Trapped in a Cage | Deltarune comic dub
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- Опубліковано 21 жов 2024
- Warning: flashing lights and screaming. I had to go through a many spook for this to go through, but here y'all go!
Comic artist: / cjs-scribbles
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Voice actors:
Ralsei and Kris played by me
Chara played by my amazing girlfriend (thanks for screaming baby, rest up!) / channel
Music:
Undertale Waterfall (Genocide): • Undertale Waterfall (G...
Undertale - Bonetrousle (Genocide): • Undertale - Bonetrousl...
I do not own anything aside from my own voice, everything belongs to its original owners. This is a non-profit project made for entertainment purposes only
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Poor Ralsei, he tried to reassure Kris. He thought that Kris was just getting either clausterphobic or scared. I love Ralsei.
J-just yes.
What a floofy and caring boi :3
I need hug im sad
Even if Kris attacked , Ralsei could stall forever because of his healing spell and thoses ridiculously low stats .
Ralsei is the best character you can’t change my mind
Kris needs a Snickers
*Edit:* _It's been 6 months and Kris STILL needs a snickers_
Lily Blossom
He needs 15 of them XD
XDXD
Nah he just need some chalk
nah, HE NEED SOME MILK!
RedGamez
YASSS
This not only has SPOT ON music! But the most amazing and fitting voice-acting! The art fits perfectly!!! I'm so impressed
same!
...666 likes....
Kris's voice help its too perfect- **Dies**
*_Slowly get’s out a healing item_*
@@aestheticthingorallison1998 **Recovers senses** Thx ;w;
Betty Creeper it does not fit with kris
Aren't they genderless
But they're supposed to be genderless teenagers/kids
I thought Kris was yelling to get the moss out of their throat.
T H E C Y C L E O F E X I S T E N C E
😋
bruh we over here thinking it's some silly chara possession type shit, but this man over here asking the real questions
@@charonsferryold Perpetuate it. XD
*m m m m y f a v o r i t e*
I was honestly expecting him to spit out moss xD
Same lol
Why moss?
Hahaha
@@randomgamer3376 In the cell in the game, you can eat some moss growing in the corner if you want. It gets all over your mouth and Ralsei says something like "You've... already resorted to eating moss..."
JAJAJA XD
This dub. *This dub right here* deserves more attention.
Edit: WoAh tHaT’s A LoT oF LikE’S-
It really does, but theres room for improvement as well
@@MrHater-su9iz Thank you for your criticism and have a nice day
@@MrHater-su9iz *so you do this on every video?* -NiCE mAn-
NOW THATS A LOT DAMAGE
I SAWED THIS HATE COMMENT IN HALF!
Kris "It's horrible feeling like you're..."
Me "..."
Kris "Trapped in a cage"
Me "HUAAAAAAGH!!!!"
It's the world that is trapped in a cage and they are at the only place that isn't .
poisson multi-taches “CHAOS CHAOS”
*I’M SORRY IS THIS A REFERENCE TO THE “SOUL-IN-CAGE” THING?!*
Yep. Both the soul trapped in the cage and the fact that Kris is trying desperately to stay themselves even while under control. So... yeah.
Well, at the end of chapter one, Kris throws his soul into a cage
T#!$ B3TT3R N0T B3!
@@Bluefur-eg9gd but wheres chapter 2????
@KatKit will toby did show a preview of chapter 2 on Twitter
Don't know bout anyone else, but I still find it kinda insane they we the player are more of a "bad guy" this game from the moment we take control of Kris versus in Undertale where that "bad guy" role can only happen after we've had a few battles to determine our route. Chapter 2 is gonna be even crazier when it rolls around.
Oh yeah, excellent voice work. Been binging old comic dubs of UT back when the fandom blew up thanks to Deltarune. Honestly great to see the talent hasn't gone away over the years
Well, we don't really know what's going on. We're kind of pushed into Kris, presumably by the force that also made us create an avatar. I don't think that makes us a bad guy, since we had no control over it. I _guess_ overwriting Kris' save file once we get into the Darkworld could be seen as "bad", but it's more an act of careless indifference than evil intent. Most people (myself included) didn't even notice that they were overwriting an existing save file on their first run. In general, I think we don't know enough about this world to jump to moral conclusions.
Cesar Pena
Thing is... will we be kris in chapter 2?
