Aha.... 😂Deadspace vibes....the first one...damn.... it's so damn similar... except for the location... this story is on Mars while the Deadspace video game (the first one atleast) is set on a mining vessel USG Ishimura...from the creatures to the atrifact/relic, the similarities are so many...great story though...a reminder of some good times I had battling hordes of those creatures in the game....
@@Tarthalas considering how crazy EA has become since the days of NFS Underground.... 😂Ah...the days....games these days don't have that fun factor which these mid to late 2000s ganes had....
Narration is great, but it's just Dead Space based story, in actuallity just repeating the storyline of prequel to Dead Space, author should have mentioned it somewhere. Really enjoyed listening to you man, happy I Found your channel! =)
I liked having you talk after the story instead of just getting spaced. If you decide to do it again can you share something about your experience narrating the story?
WOW 😯 ‼️ It’s crazy that when you posted this one, you only had 500 subs!? That’s freaking awesome my dude! As of aug. 2023 you have over 33k ffs😉👍 nice man…you definitely deserve it tho! I’m always stoked to see that you have posted something new, since it’s a good time no matter what my dude😁
I don't mean to be a broken record lol, but Thanks again. You do a awesome job at narrating these. I've already listened once. I'm back to hear it again. You go my Friend
I've listened to a few of these. As a writer, I find there is a lack of originality in a lot of these stories. Some have pointed out, they are rip offs at worst or retooled fan fiction at best. Which is a shame, because the set up and mechanics in a number of the stories is reasonably good. The narration is excellent. Professional quality. I've listened to audible book narrators who could learn a lesson or two from this narrator. That said, I do enjoy them for being isolation sci-fi/horror. A guilty pleasure that I will always be very forgiving with.
@@jimmyshrimbe9361 That's generally what that phrase means. And you're confusing shittiness with criticism. If you ever decide to write, don't read your reviews. There are going to be a lot of "shitty" criticisms in them.
Doom? Yuh is Doom 3 with necromorphs instead of Demons... Unless, the Imps got a lot more dangerous and Lost Souls got 10x worse and now I don't even want to think about this XD
Hmm... escape pods on a colony are a bit unusual. You can't just 'go' to earth anytime, there are transfer windows which have to be present to capture without wasting incredible amounts of fuel. If the society has cycler stations this is somewhat minimized, but you will still have to wait for a rendezvous.
Wow I didn't know Rockspoon was so knowledgeable with regards to astro-navigation type travel. Do you work for NASA or JPL? Or just huge sci-fi fan? Lol
@@MagnetarYT well when you don't know how its gonna work out and maintain I'd think it was a backup to save as many lives as possible in the even the mission becomes a shit fest
If it were The Flood, Mars and Earth would be infected by the end of the story. The only reason the infection didn't spread further on Earth in Halo 3 is because, The Elites used their CCS-Class Battlecruisers to "Glass half a continent" and would have "Glassed the entire planet"... after all "one single flood spore can destroy an entire species"
@@LordNelson6 No problem, decent story either way lol. i like to think of it as Doom 3's plotline but instead of doing some weird ultra-dimensional/teleportation funky stuff. the artifact they find this time around is something to do with necromorphs. Not too sure, didn't play much of Dead Space unfortunately. But is on my list for when i start playing games again lol
5 min in, and it screams Dead Space: Downfall, ripoff. Just diffrent names for the locations. i guess the easiest copy paste one can doo. just change the names of everything and claim the work of another for your selfe.
Really...a dead space story?! I've only heard 1 spinoff story I thoroughly enjoyed. Killahawke1 (Derek Hawk) FELINE (Or killer cats from outerspace) not sure which is the OFFICIAL title..seen both used 😈😎😇
@@MagnetarYT If it is meant to be a fanfic, then yeah, sure. Nothing at all wrong with that. Entirely depends on how it is presented, ya know. Also, I wouldn't call it a fan fic if someone just rewrote one of the Star Wars movies basically word for word. I just call that lazy and plagiarism, ya know.
@@Luna_Spiritus A glorious video game released during the ps360 generation. Best played in darkness with 5.1 surround sound or good headphones. It'll sound like monsters are crawling in your air vents.
Almost died laughing. Clearly written by someone whos never studied religion. I usually try to avoid all stories with aspects to them that I am aware of because more often thn not they show zero respect to anything but the scaries. Seriously, the greatest horror stories are those written by indeviduals who understand subject matter on a deeper lvl.
Definitely an homage to Dead Space. No question about it. Good story though.
