Yeah I don’t really like that part. In the original books firestar is finally killed taken down his rival but in this one it’s by a fire and he should’ve lasted longer
The Three: Jayfeather: ~ Can practically read other cat’s minds ~ Can walk in people’s dreams ~ Has 1001 IQ HollyLeaf: ~ Is good at drama (especially at gatherings) ~ Stealth mode ~ Good at enforcing the law Lionblaze: *i fight good and not get hurted*
@@wolfkitty42 With that in mind, and with how Medicine cats usually can just tell how many lives a leader has, Imagine Jayfeather feeling Firestar die every time, and with his emotion-sensing power, he _feels_ Firestar’s pain and suffering as he’s dying, and with the entire Ashfur and Squirrelflight fight in front of him, he probably just starts having a panic attack or something, and when he screams that Firestar is dead dead, he’s probably crying from the pain. Like, that’s bound to traumatize him deeply. It also could add to Bramblestar loosing a life due to the poisoning! Jayfeather can feel that Bramblestar feels extremely unwell, but he just doesn’t understand _why,_ and he also doesn’t want to lose another leader, much less his father.
@@hyalophora not really. Just with cats she’s training. I think she’s so popular because of a mix of being an intimidating villain, being a female villain, having an actual backstory and reason to be evil other than “muahahahaha evil now”, and being really pretty but without much cannon art so people can experiment.
@Ethereal26 agreed. And her ghost is even worse. For example, she never interacts with Starclan cats? I’m pretty sure she murdered Appledusk, Reedshine, Oakstar, and the others ghosts just because they never show up in the Starclan Darkforest fight, but what about her kits? I find it hard to believe she never interacted with her children in the afterlife, or even the fact that Reedshine and her kits survived until a natural death given the fact that ghosts can murder living cats. Also that she randomly chose Crookedstar, even though there’s other relatives of Appledusk that were alive before him. I’ve heard people say that Mapleshade killed Mosskit, which would fit but just makes her ghost even *more* confusing, and this explanation isn’t even factoring in why she cared about Goosefeather, and many other seemingly random inaccuracies.
@@toshowmyfriends2567 the only thing I disagree on is the "why CrookedStar" comment. Of course him, he was isolated and hated because he broke his jaw, and MapleShade provided him with attention and praise when almost nobody else would. To a villain, he's the perfect pawn.
@@bonnietelocole6777 I understand why she chose Crookedstar, I just don’t understand why she chose only Crookedstar. Stormfur, Feathertail, Stonefur and Mistystar were half-clan kits, Reedshine’s original kits probably got treated differently after the events of the book, etc. I don’t understand why she limited herself to Crookedstar then seemed to forget about her promise to end Appledusk’s bloodline. I don’t understand why she didn’t do it to *all* his descendants
I love how in the finished project of the drawing, Sol's tail is separating Hollyleaf from both of her brothers, like how Sol did in your rewrite. I don't know if it was intentional but either way it was a nice touch and I loved it!
You can prefer whichever one you want, but I can't deny that this rewrite made me emotional at the end. The three separated? Jesus Christ Tennelle is good at rewriting..
SLURPS UP THIS BEAST WITH A BENDY STRAW. I'm so excited that before me lays 1.5 hours of tbaby!!!!! edit;; (finished watching this delicious delicious pie) Seriously BLOWN away by how much better???? this feels???? Honestly everything in this nails it imo. I ADORE the changes. DANG but it makes me sad about WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN. but so excited and inspired by what WE CAN DO! Thank you so much for putting this together. I LOVE YOUR BEAUTIFUL MIND!!!!!!
@@TennelleFlowers The main reason I’m still here in the Warriors community, is really just for the community itself- the actual books are kind of descending into a mess of unorganized... stuff?.... sometimes I feel like the Erins are making these books just for money now... oof...
"And for the cherry on top, Bramblestar makes Hollyleaf his new deputy, because she is 'the only cat willing to be honest with him.'" Now THAT is an Omega Oof.
Personally I always liked the idea that the Three got their powers from the Dark Forest. It explains why their powers go away after the big hell battle, and Rock saying that they never should've been born also makes more sense. And, in the context of your AU, would explain why StarClan is scared of the Three.
This rewrite is so much more interesting and suspenseful than the entirety of Power of Three and Omen of The Stars! I wasn’t sure how I was gonna like villain Hollyleaf but it ended up being really cool! And the portal from the world of the dead to the world of the living fills in the plot gap that the Erins left on how The Dark Forest cats and StarClan cats got into the world of the living to help their sides of the Great War!!
I think the thing I love most about the warriors fandom is that we know the books are... Ok. Theyre good but theyre just that only ok. We use our creativity to make beautiful stories. Even when the books fail to satisfy us we scrap together the good parts to make our own stories and our own aus.
i never really knew what people were talking about in the Omen of the Stars arc, or more so how bad it was, until I read the last few books. It does seem they ran out of time, and not a lot of story was put into the deaths or build up. I agree though, it's warriors, I'm a little biased, and it's okay.
I may be mis-remembering but i think deadfoot also got sick easily and had breathing problems, so yeah hes a great example of a disabled warrior (and also just one of my favorite underappreciated characters)
I know right? During the fire scene, it felt like the two (and hollyleaf) had been fully grown warriors since a book ago, but jay feather literally gets his name in the same book? The only other cats I can think of that were apprentices for THIS freaking long were swift paw and his apprentice group… yeah Honestly surprising they didn’t bitch to firestar about that
Rereading the FOURTH book, they are still apprentices... How long can they be stuck in the teenager role? arent they well past the age of evolving into a warrior, or at least at it? like cmon id be so mad
@@laurenswholesale Jayfeather was an apprectice until near the end of the ffth, though... leafpool did jay dirty with that, it took so long and nobody cared except like himself
@@billcipher8645 He's definitely the closest character in the series to attempt suicide. However, I don't think the intention was to make him literally suicidal. It's more that his grief made him unafraid of death and led to him being impulsive and careless. That is a symptom of suicidality, but he didn't directly attempt it. He also seemingly got over it pretty quickly. I don't think he was depressed, but deeply grieving.
@@sindrevangenrobberstad2889 Makes sense. It also changed him a lot. After Leafpool as well he became so much more bitter and cold. Poor Breezepelt and Nightcloud..
@@billcipher8645 I recommend you read Crowfeather's Trial. I won't spoil too much, but it takes place after Omen of the Stars, and involves him reconciling with and befriending Breezepelt and Nightcloud. It's very sweet and satisfying. It does get better for him and his family, and that's a very hopeful message and ending for a character that experienced so much tragedy. It's also a pretty good super edition.
*The Erins are shaking beneath Tennelle’s great story telling feet after this* Edit: PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAAASE CONTINUE THIS AU, ITS MY FAVORITE AU EVER AND I WILL WATCH IT ON REWIND FOR HOURS
I had a thought... if Holly and Lion are still in the dark forest when Ivy joins, there could be an epic threesome of secret dark forest rebels! And holly could get redemption from helping Ivy do the right thing. Maybe we can even get a 'ghost holly kills ghost hawk and fades away completely'to spice things up for our poor jay-bae.
That awkward moment when a cat animator can come up with better plots, conflicts, and characters that fit together in a story than an entire team of professional authors. (not trying to throw shade at Tennelle, I think that you did a good job with this)
My friend had a blind cat who was surprisingly very smart, her sense of smell was AMAZING so she could get around wherever, but sometimes she'd bump into walls and stuff. She was really old at the time, and yeah. I think she'd make an amazing warrior/hunter with her sense of smell, I don't think she'd be well in battle though. A couple of months ago, she died due to being very old. R.I.P Lydia. You were an awesome cat with astounding abilities.
Holy sh- if this wasn’t a rewrite this would’ve been my favorite thing to read, constantly talking about it and re-reading it. This was very fun to listen to!
Oh my GOD YOU GAVE HOLLYLEAF AN APPRENTICE!!! This. Should. Have. Happened! And I like that you made Firestar into more of a proactive leader here. It fits his personality more than him just fading into the distance like he did in POT and OOTS until BAM surprise he's the fourth cat. Ugh. Also the poster looks SO DOPE will it be available as merch?
@@susiepilled THAT is some STAKE right there. I mean sure there was SOME stakes since it was firestar's last life, but him being a spirit cat fighting spirit tigerstar....if firestar dies AGAIN that's IT. He's GONE which is HORRIFYING to think about.
