Dorohedoro is the best example of “edgy” but not in a bad way. I remember someone saying it looks dark but felt like an average episode of my little pony. It’s okay to have a story be edgy but not make it be the main focus and have other things to make it stand. In dorohedoro your not worried if a character is going to die but rather their relationship with the other characters. There’s nudity and gore but not for the sake of having it but rather because that’s how the world they live in works. I highly recommend dorohedoro it’s actually good.
Specifically this manhwa is actually known for a similar reputation by avid manhwa readers unironically. Alot of readers dont agree with its messages. Plenty have even been routing for the villains to beat the mc for once.
Consider what life is like for the primary audience of manhwas, young korean boys. All day cramming, bullying (not as severe as in the comic, but it leaves an impression and frustration in the victim). These tweens are looking for some escapism and cathartic powerfantasy. That's why isekai is so popular in Japan and that reverse isekai in Korea. Their lives suck.
@@nilsmadej9091 ngl ive read alot of stuff about South Korea recently. And the people who say that it’s America but alot worse are apparently right. From random girls being attacked for having short hair on top of blatant misogyny and the gender war, the youth bullying problem, corporations having an even tighter grip on the country/society, local law enforcement being effectively useless/incompetent, as well as the existence of chabeols. Shit sounds pretty bad there.
@@nilsmadej9091 I understant it fully. But glorifying going on a bloody rampage, in which countless innocent people lose theyr lifes, is not something that any respectable writer should ever do.
Holy crap, you're the second person I've seen review this! the other person read it to the end and basically had like a mental breakdown trying to explain how bad it is.
It's edgy and not even in the fun way. The MC goes on a rampage and hurts people who had nothing to do with his pain. He threatened the lives of his bullies' families, now, some of their relatives are pieces of work, yes, but i am sure they have at least 1 parents and a couple of siblings who are actually innocent.
So this means he gets to involve people in the crossfire of his revenge and massacre cops who are only doing their jobs by trying to stop a maniac with a sword?
@@codeless6648 The cops and militaty were doing their jobs in trying to stop a crazy person with a giant sword. The MC certainly wasn't helping himself with his behavior.
@@romanov3937 he literally didn't attack them until they attack him!!! They know why the mc doing this and they still defending the evil corrupt families!!! Where were they when the mc was almost dead? Where were the cops when the parents begged to have justice? They were silence by the rich families so that the parents can't get their voice out so why don't they just look the other way around for the mc? It's because the mc isn't as rich or important as those corrupt families in their eyes not because they're doing their job
The edge is strong with this comic. *insert (any) /v/tan fnf song mixed with elden ring ost* Edit: I need to clarify which mod I'm referring to due lack of knowledge from the OG description alone.😐😑😐
Honestly it would’ve been better if only one of the bullies wanted to get petty revenge against the victim and the rest of the bullies having no desire to go after the protagonist but are only helping the main villain of the story due to him having blackmail on all of them and that would be far better than making all the bullies cartoonishly evil.🐱
That's what I said when I first read that part. They're so obsessed with the guy they almost killed that I genuinely believe that if the character actually died, they'd have no more drive in life and just die from boredom.
I remember another UA-camr who said it was edgy as hell, and he gave props to that one bully who despite seeing all his fellow bullies die horribly, he still for a moment fought the MC for a second. And then it went back to shit.
The fact that this was posted without any shame is hilarious. I'd say it reads like a bad self insert fanfic you could find on wattpad, but I've genuinely seen better written works. I'm all for revenge plots but even the revenge is dull. Sometimes thoughts should just remain that instead of being released out into the public.
ooooh god i remember some other youtuber covered this thing long time ago the most hilariously chad character in this manwha is the last bully who is the ONLY character in the ENTIRITY of fiction that managed to defeat HIS OWN AUTOR he had a moment at the end where he being the last bully remaining, standing right in front of him is the main character, against all ods, against autors desire to paint him in the worst light HE PUNCHES HIM, HE STILL FIGHTS DESPITE ALL ODS NOT ABANDONING HOPE he is my role model now
i love how no one ever gets to read the series all the way through to find out that apparently this series is all part of a shared universe of the author, for some reason almost every korean action webtton has an extended universe idk why. And the prequel also loses the quality of the art, i think it's a different artist. I'll be honest, when I read it I found it fun and entertaining like watching a B-movie but from a certain point on it becomes nonsense even outside of the premise, which already didn't make sense to me. then from what I understand from online comments it is based on a novel, and I think that many of the problems with the narrative flow come from a not very good adaptation, for example when the action is practically skipped
@@kyrohowe3156except if the author only watch the first episode of Goblin Slayer and misinterpret the heck out of him as a basis for this god awful story.
As someone who loves revenge stories and all that edgy stuff this is why I'm still extremely picky about it:many of them try to go purely fueled by shock value with no substance or reason, shocking content is supposed to not only take you out of your confort zone for the sake of it but to shed light on a perspective you wouldn't otherwise explore or consider, something that you don't necessarily need to agree with as long as you can wrap your head around it, what rooftop swordmaster does wrong is that unless you agree with the protagonist in every way there is no value to get from it, the story is extremely one dimentional because "protag good, everyone else evil lol" and they aren't even some intriguing flavor of evil, the fact that they reunited for the sole purpose to pick on their high school victim again makes it a comedy if anything
5:55 self immolation does happen , but is is usually a political act (like the monk in the vietnam war). But for a bullying case it is definitely pretty extreme.