Necromorphs. Gotta chop off their limbs to kill em like in Dead Space
Aha.... 😂Deadspace vibes....the first one...damn.... it's so damn similar... except for the location... this story is on Mars while the Deadspace video game (the first one atleast) is set on a mining vessel USG Ishimura...from the creatures to the atrifact/relic, the similarities are so many...great story though...a reminder of some good times I had battling hordes of those creatures in the game....
surprised they didnt got a letter from ea like: nice story you got there...
@@Tarthalas considering how crazy EA has become since the days of NFS Underground.... 😂Ah...the days....games these days don't have that fun factor which these mid to late 2000s ganes had....
@@pramodkaranth9479 good point
Its a rip of the animated movie "Dead Space: Downfall"
@@mr-x7689 that Cafeteria scene with the preacher was from the dead space motion comic.
Heck yeah, I’m so happy to get a post from my new favorite narrator
Congrats on the 500!!!
I love sci-fi stories the most, but I love Mars stories the mostestest. 😍This was a fun one.
Thanks, Laurel! :)
Woohoo.. Void Walkers army✊
Narration is great, but it's just Dead Space based story, in actuallity just repeating the storyline of prequel to Dead Space, author should have mentioned it somewhere. Really enjoyed listening to you man, happy I Found your channel! =)
Its a copy paste with other names of Dead Space: Downfall
Is it really because the mining part of the story sounds almost EXACTLY like the logs you read in Doom 3 XD
Yeah lol that's what I was thinking, the marker.....
Maybe, but all of these ideas have been around since before Dead space. Could be a copy, but could just be similar ideas recycled once again.
Nice story homie. Would love another one of these dead space inspired stories
I liked having you talk after the story instead of just getting spaced. If you decide to do it again can you share something about your experience narrating the story?
WOW 😯 ‼️ It’s crazy that when you posted this one, you only had 500 subs!? That’s freaking awesome my dude! As of aug. 2023 you have over 33k ffs😉👍 nice man…you definitely deserve it tho! I’m always stoked to see that you have posted something new, since it’s a good time no matter what my dude😁
I'm trying to give you guys a good time ♥️
this story was clearly inspired by dead space downfall film.
Listening to your narration while high af is an ethereal experience. Every sentence sounds like the first.
Glad we can journey through the Void together
I used to live my life high AF ...no more
Great story and narration. I guess I have to cancel my Mars vacation now.
Hey My Friend thanks for another awesome narration. This work of yours sure does make my work day better
Love your narrations.
Thank you!
Very nice work Mag.
Thank you sir
Kind of seems like dead space and a few other movies that I've seen and other video games wouldn't doom also be part of it lol Love the video
Those damn Necromorphs will get you every time.
Haven't heard this one yet, but.... I'm getting john carpenter's Ghosts of Mars vibes already
Cool story, I'm glad I finally listened to it.
Sounds like a job for an engineer!
Or maybe a marine with big guts and even bigger guns.
Where has this channel been all my life?
In our hearts and minds 👾
"SECURITY TO THE MESS HALL"
Good one!
I don't mean to be a broken record lol, but Thanks again. You do a awesome job at narrating these. I've already listened once. I'm back to hear it again. You go my Friend
I've listened to a few of these. As a writer, I find there is a lack of originality in a lot of these stories. Some have pointed out, they are rip offs at worst or retooled fan fiction at best. Which is a shame, because the set up and mechanics in a number of the stories is reasonably good. The narration is excellent. Professional quality. I've listened to audible book narrators who could learn a lesson or two from this narrator. That said, I do enjoy them for being isolation sci-fi/horror. A guilty pleasure that I will always be very forgiving with.
As someone who consumes writing, I wouldn't read a single thing written by you because of your shitty attitude.
@@jimmyshrimbe9361 Ah, you're one of those people who can't separate the art from the artist types.
@@josephmassaro only when the artist is a shitty person.
@@jimmyshrimbe9361 That's generally what that phrase means. And you're confusing shittiness with criticism. If you ever decide to write, don't read your reviews. There are going to be a lot of "shitty" criticisms in them.
Now I want to play dead space.
Hell yeah Void Walker Nation!
This reminds of an animated story by the name of Dead Space Downfall, which is highly recommended.
Is there a part 2 to this really that good to have a part 2
Unfortunately not.
@@MagnetarYT but could you make a part 2 please I love your videos I started watching them like 2 weeks ago
@@MagnetarYT I mean if you could make a talk to that would be awesome I really did enjoy this story and the way you told it was amazing
@-- please send me the link
@@babaythedog2045 just search dead space comic.
Totally ripped off from dead space
Doom?