Interesting rewrite! My suspicion is that Hollyleaf believes she's dead, but that she actually isn't. You mentioned that during the fire scene she has a bunch of near-death experiences but she comes out of them okay - perhaps Hollyleaf does have a power after all, and it's related to her ability to survive circumstances that would kill other cats, such as having the tunnel cave in. ...Or perhaps my interpretation is just an AU of an AU ;D
This makes sense since her body isn't actually there. That means that she only went through the portal. If she were dead, her body would still be there if she were.
Perhaps Hollyleaf’s body remains in the “half-dead” state seen in the Broken Code, stuck somewhere, while her spirit is in the Dark Forest. I suspect this because I don’t think physical bodies can enter ghost cat afterlives. If Hollyleaf really is alive, I think that would be a likely possibility.
i’m so sad that lionblaze ended up in the dark forest despite his redemption and his attempts to escape the dark forest but it makes sense for him to use his powers that way. i looove the changes made to his character, he feels like a true protagonist now instead of just playing with heathertail in the tunnels and fighting with berrynose.
As someone who is blind, I just wanted to say I really appreciate what you said about warriors and disabilities in this video. I’ve always been annoyed by the way this series treats characters with disabilities, and I’m glad someone pointed it out.
Honestly, I don't know how anyone could get the impression being a _doctor_ is easier than being a policeman/soldier/grocer. Though, from how much they play up bloodlines, small-mindedness isn't too hard for me to imagine.
someone has finally confronted the fact,, that outcast is the most unmemorible book ever forever. i mean even the new prophecy was memorable for how much traveling there is-
I wish you were apart of the Erin Hunter team so bad . I hate power of three , and was preparing to go to bed before I clicked on this video .. I cannot sleep because I cannot stop thinking about this and toying with your ideas . I long for this to be cannon, it would easily be my favorite arc .. you did absolutely amazing with this rewrite and I’m at a loss for words and cannot explain to you how awestruck and just ... perfect this is .. thank you so much for rewriting such a boring arc into something so fantastical .. god damn this is just ?? Wow ... WOW !! I know this will be a video I will return to !
"Now the Three are in charge of the whole Clan." that sent CHILLS down my spine idk why. but this rewrite is EPIC. it has me more invested than the actual arc. cant wait to see the omen of the stars rewrite!!! edit: BROO that ENDING IS SO HEART WRENCHING AND SUCH A CLIFF HANGERRR. AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
can we just accept this as canon? or as a "Rewritten AU"? because this is better than the original series and I want to see fan content made off of this version
The way that you described Hawkfrost's look of betrayal after Lionpaw leaves makes me believe that Hawkfrost will have a similar character arc/developement, as Theatrical's Hawkfrost AU.
I enjoy that we have a lot of the same ideas about what to do with this arc, especially Lionblaze's character! I'd love to see this become a fic someday. Maybe if I ever finish my rewrite lol.
Ok woah this was amazing. I wish that this had actually happened, because it makes all of the characters so much more complicated, especially Lionblaze and villain Hollyleaf. Also the portal from the dark forest is great, like i didn't understand how they just kinda... teleported out of there?? And the way that the three unlock new parts of their powers is great. This is so much better than the actual books i love all of these characters rhshjfjsjdf please why didnt this happen
Because they havent put put Tennelle in charge of the writing team yet uwu (SERIOUSLY! THIS WAS SO GOOD. I WISH I HAD A WAY OF THANKING THE-) (WHY WASNT I SUBSCRIBED?! im making sure i subscribe, then using my alt accounts to leave likes. uwu there's no reason not to, im willing to bet this took quite a lot of time and effort, bc that was top-notch quality here. (Top-Notch Like SAD-ist's work uwu)) anyways, THANKS AGAIN TENNELLE FOR THE FANTASTIC VIDEO! ^ ^
I can confirm that my three-legged cat is in no way lesser than my "normal" cat. She quite often is stronger, faster, quieter, and smarter than my other cat. Definitely more skittish though, but that's just her personality.
Bro, I adore this! My personal nostalgia bias likes best the bit about Hollyleaf becoming deputy and acting leader, because early on when I read this arc, I picked up on how smart a leader Holly would be, and I hoped she would become the leader of ThunderClan one day. So much for that! But in this AU, I like how even though she's a dangerous acting leader, it makes sense with what's going on and is satisfying, just in a different way.
Yes, going off of canon, I maintain to this day that Firestar should have died earlier, and Bramble should have made Holly deputy, who eventually made Ivypool her dep. it just made sense and would have been fun exploring the clan not liking them/being suspicious of their leadership
I find it poetic how Hollyleaf was the one to destroy the Moonpool. Especially when you take into account that Leafpool, (back then Leafpaw) was the one to discover the Moonpool in the first place. I kind of find it pretty poetic how the Kit of a cat who discovered the Moonpool, ended up being the one who destroyed it.
What I can remember from outcast: Tribe needs help cuz filler, purdy saves three uhhh Hollypaw was scared of Lionpaw once, tribe don’t want help, tribe of endless hunting don’t want to help, they help, the tribe doesn’t do help well, they beat the villains or something something, uhhhh cliffhanger. Oh yea and Jaypaw considered poisoning Breezepaw (arguably the best part)
Tennelle’s ending feels more like that of a tragic end to a myth or legend. After all the growth we have seen from our heroes the story ends with sacrifice, loss and mourning. You can argue this was always present in the original POT (and to be fair the original ending WAS always tragic) but this time the story has truly been shaped by the actions of our protagonists and we end off with our characters facing consequences and commitments that will open up the next chapter of the story (OOTS) in a fulfilling way. A great AU! Equally delivering things I’ve always wanted from the story( such as Hollyleaf in a position of leadership, Lionblaze having growth, and Jayfeather getting the respect he deserves) with the canon realities of our heroes’ mindsets.
Okay, also can we go back to the time in one of the new prophecy books where Cinderpelt literally hunts like a mouse or something while the medicine cats are trying to find their next way to communicate to StarClan? Like- she can literally hunt.
I don't have a 3 legged cat, but I do have a three legged dog. And let me tell you one thing, it does not hold her back. She our fastest dog, using her one back leg to LAUNCH herself when running. When she was a pup, her main playmate was an overly energetic labradoodle, who loved to play rough. So despite having only three legs, she could be a warrior easily if she were actually a cat.
I just checked, looks like there was a twitter post about their pronouns not long ago. Was there a UA-cam community post as well, and I just missed it?
I like the idea of the ending,because maybe when ivypool trains in the dark forest, she'll have hollyleaf to guide her and maybe even become best friends XD (it's just my opinion tho)
Real talk, Tennelle, If you had written Power of Three, I may have been a Warriors fan a lot longer. (I'm here cause I love your animation pilgrimage, and the warriors nostalgia is a great bonus!) Sooo much more satisfying and love the ending! Keep up the amazing work!
@@searing878 I don't remember, I would just look for a part that mentions Tawnypelt (which is gonna take a lot of time, I know) I did post that like 4 months ago? .w.
Hearing your narration and explanations on new scenes, I said “yikes” in so many moments, it’s indescribable. You did a really good job making me care for the story haha Also what is this other Power of Three you speak of? This is the real story
Agreed. I'd saw off an arm for this to be published canon. I mean, my god. I meant to listen to a little bit before I started homework for the night, but I got sucked in and it's now 3:52 am and I've done nothing but watch this vid. I regret nothing. I feel like a part of my soul that Power of 3 damaged has finally been healed. I'm on the edge of my seat for the eventual Omen of the Stars rewrite within this canon
@@lzrshark617 - I am so happy he’s doing these things. I decided to re-read warriors and it was so different than what I remembered and I could see every little problem. It just really got me down. Especially after seeing moonkitti’s video about bramlestar’s abuse. It just really got me down these books me at so much to me. I’m really getting excited for these rewrites though he does so well with these and I can just replace canon with this lol
@@katherineisabelleabbey5766 - so sorry! It’s edited now I thought I wrote he but I may have autocorrected or did it out of habit. Thanks for correcting me :)
I love mostly everything about this new rewrite, but the only thing is that I would rather have fire-star have a more epic death, so we don’t have just his death and that be that. I love the way he dies in the original series with all his clan mates watching and him finally defeat his life long enemy. That’s just my personal opinion but everything else I would ABSOLUTELY love to have. I just feel like it’s too much of a boring death for the cat we started the whole warriors series on.
