I’m really impressed with how accurate some inquiries of the nature of the Dark World was carried over into the _ACTUAL_ game, 3 years later. I always love seeing fan-made stuff be implemented into the official release.
I dont think it's fanmade stuff in the game, Toby already had how the story would go and it's obvious that they're just objects ever since we escaped the dark world
Lets not forget the fact that Seam's potential abilities and his casual wisdom with riddles, was so well represented in that battle he did with Kris, Susie, Ralsei, Lancer, and that other Orange version of Ralsei. Fantastic stuff. It really could be in the full game. Edit: Just realised, the part about Seam was the scene after the end of the video. There's another video that had really good voice acting for it.
i just want to point out that in toriel's house, as you probably know asriel's bed has trophies and awards but kris's bed has nothing. but when ralsei decorates your room in the dark world it has trophies and awards all over your bed and that is why ralsei is the best
Technically it's an exact copy-paste of asriels side of the bed, just flipped. I don't feel like that was ralsei trying to award Kris for being, uh, Kris, but more likely - in the case ralsei is an object belonging to Kris that represents their feelings towards their brother - it could be that object's interpretation of their feelings and projected them all into Kris' room: as if there's some sort of inferiority complex going on between Kris and Asriel, where Kris would want to be everything Asriel has ever achieved.
This comic predicted a lot of things correctly, like how Lancer would become a card in the real world. Ralsei's transformation...I wonder what it will be in the real game.
It's kind of crazy how they basically predicted most of chapter 2 two years before it even came out. Kris and Susie going to a new dark world, Susie going to Kris's house, and the fact that Kris had to retrieve all the "junk" from other classrooms to restore the Darkworld.
@@jasonz.7311 I just think it's funny all three of those things that happened in this comic happened in chapter 2, obviously that stuff was gonna happen eventually.
Random things I noticed: - Ralsei's other versions wear cloaks of different colors that represent the different human souls. Ralsei is Kindness, Eslira is Patience, Aeslir is Bravery and so on - In that ICE-E's Pizzeria, did anyone notice that it gives strange and familiar Five Nights at Freddy's vibes?
Whoever made this comic straight up predicted chapter 2 -darkners not being able to exist in other worlds -Having to gather items in the light world to bring darkners into existence -music related enemies
I had the same thought in another one of my comments I also mentioned that all his games under his bed are why there are so many video game characters the instrument guys are probably some instrument he owns and all the darkness and dust basically with space must be the desert
Hey I noticed something well multiple things: 1. Each so far has represent Asriel's life and personality (E.g Trophy Town is his competitive life and how life was an endless game) 2. The color of each Railsi's twins is representing soul colours
The dialogue is so in-character, both in the sense of the characters themselves AND the toby fox brand of humour! The sound design is on point! The voice acting is so natural! Oh man, everyone from the original artist, to the VAs, and the editors.... You all did an astounding job! Absolute mad lads. Hands down my favourite deltarune series by far!
*It's a sock. *surprisingly, it's a sock. *behold! a sock. *Is it really a sock? *It's a.... sock..? *Huh!? there's 30G in the sock. #ReferenceToUndertaleSnowPoff
Kris: Mooooooom! Toriel: Yes? Kris: Where's my Darkner World? Toriel: What? K: Where's my Darkner World? T: Whaaat? K: I said, WHERE. IS. MY. DARKNER WORLD!? T: I, uh put it away! K: Where!? T: Why do you need to know?! K: My friends are in danger! T: You, my child are in danger! K: You tell me where my Darkner World is woman! T: You're gonna go rushing off again, and I had a whole dinner planned! K: We're talking about the greater good here! T: I am your mother! I am the greatest good you'll get! K: * facepalm *
Just realized something. "Strangely, the *joker* and this card..." That means the joker card was missing from the card pack. Does it also mean that... Jevil wasn't with the rest of the pack? If so, they'll have to look for him separately. Huh.. Susie might not like that... "UGH! If you just HADN'T gone off on your OWN, this would have been SO MUCH FASTER. NOW COME WITH US OR FACE MY AXE!"
While the game is progressing a bit differently, this actually managed to predict that Deltarune has multiple Dark Worlds. I wonder how LynxGriffin feels as a result?