I mean they took their soul out.. it means WE the controls can’t really.. CONTROL them
Cesar Pena
Yep, it kinda has mixed feeling Kris and we are a bad person. Kris from the start is a bad evil child and just acted nice cuz we make them act nice.
In a sense, it's still irnoic Ralsei and Susie like the we as Kris, not Kris actual person are.
Chap. 2 probably Asriel as main
Crazy theory I've thought up, but I honestly believe that the protag of the story is Ralsei. It would be a pretty neat role reversal in this game compared to Undertale. No spoilers but think about the situation with frisk and flowey in undertale, and Kris and Ralsei here. They are parralels beyond belief, just the roles are reversed.
@@xetajts8422 Is pretty cool think about reverse roles between KrisxRalsei and FloweyxFrisk, but, and Susie? She's a complex character, her experience in Deltarune was pretty similar to our (the player) experience in Undertale, specially if you played UT without knowing anything and ended with a Neutral Route in the first run. In my opinion, Susie has the potential to be the actual protagonist and the true hero, alongside with Ralsei and Lancer.
Maybe, Ralsei will fight against Kris, with Kris (or whatever who they are) being the bad guy.
When kris calm down, it's mean kris control by player again...
Oh god...
Edit: why is there so many like Σ(°Д°;
Here’s the question though. Are we invading Kris or are we actually the embodiment of Kris’s soul being pushed out of our rightful vessel by an invading force? At the beginning of the game it tells us how we don’t get to choose who we are, which seems to be what Kris is dreaming about before Toriel wakes them up. Kris is dissatisfied with who they are (see “It’s only you” when looking in the mirror.) so they dream about being someone else, a better person of their own design. Then reality kicks in. Think of what Kris has been through. Their parents divorced, then their brother, the only person Kris felt was truly there for them, left for college, leaving Kris alone. From their perspective, life is falling apart, so naturally their dreams would picture themselves in a different body, a different life. I think we get a little too caught up in the fourth wall breaking aspects of Undertale when we look at this game, which Toby Fox has made very clear, isn’t undertale.
Do I need Jesus?
yes
Remeber how our avatar aka frisk is described as shambling like a zombie in genocide route and remember how kris walks in the ending of chapter 1 like a Shambling zombie this leaves a possibility that the entity that takes our name for our avatar aka frisk is in control of our new character we aren't the puppet master it just seems like it until answers are given we are in the dark on something that might not even continue
@@ahappyjackolantern i know ~~ that is the game theory (*σ´∀`)σ
*...It's horrible, feeling like you're trapped in a cage*
I can tell Kris is talking about the "heart" being placed in a birdcage.
*_For some reason I like watching this video more than once..._*
Yeah dude, I feel you.
Maybe, just maybe it's because Kris's voice... Could the animation too
you're not the only one
Same.
Yeah!
**the ending in chapter one when kris throws the soul inside a cage**
Fun fact: After Kris throws the soul in the cage, you can actually MOVE it around inside the cage while Kris moves by himself, symbolizing that you are no longer in control of the body.
And that you cannot stop Kris from becoming another version of Chara in this AU...
Hey, uhm, this is amazing, where are your views?
Like, seriously, this is some top-tier voice acting
I wish it was top-tier, then I can produce more amazing dubs. Guess I'll have to work for it
It’s....Self aware.....this is not needed....toss this one to the side and get the new one from the group and replace him as Ralsei blacks out....
T r a n s i t i o n s u c c e s f u l . . .
C a r r y o n .
Jeez dude....
warning:unwanted intruder detected in the transition sequence.
Activate code extermination protocols epsilon and theta
Theunforgivensoldier jeez giving me HC vibes D:
Did you say... Epsilon?
KIFFLOM, MAH BOIS!
Did he just...
Throw up moss?
No.
People says that the player has taken control of Kris in the end here. However, that might not be the case. Notice how, when you start the game for the first time, and name your vessel the same as yours, it says "OF COURSE, OF COURSE. OF COURSE, THEY ARE THE SAME". In other words, doesn't that mean you and Kris are the same entity? If it is, then it only means Kris regained control from "whatever" was controlling him/her.
Of course, this would mean that the soul that was thrown to the cage was also Kris's soul, and not just a medium to control the vessel. A soul contains compassion and all other emotions. Multiple instances while playing the game, Kris shows signs of these emotions and acts on his/her own accord, without any player "input".