You had me hanging on the edge of my seat this whole video, especially towards the end, when the tension was really high. And then, when the emotions were at their peak, with the overwhelming task ahead of Jayfeather realized, through the silence... EPILOGUE! That really got me XD. I laughed for a good 3 minutes. In all seriousness though, this is probably the most incredible story/au/fanfiction/any piece of literature I've heard all year. Maybe even my whole life. Seeing how much effort went into this has made me EXTREMELY hyped for clouded moon. Aside from the amazing story, the art is beautiful. I could look at it for hours. I am indeed inspired. Thankyou so much for taking the time to make this. You've made my day.
Crowpaw deadass tries to throw himself in front of a car on the way back to the Clans from the journey, & when Squirrelpaw & Brambleclaw hold him down he protests that he wants to be with Feathertail. It’s genuinely one of the darkest moments in the series n it’s surprising how no one remembers it 😔
This is a petition to make TennelleFlower the main writer of warrior cats every like is one signature we need as many as we can for a better warrior cats tomorrow.
I feel like the reverse would be better because the dod as cats would just be Clay as a big brown cat or Starflight as a tall black cat. You would have more creativity for example, making Jayfeather a seer nightwing
this would be a much better story than what we got, i think. personally, i would put in a whole bunch of minor plot points where the three do things that help emphasize how important the prophecy is while also pushing for some character growth and development just so we can have that same feeling we got from canon about something big was going down but that's something every writer has to decide for themselves. .
This rewrite made me so emotional. I felt every character beat and it was amazing from a writer who loves plot and character synergy. I want to read this series.
Oh my god dude, this was incredible. It makes Hollyleaf's descent into tragic villainy much more gradual and believable. And that last scene: UGH so much emotion, I loved it! The one thing I'd prefer is if there was a little more focus placed on trying to find out the three's parentage and the effect it has on them, since it was kind of a Big Deal and I think it deserves a lot of time to sit and build tension. But overall, a beautiful rewrite! I'm tempted to try and start actually making this into a story. It just feels like there's so much to work with here!
there's an animated video on the Curse of the Three-and out of all of them, I think Jayfeather and Dovewing have the most painful curse. Jayfeather can't tell what his feelings, thoughts, emotions are from his clanmates, driving him to insanity. Lionblaze kills everyone to try and help Jayfeather, but with no one to care for blind cats like him and Longtail, they starve to death. Christ. But then there's also Dovewing, who's able to hear as well as the books, but to the nth degree. She can even hear the pumping of hearts, blood pumping through veins, every breath, even as far as RiverClan territory. Her ears BLEED because the clan just WON'T. BE. *_QUIIET!!_* So she RIPS her ears off but blood loss, and sleep deprivation end up killing her. Holy god. Lionblaze just hurts anyone he touches. Sad, but not as bad as jay and dove.
God, I adore this with my whole heart. The summary left me hooked, and at the end I was literally on the edge of my seat. If no one makes a fanfic / full fix it fic using this idea once Tennelle posts their Omen of the Stars video then good god I will.
I love watching ex-warrior superfans talk and critique the series nonstop even though I have no clue what they're talking about. I'm like 6 minutes into the video already hooked onto something I don't know lmao 😭
one of my characters, springpaw, while not heavily disabled at birth, is a lot smaller than an average cat her age. she begins to have hyper sensitive.. well, senses, and they cause her to begin to accidentally hurt herself. she even gets harshly attacked by another character. however, despite all this, and all the troubles in her life, she’s a warrior apprentice, and will be a warrior when she gets there. while the current leader gives her extra assistance, she isn’t forced into a medicine cat role. she was kept a kit for an extra moon and while now being the age of a warrior she’s being held back. but she’s still becoming a warrior, just at her own pace! sorry for infodumping about spingy here but yeah. i hate the ableism in these books. (one of my friends characters in the same roleplay was an entirely blind warrior and there’s several other disabilities our kitties have.)
@@emilymonahan5232 yeah but they can’t do everything a fully able cat can - a blind cat wouldn’t be that good at chasing prey in a forest or fighting in a full battle, for example So don’t call that other person a dipshit, I’ll admit they didn’t need to make the comment but like, they’re a little bit right
anyway disabled people not being able to do things other people do isnt the point of ableist criticism iirc anyway (although warrior cats is not very good at researching how cats with disabilities act in the real world.) it's that they are seen as lesser and 'useless.' briarlight, for example, is pretty much considered useless by the rest of thunderclan, but there's ton of jobs she can still do around the clan like repair dens, take care of / watch kits, gather herbs, etc.
I don't usually comment but I just wanted to say that this was such a good video and the last bit with the siblings had me sobbing. You did such a good job with the execution and the overall storytelling was brilliant. The art was amazing as always. Anyways I love you and your videos, keep up the good work :).
Okay, ideas for the likes of minor plot points discussed at the end: *Stormfur, Brook and Purdy* - Stormfur had gotten a dream from StarClan that a danger is coming to his old home, and he decides he must go back to help them. Brook decides to go with him, as it would be dangerous to go alone. - Stormfur and Brook, on the way to the clans, run into Purdy. He reconnects with Stormfur and befriends Brook as the trio start to venture down there together. They meet Sol on the way with his followers. The trio are a bit suspicious of this group of cats, especially when Sol starts mentioning something about a prophecy, and decide to spy on Sol and his followers. This may make for a good prologue of Outcast. - For a bit of fun, maybe have Stormfur, Brook and Prudy split up to try and find information of the prophecy and Sol in the clans, Purdy in ThunderClan (he joins ThunderClan), Brook in ShadowClan (maybe they'd be willing to take her onboard if they invite Sol in) and Stormfur in RiverClan (I mean, come on, it's where he grew up for most of his kithood and apprenticeship). Okay, okay, yes, WindClan isn't covered, but hey, the medicine cats go to the Moonpool which is close to WindClan and the trio could ask them for info. - At the end of Eclipse, Stormfur and Brook take it upon themselves to chase Sol and their followers out of the clans' territory and to try and venture further to help the Clans find a new way of talking to StarClan. The four clans are sad to see them go, but understand that the two of them want to help. This is probably good footing for them to be seen again in Omen of the Stars, if that was the goal. Purdy is too old to be travelling and stays with ThunderClan by the end of the book. *Cinderheart and Lionblaze* - Maybe during the back half of the arc, there could be some sparks between them, especially when Lionblaze leads the rebellion against Hollyleaf. Then Cinderheart becomes depressed as she wonders what's happened to Lionblaze as they were getting to be quite good friends. I haven't really thought about it much. *Tawnypelt* - Since Tawnypelt is Bramblestar's sister, I think she'd stay for a while in ThunderClan very concerned for her brother. And then she spies on Hollyleaf as per Lionblaze's request as you said. I can also picture a scene or two where Tawnypelt and her kits walk into Bramblestar's den and whisper words of encouragement to him, saying that he will be a good leader and doesn't need to pretend to be Firestar in order to do that.
Ah, this is just beautiful. You gave Lionblaze interesting and emotional moments, Hollyleaf had more gradual development, and Jayfeather was adjusted to feel like he wasn't just giving in. But what I was most looking forward to in this AU was Sol, and you knocked that out of the park. He's still a false prophet, but his goals aren't just "I will destroy all the Clans because Skyclan specifically didn't like how I kidnapped three children." (Happens to the best of us, buddy). This Sol seems to honestly believe that he could do a better job at helping cats than Starclan, and the fact that his predictions seem to come true only makes that more interesting. For that matter, how did he know to ask Midnight about the Power of Three, and what did he mean by "extinguish their power for good?" Does he mean he would kill them(to be fair, he did succeed to some extent), or did he mean something...more? Ah, I can't wait for him to hopefully make a return in your Omen of the Stars!
Oh? Personally I think it would be more interesting if Firestar and Tigerstar still fight each other, and both spirits fade. It would truly show that Omen of the Stars and after is really a post Firestar era
I’m a bit late because the video length scared me but THIS IS DAMN GENIUS TENNELLE HOLY BUJEEBUS- I love this. So much??? Like words cannot express??? As a baby writer this is honestly mind blowing. You’re such an inspiration. Keep up the amazing work and I’m so so so excited for Omen of the Stars (do not rush the video tho I’m not pressuring you that would be bad-)
Amazing! I do wish you did the idea of med Lion and warrior Jay, tho that's personal preference. Another neat idea is evil leader hollyleaf. Imagine the arc ending with that. She knows she's not a part of the prophecy, and has basically banned talk of it. Trains in the dark forest with the idea of merging the clans under one almighty code and rule, since she's angry seeing cats in other clans breaking the code unpunished
I imagine she would have that ideals but she would try to get Ivypool to have the knowledge on the Dark Forest actual intentions and she would kinda have Ivypool talk to Jayfeather to her
I really loved how you not only set up the dark forest but also gave them a way to get into the clan's territory and I love what you did with hollyleaf's character it really makes her 3D and a character you could actually relate to.
