+The Pony Place I can't believe I'm saying this, but I want Starlight to remove their Cutie Marks and be trapped in that cottage where the Mane Six were trapped.
might not be as bad as u. think. Vinyl would want to take her time. One minute would probably leave them with a few minor lacerations where it would hurt most to vinyls knowledge. Knowing miss scratch I would predict it would be about half an hour in before fatal or life changing wounds such as the removal of non life supportive extremities (ears, hoves, noses, ect.) to be delt. The mothers horn would be broken although i suppose both unicorns would have to be disabled and separated from their magic for any of this to occur in the first place. Death from shock or blood loss should occur within the hour. This is a dark reply but the parents deserve it.
I always hated any kind of abuse or beating. My parents left me free to roam the internet quite a lot and I ended up learning about all sorts of real stories like this and I formed my heavily one sided opinion on discipline. The worst part is that there are people that actually do beat their children to a point where they think its normal. As far as the reading goes, well done. Not many stories get me to cry, even fewer readings.
If I ever met an abusing parent or person and they tried anything on me I swear I would rip their head off their shoulders and show it to the people that he/she had formerly abused
I was abused (physically and emotionally) by my babysitter for five years. I tried to reach out to close family members to get help, but they never believed me. They always thought I just "missed my mother".
I personally was beat and abused a lot as a child and the thing that hurt worse is the fact that my mother doesn't remember any of my childhood. she doesn't remember any of the abuse. I have to live with the memory and I have to live with the fact that no matter what I do or what I say she will never apologize.... and it eats at me...
Oh GOD I feel so sorry for Octavia, my heart is literally in pieces right now, you play her part so well. I'd be willing to say this is the best reading you've done so far, I'm hyped for part 3 ^_^.
Oh god, the mother! You have that character so perfect. The fear and the hatred Octavia feels towards her come across so powerfully, I feel it too and I love it. When the door opened at the end and Octavia was denied her rightful retribution I cried out loud at the injustice. This story has shot right to the top of my all time favourites. Gonna go listen to part 3 right now... I have a feeling I'm gonna be a crying mess before the end.
I don't think I've ever heard of a villain more detestable than Octavia's mother. She deserves any and all misfortunes that could ever be visited on a pony, before a slow and tortuous end. Everything was excellently well read. I eagerly look forward to hearing part three. Now I just have to decide whether to wait until tomorrow, or stay up another hour till 6:00 AM to listen to it.
For all those who are desperate to keep Octi in their mind 'straight'.... There's a way to still enjoy this piece, and keep that cannon. Octavia has been Tramatized all her life, and had never felt love. I have a feeling that it doesn't matter who it was who showed her kindness or love: Mare, Stalion, Blob Monster... She would have felt love back. It's only natural to feel that sort of desperation for romance after all Octavia had been through. So..... Cool your jets. Don't get all 'triggered'. It makes perfect sense, regardless of how Octavia truly swings.
Vipex 441 I don't see why it would change the name of the book series. If anything if you needed to change it wouldn't it be better to go with Goosepimples?
Alpha121198 I see horsebumps more fitting then goosepimples or the original series. Plus it would just seem right to make it a pony pun then just change the wording
The fact that they don't see children as anything but a tool? Yeah I wouldn't trust them with any kids. I mean only reason he wasn't willing to abort her daughter out of spite. Not because the mom was raped, not because she had second guesses, not because her health was oln the line. SPITE! just... What the hell?! I'm pro-choice an all but damn! That's just cold. They performed a ritual of dark magic to make her a protege. They bribe people to turn a blind eye. Hell her mom thoroughly ENJOYS torturing her! Her dad only keeps her alive so he can prove his father wrong about his wife/her mom.
He may not have been as horrible as her mother, but he did order his servants to beat her and it's clear that while her mother was more into physical abuse, he was very verbally abusive.
Listening to this for the first time in 7 years. This fanfic reading inspired me all those years ago as a kid. Now it is a very fond memory and I occasionally come back to to listen💕 thank you.