*Video Spoiler* Ralsei being a note or letter from Asriel is a neat idea! this comic in general was pretty interesting, wouldn't mind it continuing without bending to continuity. I hope the game has some cool details like this.
Well you cant stretch the things UT has already given.. Its just literally different comics about weird things that makes Sans more powerful after genocide or some Gaster stuff.. While Deltarune only has chapter one so you can make limitless theories and ideas
I love the idea of making a fancomic about what could happen after the games ending. An epilogue or sorts. The only good Undertale au, growthspurt, is basically that
@@OmegaChase1002 Have you read Dogs of Future Past? It's an UT comic by the same person who made Paper Trail. Also I think you should try Handplates. Just as good as PT and DOFP in my opinion, but it's not finished yet.
You know what I'm kinda surprised I've never seen? A comic where some of the characters from the Deltarune universe somehow get set to the Undertale universe (presumably through Jevil's doing). Like, could you imagine sans undertale meeting sans deltarune?
Well considering in my mind they are alternative universe parallel to each other. To my knowledge it is just Undertale without the Human vs monster war from undertale. So they probably know of each other already since sans apparently can see other timelines and universes. But yeah. They would still be the same probably.
Problem with Sans is that we don't know if he really knows something, or is he is just being.... him There is no reasonable reason for him pretending to know -you- Kris. Unless it is some form of joke.
Yeah, how the computer lab was tech themed? I need to do some research cuz i have. a theory building up and this comic is surprisingly accurate to it :D
I really hope you continue this series the story is SO amazing, there’s like 50 chapters at the moment and I would love to hear all the characters brought to life by your fantastic dubbing.
Wait Orange bravery Light blue patiance Green kidness What if asriel red and determination I mean asriel/ flowey he know save reset and load Why not I think asriel determination
33:42 so, let’s see, the joker card hmm? well, we know already that our jester friend in the cage is a joke,r, so of course, ...that’ll mean that they’ll have to get that jevil seperately from the other deck-of-card fellows.
Well, I hope you are, and I’d like to just let you know that there’s two more comic sections out right now! You should really support the creator on their tumblr where they post these!
I've seeing this again, and again and i got a teory. Every "ralsei" is a asriel emocion that he put in his notes/ diary's page, like: green ralsei was the note were asriel was worried about Kris in a kind/friend way (green because of the green soul) etc... Maybe would be 7 notes, 7 ralsei at the colors of the souls. This is my teory about this au (sorry about my english, its not my liguage, i'm still larning and its really bad for now so a hope it be understandeble 👌
10:50 - You did an EXCELLENT job of conveying Susie's emotional moment, here. Whoever you got to voice her, let her know that that's now how I imagine Susie to be voiced in my head. XD
I can believe that Yoshi is the best fighter in trophy city. Especially when they made him that OP in Smash Bros. Even though I can easily beat him with someone like Minecraft Steve or Sonic.
I like talking about SSB so ima just say I main Kirby, he’s the first one I ever learned to use but I also know how to use Mii Brawler and I’m trying to perfect Inkling and Ridley
where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where
Since the dub is very short and ended off without finishing the entire story (which is explainable) I decided to read more of the comic from the actual author since I already got too involved in it which took around 3-4 hours to finish the entire thing, and trust me on this guys, this comic broke me. If you wanna lie down in bed thinking about it for hours on end then please read it.
This is so awesome. It literally feels like this could've ended up being the game, the writing and story is so good, especially how accurate it was to chapter twos kind of dynamics in a way. Its kind of weird watching this and waiting for chapter three, there was an announcement for it earlier, then I remembered this and wanted to watch it again
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Damn i got good timing
No wonder it got in my recommended
It’s about time
This comment was made after chapter two why just why the story was explained already
I’m really impressed with how accurate some inquiries of the nature of the Dark World was carried over into the _ACTUAL_ game, 3 years later. I always love seeing fan-made stuff be implemented into the official release.
I dont think it's fanmade stuff in the game, Toby already had how the story would go and it's obvious that they're just objects ever since we escaped the dark world
@@mariotheundying that’s the most likely case. I’m just saying that I like to see happy coincidences.
Lets not forget the fact that Seam's potential abilities and his casual wisdom with riddles, was so well represented in that battle he did with Kris, Susie, Ralsei, Lancer, and that other Orange version of Ralsei.
Fantastic stuff. It really could be in the full game.