Protecting Susie after the king boss fight, backing off from the closet (and Susie), kneeling to stop Lancer from being thrown off are some of the acts that Kris does on his/her own accord and out of emotions like love (not L.O.V.E.) and fear.
Notice during the Lancer vs Susie fight, you can control Susie's soul (monster souls are seemingly red in this AU), but you cannot control her actions at all, HOWEVER, she can "hear" you. When you tell Susie to go left or right, she says "Kris, did you say something?". She did not say "who said that?", but specifically "Kris". I think this a big proof that we, in a way, are Kris. Our voice is Kris's voice, and vice versa.
In conclusion, Kris did not lost control to the player, but Kris and the player regained control from whatever that was controlling the vessel. You could say the soul was "reloaded" there.
This is just my take on it.
Omg I couldn’t agree more! It seems that so many people get the wrong idea. Although I suppose we could be wrong too. After all, we aren’t Toby Fox and neither are they.
I prefer this idea over the usual "kris is bad player is nice" theory
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Agreed. Also, just a tip: them is shorter and less clunky than him/her. you wouldn't say it out loud.
@@thestranger4894 It has to be us considering when the soul gets thrown into the cage i've heard you can move it around so that soul is "us"
Oh dear god
DEar goD yEs
Sir the sir Meanwhile Susie is abusing a little ♠ boi.
@@GhostsRowboat oh Noelle god
The voice acting and art, they're so beautiful
Thank you, be sure to check out the artist in the description!
We're all trapped in a cage. We are brains trapped inside a skeleton, trapped inside flesh, trapped inside a non-forgiving reality. We can't escape the cage. Not even when we're dead.
Cherry Sunset YT Thanks for giving me an exestantial crisis
Well, you have a choice to be set free...
It sounds like you're.... you've thought about this...
I... I'll... I really hope this was just for the effect of the video!
But...
I’m only 11...
There has to be more to life!...
Right?
*B I G O O F I N T E N S I F I E S*
:)
I actually jumped off my bed when he said "trapped in a cage". Undertale and Doki Doki left me with some 4th wall breaks related traumas.
You are not safe in usa
DDLC? DOKI RUNE )
The Wanderer so SUPERHOT did it to me.
I demand more. THIS NEEDS A STORY!
Kris..., are you really fine?...
I love your pfp
truly beautiful
-No- Yes floof boi I am really fine.
you talking to me?
hE's NoT fInE-
Why hello there i just want to mention that Kris's voice got p e r f e c t
edit: well this is the most likes i ever got, thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank. thank.
Edit2: EXCUSE ME STOP GIVING LIKES THIS COMENT IS NOT LIKABLE-
*yes*
Ma boi Kris sounding so manly it blows my mind.
SQuiShY Epic gamer high school actually
GET OUT
MOM IM PLAYING MINCRAFT
Edit: also forgot to say this dub is flipping amazing
*( **_Ralsei has been traumatized_** )*
This is the first serious deltarune comic if seen so far and I gotta say you guys really got that internal struggle juuust right
OMG is that the moment when chara possesed kris and finally show himself/herself in the end?
I AM HAVING CHILLS IN MY SPINE YOU KNOW 😨
I know right? But peaple think that is just kris, not chara! I don't believe that....
@Karami Lucipher Well, since when...Where you the one in control...=)
@Karami Lucipher From someone else's comment, it's also possible that whatever just happened is the angel from the story, notice how they stand on a conveniently placed Delta Rune? Rip the soul out, and then back on it? Though in Undertale, a prophecy speaks of an angel that will empty the underground, either by true pacifist as Frisk, or as an angel of death, the player/Chara (that itself is a topic that can go all day, so let's not. XD) Of course this angel in Delta Rune could be it's own thing, could be Chara, could be us, it could even be Kris himself. Personally, while I do agree that we control the soul, that's STILL Kris' soul, you don't just rip your own soul out, and still control your body separately, this isn't Kingdom Hearts. XDD
So I'm thinking that maybe both Kris, and the player by extension got their control of the body taken, by what? It's uncertain. It's easy to say Chara, but I have a feeling that the knife, clothes, and eyes could be a red herring, for all we know it was just a nightmare, maybe foreshadowing? Who knows until the rest comes out and we get our answers.
