Thats is a nice human rescue person who just safe a child his father and naybe some else to his life she is a blesding ❤😊and she dud whats rigbt was to safe them
I agree with a follow reader of thé harrowing motor vehicles accudent but please do editing. The charity event could have been the night before it was weeks after. I liked the bond of Micheal & Rachel and hope their relationship blossom to somethhing lasting.😊❤❤❤
I'm a little confused...Rachel called out to Katie, but she didn't know her. Didn't want to leave Katie, but her uncle was there. Walked to the hospital. Asked to dinner....why, did anybody think to ask one of the paramedics. There is a story here but crammed too many scenarios in first few paragraphs. 😮
Can we cut out the redundant phrases like, "renewed her unwavering love or commitment to nursing"? These stories would be MUCH BETTER WITHOUT the repeated phrasing!! And easily ten minutes shorter which is good for a more efficient story. ❤
A beautiful story 😊😊😊❤and love it because people most help each on of other when storm strike or when they need a friendly hand
Thats is a nice human rescue person who just safe a child his father and naybe some else to his life she is a blesding ❤😊and she dud whats rigbt was to safe them
That's what you do when you triage the patients at the scene of an accident.
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Great beautiful charming caring sweet interesting sweet warm loving lovely love story.
I agree with a follow reader of thé harrowing motor vehicles accudent but please do editing. The charity event could have been the night before it was weeks after. I liked the bond of Micheal & Rachel and hope their relationship blossom to somethhing lasting.😊❤❤❤
I'm a little confused...Rachel called out to Katie, but she didn't know her. Didn't want to leave Katie, but her uncle was there. Walked to the hospital. Asked to dinner....why, did anybody think to ask one of the paramedics. There is a story here but crammed too many scenarios in first few paragraphs. 😮
It would be a nice story if they did edit before posting
THE WRITTEN NARRATIVE HAS NO CORELATION TO THE STORY.
Can we cut out the redundant phrases like, "renewed her unwavering love or commitment to nursing"?
These stories would be MUCH BETTER WITHOUT the repeated phrasing!! And easily ten minutes shorter which is good for a more efficient story. ❤