Terrenc1542 Mom Death: 1 millimeter cuts on her neck in length and depth everyday until she dies Dad's death: heavy beatings from Octavia and Vinyl until he does a painful death
As someone who was in a very similar situation this story makes me feel better because it makes me feel like stories like mine, like ours, will never be forgotten and in a way that’s how we win because we prove that despite these horrible sad stories we can still keep going, maybe that’s how we know we are strong so while I have a long way to go, I am beginning to love myself and I have you all to thank for that especially you scribbler, because when I wasn’t ready to read my story I got to listen to others So thank you
I find it good practice to avoid dark and edgy narrative as much as possible but these things are so bloody well produced, they sound more like a radioplay than a dramatic reading. Tip of the hat, Scribbler and gang :)
This is an excellent audio reading and I just loved when Octavia went berserk on her mother and that insane voice of hers. Ooh, let it begin, let it begin, LET IT BEGIN!!! LOL! >=3
How were Octavia's parents able to get away with all this abuse for so many years? Shouldn't have "somepony" witnessed and reported it directly to the Princess?
As Octysays herself, her Dad is friends with half the police force andshe's been home schooled so no chance there either. Come off it she's 18 and they are still controlling her.
Scribbler, this is simply put, one of the best fanfic readings I've ever heard! I'm usually not much for dark stories, but there's something oddly uplifting in Octavia and her determination to fight against such terrible circumstances. Your performances are absolutely brilliant, indeed the whole cast has done a spectacular job! Thanks for a darned good tale. I'm eager for the confrontations and revelations of Act III :-)
Dear scribbler, I don't know if you're going to read this? But I just like to say thank you if it wasn't for your fanfic readings I would never know about the fanfiction side of the fandom, And I read so many stories that will always stay with me Us into so many readings to have literally made me cry and laugh, I'll cut this short and just say thank you for being the one who showed me so many great stories that have really touched me deeply be a piece thank you.
Does the bitter and cruelly, often physically, abusive mother remind anyone else of "Mommy Dearest" with both parents giving an apt representation of Rosine's parents from Berserk? I see where this crappy parenting will lead.
This is your best work yet Oba. Living in a post cupcake world, the brony fandom as come to expect these type of stories. And one about Octavia is very unique and I'm glad you took up this project. Good luck with Heroic Tale and No Place Like home.
Octavia and Vinyl had sex, and now they are in love!!!! I really love this fiction and I love your reading of it. If I could sum it up in one word it would be INTENSE
Jeeze I haven't even finished this yet but I seriously hope this is building up to her parents being gruesomely murdered and Octi going to an abuse shelter or live with Vynle.
@@dukerabbit13 I hadn't even thought of this series in a long time. I don't like grim dark stories. I like the romantic ones or the funny ones. Not so much the deprresing ones.
My parents are just like Octavia’s in this comic. Expect, they want me to get into sports and shooting. But the other things I want to do, just annoy them. I want to become a artist. A artist in music, writing, and drawing. For the sports and shooting thing. I’ve become pretty good at basketball, dodgeball, volleyball, tennis, football, and karate. They’ve also pushed me to do weightlifting, track, and a strict workout regime. And for shooting, I keep ending the day with a few bullseyes, if not really close. I’ve also kinda learned to take apart, and reassemble some of the guns to. I just hate how loud the noise is.
Archery is much quieter then gun shooting, though it's a little harder to get used to, for example, dry fire, or drawing and releasing a bow string without an arrow in place is very damaging to the bow, also, the best technique to shoot is to draw the bow string back until your hand lines up with your ear, and when you release, you hold the string, not the arrow, hook your pointer finger and middle finger on the string, pull back, unhook your fingers, and and release the arrow. It's not for everyone, but I love the skill.
god this fiction is great and I love how the background music keeps shifting it is like you hear what Octavia hears now I am not one fore excessive blood and gore but a lot of us can agree that that "mother" deserves the cupcake treatment
Vinyl and Octavia were a few of my favorite Ponyville characters as I was growing up I loved her Octavia looked and how she performed music and vinyl her she is Carefree and with the Beats she always made me happy putting them together always create a special spark in my step nowadays I love to sing and I love the piano but I can't get very close to one I never get to I think Octavia got her cutie mark by hearing those beads or seeing something up in the basement but all I know I think it was maybe something scary
Very cool job.... you are all doing so good /) this is Creepy and unnerving fic... poor Octavia... her mom and dad are so evil... may Luna sand Octavia's mom to the sun and Celestia sand Octavia's dad to the moon for 1000+ years!! for all who help Octavia's mom and dad do this to her... discord have fun }:3
good lord! that is creepy as all hell.... with the last episode i sort of expected this much... still though... holy crap! i am just... completely gitty right now... just wanna hear the next episode right now!... sadly though... that will have to wait for next week...
wow. harsh life for octavia. why doesn't she just run away? Her parents wouldn't really give a shit. though, i suppose they'd just force her back, since she's their last chance at fame, since they're carriers have flopped.
