Achilles IV | A Sci-Fi Horror Creepypasta

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    Story: Achilles IV | A Sci-Fi Horror Creepypasta
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    Hello, I am Magnetar. I reside within the Void where space and time become indistinguishable. It is here, too, where I can hear tales from all across the multiverse. Tales of horror, future technologies, AI, Aliens, cosmic horror, world-ending catastrophes, apocalyptic events, space, and more.
    So, if you're brave, join me in the Void. Listen to their screams, their pleas, and their stories.
    But remember - Astrophobes be warned
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    Astrophobes be warned. #Scifi #creepypasta #space
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 115

  • @magicpyroninja
    @magicpyroninja 3 роки тому +67

    To be completely honest I don't find any creepypasta stories scary.
    It's more like I like to see what creative new things people can come up with since Hollywood is creatively bankrupt at this point

    • @bkup1332
      @bkup1332 2 роки тому +2

      I agree, less scary, more creative.

    • @louisbrugnoni7639
      @louisbrugnoni7639 2 роки тому +2

      No one gets scared but we enjoy the stories.

    • @andreamccaffrey9891
      @andreamccaffrey9891 Рік тому +2

      @N why? yup ted the caver, thought to be one of, if not the first creepypasta. Really really good. There are a few others tho. The hidden webpage would definitely be one, it’s absolutely terrifying. And u can definitely find lots that aren’t necessarily “scary” but very dark and disturbing

  • @joecarr6985
    @joecarr6985 3 роки тому +41

    Magnetar.... excellent Narrator , stories are gripping full of horror & wonder couple of my favourites are"We built a Gateway to a star" & Proxima Centaury is not a star" ...... Outstanding MAGNETAR.....thank you..

  • @joshquivey6990
    @joshquivey6990 3 роки тому +33

    ONLY Eleven security breaches?
    Sounds like a normal day at Foundation Site 19.

  • @warrencromwell4282
    @warrencromwell4282 Рік тому +3

    Outstanding!!!
    Really dug it!!
    Captivating!!!!
    More, please.......

  • @ma.carmensarmiento7661
    @ma.carmensarmiento7661 Рік тому +3

    The story reminded me of Alien. I was rooting for this guy, like I did for Ripley.

  • @warrenreid6109
    @warrenreid6109 Рік тому +7

    Great story. Had me captivated all the way through. So glad I found this channel.

  • @harryrundle7897
    @harryrundle7897 3 роки тому +7

    that ending was cathartic as hell

  • @nookleer
    @nookleer Рік тому +3

    Ok that story was dope. I almost wish it was longer. This would make a tense movie.

  • @SamiKotiranta
    @SamiKotiranta 3 роки тому +6

    Friday and Magnetar... Oh the absolute bliss😍🙏👍

  • @dchardinaycole5944
    @dchardinaycole5944 Рік тому +3

    I’m so happy I found this guy❤ I have so much to binge listen

    • @elypowell6797
      @elypowell6797 10 місяців тому

      Yeah he is good but check out Viidith22 when you get bored then check out Dr Creepen. Lighthouse Horror is really good too.

  • @nevasoba5953
    @nevasoba5953 3 роки тому +8

    This is a well written story, and ur are reading it superbly.

  • @magicpyroninja
    @magicpyroninja 3 роки тому +7

    I think it's entirely possible that the planet landed on that just had piles of resources laying around might have just been a regular planet at one point and the expanse ate everything and left nothing but piles of inorganic material

    • @magicpyroninja
      @magicpyroninja 3 роки тому +1

      And then further into the story I'm validated by the main character😂

  • @BearPawification
    @BearPawification 2 роки тому +2

    I love your branded intro. It reminds me of old school Toonami.

  • @ronway7280
    @ronway7280 3 роки тому +3

    Your simmering rage covered with complete condescension at the end was magnificent!

  • @evazauner
    @evazauner 3 роки тому +12

    when i hear a new story from magnetar, i automatically give a thumbs up!

  • @robertgoode6713
    @robertgoode6713 2 роки тому +2

    Reminds me of the last time we visited lv-426.