Honestly, taking Shark out, the only bully-revenge manhwa i genuinely enjoyed was Viral Hit. And that was because the MC Hobin actually GROWS as both a character, and fighter. Has/makes friends that genuinely like him, and beats his bully literally the first few chapters *after* he learns *How To Fight*. Sure, it's not for everyone, but it's genuinely my favorite work from PTJ, because the MC has no Double body, or system to help him
What him having no previous relationship has to do with being jumped by 8 people and becoming a school shooter? Use the words with theyr intended meaning, thats why they exist in the first place. Nobody will react to boy screaming "Wolf!" if that boy calls every single dog a "wolf".
@ coming from someone who’s been in those spaces yeah literally every incel I know acts like the mc in that manwha no need to get butt hurt over a tiny joke
@@Daedalus99-kx3di Bro, thats sounds so dope ! Do you have any videos of them Incels solo'ing the military? Or does these clips are on FoxNews/LiveLeak YT Channel?
I hate this manhwa because it is not a good revenge Manhwa If you are gonna make a revenge manhwa dont potray the mc as a good guy and if you do, allow them to question if what they are doing is right or wrong (in ways that make sense) Like you said this isnt realistic bullying, I remember reading this and cringing to death, as well as hating the mc for being rather similar to Calliope from the Knight and the Paladin cuz they both believed they could kill whoever they wanted as they were mistreated I remember reading a review of this manhwa after i read it, they did make a video on a revenge manhwa that apparently does both revenge and bullying right, might check it out later Edit: just realised the mc has a villains wiki page
The mc literally kills a crying teenage girl along with multiple guards who were just doing their job and somehow the author expects us to think he’s a good guy
@@pa-chickennot only that, he also threatened and killed the military only because they were there. I bet if his parents were to see his actions, they would be profoundly horrified and disgusted
@@pa-chickenthe teenage girl who almost killed him and killed his parents? And the guards could literally just walk out like the women security guard they don't need to get themselves killed for no reason and they're not being threatened to protect her
Yeah, she wasn’t even a threat anymore, she lost all fight in her, she was already traumatized and dead inside. She didn’t really needed to die. Oh and the bodyguard, dang I felt bad for them, they lost their lives for doing their jobs, protecting a crying teenage girl from a crazy, revenge obsessed criminal.
@@romanov3937 what about the mc who was traumatized by the death of his parents and him almost dying himself???? And the bodyguards don't have the obligation to protect her or forced to protect the crazy teen they could've just step aside like the female bodyguard
It sucks that this is writen so terriblly because the artstyle is REALLY freaking good imo! Really hope the author takes a writing class one day. He definitely has potential
I remember a video on this by Living Deadman or something similar to that and in another video about a manwha called Shark he said that fans of Rooftop Sword Master were pretty much bitching and moaning about the review in his comment section so I kind of expect the fans will comment on this with the same reaction.
Watch there be a anime adaptation of this comic. I wouldn’t be surprised if they did, because with the evidence of redo of healer, Japan will turn anything into a anime.
The part I hate the most is that the Manhwa makes it clear that we are supposed to be rooting for this monster of a protagonist. He's this unstoppable force but the Manhwa never once tries to show his as anything except just.
i don’t have a kid, but if i did, and i find out that he’s been jumped by some edgy middle schoolers, we would all be going to jail. but fr what kind of parent do you have to be to OFF yourself bc you couldn’t get your child’s assault publicized????????
11:18 Feels like a bad League of Evil Exes thing Except there’s no love or any actual good reason to form a league other than revenge. I guess that’s the vibe with these stories.
idk if you plan on doing a part 2 of this, but people have to know how bizarre this comic is, like, for example, how, after massacring an entire police force along side some other innocent people, his city turns upside down with fanatics believing he is a god or something and revenge is the answer. He's stopped by one group showing their "devotion" by beating someone to death and for a glimpse of a moment you can see the possibility of a good plot by him noticing how his quest for revenge is harming everyone, he's visible surprised by that in the panel, but then he is attacked by something and the plot goes back to the shit it is. it's almost like the creator knows it can be a good story but it refuses to do so.
There’s another review of A UA-camr who went through the whole Manwha (At least at the end of the time whatever chapters it had then) And the only somewhat decent action scene it had. Was when that one bully cried out to see his Dad and resulted in using an attack chopper to take out the MC himself or something. That was kinda cool With that being said, this Manwha sucks
This is probably one of my IRONIC favorites ever since I saw Living Deadman's video on it. I'll be real: I like the artstyle a lot. The story and writing is something that deserves to face the wall, though.
This comic feels like it was written by a middle schooler On the top of 3D models, I feel like they work better with black and white manga especially because of CSP EX's concert to lines function for 3D models
the more I heard about this the more I thought this just sounded like some kind of supervillain in one of those "adult animation" shows Putting that in quotes because you can not convince me that is directing itself for adults and not teenagers
Altough I agree that the 3d assets look ugly, the comparison with manga you make seems a bit strange for two reasons: 1. Manga don't have color which means much less work for the artists 2. Despite this manga artists are still notoriously overworked
Have you ever seen A Sense of Amusement? I’ve seen a recap video about it and I’m wondering if it’s as bad as this? It’s basically about a rich guy getting his get back on a clique of bullies who drove her daughter to suicide. Just replace the magic sword with a deranged, chemically-enhanced adopted daughter. That’s pretty much the gist of it.
Wait, is the protagonist a guy or a girl because the you first said rich GUY to get back at the bullies who drove HER daughter to s@icide (yes, I’m censoring the last word because I don’t trust UA-cam censorship standards in Vietnam).