Zoa Penly One; I was wondering. That's why I said it. Sorry if I mis-read your comment, but it came off as rude to me. Two; thanks, though I do know how to spell it now. Keep in mind, this was 2 months ago. I had just gotten back into MLP.
im really thankfull that you do such fanfictions and i just want to say that you really did an awesome job this fanfiction helps me alot to think about thinks and it also inspiert me for a few drawings of mine i really love your work and also the work of the musik i always was to shy to write my opinon but i really want to say how much i like your work ^^
whoa, i didn't realize this was part two. i already listened to part one and wanted to give my comment, but now i see this is part two i can't wait to listen to it. that was fast.
This just shows how powerfull this story is.. i just couldnt stop screaming 'KILL THAT FUCKING MONSTER!!!!' at the end there... ohh how i yearn to know how Octavia's parents died!
If she was here then the story wouldent be like it is. Im sure she would be really helpfull and the authors dont want it because it wouldent be fun this way .
*Warning this comment contains SPOILERS of this chapter* Omg this is so good, is it bad that i laughed when she was beating up her mother? On another note you have the best Octavia&Vinyl voice i have seen and i love listening to your fics. Keep up the spectacular readings!
Oh thank goodness vinyl rules! Oh Octavia.... That was the most romantic thing I have ever listened to in a fanfiction!!! :D aaaaawwwww O.O No!!! O.O YEAH!!!!! Kick her butt!!!! :O Cliffhanger!!!! Gosh I hope they just disown her.... I hope Vinyl is ok!!! Please tell me something else nive like that romance scene!!! PLEASE!!!! Ok I wont hold my breath but omg that was so good!!!!!
I can't remember if I've ever commented on one of your readings, I've listened to almost all of them. but I just want to say, this is a great reading. I have complaints, but not a one is directed to this reading. also best of luck on your first convention... It's going to be a bit... hectic...
My god Scribbler best 2 act one and two parter of a fanfiction balled fic story ive heard in a very long time even better than another huge giant fanfic i remember you doing before and i forgot the name of that fanfic you read but i know it was last year and it had something to do with a pony boss discrimination on goats living in ponyville and you doing a voice over for this secretary girl mare and this colt guy wanting to go on an adventure to finding a golden egg and going on a quest to go on amazing faraway journeys after they find that golden egg and 3 encrusted diamond jewels from somewhere and i think the golden egg grants them 3 wished Ugh damn it i wish i remember what story fan fic the name of that one was!it was so damn awesome scribbler!=Dbut yeah you probably know which one im talking about and i think you were going to do like a 6 video seperated act segment parts of that story too but you never got time to get around to continue that story fanfic=\hope you nring that back one day girl.Other than that i did hear the 1st part of this story and OMG damn scribbler i know ive heard and read other ver evil cruel dark emotional fanfics before but this one takes the cake lol.(I know theres other bloody gorey violent fanfics like Cupcakes, Sweetapple masscre, The Rainbow Factory,this one cropfic tourture one i read about a sexual relationship between dash and scootalo and another super dark fic comic dubs from this very crazy deranged but funny channel from mindlessgonzo called Little Miss Rarity)but this fanfic your reading is a lot less darker and not as violent and as dark and emotionally as crazy as those 6 that i mentioned .Now the ones i mention those ones you gotta have a strong stomach to listen how much crazy shock valuel and gross out themes those fan fiction mlp fim brony community stories have in those insane fanfics.I love how this story's coming so far Scribbler and im definitly going to like share and do a very awesome video fanfiction review vlog discussion video on my channel so i can let more people learn more about your amazing awesome epic hardcore badass fanfic talent reading like this vlog you gain moresubscribers That way k .Keep up the amazing beautiful master piece of work your doing honey and have an awesome fun time at that Buckcon convention ok later!