Edit: Just realised, the part about Seam was the scene after the end of the video. There's another video that had really good voice acting for it.
Is this comic completed for like the firts part,
Yeah like characters in the overworld becoming the items they represent
i just want to point out that in toriel's house, as you probably know asriel's bed has trophies and awards but kris's bed has nothing. but when ralsei decorates your room in the dark world it has trophies and awards all over your bed and that is why ralsei is the best
Technically it's an exact copy-paste of asriels side of the bed, just flipped. I don't feel like that was ralsei trying to award Kris for being, uh, Kris, but more likely - in the case ralsei is an object belonging to Kris that represents their feelings towards their brother - it could be that object's interpretation of their feelings and projected them all into Kris' room: as if there's some sort of inferiority complex going on between Kris and Asriel, where Kris would want to be everything Asriel has ever achieved.
Kris doesn't really like ralsei. According to the tea and its healing amount
@@ArtificiallyIdiotic Kris is most likely very much jealous of Asriel.
@@maxdashen noelles tea.60 hp.ralseis is 50.not much of a difference.sounds to me like Kris just doesn't know what to feel.more confused on him.
@@suriusgamingftw2289 It's probably not hate. Most likely Kris just prefers Susie the most over Ralsei and Noelle.
"How many names do you want to make by rearranging Asriel's name?"
"Yes."
Oh wow just noticed
Sirela- Aelris- Alries- the list goes on
Ralsei
Asriel backwords is Leirsa
Serial
This comic predicted a lot of things correctly, like how Lancer would become a card in the real world.
Ralsei's transformation...I wonder what it will be in the real game.
Kris eyes being red all the time too
I think it maybe be a fluffy plushie, its the most possible
I have a strong feeling its Asriel's scarf. Seeing as he is obviously a coping mechanism for Asriel and has a scarf as weapon of choice.
If Ralsei transformating, then how did he went to the library by himself
Ralsei will probably be the red horn headband that kris used to wear around everywhere when they were a kid.
"...After a strange knight won the tournament, and then refused to rule..."
Yep, That's Brawl Meta Knight
I love references :)
I actually snorted
lmaoooo
Omg yes
OH you just helped me find a reference!
It's kind of crazy how they basically predicted most of chapter 2 two years before it even came out. Kris and Susie going to a new dark world, Susie going to Kris's house, and the fact that Kris had to retrieve all the "junk" from other classrooms to restore the Darkworld.
Gaming moment
and a musical enemies too
Those were all kinda ... yunno ... not hard to guess
@@jasonz.7311 I just think it's funny all three of those things that happened in this comic happened in chapter 2, obviously that stuff was gonna happen eventually.
To clarify, I expected those particular events to be spread out throughout multiple chapters.
"...Junior Jumble"
Well, makes sense as Ralsei is an anogram of Asriel.
Ralsriel (Wait that’s a ship name, I feel violated)
Ya lol ≖‿≖
@@dylanmccoy3243 imagine if he did
*shoots self*
@Call losa2045
Ralsei
rAlsei
Asriel
@@dylanmccoy3243 Imagine if someone asked
Asriel have you been playing with yourself?
Random things I noticed:
- Ralsei's other versions wear cloaks of different colors that represent the different human souls. Ralsei is Kindness, Eslira is Patience, Aeslir is Bravery and so on
- In that ICE-E's Pizzeria, did anyone notice that it gives strange and familiar Five Nights at Freddy's vibes?
@@mylocoley3579 i know right
I was going to comment this
it was straight up based of FNaF, anamatronics dead kids, and its so easy to tell
It's due to how Burger Pants tells you about a co-worker he had that was so called "Purple Guy" in game.
we’re waiting every night to finally roam and invite
Whoever made this comic straight up predicted chapter 2
-darkners not being able to exist in other worlds
-Having to gather items in the light world to bring darkners into existence
-music related enemies
Also Lancers holes
That profile pic is terrifying
Damn shawty dat pfp is bout to make me act up
@@GaJ42 💀
@@brov3313 they were in chapter 1 tho
Kris: **breathes**
Every version of Ralsei: THIS AMAZING GUUUUY!