@@Đanggiahuy006I think I know what manhwa it is so basically a rich guy daughter commit sleeping forever because she was being massively bullied by her female classmates and the teacher didn't do anything about it so the dad adopted a psycho girl to be in the school and take revenge for his daughter death by torturing the bullies
Literally copy pasting my comment from the other video talking about this manhwa Revenge stories are the fast food of manhwa, much like how isekais are to manga. I think the author really should’ve just wrote a sci fi or a fantasy because the art is really popping but these ultra evil over the top characters just don’t work in this modern setting. Alternatively, it could’ve been really clever if the hero was treated like a villain, kinda like in The Boys or Hero has Returned (an actually really good reversal of the isekai trope, its edgy and has senseless violence, very good read) And yes i know that politicians aren’t the most… trustworthy people but when have you ever seen one flip their head back and do a villain laugh. Same for the school kids. Kids are twats but they are so much more than nihilistic and one sided bullies. I dunno I can’t explain it…
pretty sure this is a self inserted fanfic, the author who was bullied and still hold unhealthy grudge against the bullies decided to make a marry sue character of himself.
I hope UA-cam treats uploads on your main channel right. Boost for the algo! Lesson learnt: don't be like this manwha where the only thing going for it is edgy slop. Like the good examples BLJ provided, have some substance and tastefulness to the shocking or discomforting things that occurs in the story.
half of this stuff does happen in places like korea and china and there is videos of it online bullying happening just like this and few kids I have read about have died from edgy yes but totally could be true
i went back to a story i was writing back in april that i kinda just dropped to continue it. did some edits while listening to a few tracks off the season 2 of arcane. i realized going over it to see what i did at the gravesite in the earlier chapters and realized the mc never grieved over the death of the child. story synopsis is not important but i had my character who is a kitsune break down in tears because that girl was the only family she had. the earlier chapters tell you how important she was to the mc with dialogue and some descriptors and what happened but i never really talked about how the mc felt about how the child died beyond the occasional sadness for lack of a better word. i didn't even have her cry at her gravestone but i showed how distraught she was by using her tails. but in this case it was needed for the latest chapter(as of this comment) to show the character's humanity. because while yes she is a near 1000 year old kitsune, with this child she was just a big sister and not some powerful mythic warrior. and this is the issue i see with stories like these. because i used the brutal death of a child in a senseless slaughter and the fact that the mc is blind to "great" effect to show how important this was to the character. i literally made a game of guess if i'm human or yokai tragic because i showed the sisterly bond between the characters and made the mc finally saying the answer bitter. not bittersweet. bitter. the tragedies means something to the story and character. but it seems like these stories are like jack said being graded off what a middle schooler thinks is mature rather than actually being mature like what i tried to do. because reading through my story while not perfect tries to handle the mature themes the right way while stories like this is just there's blood and swearing so it must be mature.
Wolf Guy is a remake of an old manga from 1970 that was readapted into novels that have yet to ever been translated outside Japan. It's about an Arrogant Emo Werewolf transferring to a new school where he ticks off a gang of psychotic delinquents, one of whom is a Yakuza Heir. While he and his homeroom teacher reluctantly falling for each other. Ingoshima is about a class on a boat trip getting shipwrecked on a Island full of psychotic natives that want to either human sacrifice or 🍇 them. Both series is full of very disturbing and graphic 🍇 scenes.
I remember when my taekwondo teacher said I didn’t earn my yellow belt and my mother chopped off one of her fingers in front of him so he would pass me. I understand this kid’s parents.
Everything done terribly in that manwha is done much better in Juvenile Offender. It’s kind of the same concept of defeating x amount of bullies who ruined the mc’s life, but more down to earth and realistic. Juvenile Offender actually explores the mc’s trauma and it feels tragic rather than edgy.
To be fair you can't compare manga and manwha when it comes to use of 3d. Mangaka have a team of assistants that draw backgrounds for them and the publisher helps setting up everything (hiring and payment). Manwha, at least when it comes to webcomics, are usually made by one person, they make less money and have less support from the publisher because they're smaller than most japanese publishers so that's why they rely on 3d more. Even manga like gantz that use 3d are way better because it's a whole team working on it so they have the time to make it look good. Not saying you should praise manwha that use shitty 3d they're obviously doing a bad job regardless of the reason but I just wanted to add context/nuance because its not as simple as "theyre bad at it"
Yeah I agree. I read the manhwa and I hate it. It's just edgy for the sake of being edgy. I hate the fact that people who wrote this kind of stuff think that it's deep and mature when it's just juvenile writing. There are in fact some edgy mangas that are done right, and have a good story like Berserk. I highly recommend reading Berserk, it was good
@Husain5XG I have never watched the anime though I did watch some of the clips(I thought they were edgy in a bad way) and I heard that it's not good compared to the manga. I also hear that the manga is actually great so I'm planning on reading it if I feel like it.
so it's not super edgy, but I remember a manwa that was interesting called the vampire and the maid. It did a good job with a rather asshole character but giving you plenty of reasons why he is the way he is, and still making him likeable in that he's literally not human and never was. Despite that, while he doesn't like humans and he doesn't get them, he doesn't do them harm without a reason. And he has a good dynamic with the protagonist as she is a good person mostly and makes him realize that some of the stuff he's done is pretty horrible and he tries to become a better person for her. It's a fun read. At least from my memory but it has been some time since I read it
Wait if i remenber right i think the author was trying to set this up like some sort of Avengers thing where he would write a story for each character them bring them together in a new story
That's edgy, dark, best manhwa ever, IT ALSO HAS ONE GUY WITH THE NAME THAT STARTS WITH HIT-LER, but it's a Isekai, but one that takes place in the modern world, after the warrior returns from saving, but unfortunately bad stuff happens so he rules the world, but that might become boring for some, like they don't wanna have a bad hero or anti hero, I never finished it but it's good so far
Oh boy jack brace yourself for Kingdoms of Ruin if you’re going to review the anime. It’s on par with rooftop sword master with the edge lord bullshit. Also rooftop sword master tries to twist the story around to make the mmc justify on his revenge even if endangered the country.