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I burst into tears when Octavia cried about her pain
glad to know i wasnt the only one....
Not alone at all!
PhantomDJ 7 me too
Unfortunately, it’ll take more for me to release all my bottled up emotions
Same. Part three scared me outta my wits though. Still good story telling
Octavia's parents deserve Discord's full unleashed wrath
I agree
+Rofloflcopta why are you being so generous
They deserve to live in the wasteland starlight glimmer saw (cutie remark)
They need to be forever penetrated by Molestia's horn.
+The Pony Place I can't believe I'm saying this, but I want Starlight to remove their Cutie Marks and be trapped in that cottage where the Mane Six were trapped.
Lock Vinyl in a small room with Octavia's parents for one minute. I guarantee the results will be far from pretty.
+Sapphire Streak lol
If you're talking about the death of Octavia's parents, I disagree. That would be absolutely beautiful >:D
Venus De Milo bass connon not wub cannon
Journey Cat it will be amazing
might not be as bad as u. think. Vinyl would want to take her time. One minute would probably leave them with a few minor lacerations where it would hurt most to vinyls knowledge. Knowing miss scratch I would predict it would be about half an hour in before fatal or life changing wounds such as the removal of non life supportive extremities (ears, hoves, noses, ect.) to be delt. The mothers horn would be broken although i suppose both unicorns would have to be disabled and separated from their magic for any of this to occur in the first place. Death from shock or blood loss should occur within the hour.
This is a dark reply but the parents deserve it.
I always hated any kind of abuse or beating. My parents left me free to roam the internet quite a lot and I ended up learning about all sorts of real stories like this and I formed my heavily one sided opinion on discipline. The worst part is that there are people that actually do beat their children to a point where they think its normal.
As far as the reading goes, well done. Not many stories get me to cry, even fewer readings.
I got abused (sexily) loads of times I had to call the police know I live in calfonia and my dad is in prison
If I ever met an abusing parent or person and they tried anything on me I swear I would rip their head off their shoulders and show it to the people that he/she had formerly abused
I was abused (physically and emotionally) by my babysitter for five years. I tried to reach out to close family members to get help, but they never believed me. They always thought I just "missed my mother".
This is terrifying to me. How could the Ponies of Equestria be vulnerable to the same unspeakable evils that Humans are capable of?
I personally was beat and abused a lot as a child and the thing that hurt worse is the fact that my mother doesn't remember any of my childhood. she doesn't remember any of the abuse. I have to live with the memory and I have to live with the fact that no matter what I do or what I say she will never apologize.... and it eats at me...
I am literally shaking in anger at her mother, but that just makes this story all the better, and her eventual death even sweeter
I must agree
I know rigt I fucking hate her dad too there like me parents
It always bothers me how cruel these comments can be. I know they're fictional characters and have done terrible things but still.
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@@Alpha121198 that’s a little dramatic
it's weird to imagine ponies cursing.
XD Ikr
Oh GOD I feel so sorry for Octavia, my heart is literally in pieces right now, you play her part so well. I'd be willing to say this is the best reading you've done so far, I'm hyped for part 3 ^_^.
I had to stop for a moment after 41:45 because I had to laugh about "The Sparkle Zone"
Finally, she stands up to her mom. Then her dad comes in.🙁
Journi Jones Ikr
.....FUCK!!!
Oh god, the mother! You have that character so perfect. The fear and the hatred Octavia feels towards her come across so powerfully, I feel it too and I love it. When the door opened at the end and Octavia was denied her rightful retribution I cried out loud at the injustice. This story has shot right to the top of my all time favourites. Gonna go listen to part 3 right now... I have a feeling I'm gonna be a crying mess before the end.
I threw a pillow across the room.
Then, I screamed in frustration.
I don't think I've ever heard of a villain more detestable than Octavia's mother. She deserves any and all misfortunes that could ever be visited on a pony, before a slow and tortuous end.
Everything was excellently well read. I eagerly look forward to hearing part three. Now I just have to decide whether to wait until tomorrow, or stay up another hour till 6:00 AM to listen to it.
"Mother takes her anger at fathers small manhood out on me" THAT RIGHT THERE WAS PRICELESS!! THAT BURN!!! DEAR CELESTIEA THAT WAS FUNNY!!
