how such simple things make it look so much different and helps improve the art!- its just all these little things added together that really change the piece as a whole and its so fun to watch ^^
I'm absolutely in love with how you critique/ "fix" peoples art while still fitting in their original styles. So many people change the person's art entirely, basically making it their own piece and i love to see constructive criticism in the community :)
08:40 OMG, just a subtle thing changed everything Ur are so kind and amazing! Loving to watch your vids
Genuinely love this so much more than other art fixing videos because you enhance instead of changing completely, first time seeing your channel and I believe more beginners should follow you
I just bought your course! I'm so happy! I work as an storyboard artist and animator, but I love character design and want to improve on that too.
Around 7:30 two voices seem to be overlapping?
LOL NOOOOOOO THE AD READ
lol rip i was wondering if it was my phone bugging
samee 😭
Ooof common mistake if your not used to editing. @@JackieDroujko
@@magicdolphin3090 same bro
Just moving the ear up and nose/chin a bit for perspective in the 2nd one made it so much better, wow! Like the art was good just in the wrong places
It's mindblowing how much a few little changes can completely change a drawing up. This is the type of stuff i try to do after taking a day or two break from a piece to get fresh eyes. Amazing work, this channel is so valuable to an artist like me who totally gets tunnel vision during a piece
anyone else hearing two voices at 7:28
Me too, maybe the audio clips layered or smth?
@@Liam-bi7woits ad read. read the description of the video
I’m not even an artist and I watched all 3 videos in this series in amazement. Hope you keep making them
i recently found your channel through youtube’s shorts and i LOVE how you don’t insult anything while you fix the stuff. its so nice and refreshing from other artists who think they are better than everyone else
I’m taking digital art this year and a phage no clue what I’m doing. Watching your videos as well as hunting for tips has helped me learn from other peoples mistakes and how to avoid them myself. If anyone sees this and has tips for me, please share! I’m excited to learn how this sorcery works 😂. ❤❤❤
The thing I loveeee about your art critiques is that you keep the style for each piece!!!
18:12 the bunny is sooo cute!!❤
I love how your analyses focus on composition and balance, it’s such an effective skill to have and just as important as your rendering technique
I don't know if anyone has pointed it out to you yet, but just a tip, the drawing with the braids, they were drawn mostly correctly! They were drawing them not as braids that you would see in your hair, but as box braids which are tightly braided so they don't tend to be bumpy! In fact, if braided really small, the edges are so smooth that it moves and resembles straightened hair!
I understand your critique, but I would personally consider the culture/type of braid before changing something like that, as the type of braid the artist originally did was an entirely different thing than what it was turned into! :)
this is fascinating actually!! i've been drawing for as long as i can hold a pencil but i'm still not confident to create my own characters. this is giving me more confidence for sure
I don't even draw, but that was very insightful!
Same I can't draw this good but I'm fascinated how she enhances it and she gives such great feedback 🤧
First time watcher and i love this i wish i had someone help me this way when i tried to learn
You're comments are so informative and are helping me learn as well ! I really like your content as well ! :'))
I found this video through a short. Oh my goodness this is so delightful!
So excited for this one! Best to learn on certain mistakes with practise, your videos help so much, and for the people featured, great art, keep going!
If Jackie ever sees my art, she'll probably shit her pants.
Post it in #critiquemejackie on IG!
Would love to see more of this! This is great to see and genuinely super helpful. I've been drawing for years but still have plenty of room to improve, this all helps a lot
i love how she says exactly what i think when i look at these pieces (except the 3rd one) it validates mr so hard
My best friends draws appear at 19:48!!!!!! So cooooollll!!!
Wow!! I saw you on tiktok and I really like this type of content, because you can actually learn out of the mistakes of others. Thanks! ❤
I love these you're one of my favorite artists if not straight up my fav
I am loving the spider-punk holding the mic in the beginning lol, awesome video!!
It is really inspiering to see what a huge difference relatively minor changes kan make. It makes me want to improve my own art, too!
More of this please ❤
A lengthy comment to a small jump-cut at 2:47
I think one of the problems with the first drawing was the eye.
Human eye physically can't rotate past 50 degrees, + the view cone is about ~40 deg (yep I googled).
So even when going for the most bombastic sideeye, the eye can't look straight at you while the face is in full profile.
On the drawing though due to quite a bit of white of the eye left of the iris it looks like the eye is staring straight at us, making it look uncanny.
Jackie improved it by tucking the white space in, which clearly helps, but did not comment on it, so I thought I'd mention that.
I LOOOVE these series
Just so much stuff to learn from in one video. Always awesome, Jackie 😎
im so mad ive never been on this side of youtube, this is so fun to watch
These kind of vids are really helpful, i love em!