@@daniellewillis2767 You should check out Kazumasa Hirai's Wolf Guy, it also involve 9th grade middle schoolers who look like they are in their 20s (And even played by 20 something year olds in the 1973 movie).
i don't have problem with aritst being EDGE LORD in fact i was one...maybe until now.....yup. i love the emo dante from dmc 1 and those youtube edgy content back from mid 2010
honestly the manhwas “bad thinking diary” and “lily of the valley” are worse. they aren’t edgy or anything, they’re wlw stories but the endings and writing are just so bad. bad thinking at least is more tolerable than lily of the valley though since that mid made me cry and almost made me sick edit: ik its a bad comparison because the two i mentioned are romance and rooftop swordmaster is action but still 😭
why doesn't instagram let me make an account like srsly, i been wanting to follow a lot of ppl but apparently is imposible to make an account there for me
YEAH THATS RIGHT MFs I STILL UPLOAD HERE
It almost feels alien that you do lmao
Good to see your alive.
You should read Shark, it's the polar opposite of this comic, being a super good revenge story but with a cool twist, also the fights are great
Have you ready any of the Erma comics?
Its been 50 years since BlackLightJack posted somting here, you been negleting us. And for that, we gonna unfurry your oc into a human...
Bro thinks he's Guts 💀
“Mom can we have Berserk?”
“No son, we already have Berserk at home.”
Berserk at home:
😂@@ethankaryadi37
That ain't guts that's intestines.
@@psychic-friend-toy-freddymore like shit stain😂
Yeah, but he's none
Dorohedoro is the best example of “edgy” but not in a bad way. I remember someone saying it looks dark but felt like an average episode of my little pony. It’s okay to have a story be edgy but not make it be the main focus and have other things to make it stand. In dorohedoro your not worried if a character is going to die but rather their relationship with the other characters. There’s nudity and gore but not for the sake of having it but rather because that’s how the world they live in works. I highly recommend dorohedoro it’s actually good.
Heck, Eminence in Shadow is edgy AF, but very good.
Dorohedoro is designed that way because it is to show the grime of the hole
@UltimatePerfection it is a parody and it is just OK like a 6 out of 10
It's kinda like a slice of life in a ruined and fallen world, with a bit of action
DOROHEDORO MENTION 🗣️🔥🔥
"School Shooter : The Manhua"
This shit, and its whole genre, is so twisted at places that I am worried about them kids.
Specifically this manhwa is actually known for a similar reputation by avid manhwa readers unironically. Alot of readers dont agree with its messages. Plenty have even been routing for the villains to beat the mc for once.
Consider what life is like for the primary audience of manhwas, young korean boys.
All day cramming, bullying (not as severe as in the comic, but it leaves an impression and frustration in the victim).
These tweens are looking for some escapism and cathartic powerfantasy.
That's why isekai is so popular in Japan and that reverse isekai in Korea.
Their lives suck.
@@nilsmadej9091 ngl ive read alot of stuff about South Korea recently. And the people who say that it’s America but alot worse are apparently right.
From random girls being attacked for having short hair on top of blatant misogyny and the gender war, the youth bullying problem, corporations having an even tighter grip on the country/society, local law enforcement being effectively useless/incompetent, as well as the existence of chabeols.
Shit sounds pretty bad there.
@@nilsmadej9091
I understant it fully.
But glorifying going on a bloody rampage, in which countless innocent people lose theyr lifes, is not something that any respectable writer should ever do.
Dog ningen reference
Holy crap, you're the second person I've seen review this!
the other person read it to the end and basically had like a mental breakdown trying to explain how bad it is.
I feel like I know who you're talking about but I lowkey forgot his channel name💀
@@qualityqueenbiteszadusto Do you mean Living Deadman? His breakdown of this dumpster fire was a really fun watch.
@@mostlyunknown16 that’s the one lol
BIG UP THE LIVING DEAD MAN 🗣🗣🗣💯💯💯
When the manhwa is so shit, that your brain can't even comprehend it 😂😂
It's edgy and not even in the fun way. The MC goes on a rampage and hurts people who had nothing to do with his pain. He threatened the lives of his bullies' families, now, some of their relatives are pieces of work, yes, but i am sure they have at least 1 parents and a couple of siblings who are actually innocent.
It’s lowkey depressing honestly. Just weird and sad….
The mc warned them to not get in his way and they didn't listen! The mc won't hurt anyone who's not threatening his family or revenge
So this means he gets to involve people in the crossfire of his revenge and massacre cops who are only doing their jobs by trying to stop a maniac with a sword?
@@codeless6648 The cops and militaty were doing their jobs in trying to stop a crazy person with a giant sword. The MC certainly wasn't helping himself with his behavior.
@@romanov3937 he literally didn't attack them until they attack him!!! They know why the mc doing this and they still defending the evil corrupt families!!! Where were they when the mc was almost dead? Where were the cops when the parents begged to have justice? They were silence by the rich families so that the parents can't get their voice out so why don't they just look the other way around for the mc? It's because the mc isn't as rich or important as those corrupt families in their eyes not because they're doing their job
The edge is strong with this comic.
*insert (any) /v/tan fnf song mixed with elden ring ost*
Edit: I need to clarify which mod I'm referring to due lack of knowledge from the OG description alone.😐😑😐
Fnf mention hi
What is FNF's most recently released week (not from mods)?