For all those who are desperate to keep Octi in their mind 'straight'.... There's a way to still enjoy this piece, and keep that cannon.
Octavia has been Tramatized all her life, and had never felt love. I have a feeling that it doesn't matter who it was who showed her kindness or love: Mare, Stalion, Blob Monster... She would have felt love back. It's only natural to feel that sort of desperation for romance after all Octavia had been through.
So..... Cool your jets. Don't get all 'triggered'. It makes perfect sense, regardless of how Octavia truly swings.
I THOUGHT THE SAME THING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All those homophobes. They should be sorry.
*Stallion
Preach it girl preach.
Feelings are not gender specific. It can be and not directed by a gender. I believe everyone has the right to feel however they want.
Was that the Avengers soundtrack during the sex scene?
It feels so wrong...and so right...
CellDevises when
😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
LMAOO
Bruh-
When, I think it wasnt
I love this trilogy very much. I would love to see it animated.
R.L Stallion? lemme guess, he wrote Horsebumps (R.L Stien in Goosebumps)
Vipex 441 I don't see why it would change the name of the book series. If anything if you needed to change it wouldn't it be better to go with Goosepimples?
Alpha121198 I see horsebumps more fitting then goosepimples or the original series. Plus it would just seem right to make it a pony pun then just change the wording
also copyright would probably take advantage of the pun
Why can't her parents just love for who she is !? You know, give her a push but treat her like there little girl.
+jwilk123 yes
Because there jerks
The fact that they don't see children as anything but a tool? Yeah I wouldn't trust them with any kids. I mean only reason he wasn't willing to abort her daughter out of spite. Not because the mom was raped, not because she had second guesses, not because her health was oln the line. SPITE! just... What the hell?! I'm pro-choice an all but damn! That's just cold. They performed a ritual of dark magic to make her a protege. They bribe people to turn a blind eye. Hell her mom thoroughly ENJOYS torturing her! Her dad only keeps her alive so he can prove his father wrong about his wife/her mom.
@@iceluvndiva21 I couldn't agree more!
Even if your not directly listening you can feel the emotion coming off the reading. Well done
When I heard the first part, I actually thought the father was the nice one since it sounded like he never beat Octavia. But never mind.
Life is full of disappointments, Andrew.
He may not have been as horrible as her mother, but he did order his servants to beat her and it's clear that while her mother was more into physical abuse, he was very verbally abusive.
Listening to this for the first time in 7 years. This fanfic reading inspired me all those years ago as a kid. Now it is a very fond memory and I occasionally come back to to listen💕 thank you.
insert death thought to parents here
Terrenc1542 boiled in oil and lit on 🔥😈😈
forced to dance on hot coals with metal shoes on for enternity
A 80 k walk on spikes and sand paper
Terrenc1542
Mom Death: 1 millimeter cuts on her neck in length and depth everyday until she dies
Dad's death: heavy beatings from Octavia and Vinyl until he does a painful death
All the candymare deaths in one.
Octavia X Vinyl..... I SHIP IT
SHIP IT LIKE FEDEX SHIP IT!!!!!!!!!
Same
As someone who was in a very similar situation this story makes me feel better because it makes me feel like stories like mine, like ours, will never be forgotten and in a way that’s how we win because we prove that despite these horrible sad stories we can still keep going, maybe that’s how we know we are strong so while I have a long way to go, I am beginning to love myself and I have you all to thank for that especially you scribbler, because when I wasn’t ready to read my story I got to listen to others
So thank you
Are you doing better now, since it's been 3 yrs?
I find it good practice to avoid dark and edgy narrative as much as possible but these things are so bloody well produced, they sound more like a radioplay than a dramatic reading.
Tip of the hat, Scribbler and gang :)
Your accent matches perfectly with Octavia
This is an excellent audio reading and I just loved when Octavia went berserk on her mother and that insane voice of hers. Ooh, let it begin, let it begin, LET IT BEGIN!!! LOL! >=3
How were Octavia's parents able to get away with all this abuse for so many years? Shouldn't have "somepony" witnessed and reported it directly to the Princess?
+ktm0629 IKR!! i get that her father was like friends with like half the athoradys but still
No idea!