A lot of youtubers will just redraw the entire art in their style and call it "fixed," so seeing you keep the original style is so nice
Pls do more video's like these, I really enjoying them and I can learn sth after it too :>
Side note, the way you push the drawing to be more interesting and more dynamic really remind me of how drag queens really push their costumes to be these big amazing works of wearable art.
I'll keep that in mind when working on stylizing my character designs. I tend to think of things as needing to be proportional like it would be irl, but the beauty of art and design and being able to really push those boundaries. Will be keeping that in mind more often now
3:00 Woah the art looked weird to me (I don't draw) but I didn't know why, then when you added the low part of the lip it all made sense and suddenly it looked much better!
8:30 WOAH WHAT THE HELL YA WIZARD
Real early today, can't wait to see how the video goes
Love "art roast" sessions lol
I love these, thanks jackie!
I’m glad that she isn’t going THIS SUCKS and she is being like “what if …”
thank you so much, I can finally understand portion 😍
Great series. I'd love to see more
Do you on only critique pictures? Have you ever critiqued a fan submitted animation
love your mic
I don’t even draw or anything but this video was still entertaining and interesting as hell
loving the hobie mic
wow this was really interesting😍
*Need someone to fix my life like that* 💀
0:21. Cool spider-mic 😅
I love this kind of videos 🎥🎨🖌️
12:35 lmao it looked like she was twerking 💀
Unpopular opinion i rathered a lot more from the original than what was changed 12:00
Omg same! And The braids were way better before!
This is incredibly helpful
I love this series!! It’s super helpful for me as an artist to visually learn, so it’s been helping more than you know! Also, not sure if this has been mentioned already or not, but I noticed around 7:34 there’s some extra voice overlap (from what I think is the sponsored dialogue) and it was difficult to hear what was being read/said.
I love this kind of video. It helped me a lot ngl
This is a good teacher
how to join the discord? cant find it anywhere
I know what you mean by the "references are for guides, not for drawings." But Im gonna have to disagree on this one😅 not every drawing is meant to be stylized. Some people like more realsitic styles and proportions
You know that these people themselves send their work to her? 🤨
@@dushistaya yes ik but just saying
I spend hours trying to fix my art and it ends up looking worse and then I give up, while you can fix stuff in a minute 😭
Thank you so much this video and all your others have helped me a lot ❤️
helloo i have a question! around 11:25 you said that references are for guides, not actual drawing, which is very opposite to what i’ve heard many artists say - can you (or anyone in the comments section) explain why you shouldn’t use references for actual drawing?
No you should use references! I mean copying exactly the pose without pushing it or stylizing is not helping you get better at making choices in design.
@@JackieDroujko i see, thank you!
7:27 something is wrong with Audio - 2 audios are in the same time
hmm i was wondering, do you critique drawings of animals? i’ve been wanting to get my art critiqued for awhile! but i unfortunately don’t draw humans.
7:32 not sure if this has been pointed out yet but sounds like there's something funky going on with the audio here!
Does anyone know what mic she uses? The quality seems so good for such a small mic, or does she have it linked somewhere? I sadly can't find it :(😊
I dont know what it is.. but somehow the first transformed one looks like Jinx from Arcane. Great Vid btw!!
These are really cool!
Love this vid series!
u did a good job but I think u completely ruined the third 😅
I'm not an artist but I disagree with what you did to the braided hair(is it even braided? could be dreads...) of the third one, it looked better before imho.
Dreads don't have inner braid lines
@@Goldie22 okay, sure, I'm not the original artist, so no idea how it was intended... 🤷♀️ Doesn't change my opinion that it looked better before.
@@BahamutEx i definitely agree, I was just arguing that they probably weren't meant to be dreads.
The way she drew it looks more weirdly lumpy then like braids tho
@@Goldie22 Yeah I can see your point. I see dreads way too rarely to say it for sure, still could be meant to be texture. *shrugs* at least we can agree that it looked better before, lol.
@@BahamutEx dreads look so cool, I need to figure out how to draw em so I can put em on more of my own characters lol
But I really do hope I see them on more characters till then
better than coolen
I used to draw when I was a kid and young adult. How would you suggest I get back into drawing at the age of 43 as a hobby.
Wdym references aren't for actual drawings? I use references all the time
I love your amazing critic videos.
Ok photoshop question - how are you able to lasso tool pieces of each drawing to where when you move the piece it looks like it’s on its own layer? Is the drawing just duplicated and you cut away from the top layer? Like the face and ear at 8:24
That’s right I just duplicate the layer
@@JackieDroujko Sweet, thanks for confirming!! 😊
Hey how can I send in my character boards