Honestly it would’ve been better if only one of the bullies wanted to get petty revenge against the victim and the rest of the bullies having no desire to go after the protagonist but are only helping the main villain of the story due to him having blackmail on all of them and that would be far better than making all the bullies cartoonishly evil.🐱
That's what I said when I first read that part. They're so obsessed with the guy they almost killed that I genuinely believe that if the character actually died, they'd have no more drive in life and just die from boredom.
This is Carrie meets Beserk meets The Crow meets a bad creepypasta meets a severely broken nation in decline
I heavily recommend reading The Boxer if you want to wash off the bad taste.
Then after that read the horizon because both of those series are goated
@@bannana4058 god I love horizon,never felt more emotion reading any other manwha than horizon
Oh, the boxer. Great Manhwa, great lesson.
Manhwa is crapped on for obvious reasons he's not checking it out
The boxer is a great manhwa
I never thought that I would find any piece of media edgier than Magical Girl Site, but here we are.
Real
Except Magical Girl Site is much more well written
I remember another UA-camr who said it was edgy as hell, and he gave props to that one bully who despite seeing all his fellow bullies die horribly, he still for a moment fought the MC for a second. And then it went back to shit.
Da-hun was the goat of this manhwa. Only person who managed to stand up to the overpowered MC on some Mumen Rider vs Deep Sea King type shii.
Where is Saitama when you needed him...
@@HellCromeEon a actual good story, thank you very much
@@HellCromeE Don't worry, we got Da-hun da goat!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🐐🐐
Who cares about Saitama, where is our Queen Usagi Taukino or someone like Miss Ichijou from Pani Poni
The fact that this was posted without any shame is hilarious. I'd say it reads like a bad self insert fanfic you could find on wattpad, but I've genuinely seen better written works. I'm all for revenge plots but even the revenge is dull. Sometimes thoughts should just remain that instead of being released out into the public.
homelander if he was endorsed by the writers
It´s Not Just A Phase Mom: The Book
ooooh god i remember some other youtuber covered this thing long time ago
the most hilariously chad character in this manwha is the last bully who is the ONLY character in the ENTIRITY of fiction that managed to defeat HIS OWN AUTOR
he had a moment at the end where he being the last bully remaining, standing right in front of him is the main character, against all ods, against autors desire to paint him in the worst light
HE PUNCHES HIM, HE STILL FIGHTS DESPITE ALL ODS NOT ABANDONING HOPE
he is my role model now
*CRAWLIN' IN MAH CRAWL!!*
Basically these manwha in a shellnut.
Edit: This manwha's the Limp Bizkit to Berserk's Linkin Park.
But seriously tho, the artwork genuinely clashes, the engines is that of the worst kind of fanfiction around.
Man this is the Hollywood undead to berserk
@@supernova4226this is the Wattpad Fanfiction version of Berserk.
8?! What did he do to make them nibbas that mad?! 😂
That's what I'm saying, bro💀 he had to have done something for 8 people to be on him
He clearly was on a rooftop and he was a master in video games. Thats why.
He called them a poopyhead(reasonable crash out)
Thugnificent quote
i love how no one ever gets to read the series all the way through to find out that apparently this series is all part of a shared universe of the author, for some reason almost every korean action webtton has an extended universe idk why. And the prequel also loses the quality of the art, i think it's a different artist. I'll be honest, when I read it I found it fun and entertaining like watching a B-movie but from a certain point on it becomes nonsense even outside of the premise, which already didn't make sense to me. then from what I understand from online comments it is based on a novel, and I think that many of the problems with the narrative flow come from a not very good adaptation, for example when the action is practically skipped
This reminds me of the Jeff the Killer Creepypasta.
I say it reminds me of the first episode of Goblin Slayer.
@@kyrohowe3156except if the author only watch the first episode of Goblin Slayer and misinterpret the heck out of him as a basis for this god awful story.
@@kyrohowe3156 Hey Goblin slayer has way better story, Including the extremely evil goblins
This is berserk with no substance and tamer than the end of Evangelion
As someone who loves revenge stories and all that edgy stuff this is why I'm still extremely picky about it:many of them try to go purely fueled by shock value with no substance or reason, shocking content is supposed to not only take you out of your confort zone for the sake of it but to shed light on a perspective you wouldn't otherwise explore or consider, something that you don't necessarily need to agree with as long as you can wrap your head around it, what rooftop swordmaster does wrong is that unless you agree with the protagonist in every way there is no value to get from it, the story is extremely one dimentional because "protag good, everyone else evil lol" and they aren't even some intriguing flavor of evil, the fact that they reunited for the sole purpose to pick on their high school victim again makes it a comedy if anything
1:34 Aint no way the authour is instructing you to listen to Metallica to soak in how badass his shit is
"my name is not important. What is important is what I'm about to do".
6:00 bro his parents are doing the hakari dance lmao
OMG!!!😱 Hakari missing the jackpot?!?!?! (GONE WRONG?!!!(HE'S STILL HITTING THOSE STRAIGHT 🔥🔥🔥 MOVES THO!!!💯💯💯))
5:55 self immolation does happen , but is is usually a political act (like the monk in the vietnam war). But for a bullying case it is definitely pretty extreme.
Honestly, taking Shark out, the only bully-revenge manhwa i genuinely enjoyed was Viral Hit. And that was because the MC Hobin actually GROWS as both a character, and fighter. Has/makes friends that genuinely like him, and beats his bully literally the first few chapters *after* he learns *How To Fight*.
Sure, it's not for everyone, but it's genuinely my favorite work from PTJ, because the MC has no Double body, or system to help him
Alternate title: when an edgy teen makes a manwha
Elfen lied if you removed the depth of Lucy and made her a incel
What him having no previous relationship has to do with being jumped by 8 people and becoming a school shooter?