As Octysays herself, her Dad is friends with half the police force andshe's been home schooled so no chance there either. Come off it she's 18 and they are still controlling her.
Scribbler, this is simply put, one of the best fanfic readings I've ever heard! I'm usually not much for dark stories, but there's something oddly uplifting in Octavia and her determination to fight against such terrible circumstances. Your performances are absolutely brilliant, indeed the whole cast has done a spectacular job! Thanks for a darned good tale. I'm eager for the confrontations and revelations of Act III :-)
I was right. This story is like something out of a horror movie or novel. A Stephan King-like horror novel.
Yes. YEs. YES. OCTAVIA + VINYL = YES.
#shiping much
yep that is one of the ships i LOVE
I've always shiped them they are amazing together
Savannah Barbour
YES!
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Dear scribbler,
I don't know if you're going to read this?
But I just like to say thank you if it wasn't for your fanfic readings I would never know about the fanfiction side of the fandom,
And I read so many stories that will always stay with me
Us into so many readings to have literally made me cry and laugh,
I'll cut this short and just say thank you for being the one who showed me so many great stories that have really touched me deeply be a piece thank you.
Dang it!!!! I was looking forward to the revenge part!!!!! Darn father. T.T
Does the bitter and cruelly, often physically, abusive mother remind anyone else of "Mommy Dearest" with both parents giving an apt representation of Rosine's parents from Berserk? I see where this crappy parenting will lead.
When you said Mommy Dearest I heard Mommy Mearest
This is your best work yet Oba. Living in a post cupcake world, the brony fandom as come to expect these type of stories. And one about Octavia is very unique and I'm glad you took up this project. Good luck with Heroic Tale and No Place Like home.
You have no idea how psyched i am to see this uploaded!
this whole story makes my skin crawl
"I thought the number seven could foreshadow my good fortune." Number ex machina!
amazing fic reading :) The scean with vinal and Octavia made me so happy :). I wish that moment could last forever for Octavia.
Still a better love story than twilight I ship it
Ezza&Jezza me to
Yep. It is a better love story than twilight.
My friend everything is a better love story than Twilight XD
*embarrassment intensifies*
Octavia and Vinyl had sex, and now they are in love!!!! I really love this fiction and I love your reading of it. If I could sum it up in one word it would be INTENSE
R.L Stallion, R.L Stine now that's funny!!
zgirl 85 ha
another badass part of this story, the mother got what was long overdue
I F*@KING LOVE THIS!!
with you buddy
I just noticed the second voice actor sounds like every man in skyrim
Okay, part one was darn unsettling. You do that very well. Yay more Scribbler! *steels self for more unsettling things*
Ye gods *shiver* I need to listen to something happy.... *shiver*
"I heard that griffins did that to pegasi prisoners of war".
Ah, so we want to be a war criminal, do we?
Jeeze I haven't even finished this yet but I seriously hope this is building up to her parents being gruesomely murdered and Octi going to an abuse shelter or live with Vynle.
6 years later, but the story literally began with exactly that
@@dukerabbit13 I hadn't even thought of this series in a long time. I don't like grim dark stories. I like the romantic ones or the funny ones. Not so much the deprresing ones.
My parents are just like Octavia’s in this comic. Expect, they want me to get into sports and shooting. But the other things I want to do, just annoy them. I want to become a artist. A artist in music, writing, and drawing.
For the sports and shooting thing. I’ve become pretty good at basketball, dodgeball, volleyball, tennis, football, and karate. They’ve also pushed me to do weightlifting, track, and a strict workout regime.
And for shooting, I keep ending the day with a few bullseyes, if not really close. I’ve also kinda learned to take apart, and reassemble some of the guns to. I just hate how loud the noise is.
Archery is much quieter then gun shooting, though it's a little harder to get used to, for example, dry fire, or drawing and releasing a bow string without an arrow in place is very damaging to the bow, also, the best technique to shoot is to draw the bow string back until your hand lines up with your ear, and when you release, you hold the string, not the arrow, hook your pointer finger and middle finger on the string, pull back, unhook your fingers, and and release the arrow. It's not for everyone, but I love the skill.
*shoves face full of ice cream,cookies and soda when they arrived to the apartment and had a crying session
god this fiction is great and I love how the background music keeps shifting it is like you hear what Octavia hears now I am not one fore excessive blood and gore but a lot of us can agree that that "mother" deserves the cupcake treatment
This was the most beautifully written and presented fiction I have ever heard. I was on the edge of crying the entire time.