@Karami Lucipher the comic seems to infer that it is chara, due to the red eyes. But either situation is possible. Personally i think there are three controllers at work here, kris is being pulled and pushed around like a puppet by two people, a force of pure insanity, a world scourge bent on leaving nothing left, killing even themselves in the process, and you, the player, being the supposed apprentice or bane of this entity of madness that is chara. The position that kris is in is one of helplessness, chained and shackled, being pulled apart by the two entities trying to sieze control of what was once a person. The player, chara and kris all in control of one corporeal form, and all trying to kill each otger over it.
POOTISPENSER geez and gaster hasn't even made an appearance yet.
I think this is my favorite version of kris the voice actor is perfectly
0:47 i think i ship this now
Wow this is so well done, the art stiall is beautiful, and the voice acting it amazing!
Thank you, I'm very proud of this one. Be sure to check the description for the artist
My god. It's so good, i felt the chill right into my soul with those omg
Me too.i felt it too
I literally have chills down my spine from how accurate and perfect the dub is
*screeeeeeee*
We all need to scream for this amazing dub as well.
*GASP*
🐯
Looks like Kris ate too much Moss again.
No
I'm with my period
@@criticalkris9065 Idk about that.
sir the sir, that sent pure cold chills up my spine!!! everything about it scared me. the tone of Kris's voice, the demonic way he was screaming, that really big gasp, everything! the visuals are no excuse, the red glitch was so cool to add, and the glitching of the screen? pure gold editing.
basically: everything about this video is amazing and spectacular.
kris ate too much moss, he/she was trying to puke out the moss while telling it to get out
Felt like Kris triggered the *Devil Gene*
They really just want to be in the next Tekken game
@@GhostsRowboat yep
I have the comic BUT...
OH THAT DUB WAS *P E R F E C T.*
Reminds me of good anime possessions scenes. Cool the audio though so real. Like anime!
I love this comic/dub. I'm sure this is the sixth time I've watched this. My favourite part is when Kris says, "I'm in control... ...of my emotions now." Just that subtle pause. It always just... I dunno. But I love it.
Kris’ voice is great and everyone else in the comments have given the performance all the praise I’d have to say too but I have to give super mad props to the VA for Ralsei. Just WOW.
How in the world did you create happy sweet fluffy boy’s vibe incarnate? It was just perfect.
I am in love with the voice for Kris I need MORE
I feel creeped out now
God, the Pre-Chapter 2 days were wild
...Trapped in a cage. Haha. Like someone's heart in the end
It's been 4 years and Kris needs more snickers
I saw this comic when it first came out. The voices and edits that was put into this was absolutely astounding! Great Job!!!!!
When I first saw this comic I wanted a comic dub SO much
and it was SO GOOD
THANK YOU
Oh wow..... Well I would say how amazing this is but I don't even know where to start.
tHis DUB IS AMAZING!
I love it!
The voices are so gooood, i'm in love with them!!
Wow that was breathtaking I've never found a comic breathtaking. Absolutely amazing
Bruh that voice acting was spot on. And am i the only one who thinks Kris looks REALLY good there?
1:22
*HE SAID IT BOYS *BLOWS AIRHORN**
I just fell in love of Kris' voice, amazing voice acting I loved it
interesting thing to think about. ralsie seemed to be talking to kris while we were watching susie, and we were even speekng to her for directions, and our soul was going to her as we watched her fight. to defend her health as the party member.
do you think while that was happening the real kris was talking to ralsei but ralsie didnt say anything to us after because we were helping and not killing.
Yo, this is absolutely freaking incredible!!!
This is one such amazing voicing. And the glitching effects? Chef's kiss to you!
The music added fits, too!
Agh! I've been rewatching this multiple times
whoops Kris let his emotions out for a sec
HELL YEAH HELL YEA
dude the audio effects are so neat!!! i love the way you made them sound hell YEA
With that level of effort, you my good fellow definitely earned one sub today!~
I would love a continuation of this. The voice acting is perfect.
Who scared my son
who did it
Kris xD
When I saw the thumbnail (which shows one of the characters saying “Kris!”) I immediately thought of that vine where that girl says “Kris! Is that a weed? I’m calling the police!” 😂
I thought he was choking on moss lol
DUDE, KRIS' VOICE IS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!!
I have a Theory
*GET OUT*
*PLAYER*
*MAYBE 'V'*
*_NOT TODAY _**_-SATAN-_**_ CHARA_*
Holy shit I wasn't expecting this to be so good! This was amazing, plus the background music and effects made it even better!
Omg this is so awesome!