Chris Walter Lundy Blue ralsei :HEEEEEEEELP MEEEEEEEEE
Except Eslira-
Kris is Like Koichi: *he’s reliable.*
@@Revolution_and_society what a realible guy
lol
I love how asriel's trophy collection turned to a city
I had the same thought in another one of my comments I also mentioned that all his games under his bed are why there are so many video game characters the instrument guys are probably some instrument he owns and all the darkness and dust basically with space must be the desert
The smash bros fighter are probably amiibos.
Actually
huh that kinda actual happen
300th like
I love that they predicted deltarune's plot about there being multiple dark worlds. They straight up predicted it.
Kris get the banana
@@royaltoyal Kris Get The Banana™
That was obvious, it was necessary for the gameplay and narrative.
the stuff they really predicted are the darkners being items in the light world.
And one being in Kris' house too. Though not tied to Asriel it still nice
i just want to see the dark world of that basement laboratory with the sound of gaster
Burger pants: Hello? Poli-
Undyne: *WHOS READY TO GET ARRESTED?????!!!!!!*
*spear of justice intesifies*
Goom Mooster HAHAHAH
911, WHAT'S YOUR EMERGENCY?!
I was literally dying at that part!
I WAS LAUGHING AND FELL OFF MY BED AFTER THATZ
*In the end, it still seems to smell like socks.*
Susie: Oh come on!
* You reluctantly agree because you were kinda grossed out because of the smell...
Aeslir - Bravery
Sareli - Integrity
Ralsei - Kindness
Irales - Perserverance
Eslira - Patience
Lairse - Justice
... And I bet Asriel is Determination.
Toby:How many asriels do you want
Deltarune: y e s
Deltarune fanfics: 7
And I bet Israel is……… ummm
I like how you put the names in a way that spells Asriel downwards
Fucking Asriel
25:19
“Call the IRS”
I LOVE THIS COMIC SO MUCH.
IRS?
Yisho can't evade taxes for much longer
What’s the IRS
Rose Quartz I have to same question
Chara Dreemurr [Female]
lol looks like we’re both confused here
Hey I noticed something well multiple things:
1. Each so far has represent Asriel's life and personality (E.g Trophy Town is his competitive life and how life was an endless game)
2. The color of each Railsi's twins is representing soul colours
Can we appreciate how they totally NAILED everybody's characters
Specially Noelle with her look when kris and Susie came out of the closet lol
Ralsei is way more lost in this fic than in Chapter 2 where he seems to know everything
@@SKP23en Good point.
Everyone except berdley. sorta.
"WHOS READY TO GET ARRESTED!" Is exactly how I'd imagine undyne in a small town with nothing to do to act like.
The dialogue is so in-character, both in the sense of the characters themselves AND the toby fox brand of humour! The sound design is on point! The voice acting is so natural! Oh man, everyone from the original artist, to the VAs, and the editors.... You all did an astounding job! Absolute mad lads. Hands down my favourite deltarune series by far!
Susie: prepare for trouble!
Lancer: and make it double!
The better team rocket
That team rocket just mercy’s people
To PrOtEcT tHe WoRlD frOm DeVaStAtIoN
Team rocket yes
>> to protect the world from devastation!
>> to unite light and dark in our nation
Ironically enough, this fan comic predicted what happens to dark world characters who leave the dark world
Not to a T, but yeah!
... Somehow, Lancer hasn't solidified into a statue in this comic, but I assume it's an old one. Lol
@@takedown205productions6 minus the statue part, the turning into playing cards and other objects deal was practically spot on
@@takedown205productions6 I doubt anyone other than toby himself could even think of that
*It's a sock.
*surprisingly, it's a sock.
*behold! a sock.
*Is it really a sock?
*It's a.... sock..?
*Huh!? there's 30G in the sock.
#ReferenceToUndertaleSnowPoff
It's a - It's the sock monster
Reference to Chara in determination
Lol
@@Star_II3S it’s a……….
Imposter 🈷️
I don't wear socks...
*Well not on my feet at least.*
You are now no longer comfortable around me anymore.
@Dark knight yes
Susie: KRIS PLEASE HELP ME BRING HIM BACK!!!
Kris: yes.
Alyanna Noreen Lampitoc yes
exactly I was thinking when that part happened lmao
Lol
Y E S
*YYYYYY YYYYYY*
*YYYYYY YYYYYY*
*YYYYYY YYYYYY*
*YYYYYYYYYY*
*YYYYYYYY*
*YYYYYYYY*
*YYYYYYYY*
*YYYYYYYY*
Kris: Mooooooom!