Use the words with theyr intended meaning, thats why they exist in the first place.
Nobody will react to boy screaming "Wolf!" if that boy calls every single dog a "wolf".
@ coming from someone who’s been in those spaces yeah literally every incel I know acts like the mc in that manwha no need to get butt hurt over a tiny joke
@@Daedalus99-kx3di
Bro, thats sounds so dope !
Do you have any videos of them Incels solo'ing the military?
Or does these clips are on FoxNews/LiveLeak YT Channel?
@ edgy and bitter? Yeah that’s every incel I’ve met, it’s a joke you’re taking it way too seriously
@@mateuszbanaszak4671damn how are you alive being this pedantic?
This is what would happen if Jeff the Killer was a shonen, complete with the one-dimensional bully characters.
I hate this manhwa because it is not a good revenge Manhwa
If you are gonna make a revenge manhwa dont potray the mc as a good guy and if you do, allow them to question if what they are doing is right or wrong (in ways that make sense)
Like you said this isnt realistic bullying, I remember reading this and cringing to death, as well as hating the mc for being rather similar to Calliope from the Knight and the Paladin cuz they both believed they could kill whoever they wanted as they were mistreated
I remember reading a review of this manhwa after i read it, they did make a video on a revenge manhwa that apparently does both revenge and bullying right, might check it out later
Edit: just realised the mc has a villains wiki page
The mc literally kills a crying teenage girl along with multiple guards who were just doing their job and somehow the author expects us to think he’s a good guy
@@pa-chickennot only that, he also threatened and killed the military only because they were there.
I bet if his parents were to see his actions, they would be profoundly horrified and disgusted
@@pa-chickenthe teenage girl who almost killed him and killed his parents? And the guards could literally just walk out like the women security guard they don't need to get themselves killed for no reason and they're not being threatened to protect her
Yeah, she wasn’t even a threat anymore, she lost all fight in her, she was already traumatized and dead inside. She didn’t really needed to die.
Oh and the bodyguard, dang I felt bad for them, they lost their lives for doing their jobs, protecting a crying teenage girl from a crazy, revenge obsessed criminal.
@@romanov3937 what about the mc who was traumatized by the death of his parents and him almost dying himself???? And the bodyguards don't have the obligation to protect her or forced to protect the crazy teen they could've just step aside like the female bodyguard
It sucks that this is writen so terriblly because the artstyle is REALLY freaking good imo! Really hope the author takes a writing class one day. He definitely has potential
I remember a video on this by Living Deadman or something similar to that and in another video about a manwha called Shark he said that fans of Rooftop Sword Master were pretty much bitching and moaning about the review in his comment section so I kind of expect the fans will comment on this with the same reaction.
Shark is so peak bruh
@jasonnogo1966 even though I haven't read it from the review by Living Deadman yeah, I defiantly agree with the statement.
Watch there be a anime adaptation of this comic. I wouldn’t be surprised if they did, because with the evidence of redo of healer, Japan will turn anything into a anime.
I have awaited this moment for my entire life.
The part I hate the most is that the Manhwa makes it clear that we are supposed to be rooting for this monster of a protagonist. He's this unstoppable force but the Manhwa never once tries to show his as anything except just.
i don’t have a kid, but if i did, and i find out that he’s been jumped by some edgy middle schoolers, we would all be going to jail. but fr what kind of parent do you have to be to OFF yourself bc you couldn’t get your child’s assault publicized????????
Derek Savage is upping his anti bullying works.
11:18
Feels like a bad League of Evil Exes thing
Except there’s no love or any actual good reason to form a league other than revenge. I guess that’s the vibe with these stories.
Love your hyena fursona ....but he needs a pretty Thylacine sidekick: Also love " Estrogen Enragement" as a concept.
idk if you plan on doing a part 2 of this, but people have to know how bizarre this comic is, like, for example, how, after massacring an entire police force along side some other innocent people, his city turns upside down with fanatics believing he is a god or something and revenge is the answer. He's stopped by one group showing their "devotion" by beating someone to death and for a glimpse of a moment you can see the possibility of a good plot by him noticing how his quest for revenge is harming everyone, he's visible surprised by that in the panel, but then he is attacked by something and the plot goes back to the shit it is. it's almost like the creator knows it can be a good story but it refuses to do so.
There’s another review of A UA-camr who went through the whole Manwha (At least at the end of the time whatever chapters it had then) And the only somewhat decent action scene it had. Was when that one bully cried out to see his Dad and resulted in using an attack chopper to take out the MC himself or something. That was kinda cool
With that being said, this Manwha sucks
I got bashed by people for saying this manhwa was dangerous,WHOS LAUGHING NOW?!?
Leave blonde Yuji alone he didn’t do nothin’ to deserve appearing in this goofy ahh comic 😭🙏
This is probably one of my IRONIC favorites ever since I saw Living Deadman's video on it. I'll be real: I like the artstyle a lot. The story and writing is something that deserves to face the wall, though.
I prayed for times like this, finally main channel video
Btww, if you can, i recommend you read the ki sisters, imo one the best webtoons on the site
This comic feels like it was written by a middle schooler
On the top of 3D models, I feel like they work better with black and white manga especially because of CSP EX's concert to lines function for 3D models
the more I heard about this the more I thought this just sounded like some kind of supervillain in one of those "adult animation" shows
Putting that in quotes because you can not convince me that is directing itself for adults and not teenagers
Altough I agree that the 3d assets look ugly, the comparison with manga you make seems a bit strange for two reasons:
1. Manga don't have color which means much less work for the artists
2. Despite this manga artists are still notoriously overworked
I missed your videos. Thank you for another great video. Also, thanks for the recommendations.