Holy SHOT. This is fire Tennelle! I can’t express my love for this new ark!! Evil Hollyleaf was such a good idea and equally insane. And keeping Lionblaze in the Dark Forest??? Absolutely genius! This is amazing and the longest video I’ve ever sat though in 1 sitting. I was just in awe with all your ideas! I love it!! Keep up the AMAZING work, I can’t wait for the other arks!!
???: These guys are good StarClan: These guys are good StarClan: We're going to give them OP powers. [this was by @n o ] StarClan: Oh no, A BIG MISTAKE THAT WE MADE StarClan: These guys will destroy you, GET THEM OUT!
Okay this made me actually feel very much so tense and wanting to know more please make more of this continue what you have started please I beg of you this is a great story and I want to know more
Riiiip, at the end there I meant to say Whitewing and Birchfall’s kits. Not Cloudtail. Very unfortunate mispeak. ;_;
oof
Oh wow didn't even notice-
Yeah I don’t think she can have kids with her dad😂😂😂😂
*SWEET HOME ALABAMA*
Who is that new sona? Are you getting rid of Simmy? What's going on?
"I'm gonna try and not completely change the story-"
*five minutes later...*
Straight up murders Fireheart in book three.
Firestar you mean.
Firestar wasn't the biggest part Of PO3 so I guess it's ok
*o o p*
Yeah I don’t really like that part. In the original books firestar is finally killed taken down his rival but in this one it’s by a fire and he should’ve lasted longer
Ikr 😂
So basically let’s just put Tennelle in charge of the writing team
Mhm!
Yes.
That's an amazing idea, where do I have to sigh?
Sounds like it’s decided, then.
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In wich book did this happen!?
@@firefoxyt6568 in a AU
The Three:
Jayfeather:
~ Can practically read other cat’s minds
~ Can walk in people’s dreams
~ Has 1001 IQ
HollyLeaf:
~ Is good at drama (especially at gatherings)
~ Stealth mode
~ Good at enforcing the law
Lionblaze:
*i fight good and not get hurted*
So in other words Jayfeather and Hollyleaf are theater kids but Lionblaze can't relate to them.
Hollyleaf wasn't even part of the prophecy and she was more interesting than lionblaze XD
@@Kestrelbee PREACH
@@coffeewolfproductions9113 as a theatre kid this is accurate
LionBlaze once he loses his powers: *I muscle man and have a wife*
crying because of the symmetry of firestar dying from a fire to save cats just like yellowfang died
And he burnt alive, seeing as he still had three lives left! Yay :D
Oh gosh-
I didn't even realize this until you pointed it out and now I'm crying /pos
@@wolfkitty42 With that in mind, and with how Medicine cats usually can just tell how many lives a leader has, Imagine Jayfeather feeling Firestar die every time, and with his emotion-sensing power, he _feels_ Firestar’s pain and suffering as he’s dying, and with the entire Ashfur and Squirrelflight fight in front of him, he probably just starts having a panic attack or something, and when he screams that Firestar is dead dead, he’s probably crying from the pain. Like, that’s bound to traumatize him deeply. It also could add to Bramblestar loosing a life due to the poisoning! Jayfeather can feel that Bramblestar feels extremely unwell, but he just doesn’t understand _why,_ and he also doesn’t want to lose another leader, much less his father.
@@flounderingfish2480 so now im fucking sobbing
For some reason i just found this so funny
“W-where’s StarClan...?”
*”You destroyed the Moonpool Hollyleaf”*
🥰😝💕Oh yeah oopsies 😀😘
Like "where the fuck do you think?!" 😂
@@MinecraftLover58 LOL XD XD
"You destoried our one communcation to Starclan. What did think was gonna happen??"
Whats the timestamp
“Just these two books have fueled more animations than any other parts of the warriors series”
*Mapleshade’s Vengeance laughs in the background*
It's not even Mapleshade's Vengeance... it's just Mapleshade... she's in every book that isn't the main series istg
@@hyalophora not really. Just with cats she’s training. I think she’s so popular because of a mix of being an intimidating villain, being a female villain, having an actual backstory and reason to be evil other than “muahahahaha evil now”, and being really pretty but without much cannon art so people can experiment.
@Ethereal26 agreed. And her ghost is even worse. For example, she never interacts with Starclan cats? I’m pretty sure she murdered Appledusk, Reedshine, Oakstar, and the others ghosts just because they never show up in the Starclan Darkforest fight, but what about her kits? I find it hard to believe she never interacted with her children in the afterlife, or even the fact that Reedshine and her kits survived until a natural death given the fact that ghosts can murder living cats. Also that she randomly chose Crookedstar, even though there’s other relatives of Appledusk that were alive before him. I’ve heard people say that Mapleshade killed Mosskit, which would fit but just makes her ghost even *more* confusing, and this explanation isn’t even factoring in why she cared about Goosefeather, and many other seemingly random inaccuracies.
@@toshowmyfriends2567 the only thing I disagree on is the "why CrookedStar" comment. Of course him, he was isolated and hated because he broke his jaw, and MapleShade provided him with attention and praise when almost nobody else would. To a villain, he's the perfect pawn.
@@bonnietelocole6777 I understand why she chose Crookedstar, I just don’t understand why she chose only Crookedstar. Stormfur, Feathertail, Stonefur and Mistystar were half-clan kits, Reedshine’s original kits probably got treated differently after the events of the book, etc. I don’t understand why she limited herself to Crookedstar then seemed to forget about her promise to end Appledusk’s bloodline. I don’t understand why she didn’t do it to *all* his descendants
I love how in the finished project of the drawing, Sol's tail is separating Hollyleaf from both of her brothers, like how Sol did in your rewrite. I don't know if it was intentional but either way it was a nice touch and I loved it!
wow, nice catch!
OH MY GOD ur right dat crazy *bows* u are just wow crazy
*“I would never wish harm on a child, but someone please punt this little twerp into the lake.”* -Tennelle, 2020
the top foreshadowing of the three's parents: Hollypaw Jaypaw and Lionpaw constantly think *wow i am SO glad crowfeather isnt My dad!*
If only they knew oh wait
that was actually a quote in the books haha
We will be right back
also their names line up too: crowFEATHER and jayFEATHER / LEAFpool and hollyLEAF
@@froggzdeartist2565 And then we have Lionblaze
See, here’s the thing: I can’t decide if this is more insane than the books or not.
The obvious answer is whichever is better.
You can prefer whichever one you want, but I can't deny that this rewrite made me emotional at the end. The three separated? Jesus Christ Tennelle is good at rewriting..
@@nightfiresturnedalvirollie they actually go by he/them! But yeah, no clue what’s with Simmy at the start
@@nightfiresturnedalvirollie & @Euximoniia If you go into the community tab and scroll down a bit, you’ll see that’s Tennelle’s new sona!
@@nightfiresturnedalvirollie he/they
Over an hour of Moonkitti character analysis... over an hour of TenelleFlowers plot analysis... truly these have been a blessed couple of weeks
111th like
i like to watch bother back to back over and over cause it makes me feel motivated to talk with my girlfriend and write and be happy
its nice
SLURPS UP THIS BEAST WITH A BENDY STRAW.
I'm so excited that before me lays 1.5 hours of tbaby!!!!!
edit;; (finished watching this delicious delicious pie) Seriously BLOWN away by how much better???? this feels???? Honestly everything in this nails it imo. I ADORE the changes. DANG but it makes me sad about WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN. but so excited and inspired by what WE CAN DO! Thank you so much for putting this together. I LOVE YOUR BEAUTIFUL MIND!!!!!!
Y E S
CherryStar YES also, cherry Star?! How’s the Feathertail MAP going?
Thank you, Blixemi!!! 🥰🥰 and he’ll yeah! Warriors community out here creating the content that FEEDS us!
Ngl, the bramblestar divorcing squirrelflight was my favorite part
@@TennelleFlowers The main reason I’m still here in the Warriors community, is really just for the community itself- the actual books are kind of descending into a mess of unorganized... stuff?.... sometimes I feel like the Erins are making these books just for money now... oof...