Toriel: Yes?
Kris: Where's my Darkner World?
Toriel: What?
K: Where's my Darkner World?
T: Whaaat?
K: I said, WHERE. IS. MY. DARKNER WORLD!?
T: I, uh put it away!
K: Where!?
T: Why do you need to know?!
K: My friends are in danger!
T: You, my child are in danger!
K: You tell me where my Darkner World is woman!
T: You're gonna go rushing off again, and I had a whole dinner planned!
K: We're talking about the greater good here!
T: I am your mother! I am the greatest good you'll get!
K: * facepalm *
How does this comment not have more likes!?
@@LiveOnShadow ikr lol
XD Bruh moment
ngl the kids in this universe are overall bratty and annoying , they make such a big deal out of nothing
Same energy as where's my super suit if that's what inspired it
Just realized something.
"Strangely, the *joker* and this card..." That means the joker card was missing from the card pack. Does it also mean that... Jevil wasn't with the rest of the pack? If so, they'll have to look for him separately. Huh.. Susie might not like that...
"UGH! If you just HADN'T gone off on your OWN, this would have been SO MUCH FASTER. NOW COME WITH US OR FACE MY AXE!"
Big brain: **uses expand**
Latios & Latias Gaming actually it sounds like that jevil is with seam...
Nah. Susie just has the devil's knofe
Depending on the route they took, they might actually have him already. He turns into a piece of equipment when you defeat him.
Considering they get the devilsknife when they pacify Jevil, they already have him he just stays in his object form because *yes.*
WHY ARE THERE SO MANY REFERENCES IN THIS COMIC.................. I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!
Glad that I’m not the only one who noticed
They referenced Banjo-Kazooie with the jigsaw puzzles. Very clever.
Me has the no idea.
@@MixMasterJ1221 wait r u freakin kidding me?
Yeah there was a FNAF refrence in it too
I can 100% see yoshi being a secret boss in the switch version. It's too perfect.
Noone:
Me:
Yoshi fans:OMG!!11!!1!!
It would have to be a yoshi rip off and from what we know from anything not leaks, it could be likely if they left the game in the TV.
I really hope they don't do exclusive content again. Really takes away from the experience :/
I'm Still Confused Why Kris And Susie Don't Just Go To The Dark World At The End Of School
That would make sense.
Yea like then they won't get scolded or thing
Because they did not want to Go through here
@@eccentricego9yearsago36 ??
@@serowisetheultimatelifefro6201 they’re 100 parallel universes ahead of us all.
Nobody:
Not a soul:
Random fnaf lore: Welcome to Ice-E Pizza!
Aren't souls are visible?
Glad someone understands my story
(Not a single soul)
@@Ottomancat5256 souls can talk too unless u have a device
Ik right?! XD
deltarune paper trail: *exists* aka the fanmade sequel
toby: allowed me to redcon this comic
Alternative title: the first time toriel made us mad
I hate toriel now
yeah like- love you goat mom but put your shit together
@@godmymomissoannoyinglikeom6841 ur username goes so well with the situation
*Everybody gangsta until Kris has eyes-*
Everybody gangsta till Kris can smile-
Yeah
@@alauniyahhEverybody gangsta until Susie doesn’t attack
Everybody gangsta until Kris speak
everybody gangsta till frisk changes their face by a pixel
While the game is progressing a bit differently, this actually managed to predict that Deltarune has multiple Dark Worlds. I wonder how LynxGriffin feels as a result?
Kris: Yes. we will fix this.
also kris: mommy where did u put it
My guess: the true Kris awakens when they meet red Ralsei...
How you sure it will be red maybe its purple or yellow or pink or white OR iTs AsRiEl HiMsElF
@@eren_the_demon tafuck
I just realized they are the different colors of souls
p bonnie and springy the bunnys they’re soul colors.
@@goommooster7572 oh
*Video Spoiler*
Ralsei being a note or letter from Asriel is a neat idea! this comic in general was pretty interesting, wouldn't mind it continuing without bending to continuity. I hope the game has some cool details like this.
Yeah but what is eslira be in the real world EDIT: after watching more I see now
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Ye me loove it! Especially the ragnartale series
Yes
Yas
Springtrap and deliah when??? Pls answer me
37:08 “i DoN’t KnOw HoW tO sWiM!”