  • @flappy7373
    @flappy7373 3 роки тому +13

    the background magic is really nicely, smoothly done. i barely notice it's there, it just kinf of floats in my awareness somewhere, making the tension/action/fear moments feel more.. visceral or engrossing maybe.

  • @cecilbennett2549
    @cecilbennett2549 3 роки тому +3

    Yess! Two days in a row!! I'm stoked!!

  • @Leon187.
    @Leon187. 3 роки тому +6

    thanks for this long creepypasta

  • @kevincaruthers5412
    @kevincaruthers5412 2 роки тому +2

    Pretty good.
    Thanks for sharing!

  • @richardhamilton9223
    @richardhamilton9223 Рік тому +2

    This channel go hard. Magnetar you different in a way thats needed Salute my brother 💫👑💪🏾💯

  • @morticialechatnoir6884
    @morticialechatnoir6884 3 роки тому +6

    Wow, you have the best voice for this kind of stuff!

  • @mastertek383
    @mastertek383 3 роки тому +3

    MAGNETAR!!! My man.

  • @MrsCaranAmy
    @MrsCaranAmy 3 роки тому +3

    Just a marvelous space travel story. Great plot and ending. Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend.

  • @henriqueribeiro8167
    @henriqueribeiro8167 Рік тому +3

    Cargo comes first and the life of the Crew second for the corporate overlords? Is this based on a real story or what?

  • @fredericramstedt545
    @fredericramstedt545 3 роки тому +5

    Magnetar, you incredible bastard, this was yet another fantastic narration. Thank you!

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 роки тому

      So happy you enjoyed it! 👾

    • @elypowell6797
      @elypowell6797 10 місяців тому

      Magnetar, you're a good ole cock knocker! Love the stories.

  • @Spectre1776
    @Spectre1776 3 роки тому +12

    Magnetar I've been really enjoying your take on the Breach series but this is one of my other favorites can't wait to listen to it man 👽

    • @lexecomplexe4083
      @lexecomplexe4083 3 роки тому +1

      Wait this is a series? :O

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 3 роки тому +1

      @@lexecomplexe4083I think it's 12 parts

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 роки тому +1

      Achilles isn't a series, Breach is @Lexe

    • @Spectre1776
      @Spectre1776 3 роки тому +2

      @@MagnetarYT dude Achilles was an awesome story

  • @bubbafrump74
    @bubbafrump74 Рік тому +2

    Ensign = en-sin...sorry. it just sounds really Goofy if you've been in the military, and chances are, alot of your listeners are vet's. I love your narration, and I'm not trying to be a jerk at all. Thank you very much for the story's. You're my favorite of all of all the creepy 's on UA-cam. You do the most scifi too. Thanks again.

  • @legendteller4893
    @legendteller4893 3 роки тому +4

    You killed this, dude. Loved this story ;D

  • @luckyrobinshomestead
    @luckyrobinshomestead 3 роки тому +4

    I heard this one before a long time ago, but I think you did a better job with it, because last time I thought it was like the story-teller couldn't get into it. I never feel that way when you read them. Thanks for the hard work you put into these.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 роки тому

      Glad you enjoy, thank you for your support 👾

  • @tknight6132
    @tknight6132 3 роки тому +3

    1am should be sleeping but I have to know the story ends love it 👍

  • @windegoeq2
    @windegoeq2 3 роки тому +6

    Can't wait to listen and nap

  • @mjskinner9288
    @mjskinner9288 3 роки тому +3

    Thanks for blessing us with another story. You and yours stay safe👾 🤙

  • @grimreaper6557
    @grimreaper6557 3 роки тому +4

    Nice act of Defiance. Great story and thank you Magnetar for posting it =)

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby Рік тому +2

    Hey Brother thanks for another awesome narration. Hope your weekend is going well and good

  • @friendlyman9032
    @friendlyman9032 3 роки тому +2

    This was beyond great...just so good..hit it out of the park.

  • @jessem.burnside8584
    @jessem.burnside8584 3 роки тому +2

    Wow. Excellent Sci-fi.

  • @TheNerdCorporation
    @TheNerdCorporation 3 роки тому +2

    Great job as always magnetar! 👌😀👍🏻 and thanks for not announcing something at the end 😘 keep up the good work! And btw i was wondering if you know about if there are alot of good deep ocean horror stories that has never been narrated? Cause those and stories like this are the best ones 😏

  • @johansomeone1948
    @johansomeone1948 Рік тому +2

    That nano tec sounds exactly like a alien nanobot weapon.