"And for the cherry on top, Bramblestar makes Hollyleaf his new deputy, because she is 'the only cat willing to be honest with him.'"
Now THAT is an Omega Oof.
Berrynose: *I WILL BECOME DEPUTY-*
Bramblestar: HOLLYLEAF!
Berrynose: **Sobs in den corner**
@@rxman_edits *pats berrynose* don’t worry you’ll get your chance when holly leaf becomes leader
*_EMOTIONAL DAMAGE_*
Hits you in the feels (in a good way)
Personally I always liked the idea that the Three got their powers from the Dark Forest. It explains why their powers go away after the big hell battle, and Rock saying that they never should've been born also makes more sense. And, in the context of your AU, would explain why StarClan is scared of the Three.
This rewrite is so much more interesting and suspenseful than the entirety of Power of Three and Omen of The Stars! I wasn’t sure how I was gonna like villain Hollyleaf but it ended up being really cool! And the portal from the world of the dead to the world of the living fills in the plot gap that the Erins left on how The Dark Forest cats and StarClan cats got into the world of the living to help their sides of the Great War!!
1q
100th like!
I thought that for them to fight in the Great War they would come through the trenches...
I KNOW ITS SO COOL, its like the spirit portals in Legends of Korra!
Oh yes it's a long video !! :)) Love these, I listen to them while I draw
I watch a lot of vids while I draw too, nice to have long ones
I listen yo these long videos wall doing chores (mostly the dishes)
Yeah, Moonkitti's Bramblestar video is another long one. I suggest watching that.
(also I love your videos Northflower
Oh hi Northflower. Same! xD I did in fact listen to this one while drawing.
Same
I think the thing I love most about the warriors fandom is that we know the books are... Ok. Theyre good but theyre just that only ok. We use our creativity to make beautiful stories. Even when the books fail to satisfy us we scrap together the good parts to make our own stories and our own aus.
The Warrior Cat fandom reminds me of the MLP fandom. The show is just okay but the Bronies make it amazing with their stories and character AUs
@@leapoffaith21 Not... Really. Brownies aren't near as good storymakers as Warriors
It’s kinda funny how the fandom brought more life into the books than the books themselves.
i never really knew what people were talking about in the Omen of the Stars arc, or more so how bad it was, until I read the last few books. It does seem they ran out of time, and not a lot of story was put into the deaths or build up. I agree though, it's warriors, I'm a little biased, and it's okay.
Wasn’t there a WindClan deptuty that had one of his paws twisted backwards? That’s a perfect example of “disabled cats can still be warriors”
@Dyu Yup, those two.
Cinderpaw and Jaypaw: *are warrior apprentices with disabilities*
Thunderclan: Uh oh you did a fucky wucky now its time to get in the healing hole!
I may be mis-remembering but i think deadfoot also got sick easily and had breathing problems, so yeah hes a great example of a disabled warrior (and also just one of my favorite underappreciated characters)
Yep crow feathers father. Dead foot
Exactly
I swear it felt like lion, jay, and holly were apprentices for SO long
Because they were
I know right?
During the fire scene, it felt like the two (and hollyleaf) had been fully grown warriors since a book ago, but jay feather literally gets his name in the same book? The only other cats I can think of that were apprentices for THIS freaking long were swift paw and his apprentice group… yeah
Honestly surprising they didn’t bitch to firestar about that
Rereading the FOURTH book, they are still apprentices... How long can they be stuck in the teenager role? arent they well past the age of evolving into a warrior, or at least at it? like cmon id be so mad
@@alteregobruh I guess maybe there was still distrust because of the sneaking out of camp and Hollypaw sneaking out of the clan that one time idk
@@laurenswholesale Jayfeather was an apprectice until near the end of the ffth, though... leafpool did jay dirty with that, it took so long and nobody cared except like himself
halfway through i forgot we were talking about a rewrite and i was like "damn i need to reread power of three"
LMFAO SAME
Same 🤣
What are you talking about? This IS Po3
the last story actually brought me to tears- I wish this was actually the way the books were written, its so amazing and well thought out.
right!! omg tennelle is a genius
“He hates Crowfeather for nearly killing Crowfeather”
I know that’s supposed to be Lionblaze but I can’t with what actually came out of your mouth-
Well, Crowfeather did nearly kill Crowfeather that one time in the second series
@@sindrevangenrobberstad2889 I can't stop thinking about it, he literally attempted suicide and everyone just ignores it
@@billcipher8645 He's definitely the closest character in the series to attempt suicide. However, I don't think the intention was to make him literally suicidal. It's more that his grief made him unafraid of death and led to him being impulsive and careless. That is a symptom of suicidality, but he didn't directly attempt it. He also seemingly got over it pretty quickly. I don't think he was depressed, but deeply grieving.
@@sindrevangenrobberstad2889 Makes sense. It also changed him a lot. After Leafpool as well he became so much more bitter and cold. Poor Breezepelt and Nightcloud..
@@billcipher8645 I recommend you read Crowfeather's Trial. I won't spoil too much, but it takes place after Omen of the Stars, and involves him reconciling with and befriending Breezepelt and Nightcloud. It's very sweet and satisfying. It does get better for him and his family, and that's a very hopeful message and ending for a character that experienced so much tragedy. It's also a pretty good super edition.
Tennelle: "Each character is going to go through their own problems. . . . . ."
Me: *puberty*
They’re going through their “teenage angst phases”
Oh my goodness
PFFFFFT relatable lol
P u b e r t y
ytrebup
*The Erins are shaking beneath Tennelle’s great story telling feet after this*
Edit: PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAAASE CONTINUE THIS AU, ITS MY FAVORITE AU EVER AND I WILL WATCH IT ON REWIND FOR HOURS
Yes PLEASE if someone makes his au into books I would start CRYING from happiness
*This is canon now.*
@@meIIohi Yes.
is it really an au if it's better than the actual series itself?
Jaykit: **exists**
Thunderclan: *"Yeah it's small brain time."*
I had a thought... if Holly and Lion are still in the dark forest when Ivy joins, there could be an epic threesome of secret dark forest rebels! And holly could get redemption from helping Ivy do the right thing. Maybe we can even get a 'ghost holly kills ghost hawk and fades away completely'to spice things up for our poor jay-bae.
And if that would happen then I would probably cry more than Holly's actual death.
Yessssss
That awkward moment when a cat animator can come up with better plots, conflicts, and characters that fit together in a story than an entire team of professional authors. (not trying to throw shade at Tennelle, I think that you did a good job with this)
He really did. I want to read these books so bad
I agree, Tennelle did way better than Erin Hunter- They should just add her to the writing team XD
@@eeveepersoproductions1694 I agree but its they/them or he/him, not she
@@coffeewolfproductions9113 My bad-
@@eeveepersoproductions1694 Its okay, mistakes happen.
My friend had a blind cat who was surprisingly very smart, her sense of smell was AMAZING so she could get around wherever, but sometimes she'd bump into walls and stuff. She was really old at the time, and yeah. I think she'd make an amazing warrior/hunter with her sense of smell, I don't think she'd be well in battle though. A couple of months ago, she died due to being very old.
R.I.P Lydia. You were an awesome cat with astounding abilities.
sounds like Lydia could have been one of the three!
Holy sh- if this wasn’t a rewrite this would’ve been my favorite thing to read, constantly talking about it and re-reading it. This was very fun to listen to!
IKRR
I so agree
same
Oh my GOD YOU GAVE HOLLYLEAF AN APPRENTICE!!! This. Should. Have. Happened!
And I like that you made Firestar into more of a proactive leader here. It fits his personality more than him just fading into the distance like he did in POT and OOTS until BAM surprise he's the fourth cat. Ugh. Also the poster looks SO DOPE will it be available as merch?
Yeah it’s on his redbubble!
OOO speaking of the fourth cat, wonder who it will be in the rewrite..
@@susiepilled god imagine spirit firestar vs spirit tigerstar!!!
@@TheRibottoStudios ysss
@@susiepilled THAT is some STAKE right there. I mean sure there was SOME stakes since it was firestar's last life, but him being a spirit cat fighting spirit tigerstar....if firestar dies AGAIN that's IT. He's GONE which is HORRIFYING to think about.
Interesting rewrite! My suspicion is that Hollyleaf believes she's dead, but that she actually isn't. You mentioned that during the fire scene she has a bunch of near-death experiences but she comes out of them okay - perhaps Hollyleaf does have a power after all, and it's related to her ability to survive circumstances that would kill other cats, such as having the tunnel cave in.