Yuh is Doom 3 with necromorphs instead of Demons... Unless, the Imps got a lot more dangerous and Lost Souls got 10x worse and now I don't even want to think about this XD
You have alerted the horde
Hmm... escape pods on a colony are a bit unusual. You can't just 'go' to earth anytime, there are transfer windows which have to be present to capture without wasting incredible amounts of fuel. If the society has cycler stations this is somewhat minimized, but you will still have to wait for a rendezvous.
I'm assuming the author meant something like a space shuttle as opposed to escape pods. But idk 🤷🏽♂️
Wow I didn't know Rockspoon was so knowledgeable with regards to astro-navigation type travel. Do you work for NASA or JPL? Or just huge sci-fi fan? Lol
@@jackdare Why did you leave the ESA out?
No, I play KSP.
@@MagnetarYT well when you don't know how its gonna work out and maintain I'd think it was a backup to save as many lives as possible in the even the mission becomes a shit fest
Woohoo!
:) dead space
Doomguy: chainsaw go brrrrrrrr!
Love your channel 👍👍👍
So basically it's deadspace
Its the flood!!!
👾👾👾
If it were The Flood, Mars and Earth would be infected by the end of the story. The only reason the infection didn't spread further on Earth in Halo 3 is because, The Elites used their CCS-Class Battlecruisers to "Glass half a continent" and would have "Glassed the entire planet"... after all "one single flood spore can destroy an entire species"
@@CrackDCat Great, now I'm compelled to listen to this again... thanks lol
@@LordNelson6 No problem, decent story either way lol. i like to think of it as Doom 3's plotline but instead of doing some weird ultra-dimensional/teleportation funky stuff. the artifact they find this time around is something to do with necromorphs. Not too sure, didn't play much of Dead Space unfortunately. But is on my list for when i start playing games again lol
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This is a 1 for 1 of the dead space prequel
Xenophilia - Good
Fanatic Xenophilia - bad
Spiritual Xenophilia - worse
Wait a second ... this is literally the story of Dead Space Extraction ...
Well someone has played Dead Space.....
How did I miss this one?
5 min in, and it screams Dead Space: Downfall, ripoff. Just diffrent names for the locations. i guess the easiest copy paste one can doo. just change the names of everything and claim the work of another for your selfe.
Oh Dead Space, even your fan fics are creepy
The dead space universe isn't scary outside of jumpscares. It's like a rip-off of The Thing but with less logic.
Maybe if they just ditched the Unitologist knockoffs this story would get less Dead Space ripoff criticism.
Is this story for real or scientific?? It's so good i can't tell the difference any more.
It's definitely based off of Dead Space
This is DeadSpace
Sooo… is this why humans left mars millions of years ago and came to earth?
The funniest thing about this story is the idea that NASA could get anything of substance done.
Good narrating 😈😎😇
Loved this more please
Okay, a lot of this was take quote for quoet from the dead space comic
So this is pretty much dead space the novel huh lol
hey dude do you like do you look at the infografics infographics for this stuff like whats that look like?
I'm sorry what do you mean?
Dead Space story :d
Really...a dead space story?! I've only heard 1 spinoff story I thoroughly enjoyed. Killahawke1 (Derek Hawk) FELINE (Or killer cats from outerspace) not sure which is the OFFICIAL title..seen both used 😈😎😇
They all got Ell'd (L 'ed) 🤪😅
Is this the dead space story?
Yes
Dead Space?
Doom and dead space......meh.
This is basically word for word plagiarism of the video game "Dead Space." Couldn't be a more blatant ripoff.
I mean, in defense of the author, you could call it a fan fic almost. Many people write Star Wars stories that aren't by Disney, ya know?
@@MagnetarYT If it is meant to be a fanfic, then yeah, sure. Nothing at all wrong with that. Entirely depends on how it is presented, ya know.
Also, I wouldn't call it a fan fic if someone just rewrote one of the Star Wars movies basically word for word. I just call that lazy and plagiarism, ya know.
Yea, that's true
What's Dead Space?
@@Luna_Spiritus A glorious video game released during the ps360 generation. Best played in darkness with 5.1 surround sound or good headphones. It'll sound like monsters are crawling in your air vents.
I like this, but it sounds alot like dead space
🤔 you don't say
Sooo dead space
Let's blow up Mars,,🧐
I love your videos but in this video the pauses between words/sentences were tad bit too long. Just a constructive criticism
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Dead space
I cant
This is a rip off of deadspace
HI
Almost died laughing. Clearly written by someone whos never studied religion. I usually try to avoid all stories with aspects to them that I am aware of because more often thn not they show zero respect to anything but the scaries. Seriously, the greatest horror stories are those written by indeviduals who understand subject matter on a deeper lvl.
Props for narration but this is some 7th grade level dead space rip-off shit writing
Dead space