Biggest Mistakes New Fantasy Authors Make...Terrible Writing Advice

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  • Опубліковано 22 тра 2024
  • #authortube #booktube #literature #writingadvice #comedy #parody
    Fantasy is one of the greatest genres for a writer to tackle, as it helps us escape from the disaster that is our personal lives. However, if you want to succeed as a fantasy writer, there are a lot of mistakes you need to avoid.
    From lore dumps to overreliance on the heroes journey to confessing to cuckolding your business partner, there's a lot of things you need to be aware of as a new writer. I hope my advice can help you navigate these obstacles so you won't be forced to work with a publisher who pays you in Apple gift cards.
    00:00 - Introduction
    00:54 - Title Sequence
    01:06 - Product Placement
    01:51 - Common Mistakes
    02:08 - 1: Info Dumps
    03:20 - 2: Hero's Journey
    04:18 - 3: Inconsistent Magic System
    05:07 - 4: Shitty Names
    05:52 - 5: Thinly-Veiled Confession
    06:40 - Outro
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  • @zekethefreakmashingupgeek
    @zekethefreakmashingupgeek Місяць тому +4

    This video had me laughing out loud often. Not many UA-cam videos do that to me intentionally. Thank you for that.

    • @DEpublishing
      @DEpublishing  Місяць тому +1

      Thank you for the kind words, @zekethefreakmashingupgeek. Honestly, it means a lot. (Though it does make me feel about guilty about constantly leaving negative, hateful comments on almost every single video I watch on UA-cam.)

  • @myboatforacar
    @myboatforacar Місяць тому +2

    Wait... are you... THAT John Lazarus?

    • @DEpublishing
      @DEpublishing  Місяць тому +9

      The serial killer who had sex with all those dead bodies? No, that's not me, though I think he might be a distant cousin. Thanks for watching, @myboatforacar.

  • @judycyg6912
    @judycyg6912 Місяць тому

    Laugh out loud funny as it informs. Well done!

    • @DEpublishing
      @DEpublishing  26 днів тому

      Thanks for the kind words, @judycyg6912.

  • @JeetKunDrawYT
    @JeetKunDrawYT Місяць тому

    I'm working on doing my lore/worldbuilding exposition only when it matter to a character
    e.g. I make exposition about how humans subjugate them other fantasy species by having an elf use it to convince bounty hunters that her bounty is basically just racism, and not because she actually did anything wrong

  • @dusktheowlgryphon
    @dusktheowlgryphon Місяць тому +1

    My fantasy story Entropy is basically a cosmic/psychological/eldritch horror story tied with M theory and various fantasy and horror elements. I'm a big fan of horror and it shows.

    • @JeetKunDrawYT
      @JeetKunDrawYT Місяць тому

      hey, have you mentioned entropy at TimeTinkerer's?

    • @dusktheowlgryphon
      @dusktheowlgryphon Місяць тому

      @@JeetKunDrawYT I don't remember that

    • @JeetKunDrawYT
      @JeetKunDrawYT Місяць тому

      @@dusktheowlgryphon what about localscript man💀

    • @dusktheowlgryphon
      @dusktheowlgryphon Місяць тому

      Never heard of that

    • @JeetKunDrawYT
      @JeetKunDrawYT Місяць тому

      @@dusktheowlgryphon dang
      but I'm sure I've read about entropy in a comment somewhere

  • @angreagach
    @angreagach Місяць тому

    "Tarraing mo liathróidí" means "pull my balls" in Irish, as if you didn't know. (The kind I think you mean are "magairlí," not "liathróidí." "My balls" would be "mo mhagairlí," since the beginnings as well as the endings of Irish words are often subject to change.)

    • @DEpublishing
      @DEpublishing  Місяць тому +1

      The real comment's always in the comments. Learn something new every day. At least now I won't make a fool of myself the next time I'm with an Irish prostitute. Thanks for watching, @angreagach.

  • @futurestoryteller
    @futurestoryteller 24 дні тому

    You forgot "having a female protagonist who is as boring and overpowered as a typical male protagonist"