...Or perhaps my interpretation is just an AU of an AU ;D
Her power is luck, and incredible survival skills! :)
@@testerwulf3357 well you know what they say, “I’d rather be lucky than good.”
This makes sense since her body isn't actually there. That means that she only went through the portal. If she were dead, her body would still be there if she were.
Perhaps Hollyleaf’s body remains in the “half-dead” state seen in the Broken Code, stuck somewhere, while her spirit is in the Dark Forest. I suspect this because I don’t think physical bodies can enter ghost cat afterlives. If Hollyleaf really is alive, I think that would be a likely possibility.
@tester
Holly is legit a Nagito kinnie
i’m so sad that lionblaze ended up in the dark forest despite his redemption and his attempts to escape the dark forest but it makes sense for him to use his powers that way. i looove the changes made to his character, he feels like a true protagonist now instead of just playing with heathertail in the tunnels and fighting with berrynose.
As someone who is blind, I just wanted to say I really appreciate what you said about warriors and disabilities in this video. I’ve always been annoyed by the way this series treats characters with disabilities, and I’m glad someone pointed it out.
How do you spell\find this video if u r blind? Is their glasses for that if so wow!
@@deedeebeee92 Could’ve asked a friend or a sibling to write it for them
@@deedeebeee92 audiobooks...
@@micah1841 how do you find the books? I'm just wondering , not mad
@Deedee beee Audible works for audiobooks, i use it to read warriors cats
Erins: "Being a medicine cat is easier than being a warrio-
Tennelle: *"MiNi rAnT tiiimmEeeEe~"*
Honestly, I don't know how anyone could get the impression being a _doctor_ is easier than being a policeman/soldier/grocer.
Though, from how much they play up bloodlines, small-mindedness isn't too hard for me to imagine.
When is this at
@@ratthew_3938 15:50
(:
@@frzen-rain6433 thxx
It's not easier just less dangerous
someone has finally confronted the fact,, that outcast is the most unmemorible book ever forever. i mean even the new prophecy was memorable for how much traveling there is-
I love outcast idk why lol
I forgot the book even existed.
I was doing a drawing challenge for a scene in each book and for the life of me, I couldn't remember what happened in Outcast.
i only remember outcast for its old cover oop-
@@tarocent I can only remember it as they went to the Tribe and Jaypaw told Hollypaw and Lionpaw that they have powers
I wish you were apart of the Erin Hunter team so bad . I hate power of three , and was preparing to go to bed before I clicked on this video .. I cannot sleep because I cannot stop thinking about this and toying with your ideas . I long for this to be cannon, it would easily be my favorite arc .. you did absolutely amazing with this rewrite and I’m at a loss for words and cannot explain to you how awestruck and just ... perfect this is .. thank you so much for rewriting such a boring arc into something so fantastical .. god damn this is just ?? Wow ... WOW !! I know this will be a video I will return to !
my mind is blown from what went on in this rewrite
I actually like the power of three
Tennelle: “Sol. Enough said.”
Me: Very, very fair
"Now the Three are in charge of the whole Clan." that sent CHILLS down my spine idk why.
but this rewrite is EPIC. it has me more invested than the actual arc. cant wait to see the omen of the stars rewrite!!!
edit: BROO that ENDING IS SO HEART WRENCHING AND SUCH A CLIFF HANGERRR. AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
Can I just say how happy I am about Bramble and Squirrel's cat-divorce.
Haha funny number as the like haha
@@elm-ishh5718 uhhh what?
@@lpsdogqueens it was probably 69.
Ikr
Squirlf finally left the man that didn't deserve her
I. LOVE. THIS. AU. I WISH THIS IS WHAT WE GOT OMG. THIS IS SUCH GOOD WRITING I WISH THIS IS WHAT THE POWER OF THREE WAS
AU? This isn't an AU. This is the new canon and nothing can change my mind.
@@wolfkitty42 trueeeee
can we just accept this as canon? or as a "Rewritten AU"? because this is better than the original series and I want to see fan content made off of this version
yesss I do too
This. Is. Canon. No arguing, just waiting until Rewritten AU omen of the stars comes out.
This Is definitely better canon then the original power of three is my least favorite
yes pleaseeee
@@wolfkitty42 yes 100% cannon! the og books? nope the only power of three series is this one
The way that you described Hawkfrost's look of betrayal after Lionpaw leaves makes me believe that Hawkfrost will have a similar character arc/developement, as Theatrical's Hawkfrost AU.
Okay I just have to say that Lionblaze and Berrynose having a bromance can live in my head rent free
I enjoy that we have a lot of the same ideas about what to do with this arc, especially Lionblaze's character! I'd love to see this become a fic someday. Maybe if I ever finish my rewrite lol.
Also mmmm yum delicious art
@@avalonwatchingvideos2683 Yum
I want to write this, and if I plan it out, I shall write it with relish
Ok woah this was amazing. I wish that this had actually happened, because it makes all of the characters so much more complicated, especially Lionblaze and villain Hollyleaf. Also the portal from the dark forest is great, like i didn't understand how they just kinda... teleported out of there?? And the way that the three unlock new parts of their powers is great. This is so much better than the actual books i love all of these characters rhshjfjsjdf please why didnt this happen
Because they havent put put Tennelle in charge of the writing team yet uwu
(SERIOUSLY! THIS WAS SO GOOD. I WISH I HAD A WAY OF THANKING THE-)
(WHY WASNT I SUBSCRIBED?! im making sure i subscribe, then using my alt accounts to leave likes. uwu
there's no reason not to, im willing to bet this took quite a lot of time and effort, bc that was top-notch quality here.
(Top-Notch Like SAD-ist's work uwu))
anyways, THANKS AGAIN TENNELLE FOR THE FANTASTIC VIDEO! ^ ^
I can confirm that my three-legged cat is in no way lesser than my "normal" cat. She quite often is stronger, faster, quieter, and smarter than my other cat. Definitely more skittish though, but that's just her personality.
My cousins cat had a litter of kittens, one was born blind. I can say that little blind kitten was stronger than all her siblings combined
Bro, I adore this! My personal nostalgia bias likes best the bit about Hollyleaf becoming deputy and acting leader, because early on when I read this arc, I picked up on how smart a leader Holly would be, and I hoped she would become the leader of ThunderClan one day. So much for that! But in this AU, I like how even though she's a dangerous acting leader, it makes sense with what's going on and is satisfying, just in a different way.
Yes, going off of canon, I maintain to this day that Firestar should have died earlier, and Bramble should have made Holly deputy, who eventually made Ivypool her dep. it just made sense and would have been fun exploring the clan not liking them/being suspicious of their leadership
I find it poetic how Hollyleaf was the one to destroy the Moonpool. Especially when you take into account that Leafpool, (back then Leafpaw) was the one to discover the Moonpool in the first place. I kind of find it pretty poetic how the Kit of a cat who discovered the Moonpool, ended up being the one who destroyed it.
A conversation between Leaf and Holly after this took place could be so interesting and emotional.
What I can remember from outcast:
Tribe needs help cuz filler, purdy saves three uhhh Hollypaw was scared of Lionpaw once, tribe don’t want help, tribe of endless hunting don’t want to help, they help, the tribe doesn’t do help well, they beat the villains or something something, uhhhh cliffhanger.
Oh yea and Jaypaw considered poisoning Breezepaw (arguably the best part)
Omg he did?? I completely forgot that pff
Tennelle’s ending feels more like that of a tragic end to a myth or legend. After all the growth we have seen from our heroes the story ends with sacrifice, loss and mourning. You can argue this was always present in the original POT (and to be fair the original ending WAS always tragic) but this time the story has truly been shaped by the actions of our protagonists and we end off with our characters facing consequences and commitments that will open up the next chapter of the story (OOTS) in a fulfilling way. A great AU! Equally delivering things I’ve always wanted from the story( such as Hollyleaf in a position of leadership, Lionblaze having growth, and Jayfeather getting the respect he deserves) with the canon realities of our heroes’ mindsets.
Okay, also can we go back to the time in one of the new prophecy books where Cinderpelt literally hunts like a mouse or something while the medicine cats are trying to find their next way to communicate to StarClan? Like- she can literally hunt.
Doesn't she does that in season 1 book 6 as well?
Luna oh yeah I think so
I don't have a 3 legged cat, but I do have a three legged dog. And let me tell you one thing, it does not hold her back. She our fastest dog, using her one back leg to LAUNCH herself when running. When she was a pup, her main playmate was an overly energetic labradoodle, who loved to play rough. So despite having only three legs, she could be a warrior easily if she were actually a cat.