Furry absolutely filtered by the pinnacle of manhwa
Dandadan being mentioned🗣🗣‼️‼️
Holy shit I forgot about this manwha, it was so stupid but I loved the brain rot.
Have you ever seen A Sense of Amusement? I’ve seen a recap video about it and I’m wondering if it’s as bad as this? It’s basically about a rich guy getting his get back on a clique of bullies who drove her daughter to suicide.
Just replace the magic sword with a deranged, chemically-enhanced adopted daughter. That’s pretty much the gist of it.
but better right?
Wait, is the protagonist a guy or a girl because the you first said rich GUY to get back at the bullies who drove HER daughter to s@icide (yes, I’m censoring the last word because I don’t trust UA-cam censorship standards in Vietnam).
@@Đanggiahuy006I think I know what manhwa it is so basically a rich guy daughter commit sleeping forever because she was being massively bullied by her female classmates and the teacher didn't do anything about it so the dad adopted a psycho girl to be in the school and take revenge for his daughter death by torturing the bullies
@ Sorry, that was a typo. It’s a guy whose daughter was bullied.
Ohhh, recently made manhwa? The one where Female MC was from North Korea, right? Karma is my waifu👅 I can fix her 😏
Aaaay he’s back!
Literally copy pasting my comment from the other video talking about this manhwa
Revenge stories are the fast food of manhwa, much like how isekais are to manga. I think the author really should’ve just wrote a sci fi or a fantasy because the art is really popping but these ultra evil over the top characters just don’t work in this modern setting. Alternatively, it could’ve been really clever if the hero was treated like a villain, kinda like in The Boys or Hero has Returned (an actually really good reversal of the isekai trope, its edgy and has senseless violence, very good read) And yes i know that politicians aren’t the most… trustworthy people but when have you ever seen one flip their head back and do a villain laugh. Same for the school kids. Kids are twats but they are so much more than nihilistic and one sided bullies. I dunno I can’t explain it…
pretty sure this is a self inserted fanfic, the author who was bullied and still hold unhealthy grudge against the bullies decided to make a marry sue character of himself.
Not gonna lie I was like that when I was in my deepest depression, and it's not fun. It's toxic and destroy life.
I hope UA-cam treats uploads on your main channel right. Boost for the algo!
Lesson learnt: don't be like this manwha where the only thing going for it is edgy slop. Like the good examples BLJ provided, have some substance and tastefulness to the shocking or discomforting things that occurs in the story.
Hes talking about the Manwha of my goat DA HAN 🗣️🔥🔥🔥
Why is it that every Manwha I've heard of has been toxic in some way? What the heck are those koreans doing over there?
The problem with this is not that it’s edgy since berserk can be considered edgy. It’s the fact that they’re trying too hard to do be edgy
Is it somehow more edgy than Plunderer?
✋️ absolute power fantasy 🤚.
half of this stuff does happen in places like korea and china and there is videos of it online bullying happening just like this and few kids I have read about have died from edgy yes but totally could be true
What the actual fuck does 1 kid have to do with this excessive shit even the mafia got involved?💀.
Beserk...but set in middle school
It was only a matter of time before you found this…
i went back to a story i was writing back in april that i kinda just dropped to continue it. did some edits while listening to a few tracks off the season 2 of arcane. i realized going over it to see what i did at the gravesite in the earlier chapters and realized the mc never grieved over the death of the child. story synopsis is not important but i had my character who is a kitsune break down in tears because that girl was the only family she had.
the earlier chapters tell you how important she was to the mc with dialogue and some descriptors and what happened but i never really talked about how the mc felt about how the child died beyond the occasional sadness for lack of a better word. i didn't even have her cry at her gravestone but i showed how distraught she was by using her tails. but in this case it was needed for the latest chapter(as of this comment) to show the character's humanity. because while yes she is a near 1000 year old kitsune, with this child she was just a big sister and not some powerful mythic warrior.
and this is the issue i see with stories like these. because i used the brutal death of a child in a senseless slaughter and the fact that the mc is blind to "great" effect to show how important this was to the character. i literally made a game of guess if i'm human or yokai tragic because i showed the sisterly bond between the characters and made the mc finally saying the answer bitter. not bittersweet. bitter. the tragedies means something to the story and character. but it seems like these stories are like jack said being graded off what a middle schooler thinks is mature rather than actually being mature like what i tried to do. because reading through my story while not perfect tries to handle the mature themes the right way while stories like this is just there's blood and swearing so it must be mature.
Apparently there's another comic by this dude actually has another that's way better. I forgot the name but it's actually a huge improvement
You could've just say the author's name or a link to a manga site, that would've helped
@Husain5XG his name is Kim Eui-Kwon. I'm currently finding the comic. All I remember it's mostly takes place in a prison.
@@creativeusername23 are you talking about "shark"?
I just checked
but I don't think they're the same author, not fully sure but on the 3-5 site I found
no mention of Kim Eui-Kwon
@Cankun-theboi then I gotta be misremembering 🚶
This story is like the plot of Dog Ningen but worse
Atleast dog ningen was a comical satire, this one isn't
@N_Tertainment7 Yeah that's why I said "worse" because Dog Ningen is actually funny.
Is Nigga Dog dark story? I really can't take Nigga Dog seriously and laugh my ass of reading first chapter 💀 He want to RAPE HIS FATHER😭
Is it more offensively edgy than Wolf Guy: Ookami no Monshou or Ingoshima though?
atleast that shit is better
Wolf Guy is a remake of an old manga from 1970 that was readapted into novels that have yet to ever been translated outside Japan. It's about an Arrogant Emo Werewolf transferring to a new school where he ticks off a gang of psychotic delinquents, one of whom is a Yakuza Heir. While he and his homeroom teacher reluctantly falling for each other.