  • @chadp363
    @chadp363 3 роки тому +4

    Yyeeeeeeee. I like this one a lot. Thank you sir

  • @jonny_gage
    @jonny_gage 2 роки тому +5

    I love sci Fi horror stories!

  • @Krigarkaj
    @Krigarkaj 3 роки тому +3

    Whoopity whoop! 😅 Good thing to wake up to.

  • @srmj71
    @srmj71 3 роки тому +3

    Awesome! Again!

  • @novaremix3412
    @novaremix3412 3 роки тому +2

    thanks! this video helped me finish my project that due tomorrow:D

  • @justindunlap1235
    @justindunlap1235 3 роки тому +2

    dang that was a great story, and some top notch narration as well.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 роки тому +1

      Thanks for your support 👾

    • @justindunlap1235
      @justindunlap1235 3 роки тому +1

      @@MagnetarYT no thank you. I just took a peek at your library and I think I may have found my new favorite creepypasta channel.

  • @squidlipssupreme168
    @squidlipssupreme168 Рік тому +2

    Really cool story

  • @thomaslowe4774
    @thomaslowe4774 2 роки тому +2

    If only the Goonies were on the ship! This brave man could have lived!

  • @damirserbanovic
    @damirserbanovic Рік тому +1

    this was amazing!

  • @AG-en5y
    @AG-en5y 3 роки тому +2

    Great narration excellence story🔥🔥

  • @nielsjensen9771
    @nielsjensen9771 3 роки тому +3

    Awsome story

  • @johnfromdownunder.4339
    @johnfromdownunder.4339 3 роки тому +3

    Awesome 👽👽👽

  • @0therun1t21
    @0therun1t21 3 роки тому +2

    Jumped right on this!

  • @dchardinaycole5944
    @dchardinaycole5944 Рік тому +1

    Thanks!

  • @jackabsolute5525
    @jackabsolute5525 2 роки тому +2

    Reminds me of the movie Life. But about 10x better.

  • @SHADOWXIXX
    @SHADOWXIXX 3 роки тому +4

    Jericho a subsidiary of Weyland Yutani

  • @evolution031680
    @evolution031680 3 роки тому +3

    Gelatinous Cubes are always a pain in the ass.

  • @lastofthe4horsemen279
    @lastofthe4horsemen279 3 роки тому +2

    Love stories told from the logs of a crew member and this one didn't disappoint. Great job Magnetar.

  • @adamfox1669
    @adamfox1669 3 роки тому +2

    Excellent!

  • @pelgervampireduck
    @pelgervampireduck Рік тому +1

    I'm confused by the ending. was the ship and the expansion thing destroyed or not?. maybe I should listen to it again.

  • @indigobreeze2138
    @indigobreeze2138 2 роки тому +3

    Wow, honestly too realistic as far as distpoian corporate protocols are concerned.

  • @zyrxom
    @zyrxom Рік тому +2

    For reason I think this Jericho company has already been taken over by AI

  • @johnhoon7069
    @johnhoon7069 3 роки тому +1

    Yeah that could be any large corporation in the world and some countries that I can think of

  • @michaelsurber2923
    @michaelsurber2923 3 роки тому +1

    I was just waiting for Samus Aran to show up and save the day

  • @susanhorn6401
    @susanhorn6401 3 роки тому +1

    Outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @0therun1t21
    @0therun1t21 3 роки тому +4

    At least they're not Tribbles.

  • @kphizzle9569
    @kphizzle9569 3 роки тому

    You're on fire lately.

  • @cherryclarke4704
    @cherryclarke4704 3 роки тому +2

    SUPERB 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

  • @ETOILEPHANTOME
    @ETOILEPHANTOME 2 роки тому +2

    That’s a dumb computer. It shut the entire crew with a deadly organism, has the video footage of their deaths and no more interactions of any kind with them and still doesn’t understand that they’re gone.
    18:49 what happened to priority to the mission?