As a disabled person, I really enjoyed and appreciated your perspective on Jayfeather's blindness and TC's ableism :^) thank you
*TIMESTAMPS:*
Introduction- 0:00
The Sight- 13:33
Dark River/Passage- 26:30
Long Shadows- 33:47
Sunrise- 40:10
Outcast- 45:42
Eclipse- 1:01:02
Other additions- 1:21:56
Conclusion- 1:24:09
Y’know, this is very useful and I bet it’ll reach 1000 likes one day
@@lykhra2178 sadly it’s been 2 months
@Riverstone Iceis me too, I have to wear glasses but not blind lop
Tenelle should’ve flipping pinned this comment. It’s too pure, to perfect. :p
@@catchthesepaws. four months and only 706 likes-
Just letting everyone who wasn't here for the premiere, Tennelle goes by he/him or they/them now, so please be respectful of their pronouns :3
Thank you for letting me know!
Wait when did Tennelle say that?
@@spyritsolz I remember them mentioning their pronouns in one of their Patreon streams
@@thearcanestar Ok, cool! I’ll try my best to refer to Tennelle as he or they :)
I just checked, looks like there was a twitter post about their pronouns not long ago. Was there a UA-cam community post as well, and I just missed it?
I like the idea of the ending,because maybe when ivypool trains in the dark forest, she'll have hollyleaf to guide her and maybe even become best friends XD (it's just my opinion tho)
I feel like Hollyleaf would try to lead Ivypool on the right path and try to make her know what the Dark Forest actually is
Or Hollyleaf would be forgiven for her sins and gets accepted into Starclan
YES. FANTASTIC IDEA!
Real talk, Tennelle, If you had written Power of Three, I may have been a Warriors fan a lot longer. (I'm here cause I love your animation pilgrimage, and the warriors nostalgia is a great bonus!) Sooo much more satisfying and love the ending! Keep up the amazing work!
Tennelle: "And, if it turns out we're right about the production of this particular arc in particular-"
Tennelle: **Inhales**
Tennelle: Tawnypelt
Captions: Johnnypelt
hEreS jOhnNY
timestamp?
@@searing878 I don't remember, I would just look for a part that mentions Tawnypelt (which is gonna take a lot of time, I know) I did post that like 4 months ago? .w.
@@searing878 While rewatching this for the 5th time, I found the timestamp for it! 1:23:19
@@jandy1850 ok
@@jandy1850 watching this 5 times is a big mood
"He hates Crowfeather for nearly killing Crowfeather in the tunnels
wait a minute
ilUmInAti cOmfIrMed
sUICIDE
LMAO
Hearing your narration and explanations on new scenes, I said “yikes” in so many moments, it’s indescribable. You did a really good job making me care for the story haha
Also what is this other Power of Three you speak of? This is the real story
Agreed. I'd saw off an arm for this to be published canon. I mean, my god. I meant to listen to a little bit before I started homework for the night, but I got sucked in and it's now 3:52 am and I've done nothing but watch this vid. I regret nothing. I feel like a part of my soul that Power of 3 damaged has finally been healed. I'm on the edge of my seat for the eventual Omen of the Stars rewrite within this canon
@@lzrshark617 - I am so happy he’s doing these things. I decided to re-read warriors and it was so different than what I remembered and I could see every little problem. It just really got me down. Especially after seeing moonkitti’s video about bramlestar’s abuse. It just really got me down these books me at so much to me. I’m really getting excited for these rewrites though he does so well with these and I can just replace canon with this lol
@@katherineisabelleabbey5766 - so sorry! It’s edited now I thought I wrote he but I may have autocorrected or did it out of habit. Thanks for correcting me :)
Hollyleaf’s power is ✨lack of empathy✨
Two years later:I’m still waitin’ for omen of the stars-
(AND I LOVE THE REWRITE! ITS AMAZING)
I love mostly everything about this new rewrite, but the only thing is that I would rather have fire-star have a more epic death, so we don’t have just his death and that be that. I love the way he dies in the original series with all his clan mates watching and him finally defeat his life long enemy. That’s just my personal opinion but everything else I would ABSOLUTELY love to have. I just feel like it’s too much of a boring death for the cat we started the whole warriors series on.
Simmy: *sees new sona*
Simmy: am I a joke to you?!
You had me hanging on the edge of my seat this whole video, especially towards the end, when the tension was really high. And then, when the emotions were at their peak, with the overwhelming task ahead of Jayfeather realized, through the silence...
EPILOGUE!
That really got me XD. I laughed for a good 3 minutes.
In all seriousness though, this is probably the most incredible story/au/fanfiction/any piece of literature I've heard all year. Maybe even my whole life. Seeing how much effort went into this has made me EXTREMELY hyped for clouded moon. Aside from the amazing story, the art is beautiful. I could look at it for hours.
I am indeed inspired. Thankyou so much for taking the time to make this. You've made my day.
1:22:38
¨he hates crowfeather for nearly killing crowfeather¨
crowfeather: *trust nobody, not even yourself*
Well, to be fair, Crowfeather _did_ try to kill Crowfeather that one time in Moonrise. No one ever talks about it though 💀
@@axelf9947 wait what scene are you talking about i havent read the books in a bit lmao
Crowpaw deadass tries to throw himself in front of a car on the way back to the Clans from the journey, & when Squirrelpaw & Brambleclaw hold him down he protests that he wants to be with Feathertail. It’s genuinely one of the darkest moments in the series n it’s surprising how no one remembers it 😔
@@axelf9947 jeez ima have to reread lmao, i don't remember that at all
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Cool idea!
The other way around would be cool too
I feel like the reverse would be better because the dod as cats would just be Clay as a big brown cat or Starflight as a tall black cat. You would have more creativity for example, making Jayfeather a seer nightwing
@@juliaguevara4512 True that's a good point
Everyone, Tennelle uses the pronouns He/Him/They/Them so please respect that and use their correct pronouns!
I will help share this new imformation
Thank you so much for the heart Tennelle! I'm a huge fan!
Thanks for putting this out here because youtube is my only social media so I have no way of knowing this... thank you! :)
thank you! i had no idea
Trans Rights!
yup imma pretend that this rewrite is what was written in the books its just canon for me.
this would be a much better story than what we got, i think. personally, i would put in a whole bunch of minor plot points where the three do things that help emphasize how important the prophecy is while also pushing for some character growth and development just so we can have that same feeling we got from canon about something big was going down but that's something every writer has to decide for themselves.
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This rewrite made me so emotional. I felt every character beat and it was amazing from a writer who loves plot and character synergy. I want to read this series.
Oh my god dude, this was incredible. It makes Hollyleaf's descent into tragic villainy much more gradual and believable. And that last scene: UGH so much emotion, I loved it! The one thing I'd prefer is if there was a little more focus placed on trying to find out the three's parentage and the effect it has on them, since it was kind of a Big Deal and I think it deserves a lot of time to sit and build tension. But overall, a beautiful rewrite! I'm tempted to try and start actually making this into a story. It just feels like there's so much to work with here!
Speaking of Power of Three, I wonder if you’ve ever heard of the Curse of Three au. Maybe it’s too gory to talk about, but I find it very interesting.
I would love to see them make a video on it
there's an animated video on the Curse of the Three-and out of all of them, I think Jayfeather and Dovewing have the most painful curse. Jayfeather can't tell what his feelings, thoughts, emotions are from his clanmates, driving him to insanity. Lionblaze kills everyone to try and help Jayfeather, but with no one to care for blind cats like him and Longtail, they starve to death. Christ. But then there's also Dovewing, who's able to hear as well as the books, but to the nth degree. She can even hear the pumping of hearts, blood pumping through veins, every breath, even as far as RiverClan territory. Her ears BLEED because the clan just WON'T. BE. *_QUIIET!!_* So she RIPS her ears off but blood loss, and sleep deprivation end up killing her. Holy god. Lionblaze just hurts anyone he touches. Sad, but not as bad as jay and dove.
@@TheRibottoStudios yea, jay and dove definitely got the worst fate
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Okay I love this-
@@TheRibottoStudios where can I read this-?
" He doesn't listen, because, *of course he doesn't.* "
God, I adore this with my whole heart. The summary left me hooked, and at the end I was literally on the edge of my seat. If no one makes a fanfic / full fix it fic using this idea once Tennelle posts their Omen of the Stars video then good god I will.