Something about the why Lancer said that absolutely killed me. XD
I think the tiny lisp
he's not wrong, either! He's a playing card, after all.
Writing this as chapter 2 has come out, this comic was surprisingly accurate in some places.
I like how Flowey’s voice actor is Lancer
It's papyrus.
@@amongsusus4226 I do believe that it’s both flowey and papyrus
He sounds like one of the animaniacs, I just can’t remember which one.
Why can't Undertale AUs be this creative?
Deltarune clearly got the better fanfic writers.
Tru
Well you cant stretch the things UT has already given.. Its just literally different comics about weird things that makes Sans more powerful after genocide or some Gaster stuff.. While Deltarune only has chapter one so you can make limitless theories and ideas
I love the idea of making a fancomic about what could happen after the games ending. An epilogue or sorts.
The only good Undertale au, growthspurt, is basically that
@@OmegaChase1002 Have you read Dogs of Future Past? It's an UT comic by the same person who made Paper Trail.
Also I think you should try Handplates. Just as good as PT and DOFP in my opinion, but it's not finished yet.
@@Violet111 i havent read dogs but i heard of it.
Wow. The creator of the comic go MT most of the idea down compared to the current chapter 2! It's nice and spot on!
Jevil : I CAN DO ANYTHING!!!!
Kris: how about a 100000D$ hmm?
Jevil: wait that's illegal
lol
Lmao
Omg yes 😂😂😂
How about tax fraud
You know what I'm kinda surprised I've never seen? A comic where some of the characters from the Deltarune universe somehow get set to the Undertale universe (presumably through Jevil's doing).
Like, could you imagine sans undertale meeting sans deltarune?
Well considering in my mind they are alternative universe parallel to each other. To my knowledge it is just Undertale without the Human vs monster war from undertale. So they probably know of each other already since sans apparently can see other timelines and universes. But yeah. They would still be the same probably.
Problem with Sans is that we don't know if he really knows something, or is he is just being.... him
There is no reasonable reason for him pretending to know -you- Kris. Unless it is some form of joke.
Snip 😂
That’s some consistency. Susie has the Jevil Joker card because she uses the Jevilsknife.
Devilsknife** not jevilsknife
Susie actually has the Ace of Spades, aka Lancer. Berdly said the Joker was missing
Don't forget it could be jevils tail.
@@irishuisman1450 jevil is running over pedestrians with spamton
So Ralesi became a junior jumble with Asriel's diary entry on the back.
*well sh-*
Wait there are 6 letters is one of them gonna be Asriel himself? Idk
Kris asks Ralsie: What do you know about Asriel?
Ralsie: uhhhhhhh
My phone:*pulls up goat add*
Me: The phones not wrong
noone: youtube ads: *perhapsen would you purchase the g o a t*
You're carrying to much goat
SPAMMINGINTON G SPAMMINTON IS WILLING TO OFFER A REAL [big shot]
I love how suprisingly accurate the main idea is to chapter 2 deltarune
Yeah, how the computer lab was tech themed? I need to do some research cuz i have. a theory building up and this comic is surprisingly accurate to it :D
Its almost like a cyberworld
“Alright, SPEARMINT JOINED THE PARTY!-“
and then lancer ran away to call other people that are the same color “spearmint”
Spearmint is a better name.
Spearmint: My name is Eslira.
YEEEES
@@Ramtomer2 indeed
Susie: You sure thats not just a dumb story you heard off the internet?
Me: You sure your not just a barney rip off character someone created?
Susie: fair enough
BARNEYED OOOOHHHH!!!!!
Let me know when you ask her, so I can stay faaaaaar away from her answer.
@@vickit9190 i was about to say that
I see so many quality comments with nice likes and I really want to like but I can't
I love how it basically predicted the first part of chapter 2
EXACTLY!
I laughed so much when Susie said “ok kris I get it, it everything smells like socks.”
By far, this is so far my favorite DeltaRune comic. Thanks for dubbing it 👍
So fun to see this after chapter 2. Because there are indeed multiple dark worlds. The rest here isn't right. But that it has that right. Is amazing
Nonbody ever:
Susie: "UGH , IT ALL JUST TASTES LIKE SOCKS!"
how-
h ow doe s sh e kno w ho w th at tas tes
@@CosmicNyan She's eaten chalk before, so...