The only thing is is the that it scared the living hell out of me. ^^"
I swear a lot of these are Kris Angst but do I love 'em? YES BECAUSE I LOVE ANGST-
What the heck kris what happening him\her?
Uh kris is control by player, if you know the ending that in the game, you can see kris pull out player's soul, and kris want to take back his control so he scream ''get out of me ''
@@Melyuntonin Oh. 0.0
@@Melyuntonin true also in the end the player wins control over Kris so they act normal again.
TH3 C0RRUPT3D L3G10N 2008- No. Not Chara. The player. They’re two different people.
*HIM*
This honestly is one of my favorite dubs you did really well with the emotion in it and the editing is fantastic! 10/10 would recommend
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Get out of my head.
Thumbs up if you get the reference, I will return to my cave now.
Perfect editing, perfect voice acting, oh my goodness, a good comic DONE JUSTICE
Creepy
yee c'est creepy mais j'adore
@@BlueMiaou Me too
My god, the voice acting was just AMAZING. The editing added just the right amount of eeriness and setting up the tense atmosphere. The art obviously was LOVELY and I love Kris' design. Both of you, keep up what you're doing!
No let me explain this
Do you remember undertale?
Yes you do
Do you remember about the genocide in undertale
THAT RIGHT!!!!
In the end of the genocide ending game
You meet chara
And chara ask you to give you soul to chara
But you choose NO
So chara go another timeline deltarune
Let the player alone in the genocide route
Chara see kris is like chara
So chara want to take control kris
Do you know in the the end of chapter 1
Kris are waking
And walk like sleepwalking
So chara try to take the soul put it out
And throw is in the car (I don’t know is car or not)
Put out the soul to can take over control
And then chara now ACTION
=)
Chara isnt in deltarune this is a diffrent au aka timeline
This has the baddest grammar i can't even read it
And people say I'M bad at grammar
Amazing dub! This was so intense! I really hope the artist does more on this concept.
You're not you when you're hungry...
Get it?
*Grab a snickers*
*Yeets a Snickers™ at Kris*
Oh my goodness Kris' voice is perfect! I love how well their voice is done! Voice acting is 10/10!
°Д°''
This is amazing!!! Ralsei’s voice actor is perfect for him, and your performance was amazing as well, along with your voice fitting an older-end Kris quite nicely! Phenomenal voice acting on both parts, not to mention the interesting plot and clever word play of the comic itself. An absolute masterpiece.
Wow kris is boy!?!?!?
Red Viking Royal
Yea
yes
@Red Viking Royal
kris has no gender but in this video then yes (in anyone's headcanon)
I always picture Kris as a shaggy haired boy, but seems most of people think the same I guess.
I thought Kris was a giraffe.
The performances of Kris and [REDACTED] respectively really captured the strain and struggles between both personalities. You both did well!
Art style and story, amazing.
Voice acting, amazing!
All together...this is flipping amazing !!!
Comics like this really make me think about characters like Frisk and Kris. Are we really hurting them like this? Either way, great dub!
and the most perfect voices goes tooooooo....... Sir the Sir and his girlfriend!!
Ok, lemme tell you, I have not seen many subs and the ones that i have seen dont give me a good impression of dubs, but this right here gave me chills.
I saw the original comic before this, you dubbed this really well. Better than what I imagined it would be.
i love this comic strip uwu
people were talking about its meaning, so i thought that i would just mention that the artist actually said that they were curious as to how it could go down if Kris was trying to remove the soul earlier in the game :)
oh my god ... it's just gorgeous! .. the voice acting is just lovely, there aren't even any words .. (I love the semblance of such screams, evil or disruption)
the voice fits too damn well QwQ i mean its how his eyes. his face ITS TOO GOD DAMN AMAZING!
YES. I found and downloaded this comic recently and I was really hoping someone would end up dubbing it! x3
So glad it was you because it's amazing! ❤
I love things like this where you’re not in control like that
This is so beautiful I could cry, amazing music, dub, just amazing 👌🏽
When your brother/sister walks into your room
*_GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT GET OU-_*
That gasp tho 😵 and the "reloading" thing makes it seem a lot like the player is regaining control
oOF- I DIDNT NOTICE THIS AT FIRST BUT I LOVE HOW YOU LAYERED YOUR VOICES. I thought a single voice was altered with programming at first!
KRIS'S VOICE!!!!!!!!!!!!
*dies*
YAAAAAAAAAAAAS
so hawt XD