I liked the story and the fun way the disparate part reacted with each other. You have to start somewhere. I thought some of the comments were unhelpful and, in some cases, were condescending. I loked the story. AI narration takes time and is far from perfect and that is true over many platforms. Keep up the good work and believe in yourself. Thank you.
The choppy narration is off putting, tiring. The voice is great, and it is so nice to hear it pronouncing all the words correctly! Now smooth out the narration to typical reading aloud.
Ngl this story was a waste of time. Huge mess of holes. The station automation was supposedly still talking to the mechanic , even after he was aboard the puppies ship and away from the station? Why where they firing on the ship in the first place if they were trying to save them? What were the sentient crystals about? Why didn't the "dog" people take the fancy box when they left? Why did they destroy the station and the ship & leave the mechanic there on a crippled ship to die? Pretty messed up.
@@FictionalReimagined Not trying to crap on you personally though. If you really are writing these yourself, just keep at it, with practice you'll get better. Maybe have some friends or family read through & help nit pick the story apart a bit to help you find the continuity breaks, etc. Direct posting stuff to YT can be real rough & discouraging. Take the time to polish your work. It'll save you from some of the brutality of internet critics. Keep writing and trying!
You have to start somewhere. This is called imagination. Disparate parts fit together in new and, to some, odd. Creativity matches things in new ways. Too much condescension in the comments. I liked the story and the various components as they are put together. It was a fun juxtaposition to read. Somebody would benefit from the willing suspension of disbelief.
Great story, still gotta work on the delivery.
Thanks
I liked the story but how did Nathen get of the asteroid?
I liked the story and the fun way the disparate part reacted with each other. You have to start somewhere. I thought some of the comments were unhelpful and, in some cases, were condescending. I loked the story. AI narration takes time and is far from perfect and that is true over many platforms. Keep up the good work and believe in yourself. Thank you.
Thank you very much, your kind words motivate me to continue!
The choppy narration is off putting, tiring. The voice is great, and it is so nice to hear it pronouncing all the words correctly! Now smooth out the narration to typical reading aloud.
This story made no sense at all.
ok
Ngl this story was a waste of time. Huge mess of holes. The station automation was supposedly still talking to the mechanic , even after he was aboard the puppies ship and away from the station? Why where they firing on the ship in the first place if they were trying to save them? What were the sentient crystals about? Why didn't the "dog" people take the fancy box when they left? Why did they destroy the station and the ship & leave the mechanic there on a crippled ship to die? Pretty messed up.
ok
@@FictionalReimagined Not trying to crap on you personally though. If you really are writing these yourself, just keep at it, with practice you'll get better. Maybe have some friends or family read through & help nit pick the story apart a bit to help you find the continuity breaks, etc. Direct posting stuff to YT can be real rough & discouraging. Take the time to polish your work. It'll save you from some of the brutality of internet critics. Keep writing and trying!
You have to start somewhere. This is called imagination. Disparate parts fit together in new and, to some, odd. Creativity matches things in new ways. Too much condescension in the comments. I liked the story and the various components as they are put together. It was a fun juxtaposition to read. Somebody would benefit from the willing suspension of disbelief.
Things in a Space Station cause groans from their Weight? Turn the gravity down.
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Hee!
not an inspiring story
very bad?