Where is act one?
Search "a puppet to her fame act one"
Aww Octavia's voice acting is straight on! Seriously her crying is so realistic : o
i feel bad for octavia
Me too
Vinyl and Octavia were a few of my favorite Ponyville characters as I was growing up I loved her Octavia looked and how she performed music and vinyl her she is Carefree and with the Beats she always made me happy putting them together always create a special spark in my step nowadays I love to sing and I love the piano but I can't get very close to one I never get to I think Octavia got her cutie mark by hearing those beads or seeing something up in the basement but all I know I think it was maybe something scary
Brilliant as always, can't wait for Act III.
I love this fic!! the atmosphere is amazing and your reading just makes more intense.
I love long fanfic readings especially ones like this and i loved this one,
Thanks :)
Ok, was anybody rejoicing when Octavia was about to strangel her mother??
This is the most painful story I've ever listed to in my life!
Very cool job.... you are all doing so good /)
this is Creepy and unnerving fic... poor Octavia... her mom and dad are so evil... may Luna sand Octavia's mom to the sun and Celestia sand Octavia's dad to the moon for 1000+ years!!
for all who help Octavia's mom and dad do this to her... discord have fun }:3
This is so good, that reading the story wouldn't be as good as hearing it read here!!! Can't wait for the next part!!! * squeal*!!
good lord! that is creepy as all hell.... with the last episode i sort of expected this much... still though... holy crap!
i am just... completely gitty right now... just wanna hear the next episode right now!... sadly though... that will have to wait for next week...
It's been four months since I listened to it. I still love it. It is still my favorite fanfic that Scribbler ever made. :)
wow. harsh life for octavia. why doesn't she just run away? Her parents wouldn't really give a shit.
though, i suppose they'd just force her back, since she's their last chance at fame, since they're carriers have flopped.
I'm glad this story might have a happy ending because it not grimdark!!😀😀
WHAT'S. SO. FUNNY. PIG???
I'm sorry I know that's not meant to be funny but I can't help myself from laughing at that and the way it was said
“it's what you use to drive skrews around!”
Vynle (I don't know how to spell her name) 2014
TheDerpyKittyCrafter // Abriderp3434 it's spelled Vinyl in case you were wondering
Zoa Penly
One; I was wondering. That's why I said it. Sorry if I mis-read your comment, but it came off as rude to me.
Two; thanks, though I do know how to spell it now. Keep in mind, this was 2 months ago. I had just gotten back into MLP.
TheDerpyKittyCrafter // Abriderp3434 sorry if I came off as rude, I just don't have many people skills😅
Zoa Penly
'Ts fine. Don't worry about it.
This is now one of my Fav Fanfics!😃 Great Job!
This story is so well written and you make it come alive so well.
im really thankfull that you do such fanfictions and i just want to say that you really did an awesome job this fanfiction helps me alot to think about thinks
and it also inspiert me for a few drawings of mine
i really love your work and also the work of the musik
i always was to shy to write my opinon but i really want to say how much i like your work ^^
whoa, i didn't realize this was part two. i already listened to part one and wanted to give my comment, but now i see this is part two i can't wait to listen to it. that was fast.
Ok. This is officially my favorite one of your videos. I actually started clapping when Vinyl bashed Boulder over the head with a rock.
Ruby: oh trust me vinyl... silver eyes are even rarer. And most people get killed over them.
i think this is better then biblical monsters. it a drak/grim fic and romentic fic its amazing. keep it up.
love johan
ITS SO SATISFYING TO HEAR THE MOM GET BEAT
I cried so much in this episode ;-;
This is the second time I have heard this story and I was just as amazed as I was now
I can't tell if this is a creepypasta or a fan fiction
I think it is both...
Both
Both, but it's more of a grimdark fanfiction than a Creepypasta.
This just shows how powerfull this story is.. i just couldnt stop screaming 'KILL THAT FUCKING MONSTER!!!!' at the end there... ohh how i yearn to know how Octavia's parents died!