Do you know what sucks?
Socks
She told me to stop checking but i really like how it..
Smells
Just like
S o c k s
@@Andre..Xyz1 SOOOOOOOOCKSS
I really hope you continue this series the story is SO amazing, there’s like 50 chapters at the moment and I would love to hear all the characters brought to life by your fantastic dubbing.
Wow lynxgriffin predicted that there would be more than 1 dark world, impressive.
Wait Orange bravery
Light blue patiance
Green kidness
What if asriel red and determination I mean asriel/ flowey he know save reset and load Why not I think asriel determination
There isn't a red one. If you look at the cover page, it has the colors of all the different Ralseis they'll meet.
@@Bonniethebunny yes but ralsei asriels anagram and that ones asriels anagram too so why not but it is Just theoriy a game theory
asriel must be the red one, with probs being the knight and all
@@chemolcalico6792 I think knight kris but he can be asriel to
Well we wil jus t hav to see 🙂
Eslira: with them?
(points to Chris)
Kris: bruh
For a second there I was confused, then I realized you were talking about Kris lol
@@twilight_potato im bad at spelling 😔
When I play deltarune I get shit squad.
Wh- wh- who is chris? (I know who u r talking aboutbut its just so funni)
The finale of the comic got finished in this past August. I would love if you guys dubbed the rest of it! You guys are very talented voice actors!
"Call the IRS" I died
@Arman Erfan Akhlaghi The Internal Revenue Service collects taxes
"Hello? Animal control?
*sudden realization that the BIRB boy was talking about jevil* aw shit. here we go again
o shit
JEVIL IS FREE NOW! FREE, FREE, FREE!
@Analia Diaz I AM FREE... TO TROLL, TROLL PEOPLE ONLINE!
Is anyone else revisiting this comic? This comic is freaking good I swear… and the editing makes this whole thing better.
33:42
so, let’s see,
the joker card hmm?
well, we know already that our jester friend in the cage is a joke,r, so of course, ...that’ll mean that they’ll have to get that jevil seperately from the other deck-of-card fellows.
ha ina bird cage
And the reason he did it is proply in his own words chaos chaos chaos
Kris at ice-es: *tells the story of the six dead kids in fnaf*
Me: now that I think of it when’s that crossover gon’ come
True dat!!!
i thought multiple dark worlds was gonna be unlikely, but as far as i know this is the most accurate ive seen so far
38:29
I think all us introverts can relate to how Kris feels in this situation.
Why are you
A black widow
@@dismal8294 Yes
Too accurate
Heheh look at Susie’s expression
First comment btw and are you gonna make more episodes of paper trail
Hopefully, i really look forward to it
I agree ralsie eslira alsier what's next resaile
Doesn’t it say FULL?
@@mizukiakiyama2567 well actually its not full, it has more episode in it and im looking forward to it
Well, I hope you are, and I’d like to just let you know that there’s two more comic sections out right now! You should really support the creator on their tumblr where they post these!
i love the fact that this story could be somehow cannon, except for some small details
Edit: Can't wait for the creator to make israel a character
Remember
I can bite when someone ship's me
And make me girl
I think he did
Are you a boy?
Dont worry I wont do that so you dont have to bite me.
You can also use DA GUN
@@around441pipissharingaytac4 where do you supposed they would get the right to own a gun?
I've seeing this again, and again and i got a teory. Every "ralsei" is a asriel emocion that he put in his notes/ diary's page, like: green ralsei was the note were asriel was worried about Kris in a kind/friend way (green because of the green soul) etc... Maybe would be 7 notes, 7 ralsei at the colors of the souls.
This is my teory about this au (sorry about my english, its not my liguage, i'm still larning and its really bad for now so a hope it be understandeble 👌
Good theory and don't worry there are a few misspellings but its only stuff like single letters in a few words
I think I make more grammar mistakes than them irl
You're smart
You have a few misspellings, but your grammar is actually pretty good! Proud of you dude!
For a beginner in English,you're doing very well!
