This is a nice framework for what could be a longer story. The little boy looking up to the soldier as a father figure is a nice touch, especially since many similar stories are more focused on the surrogate father/daughter dynamic.
The pilot crashed on plant and the woman + boy just came out no where The End does not match the story ! I think you need to find you a writer knows how to put a good story together !
This is a nice framework for what could be a longer story. The little boy looking up to the soldier as a father figure is a nice touch, especially since many similar stories are more focused on the surrogate father/daughter dynamic.
At least he is trying; which is more than most m8
The pilot crashed on plant and the woman + boy just came out no where The End does not match the story ! I think you need to find you a writer knows how to put a good story together !