  • @WALKUREX
    @WALKUREX 3 роки тому +2

    Love it

  • @jystme2437
    @jystme2437 2 роки тому +1

    Of course its a great story and narration ❤but I've been looking for I and 2 and 3 🙄 there is none why use 1V so cruel 😌🦋

  • @lokilockness2970
    @lokilockness2970 3 роки тому +2

    So far Amazing can you do the Alian books

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 роки тому +1

      I have been thinking about that, but I don't think they're in the public domain.
      With that said ... I could risk it for my fans? 😅

    • @lokilockness2970
      @lokilockness2970 3 роки тому +1

      @@MagnetarYT risk it for the biscuit as we say in Australia. Much love this sorry is epic it’s nearly finished and I’m so sad about the guy :(

    • @lokilockness2970
      @lokilockness2970 3 роки тому

      @@MagnetarYT just finished it I like to think the ship is gone

  • @stubones
    @stubones 3 роки тому +2

    Excellent story but I felt end was a bit of a let down.

  • @johansomeone1948
    @johansomeone1948 Рік тому +1

    Right the cargo came first indeed, right in your corporate faces.

  • @kzrlgo
    @kzrlgo Рік тому +1

    10/10 reading. 4/10 writing.

  • @mrdeer111
    @mrdeer111 3 роки тому +1

    💖💖💖

  • @CNinjaa
    @CNinjaa Рік тому +1

    All your base are belong to us 👽

  • @BlueSkyCountry
    @BlueSkyCountry 2 роки тому +1

    There are no words in the English language that I absolutely loathe more and look upon with nothing but scorn, than "wish", "hope", "positivity", and "positive vibes". These are words only uttered from the mouths of lazy and incompetent idiots. Awesome story by the way. Military and space sci-fi is among my favorite genres.

  • @Blue.4t2
    @Blue.4t2 Рік тому +1

    ⭐🙂👍

  • @chocolatefrenzieya
    @chocolatefrenzieya 3 роки тому

    Double check pronunciation of "ensign". Or watch some Star Trek. :)
    Also check "aberrant".

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 роки тому

      There is the American and English version of ensign. So. 🤷🏽‍♂️

  • @godemperorletoatreidesii7457
    @godemperorletoatreidesii7457 3 роки тому

    Didn't Dr creepin do this story too lol

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 роки тому

      Damn, I didn't realize stories could be read by only one person.
      Lol, fr tho, so what?

    • @godemperorletoatreidesii7457
      @godemperorletoatreidesii7457 3 роки тому +1

      @@MagnetarYT it's wasn't criticism just a comment for the sake of the algorithm 😂

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  3 роки тому +1

      😅😜

  • @jimmyshrimbe9361
    @jimmyshrimbe9361 2 роки тому +1

    ☀️🌚☀️

  • @Michael_Breiter
    @Michael_Breiter 2 роки тому

    What moronic company gives such low priority to the TECH SPECIALIST? Is Jericho a subsidiary of Weyland-Yutani? The UAC?

  • @privateperson5054
    @privateperson5054 2 роки тому +1

    Yea ... Another story without an ending. Who is going to give me the weak ass excuse that its better and leaves things up to my imagination ? Play a table top RPG when you want that.
    Lazy author just not finishing the story. This style was cool in the 30s 40s and 50s but just like smoking we know better now.

    • @Jester123ish
      @Jester123ish 2 роки тому +1

      Re-listen to the very first intro, it gives you a pretty good clue how things go.

    • @privateperson5054
      @privateperson5054 2 роки тому +1

      @@Jester123ish
      Things are "left to the imagination" a good indication is not good enough its just lazy.

    • @jaredbryant8297
      @jaredbryant8297 2 роки тому

      @@privateperson5054 grow up

    • @privateperson5054
      @privateperson5054 2 роки тому

      @@jaredbryant8297
      How is that juvenile, exactly ?
      You claim to know so lets hear this tid bit of "wisdom" we all know will be lame. But go ahead basement troll share your marvelous insight.

  • @westcruz3878
    @westcruz3878 Рік тому +1

    No death benefits for my mom but your mother dead from cancer 😬 great story

  • @garywhite3209
    @garywhite3209 Рік тому +1

    That was good. 👏