With the newest developments in the game, certainly give way to the idea of how the fountains were made.
my mind when I see the inside of the pizzaria: *_f n a f_*
New fnaf au unlocked: five nights at ( insert name of pizzeria here i forget what it was called)
Same 😂
Same
Only *f n a f*
Five Nights at Deltarune's Pizzeria :)
It's our new restaurants, and there is only one dead child in there xD
My favourite part is 18:03
No one lives here! Only the sound of Wind WOOOOOOO!
Despite the release of Chapter 2, this is forever the alternative Chapter 2 in my heart
10:50 - You did an EXCELLENT job of conveying Susie's emotional moment, here. Whoever you got to voice her, let her know that that's now how I imagine Susie to be voiced in my head. XD
I can believe that Yoshi is the best fighter in trophy city. Especially when they made him that OP in Smash Bros.
Even though I can easily beat him with someone like Minecraft Steve or Sonic.
Yoshi isn't even very good. Hes like B tier
Since i see no one saying anything about it.
One of the ACT Options was to call the IRS On yoshi.
Cause he never paid his taxes.
I like talking about SSB so ima just say
I main Kirby, he’s the first one I ever learned to use but I also know how to use Mii Brawler and I’m trying to perfect Inkling and Ridley
*Proceeds to spam Nair*
That was a good prediction for how stuff turns into before Chapter 2
35:25
me : *I wOnDeR wHeRe ThAt ReFeRenCe CoMe FrOm??????????*
Fredda Playz fIvE NigHtS aT FrEEdYS
So many references to video games in here lol
28:44
Fnaf... AH-
Scott would be proud
I love the Nintendo references, the FNAF references, the W.D Gaster references... Etc.
The amount of times I've heard Ralsei's voice is incomprehensible. But THIS Ralsei's voice is truly murdering me with cuteness
“A whole world of light!”
*Smash Bros. Intensifies*
P O Y O
Love it all! Your voice actors are awesome! If I ever do an undertale comic or animation I so want you guys to dub it!
This would be so interesting to be a Chapter 3 concept!
“FULL”
Vade: *Im about to ruin this man’s whole career*
Vade: Here’s a new part of the comic!
where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where
lynxgriffin.tumblr.com/post/186840277058/but-didnt-completely-not-make-sense-either
Yes.
@@awesomemantroll1088 sweet 😊
Eekkkk I love your works keep going Pls dont quit UA-cam 😢
When kris asked ralsei about asriel, I was expecting ralsei to say, “oh please kris. Don’t be so silly.
*i am him*”
I just remembered that Susie is a girl because I automatically gave them a “goth boy” voice like a lot of people did.
God dayum stereotypes.
"A Search for missing comrades"
WHile in the real world the Important journey is going to the police station.
Since the dub is very short and ended off without finishing the entire story (which is explainable) I decided to read more of the comic from the actual author since I already got too involved in it which took around 3-4 hours to finish the entire thing, and trust me on this guys, this comic broke me. If you wanna lie down in bed thinking about it for hours on end then please read it.
Is it free? Where can I read it
@TheWildZorua check the description there's a link to what I'm guessing is the first tumblr post/comic strip
Five nights at Ice-e”s pizzeria
Oh Jeeze this is from two years ago yet it’s so close to some concepts in chapter two, with the fountains and lancer turning back into cards.
I love how they reenacted the unused susie sprite of her banging on the wall
25:19 “Call the IRS” I see what they did there.
Damocles _ what?
Matthew Dionisio search up “ Yoshi commits tax fraud” on UA-cam.
Damocles_ Is that a understanding of the reference IM CALLING THE IRS
*calls IRS*
IRS:IRS what's your emergency
In fortune street it was revealed that Yoshi legitimately committed tax fraud.
32:12
"Left early" - The one who always drives kris late to class.
Susie: Don't hurt me all of you. you love me Don't hurt me because my name is barney reference to ??? Smash Bits
I heard in a book once that “Captain hook can kick Barney’s purple butt”
Susie: TRY IT 👿
Susie be like "IM NOT BARNEY
Yoshi is a threat
Isabelle joined the chat
Ok
**calls the irs** yoshi is here, yeah the yoshi that does tax evasion
This is so awesome. It literally feels like this could've ended up being the game, the writing and story is so good, especially how accurate it was to chapter twos kind of dynamics in a way. Its kind of weird watching this and waiting for chapter three, there was an announcement for it earlier, then I remembered this and wanted to watch it again
i just realized that the ralseis are the different soul types