I love watching ex-warrior superfans talk and critique the series nonstop even though I have no clue what they're talking about. I'm like 6 minutes into the video already hooked onto something I don't know lmao 😭
*Yawns excessively*
Phone:Bing!
*still yawning checks phone*
Yaw- TENNELLEFLOWERS
one of my characters, springpaw, while not heavily disabled at birth, is a lot smaller than an average cat her age. she begins to have hyper sensitive.. well, senses, and they cause her to begin to accidentally hurt herself. she even gets harshly attacked by another character. however, despite all this, and all the troubles in her life, she’s a warrior apprentice, and will be a warrior when she gets there. while the current leader gives her extra assistance, she isn’t forced into a medicine cat role. she was kept a kit for an extra moon and while now being the age of a warrior she’s being held back. but she’s still becoming a warrior, just at her own pace!
sorry for infodumping about spingy here but yeah. i hate the ableism in these books.
(one of my friends characters in the same roleplay was an entirely blind warrior and there’s several other disabilities our kitties have.)
its not ableism for a cat to be physically unable to do stuff due to their disability, it's realistic
@@vinnie861 blind cats and three legged cats are competent and can hunt dipshit
@@emilymonahan5232 yeah but they can’t do everything a fully able cat can - a blind cat wouldn’t be that good at chasing prey in a forest or fighting in a full battle, for example
So don’t call that other person a dipshit, I’ll admit they didn’t need to make the comment but like, they’re a little bit right
@@aposterous4126 nno, youd be really surprised at how competent blind cats are lmfao
anyway disabled people not being able to do things other people do isnt the point of ableist criticism iirc anyway (although warrior cats is not very good at researching how cats with disabilities act in the real world.) it's that they are seen as lesser and 'useless.' briarlight, for example, is pretty much considered useless by the rest of thunderclan, but there's ton of jobs she can still do around the clan like repair dens, take care of / watch kits, gather herbs, etc.
I don't usually comment but I just wanted to say that this was such a good video and the last bit with the siblings had me sobbing. You did such a good job with the execution and the overall storytelling was brilliant. The art was amazing as always. Anyways I love you and your videos, keep up the good work :).
Me rewatching this for the millionth time desperately leg-bouncing waiting with unconcealed excitement for the eventual Omen of the Stars rewrite: (:
Okay, ideas for the likes of minor plot points discussed at the end:
*Stormfur, Brook and Purdy*
- Stormfur had gotten a dream from StarClan that a danger is coming to his old home, and he decides he must go back to help them. Brook decides to go with him, as it would be dangerous to go alone.
- Stormfur and Brook, on the way to the clans, run into Purdy. He reconnects with Stormfur and befriends Brook as the trio start to venture down there together. They meet Sol on the way with his followers. The trio are a bit suspicious of this group of cats, especially when Sol starts mentioning something about a prophecy, and decide to spy on Sol and his followers. This may make for a good prologue of Outcast.
- For a bit of fun, maybe have Stormfur, Brook and Prudy split up to try and find information of the prophecy and Sol in the clans, Purdy in ThunderClan (he joins ThunderClan), Brook in ShadowClan (maybe they'd be willing to take her onboard if they invite Sol in) and Stormfur in RiverClan (I mean, come on, it's where he grew up for most of his kithood and apprenticeship). Okay, okay, yes, WindClan isn't covered, but hey, the medicine cats go to the Moonpool which is close to WindClan and the trio could ask them for info.
- At the end of Eclipse, Stormfur and Brook take it upon themselves to chase Sol and their followers out of the clans' territory and to try and venture further to help the Clans find a new way of talking to StarClan. The four clans are sad to see them go, but understand that the two of them want to help. This is probably good footing for them to be seen again in Omen of the Stars, if that was the goal. Purdy is too old to be travelling and stays with ThunderClan by the end of the book.
*Cinderheart and Lionblaze*
- Maybe during the back half of the arc, there could be some sparks between them, especially when Lionblaze leads the rebellion against Hollyleaf. Then Cinderheart becomes depressed as she wonders what's happened to Lionblaze as they were getting to be quite good friends. I haven't really thought about it much.
*Tawnypelt*
- Since Tawnypelt is Bramblestar's sister, I think she'd stay for a while in ThunderClan very concerned for her brother. And then she spies on Hollyleaf as per Lionblaze's request as you said. I can also picture a scene or two where Tawnypelt and her kits walk into Bramblestar's den and whisper words of encouragement to him, saying that he will be a good leader and doesn't need to pretend to be Firestar in order to do that.
If store-bought canon is stale, homebrew is fine
Ah, this is just beautiful. You gave Lionblaze interesting and emotional moments, Hollyleaf had more gradual development, and Jayfeather was adjusted to feel like he wasn't just giving in. But what I was most looking forward to in this AU was Sol, and you knocked that out of the park. He's still a false prophet, but his goals aren't just "I will destroy all the Clans because Skyclan specifically didn't like how I kidnapped three children." (Happens to the best of us, buddy).
This Sol seems to honestly believe that he could do a better job at helping cats than Starclan, and the fact that his predictions seem to come true only makes that more interesting. For that matter, how did he know to ask Midnight about the Power of Three, and what did he mean by "extinguish their power for good?" Does he mean he would kill them(to be fair, he did succeed to some extent), or did he mean something...more? Ah, I can't wait for him to hopefully make a return in your Omen of the Stars!
This was a lot for drastic than I thought, but this sure isn’t a bad thing! Honestly I would totally read this over the og power of three arc
W-w-w-w-wait-
SO DOES THAT MEAN BRAMBLESTAR FIGHTS HIS FATHER TO THE DEATH!?
Oh? Personally I think it would be more interesting if Firestar and Tigerstar still fight each other, and both spirits fade. It would truly show that Omen of the Stars and after is really a post Firestar era
That would really be a great way to finalize his "I'm not like my dad" arc he's been dealing with since he was an apprentice. love some poetic justice
"It's only fanfiction, it can't hurt you."
The fanfiction:
*long and heart breaking paragraph where jayfeather is now on his own and loses both his siblings *
tennelle: epiLOgueeee!
I’m a bit late because the video length scared me but THIS IS DAMN GENIUS TENNELLE HOLY BUJEEBUS-
I love this. So much??? Like words cannot express???
As a baby writer this is honestly mind blowing. You’re such an inspiration. Keep up the amazing work and I’m so so so excited for Omen of the Stars (do not rush the video tho I’m not pressuring you that would be bad-)
Amazing! I do wish you did the idea of med Lion and warrior Jay, tho that's personal preference. Another neat idea is evil leader hollyleaf. Imagine the arc ending with that. She knows she's not a part of the prophecy, and has basically banned talk of it. Trains in the dark forest with the idea of merging the clans under one almighty code and rule, since she's angry seeing cats in other clans breaking the code unpunished
I imagine she would have that ideals but she would try to get Ivypool to have the knowledge on the Dark Forest actual intentions and she would kinda have Ivypool talk to Jayfeather to her
That’s really cool but I feel like that would work better as an AU
@@saturniiiidae yee
I really loved how you not only set up the dark forest but also gave them a way to get into the clan's territory and I love what you did with hollyleaf's character it really makes her 3D and a character you could actually relate to.
Tenelle: "It drags it out and goes ON and ON.... It just promises to get better-"
*My ELA Class being described to a T-*
Holy leaf was giving me some real Azula vibes.
oh damn, yea that lines up pretty well
Holy SHOT. This is fire Tennelle! I can’t express my love for this new ark!! Evil Hollyleaf was such a good idea and equally insane. And keeping Lionblaze in the Dark Forest??? Absolutely genius! This is amazing and the longest video I’ve ever sat though in 1 sitting. I was just in awe with all your ideas! I love it!! Keep up the AMAZING work, I can’t wait for the other arks!!
???: These guys are good
StarClan: These guys are good
StarClan: We're going to give them OP powers. [this was by @n o ]
StarClan: Oh no, A BIG MISTAKE THAT WE MADE
StarClan: These guys will destroy you, GET THEM OUT!
Starclan didn’t give the powers though.
@@Cylidae S I l e n c e , M o r t a l .
@@meIIohi I do be silent tho
Okay this made me actually feel very much so tense and wanting to know more please make more of this continue what you have started please I beg of you this is a great story and I want to know more
I really like this rewrite. Idk why, but the OG is kinda...soless.
All shitty dad joke aside, have you considered a writing career, Mx. Tenelle?
heheh I see whatcha did there 😏