Primus damn this was dark and yet at the same time beautiful,
my spark bleeds for Octavia
I wanted Octavia to kill that vile mare U-U
where is luna when you need her
If she was here then the story wouldent be like it is. Im sure she would be really helpfull and the authors dont want it because it wouldent be fun this way .
NOO!!! Part 3 pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It can´t end now!!!!
I know right, it can't end here!!! I'm ripping my damn hair out waiting for a third!!!!!!!!!!
+love2drawanime+mlp i think i might really read it to find out what happens!!!
Zack cardenas Same!
Emerald TNT I can't really read good english :,( It's not my first language and I'm not even in high school yet XD
***** Omg thank u!!!
*Warning this comment contains SPOILERS of this chapter* Omg this is so good, is it bad that i laughed when she was beating up her mother? On another note you have the best Octavia&Vinyl voice i have seen and i love listening to your fics. Keep up the spectacular readings!
I'm in tears Scribbler... I thank you for that, it's good to let the emotion out.
Fun fact I’m the first person in 2 months to comment on this FOCKIN amazing piece
i really hope octavia finds peace at last.😊
Oh thank goodness vinyl rules! Oh Octavia....
That was the most romantic thing I have ever listened to in a fanfiction!!! :D aaaaawwwww
O.O
No!!!
O.O YEAH!!!!! Kick her butt!!!!
:O
Cliffhanger!!!!
Gosh I hope they just disown her.... I hope Vinyl is ok!!! Please tell me something else nive like that romance scene!!! PLEASE!!!!
Ok I wont hold my breath but omg that was so good!!!!!
Creepy, unnerving, yet I love it! Keep up the great work ObabScribbler!
Also, Octavia's new voice, after the strings and hooks came in, was kinda scary.
this is the first thing ive cried so hard that mother ran in and thought I saw a ghost
I can't remember if I've ever commented on one of your readings, I've listened to almost all of them. but I just want to say, this is a great reading. I have complaints, but not a one is directed to this reading. also best of luck on your first convention... It's going to be a bit... hectic...
I cried ;- ; Omg...this is the best story I've ever heard
THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD. Scribbler, I am a fan. Daily subscription-check-status-type-of-fan.
I don't blame octavia for what she did
Great job Faust, you made unicorns OP...
Joking aside this was a great read!
Iv never been so stressed out in my entire life
As someone that has an emotionally abusive mother this hit.
47:00 (or around this time)
HOLY SHIT
My god Scribbler best 2 act one and two parter of a fanfiction balled fic story ive heard in a very long time even better than another huge giant fanfic i remember you doing before and i forgot the name of that fanfic you read but i know it was last year and it had something to do with a pony boss discrimination on goats living in ponyville and you doing a voice over for this secretary girl mare and this colt guy wanting to go on an adventure to finding a golden egg and going on a quest to go on amazing faraway journeys after they find that golden egg and 3 encrusted diamond jewels from somewhere and i think the golden egg grants them 3 wished Ugh damn it i wish i remember what story fan fic the name of that one was!it was so damn awesome scribbler!=Dbut yeah you probably know which one im talking about and i think you were going to do like a 6 video seperated act segment parts of that story too but you never got time to get around to continue that story fanfic=\hope you nring that back one day girl.Other than that i did hear the 1st part of this story and OMG damn scribbler i know ive heard and read other ver evil cruel dark emotional fanfics before but this one takes the cake lol.(I know theres other bloody gorey violent fanfics like Cupcakes, Sweetapple masscre, The Rainbow Factory,this one cropfic tourture one i read about a sexual relationship between dash and scootalo and another super dark fic comic dubs from this very crazy deranged but funny channel from mindlessgonzo called Little Miss Rarity)but this fanfic your reading is a lot less darker and not as violent and as dark and emotionally as crazy as those 6 that i mentioned .Now the ones i mention those ones you gotta have a strong stomach to listen how much crazy shock valuel and gross out themes those fan fiction mlp fim brony community stories have in those insane fanfics.I love how this story's coming so far Scribbler and im definitly going to like share and do a very awesome video fanfiction review vlog discussion video on my channel so i can let more people learn more about your amazing awesome epic hardcore badass fanfic talent reading like this vlog you gain moresubscribers
That way k .Keep up the amazing beautiful master piece of work your doing honey and have an awesome fun time at that Buckcon convention ok later!