Ingoshima is about a class on a boat trip getting shipwrecked on a Island full of psychotic natives that want to either human sacrifice or 🍇 them. Both series is full of very disturbing and graphic 🍇 scenes.
@@doodlebugfour7070 D: still kinda better than RFSM
Ingoshima is edgy? I thought that manga was just some horror/thriller + ecchi story, like king game or Battle Royal
Manhwa's finest story frfr
There are plenty of great manhwa, you just need to sift through the garbage a bit to find them.
Please read “A Friendship So Impure” it’s my favorite Manhwa ever.
I remember when my taekwondo teacher said I didn’t earn my yellow belt and my mother chopped off one of her fingers in front of him so he would pass me. I understand this kid’s parents.
The only thing i can find good about this story is the design of the sword, which i personally liked
living dead man did a review last year on this one
Everything done terribly in that manwha is done much better in Juvenile Offender.
It’s kind of the same concept of defeating x amount of bullies who ruined the mc’s life, but more down to earth and realistic. Juvenile Offender actually explores the mc’s trauma and it feels tragic rather than edgy.
Rare moment where he remembers to upload
Ngl i love stories like this
Can you read Shark next? It’s got a not to good translation(in fact it’s never been fully translated in English). it’s surprisingly great.
Goddamn. I've been reading Juujika weekly for the past couple months, but I'm gonna pass on this.
Juujika author just want to drag his manga😭 I mean like gaslighting MC and gives us some villain flashback
To be fair you can't compare manga and manwha when it comes to use of 3d. Mangaka have a team of assistants that draw backgrounds for them and the publisher helps setting up everything (hiring and payment). Manwha, at least when it comes to webcomics, are usually made by one person, they make less money and have less support from the publisher because they're smaller than most japanese publishers so that's why they rely on 3d more. Even manga like gantz that use 3d are way better because it's a whole team working on it so they have the time to make it look good.
Not saying you should praise manwha that use shitty 3d they're obviously doing a bad job regardless of the reason but I just wanted to add context/nuance because its not as simple as "theyre bad at it"
Yeah I agree. I read the manhwa and I hate it. It's just edgy for the sake of being edgy. I hate the fact that people who wrote this kind of stuff think that it's deep and mature when it's just juvenile writing. There are in fact some edgy mangas that are done right, and have a good story like Berserk. I highly recommend reading Berserk, it was good
Tokyo ghoul is edgy too
@Husain5XG I have never watched the anime though I did watch some of the clips(I thought they were edgy in a bad way) and I heard that it's not good compared to the manga. I also hear that the manga is actually great so I'm planning on reading it if I feel like it.
Someone already made video like this now I can I put this on my list
The author should just make a comedy at this point if they are failing this much with seriousness stories,
so it's not super edgy, but I remember a manwa that was interesting called the vampire and the maid. It did a good job with a rather asshole character but giving you plenty of reasons why he is the way he is, and still making him likeable in that he's literally not human and never was. Despite that, while he doesn't like humans and he doesn't get them, he doesn't do them harm without a reason. And he has a good dynamic with the protagonist as she is a good person mostly and makes him realize that some of the stuff he's done is pretty horrible and he tries to become a better person for her. It's a fun read. At least from my memory but it has been some time since I read it
Wait if i remenber right i think the author was trying to set this up like some sort of Avengers thing where he would write a story for each character them bring them together in a new story
Say, what’s your opinion on this manwha called the Warrior returns ?
That's edgy, dark, best manhwa ever, IT ALSO HAS ONE GUY WITH THE NAME THAT STARTS WITH HIT-LER, but it's a Isekai, but one that takes place in the modern world, after the warrior returns from saving, but unfortunately bad stuff happens so he rules the world, but that might become boring for some, like they don't wanna have a bad hero or anti hero, I never finished it but it's good so far
And the art is just *CINEMA*
The first Manwha i ever read, it was great, loved it.
Who reads manhwa in 2024?? Most of them are the worst pieces of fiction
@righteous225 mostly women. There are always a few gems though. Too bad there is so much shit
Yeah I saw a video explain about this Manwha and said it’s messaging was problematic or school-shootery
Oh boy jack brace yourself for Kingdoms of Ruin if you’re going to review the anime. It’s on par with rooftop sword master with the edge lord bullshit. Also rooftop sword master tries to twist the story around to make the mmc justify on his revenge even if endangered the country.
I remember saying on recap video about this it sucks and they tell me im goody twoshoes wienerhut junior
This series is literally just Berserk if it took place in modern day
Yeah but unlike Berserk, no interesting and complex characters. Along with no self awareness.
Modern day middle school...
I have to read this. It's the edgiest ever!
@@daniellewillis2767 You should check out Kazumasa Hirai's Wolf Guy, it also involve 9th grade middle schoolers who look like they are in their 20s (And even played by 20 something year olds in the 1973 movie).
More like if The Crow was asian
i don't have problem with aritst being EDGE LORD
in fact i was one...maybe until now.....yup.
i love the emo dante from dmc 1 and those youtube edgy content back from mid 2010
honestly the manhwas “bad thinking diary” and “lily of the valley” are worse. they aren’t edgy or anything, they’re wlw stories but the endings and writing are just so bad. bad thinking at least is more tolerable than lily of the valley though since that mid made me cry and almost made me sick
edit: ik its a bad comparison because the two i mentioned are romance and rooftop swordmaster is action but still 😭
Man i remember reading a couple of chapters of this and absolutely hating it ┌( ಠ_ಠ)┘
YAY NEW UPLOAD 🎉
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